论文写作1

Turn the following broad statements into more specific ones
• Nowadays, college education is often meaningless. • Newspapers cater to the taste of the general public. • The computer revolution is not all that we have been led to believe it is. • University diplomas have been devalued by recruitment pressure. • The success of Xinming evening indicates that people want newspapers that are easy to read and entertaining. • Laptop computers are still an impractical purchase for many students.
2. The essay is about the difficulty of solving the environmental problems. • Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. • Our living environment is getting worse because the pollution of industry is ignored,people are not aware of the environmental protecting,and the natural resources are overused,over all reasons make it difficult to solve the environmental problems. • The environmental problems is more and more serious . Due to the combination of heavily pollution and lack of awareness of environmental protection and effective technical solutions , so solving the problems is more and more difficult. • Solving the environmental problem is difficult because of the high treatment cost, enterprises responsibility evasion and the weak environmental awareness of the public.
Sentences for exercise after class
• Please choose one of the following sentences, and turn it into a strong thesis statement. • 1. People use a lot of lawn chemicals. 2. The essay is about the difficulty of solving the environmental problems. 3. the Chinese logistics industry has got many problems. 4. Stephen Hawking’s physical disability has not prevented him from becoming a world renowned physicist, and his book is the subject of a movie.
Example of thesis statement
• 1. America is experiencing aBaidu Nhomakorabeahealth care crisis because of an aging population and rising health care cost. • 2. health is achieved through a combination of exercise, proper diet, relaxation ,and strong social relation ships. • 3. The north won the American Civil War because of its larger population and stronger industrial base, which allowed it to make more weapons and supplies than the South. •
Turn the following announcements into thesis statements
• My essay will discuss whether a student pub should exist on campus. • Handgun legislation is the subject of this paper. • I want to discuss cable television. • This college should not allow a student pub on campus. • Banning handguns is the first step toward controlling crime in America. • Cable television has not delivered on its promise to provide an alternative to network programming.
3. the Chinese logistics industry has got many problems. • the Chinese logistics industry has got many problems.First of all,the cost of logistics is very high.Beside the efficiency of logisticsis lower than the former.We should take actions to solve these problems,for the govenment,they can pour more fund into the logistics industry,for the businessman ,it is their duty to take measures to improve the efficiency of logistics. • the Chinese logistics industry has got many problems because China is not only smaller scale.At the third-party logistics services and third-party logistics enterprises also smaller and time Logistics infrastructure capacity is less, then it has a low level of logistics enterprises, The most important is IT Higher logistics costs. • The Chinese logistics industry has got many problems because of the lack of fund,the lack of industry standards and the low quality of employees. • There are many problems in China's logistics industry, because of the logistics query is not timely, logistics workers too little, the holidays easily ruin, and not realizing the informatization.
A good thesis statement
• gives the reader some hint about what you will say about the topic; • presents your opinion about the topic and is not just a fact or observation; • is written as a complete statement; • is the basis for the working outline.
Chapter 4: how to write a strong thesis statement?
What makes a thesis effective? Generally expressed in one or two sentences, a thesis statement often has two parts. One part presents your paper‘s limited subject; the other presents your point of view, or attitude, about that subject. In the thesis statement, the limited subject comes before the attitude.
what is the thesis statement?
• The major point of a paper. • Thesis statement is usually a single sentence somewhere in your first paragraph that presents your argument to the reader. The rest of the paper, the body of the essay, gathers and organizes evidence that will persuade the reader of the logic of your interpretation.
Turn the following factual statements into thesis statements
• • • • Shanghai’s population is growing older. Many businesses pollute the environment. Shanghai had six confirmed SARS cases. The aging of the Shanghai population will eventually create an economic crisis. • Tax penalties should be levied against businesses that pollute the environment. • Beijing should not have allowed SARS affected people to be still at large.