高中英语外研选修八课件：Module+5+Section+Ⅴ+Writing+—+闻报道
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Section_Ⅴ
Writing_—_新闻报道
一、基本结构 1．提炼好新闻标题：标题是新闻报道的灵魂和精华。新 闻标题既要把最吸引人的地方体现出来，又要做到言简意赅、 直击主题。 2．写好新闻导语：新闻导语是新闻报道开头的第一句话， 它一般是对整个报道的一个概括。
3．详述新闻事件的过程：写完导语后，文章接下来要按 照事件发展的时间顺序具体阐述导语中的相关信息，形成对导 语的有力支持。
即便我们掌握了现在的全部先进技术，我们这个世 界依然只是处于太空旅行的起步阶段。
20 世纪 50 年代，中国开始探索太空。2008 年数以百万计的人 们打开电视见证了中国的首次太空漫步。这的确是一件历史性的事 件，对太空探索产生了巨大的影响。同时，中国开始了月球探索项 目。许多项目正在进行中。在近十年里，中国，我们伟大的祖国， 已取得了一系列的成就。嫦娥二号已经发回了月球表面的一些照片。 月球的表面和地球的表面不相似，这跟科学家以前的预测是一致的。
状语) A estate company wants to pull down the ancient buildings to build new houses.
2．他们认为古建筑快坍塌了，政府无法修复它们。(fall into pieces; afford) They think the ancient buildings are falling into pieces and the government can't afford to repair them.
On the other hand, a lot of people think it is wrong to pull down the ancient buildings. Ancient buildings are cultural relics. Without them, we can't know our history. Everyone has the duty to protect them. The government can open them up to tourists, using the money earned to protect and repair them. Besides, the estate company can develop the wasteland to build new houses.
5 ． After some time .../After a while .../A few minutes later .../A moment later .../Then ...
6．Some were doing ...some were doing ...and/while others were ...
Based on human beings' dream, a series of fiction novels and films appeared. Many of them are based on the assumption that the aliens from other planets will invade our earth. The aliens' invasion can make the earth destroyed. All of them are very scary and dramatic.
注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：房地产公司 estate company 荒地 wasteland
第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题 1．确定体裁：本文为一篇 新闻报道 ； 2．确定中心人称：本文主要人称为 第三人称 ； 3．确定主体时态： 一般现在时 。 二、构思 第一部分：开篇新闻导语—— 一家房地产公司想拆掉古建筑， 建造新房子。 第二部分：房地产公司阐述拆掉古建筑，建造新房子的原因。 第三部分：阐述反对者的意见和看法。
7．When it was time for/to ...we ... 8．He thanked Jack./He said “Thank you” to Jack./He expressed his thanks to Jack./He said to Jack，“Thank you very much.” 9 ． And .../So .../Therefore .../As a result .../For that reason .../Because of this ...
第二步：核心词汇想周全 1． estate company 2． pull down 3． ancient 4． ugly 5． cultural relics 6．wasteland
房地产公司 拆毁 古代的 令人厌恶的 文化遗迹 荒地，不毛之地
第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1．一家房地产公司想拆掉古建筑，建造新房子。(不定式作目的
[题目要求]
一家房地产公司为了建造新房子，想拆掉一些古建筑
Hale Waihona Puke 物，许多人反对。请根据下表所提供的信息写一篇新闻报
道，介绍有关情况。
房地产公司的意见
反对的意见
1.古建筑破旧不堪，没钱维修； 2．拆掉古建筑，建住房，解决 部分人的住房需求。
1.古建筑是文化遗址，保 护文化遗址人人有责；
2．可通过开发旅游赚钱维 修，还可使用荒地建房。
4．对事件进行必要的评论：根据写作的需要可对新闻事 件进行简要的评论，以达到深化主题，给读者留下深刻印象的 目的。
5．署名：在文章的最后注明新闻报道的作者或提供单位。
二、增分佳句 1．One morning/day .../Last week/Saturday .../On a winter day .../This morning .../It was June 20, 2017 .../On May 4, 2017 ... 2. ... was doing sth. ...when suddenly .../As soon as ...＋主 句/When ...＋主句/Before I could ...＋主句 3．Just then .../At that moment/time .../Just after .../Hardly had ...when ... 4．As/Because/Since＋从句＋主句
3．而且，在我们的城市里有很多人没有房子住。(have ... to live in) What's more, a lot of people in our city have no houses
to live in. 4. 如果他们拆掉古建筑，就可以满足这方面的需要。(if 引导条件
状语从句) If they do pull down the ancient buildings, it can satisfy this need. 5．另一方面，很多人认为拆掉古建筑是不对的。(on the other hand) On the other hand, a lot of people think to pull down the ancient buildings is wrong.
In spite of all our advanced technology, the world is still at the very beginning of its voyage into space.
In the 1950s, China set out to explore space. In 2008, millions of people turned on the TV to witness Chinese first space walk. It was really a historic event, which had a great impact on space exploration. At the same time, China set out its lunar exploration program. Many programs are underway. In the last decade, China, our great motherland, has made a series of achievements. Chang'e-2 has sent back several pictures of the moon's surface. The surface of the moon is not similar to that of the earth, which is consistent with scientists' previous expectation.
第四步：句式升级造亮点 1．用 it 作形式主语改写句 5
On the other hand, a lot of people think it is wrong to pull down the ancient buildings. 2．用 v.-ing 作伴随状语改写句 6 The government can open them up to tourists, using the money earned to protect and repair them.
6．政府可以向游客开放，使用赚取的钱来保护和修复它们。 (open ... up) The government can open them up to tourists and use the money earned to protect and repair them.
7. 此外，房地产公司还可以开发荒地建造新房子。(不定式作目 的状语) Besides, the estate company can develop the wasteland to build new houses.
谢谢观赏
You made my day!
我们，还在路上……
基于人类的梦想，一系列的科幻小说和电影出现了。其中许多 都是以假设来自其他星球上的外星人侵犯地球为主题，他们的侵略 可以使地球毁灭。所有这些作品都很令人害怕，同时又富有戏剧性。
•1、书籍是朋友,虽然没有热情,但是非常忠实。2022年4月19日星期二2022/4/192022/4/192022/4/19 •2、科学的灵感，决不是坐等可以等来的。如果说，科学上的发现有什么偶然的机遇的话，那么这种‘偶然的机遇’只能给那些学有素养的人，给那些善于独 立思考的人，给那些具有锲而不舍的人。2022年4月2022/4/192022/4/192022/4/194/19/2022 •3、书籍—通过心灵观察世界的窗口.住宅里没有书,犹如房间里没有窗户。2022/4/192022/4/19April 19, 2022
第五步：过渡衔接联成篇
Ancient Buildings and New Houses A estate company wants to pull down the ancient buildings to build new houses. They think the ancient buil-dings are falling into pieces and the government can't afford to repair them. They make our city look ugly. What's more, a lot of people in our city have no houses to live in. If they do pull down the ancient buildings, it can satisfy this need.
Writing_—_新闻报道
一、基本结构 1．提炼好新闻标题：标题是新闻报道的灵魂和精华。新 闻标题既要把最吸引人的地方体现出来，又要做到言简意赅、 直击主题。 2．写好新闻导语：新闻导语是新闻报道开头的第一句话， 它一般是对整个报道的一个概括。
3．详述新闻事件的过程：写完导语后，文章接下来要按 照事件发展的时间顺序具体阐述导语中的相关信息，形成对导 语的有力支持。
即便我们掌握了现在的全部先进技术，我们这个世 界依然只是处于太空旅行的起步阶段。
20 世纪 50 年代，中国开始探索太空。2008 年数以百万计的人 们打开电视见证了中国的首次太空漫步。这的确是一件历史性的事 件，对太空探索产生了巨大的影响。同时，中国开始了月球探索项 目。许多项目正在进行中。在近十年里，中国，我们伟大的祖国， 已取得了一系列的成就。嫦娥二号已经发回了月球表面的一些照片。 月球的表面和地球的表面不相似，这跟科学家以前的预测是一致的。
状语) A estate company wants to pull down the ancient buildings to build new houses.
2．他们认为古建筑快坍塌了，政府无法修复它们。(fall into pieces; afford) They think the ancient buildings are falling into pieces and the government can't afford to repair them.
On the other hand, a lot of people think it is wrong to pull down the ancient buildings. Ancient buildings are cultural relics. Without them, we can't know our history. Everyone has the duty to protect them. The government can open them up to tourists, using the money earned to protect and repair them. Besides, the estate company can develop the wasteland to build new houses.
5 ． After some time .../After a while .../A few minutes later .../A moment later .../Then ...
6．Some were doing ...some were doing ...and/while others were ...
Based on human beings' dream, a series of fiction novels and films appeared. Many of them are based on the assumption that the aliens from other planets will invade our earth. The aliens' invasion can make the earth destroyed. All of them are very scary and dramatic.
注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：房地产公司 estate company 荒地 wasteland
第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题 1．确定体裁：本文为一篇 新闻报道 ； 2．确定中心人称：本文主要人称为 第三人称 ； 3．确定主体时态： 一般现在时 。 二、构思 第一部分：开篇新闻导语—— 一家房地产公司想拆掉古建筑， 建造新房子。 第二部分：房地产公司阐述拆掉古建筑，建造新房子的原因。 第三部分：阐述反对者的意见和看法。
7．When it was time for/to ...we ... 8．He thanked Jack./He said “Thank you” to Jack./He expressed his thanks to Jack./He said to Jack，“Thank you very much.” 9 ． And .../So .../Therefore .../As a result .../For that reason .../Because of this ...
第二步：核心词汇想周全 1． estate company 2． pull down 3． ancient 4． ugly 5． cultural relics 6．wasteland
房地产公司 拆毁 古代的 令人厌恶的 文化遗迹 荒地，不毛之地
第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1．一家房地产公司想拆掉古建筑，建造新房子。(不定式作目的
[题目要求]
一家房地产公司为了建造新房子，想拆掉一些古建筑
Hale Waihona Puke 物，许多人反对。请根据下表所提供的信息写一篇新闻报
道，介绍有关情况。
房地产公司的意见
反对的意见
1.古建筑破旧不堪，没钱维修； 2．拆掉古建筑，建住房，解决 部分人的住房需求。
1.古建筑是文化遗址，保 护文化遗址人人有责；
2．可通过开发旅游赚钱维 修，还可使用荒地建房。
4．对事件进行必要的评论：根据写作的需要可对新闻事 件进行简要的评论，以达到深化主题，给读者留下深刻印象的 目的。
5．署名：在文章的最后注明新闻报道的作者或提供单位。
二、增分佳句 1．One morning/day .../Last week/Saturday .../On a winter day .../This morning .../It was June 20, 2017 .../On May 4, 2017 ... 2. ... was doing sth. ...when suddenly .../As soon as ...＋主 句/When ...＋主句/Before I could ...＋主句 3．Just then .../At that moment/time .../Just after .../Hardly had ...when ... 4．As/Because/Since＋从句＋主句
3．而且，在我们的城市里有很多人没有房子住。(have ... to live in) What's more, a lot of people in our city have no houses
to live in. 4. 如果他们拆掉古建筑，就可以满足这方面的需要。(if 引导条件
状语从句) If they do pull down the ancient buildings, it can satisfy this need. 5．另一方面，很多人认为拆掉古建筑是不对的。(on the other hand) On the other hand, a lot of people think to pull down the ancient buildings is wrong.
In spite of all our advanced technology, the world is still at the very beginning of its voyage into space.
In the 1950s, China set out to explore space. In 2008, millions of people turned on the TV to witness Chinese first space walk. It was really a historic event, which had a great impact on space exploration. At the same time, China set out its lunar exploration program. Many programs are underway. In the last decade, China, our great motherland, has made a series of achievements. Chang'e-2 has sent back several pictures of the moon's surface. The surface of the moon is not similar to that of the earth, which is consistent with scientists' previous expectation.
第四步：句式升级造亮点 1．用 it 作形式主语改写句 5
On the other hand, a lot of people think it is wrong to pull down the ancient buildings. 2．用 v.-ing 作伴随状语改写句 6 The government can open them up to tourists, using the money earned to protect and repair them.
6．政府可以向游客开放，使用赚取的钱来保护和修复它们。 (open ... up) The government can open them up to tourists and use the money earned to protect and repair them.
7. 此外，房地产公司还可以开发荒地建造新房子。(不定式作目 的状语) Besides, the estate company can develop the wasteland to build new houses.
谢谢观赏
You made my day!
我们，还在路上……
基于人类的梦想，一系列的科幻小说和电影出现了。其中许多 都是以假设来自其他星球上的外星人侵犯地球为主题，他们的侵略 可以使地球毁灭。所有这些作品都很令人害怕，同时又富有戏剧性。
•1、书籍是朋友,虽然没有热情,但是非常忠实。2022年4月19日星期二2022/4/192022/4/192022/4/19 •2、科学的灵感，决不是坐等可以等来的。如果说，科学上的发现有什么偶然的机遇的话，那么这种‘偶然的机遇’只能给那些学有素养的人，给那些善于独 立思考的人，给那些具有锲而不舍的人。2022年4月2022/4/192022/4/192022/4/194/19/2022 •3、书籍—通过心灵观察世界的窗口.住宅里没有书,犹如房间里没有窗户。2022/4/192022/4/19April 19, 2022
第五步：过渡衔接联成篇
Ancient Buildings and New Houses A estate company wants to pull down the ancient buildings to build new houses. They think the ancient buil-dings are falling into pieces and the government can't afford to repair them. They make our city look ugly. What's more, a lot of people in our city have no houses to live in. If they do pull down the ancient buildings, it can satisfy this need.