英语写作和短文改错 PDF版
(完整)八年级下册英语课文短文改错
八年级下册英语课文短文改错一(10’)In November 1979, pupils in England were able to watch a new TV program call Monkey. Most of them were hearing this story for the one time. However, this story is not new to Chinese children. The Monkey King or Sun Wukong is the main character in the tradition Chinese book Journey to the West.The Monkey King is not just some normal monkey . In a fact, he sometimes does not even look like a monkey! This is because he can make 72 changes to his shape and size, turn himself into different animals and objects. But unless he can hide his tail, he can turn himself into a person. To fight bad people, Sun Wukong uses a magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear. At other time, he is able to make it big and long.The Monkey King has exciting the children of China for many years. And as soon as the TV program came out more than 30 years ago, western children became interested in reading this story because the clever Monkey King keep fighting to help weak and never gives up.二(15’)At 9:00 a.m., they find that most the babies are already wake and hungry. When the babies see the keepers, they run over them with excite and some of the young pandas even walk into their friends and fall over!Lin Wei, one of the panda keepers, say,“They’re so cute and lovely. I take care them like they’re my own babies. I wash, feed and play with them every day. They’re very special for me.”Scientists say there are now less than 2,000 pandas live in the forests. Other 300 or so lives in zoos or research centers in China and other countries. Pandas do not have many babies, maybe only one every two year. The babies often die from illness and do not live very long. Adult pandas spend more than 12 hours a day eat about 10 kilo of bamboo s. Many years ago, there are a lot of more bamboo forests and pandas in China, but then humans started to cut off these forests. As the forests get smaller and other human activity cause more problems, pandas cannot find enough eat and they are having few babies.三(10’)I think it is important for children learning how to do chores and help their parents with housework. It’s not enough to just get good grade at school. Children these days depends on their parents too many. They’re always asking, “Could you get this for me?” or “Could you help me with that?”Do chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. It also helps them to understand the idea of fair. Since they live in one house with their parents, they should know that everyone should do their parts in keeping it clean and tidy. Our neighbor’s son got into a good college but during his first year, he had idea how to take care of himself. As a result, he often fell ill and his grades droped. The more earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.四(10’)Country is a tradition kind of music from the south states of America. Nashville, Tennessee is the home of country music. Many songs these days are just about modern life in the US, such as the important of money and success, but not about belong to a group. However, country music brings us back from the good old days” when people were kind to each other and trusted one other. It reminds us that the best things in life are free --- laugh, friends, family, and the beautiful of nature and the countryside.Sarah hasn’t been to Nashville yet, but it is her dream go there one day. She has already read a lot about the place and done some research it.五(10’)Have you ever been to Singapore? For thousand of tourists from China, this small island in Southeast Asia is a wonderful and safe place take a holiday. On the one hand, more than third quarters of the population is Chinese, so you can simply speak Putonghua a lot of the time. On another hand, Singapore is an English-speaking country, so it’s also a good place practice your English. Have you ever try Chinese food outside of China? Maybe you fear that you cannot be able to find anything good to eat when you travel. In Singapore, however, you’ll find a lot of food from China; you won’t have any problem get rice, noodles or dumplings. Singapore is also an excellent place to try new food. Whether you like India food, Western food or Japanese food, you’ll find them all in Singapore!。
英语短文改错5篇含答案
In our life,we often regret what we did and what we couldn't did. Actually,it doesn't benefit us at all. As for most of us,we missed many chance to earn more money,to get a high position and to realize our dreams. We often regret that we don't seize those opportunities,thus feel upset. Although we do know regretting the past is no benefit,yet we still shouldn't help doing it.
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When I first learn to write in English , I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was that I always think in Chinese and tried to translate into English everything which I came across. My teacher advised I kept a diary. I followed his advice and put down 100 words or so each day.
高考英语真题 2019年 全国卷1 改错及作文(含答案)
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3. 全国I卷适用地区:安徽、湖北、福建、湖南、山西、河北、江西、广东、河南、山东2019年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(全国卷I)英语写作改错(含答案)第四部分写作(共两节,满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me.I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone's surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.第二节书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。
高考英语短文改错专项训练30篇及答案解析-精选.pdf
《高考短文改错——专项训练30篇——及答案解析》1. 短文改错1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Peter,As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you quite agreewith someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked. The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it's wide usedwhen you achieve your purpose in very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, you'll know more about our language and culture.All the best!Yours,Li Hua1.______2.______3.______4.______5.______6.______7.______8.______9.______10.______2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线(________),并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reasorn.Some families are so poor to send their children to school,so their kids have to earn money to support their families.There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school.They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school.I feel worried this.I think every children should havethe opportunity to receive education.And it is necessary of Us to care about the children,because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country.So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their sttldies.3.51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
英语短文改错5篇(含答案)
simple English. One day I wrote a story and showed to my teacher.
He liked it very much that he read it to the class. All said that the story was a good one. Their words were an great encouragement to me.
became one of the best players in my school.
I take great pride of this experience because it not only helps me realize that I need achieve my potential through hard work,but makes me to know the proverb “Practice makes perfect”.
Dear American guests,
On behalf for our school,I shall like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have us here in the middle of our English Week activities.
can become a good badminton player is fresh in my mind.The first day could go Amazing I went to school, I found some of my classmates playing badminton. Amazed at how Late him skilful they were,I made up my mind to be good at ter on,I often watched them can carefully to learn their techniques.I kept practicing until I felt sure I could challenge How I the good players in my class.In in my school. of I take great pride in this experience because it not only helps me realize that I need can achieve my potential through hard work,but makes me “Practice makes perfect”. know the proverb ∧ middle of the term,I became one of the best players the
山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作(68).pdf
学 生 自 主 学 习 方 案七年级 班 小组: 姓名: 科 目语文课题编号7-1-035设 计刘 瑾审核呼雄芳督查李延刚课时1学习目标1、通过复述故事情节,理解本文联想与想像手法的运用。
2、感受文中所表现的喜悦之情。
3、了解神话故事的特点链接 1、作者 袁珂,1916年生,神话学家。
现为四川省社会科学院研究员。
著有《中国古神话》、《古神话选释》、《山海经校注》等 2、写作背景 课文是根据《风俗通》里的有关女娲造人的记载改编的。
作者以大胆新奇的想象在原有故事的基础上进行富有人性化的演绎与扩充,再现女娲造人的整个过程,使得这个古老的传说充满生活气息,焕发出迷人的光彩。
3、神话是远古人民表现对自然及文化现象的理解与想象的故事。
它是人类早期的不自觉的艺术创作。
神话并非现实生活的科学反映,而是由于远古时代生产力的水平很低,人们不能科学地解释世界、自然现象和原始社会文化生活的起源和变化,以他们贫乏的生活经验为基础,借想象和幻想把自然力和客观世界拟人化的结果。
1、给下列加点字注音。
女娲( ) 澄澈( )( ) 掘起( ) 掺和( ) 莽莽榛榛( )( ) 踪迹( ) 、填空、简答。
(1)本文选,是(谁)根据古代神话改写的,其体裁是,它详细叙述了的具体过程,着力刻画了女娲的母亲形象。
1、让学生仔细品味课后练习一中《风俗通》里两则短文,看看课文中丰富了哪几个情节?同学们看看哪里最想象力? 、 3、讨论:结合文中想象的情节,体会女娲形象。
完成句式:女娲是一个 课堂延伸 科技发展的今天,你是怎样看待这个故事的,与同学们讨论讨论。
检测反馈 ①她工作着,工作着,一直工作到晚霞布满天空,星星和月亮射出幽光。
夜深了,她只把头枕在山崖上,略睡一睡,第二天,天刚微明,她又赶紧起来继续工作。
②她一心要让这些灵敏的小生物布满大地。
但是,大地毕竟太大了,她工作了许久,还没有达到她的意愿,而她本人已经疲倦不堪了。
③最后,她想出了一个绝妙的创造人类的方法。
短文改错打印版
短文改错文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
No. 1My View on Job-HoppingA lot of people like to do one work in their life. They think those change their jobs mostly end in failure. They believe the only way to success is to sticking to one job, which helps making an expert. But there are many people whom argue for changing their jobs. They think if you are not satisfying with your present job, of course you have the right to replace it by a more challenging and better paid one. Each change means more further success. My view on job hopping is that this is reasonable to change your job if you have the better opportunity.No. 2This afternoon on my way to home I saw many people standing at the gate of the primary school. I don’t know what they were doing there at first. Then many pupil came out the school. The people outside the gate called out such names as "Lingling" or "Xiaohua". Then I knew they were meeting their children. The children were too happy that they were liked "little emperors", which I think is harmful. Children will be the builders of our country on the future. There are so many things of them to learn. Late, many things will be done by them. This means they shouldn't be "little emperors".No. 3Most of the Chinese people think the family with one child is more better than the one with more than one child. For a thing, they want to build a successful career but have few time to bring up more than one child; for other thing, raise only one child they can afford better education for him. But others think this is better to have a big family. They think more children they raise, the better their life will be when they grow old. In myopinions, it's enough for a family to have one child, or population expansion will contribute to a series of problem.No. 4Can money buy happiness? Different people have different opinion. With money one can buy that he wants and live a happy life. It’s a common view which money is the root of all evil. The pursuit of money drove many people to cheat and steal. In some places there is nothing cann’t be bought by money, resulting in societies where everybody is miserable. So money d oesn’t necessary mean happiness. It all depends on what it is used. If we make proper use of money, it can be a bright path into happiness. Money can’t buy happiness, but it can make happiness be possible if it is employed sensibly.Now some people think that money is anything. They say you can do everything if you’ve money. You can live a beautiful house and have all sorts of delicious food. I don't think it. Indeed, money can buy a lot of things we need. And there are many wonderful things in the world can’t be bought with the money. For example, time can’t be bought with the money. There are many other things that can not be bought with money too: health, love, happy, friendship and so on. Just thinking that if a person had not these things, is the money still useful?No. 6Taiwan Is Part of China About 1500 years ago Chinese settled there, and the Dutch imperialist invaded there in the 17th century. After which, Zheng Chenggong, a hero of nation, drove them out of. Unfortunately, late Taiwan was seized by Japanese after the Sino-Japanese War of 1894-1895. It doesn't come back until the Second World War was ended. Nowadays I realize the seriously situation. Some people are attempting to split China. This actions are wrong and should be punished. I also believe so long as we strengthen exchange in the future with the head of "one country two systems", there will have an agreement.文中共有10处语言错误。
英语短文改错30篇_附答案
改错一之阿布丰王创作I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class.Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.改错二I went to see the film after supper. On my waythe cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way.I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changesthat had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.改错三Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letterhe said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance aftergraduation."So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. Hejust wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you thinkI should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?改错四Dear Bob,Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your pe nfriend, and get to know more about your country.First, let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to HongqiMiddle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time,but now I am interesting in football. Do you play anyball games? What your favoritesport? I look forward to hear from you soon.Y ours, Li Hua改错五yinthem.Mybrothergavemeanote whi chread, “My present has put in your bedroom.” WhenIhurriedintomybedroom, Ifoundabox,inthattherewasanelectronicdictionary.Iwasverygladbutafews urprisedtoreceivethesetwopresents.改错六Dear Li Ming,I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry abou t you. I’m getting along well with my research worksin the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I kn ow it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.改错七Dear Sally,Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job, in it I work like a guide in a travel agency. This is the first time when I have earned money. I’ve realized what hard my parents work to support for the f amily. I was used to ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money or learn to share worry with my parents. I’ve learnt how to get along well with other. What’s more, I have gained some social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt fro m textbooks. In the word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.改错八Sports is fun and most people in the world, whether menor woman , boys or girls enjoy them. Since long ago, many adults and children called their friends together tospend many hours play games. Why? One of the reasons is that sports help make them live happy. In the other words, they help to keep people strong and feeling good. When they were playing games, they move a lot. That is why sports are good activities for their healthy. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports with watching others play.No. 9I went to the SummerPalace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know thatthey were college students travel in China. They werebusy with taking pictures and were much impressed withthe changes had taken place in the past few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write toeach other on the future. They thanked me again and again.I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral EnglishNo.10My classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do some cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’ smiling faces, Ifelt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin without me I thought of a saying, "There must have a use for my talent." You may have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything useful, you’ll find everything is beautiful at every corner of your life.No. 11Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. Views vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the loud noises is caused by itwill disturb others.No. 12Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.No. 13Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishesto us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.No. 14In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think it useless of the girls to study and they do not like them to go to school.A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children. No. 15It is known to us, a severe tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s report ed that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntarycontribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’s money.No. 16The GuangmingMiddle School is in west of the city, with the ChengxiRiver run nearby. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you will find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On it’s east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.No. 17One mor ning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read, “Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butcher’s.” The dog ran here and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read thepaper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a clever dog it was!No. 18Mr. Chen has a habit of drink. The best present to him, of course, is wine. His the eldest son brought him a bottle of Mao Tai. He was glad and drank them up. Then he wrote “105”on the trademark with a pencil, meant he had already drunk 105 bottles the wine. Two days late, a stranger came and offered to paying 5 Yuan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and sold it. Several days later, his second son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it, he suddenly found out “105”----the very mark on it.No. 19One day a lawyer happened to see a man beat a donkey with a stick. “Why were you doing that?” asked the lawyer. “To make the donkey to go.” answered the man. “Have you right to beat the animal like that?” asked the lawyer once a gain. “Certain I have.” said the man. “It is my donkey and I can do that I’d like to with what is my”. The lawyer thought for a minute and took his own stick and beat the man. “Stopping!” cried the man,“Are you mad?” “Oh, yes. This is my stick and I can d o what I like with what was mine.”No. 20An old man was seating in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog sleep soundly. The old man decided to leaving home for a while, and he couldn’t go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog and let it fetched the shoes for him. Out of its expectation, the dog didn’t even stand, but just barked with two eyes closed again. He was complete puzzled. As he was wondering what was happening, a cat appeared in the front of him. Why do you think a cat came there?No. 21Show respect to parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral value. As most of the students today are “the only child” in their family, they often regard them as the “centre” of the family, without caring many about their parents. Our school start a programme when the new year came. It is “Respecting parents programme”. Ten “Do’s” have worked out for the students to follow clearly and easily. They includ: “Remember your parents” birthdays and express you're the best wishes tothem; tell “hello” to your parents see them returning home; and tell your parents where you go when you leave home.” The programme has been successfully.No. 22Welcome to Holland! I hope you all enjoy your staying here. I’m glad you have come on April, f or spring is certainly a best season to get to know Holland. I’m sure you will amazed by the color and variety of all the flowers. You won’t be able to stop taking photograph! We have many beautiful towns. I suggest you start by taking a boats trip on the Canals. It’s a relaxed way of visiting the old canal houses. Then you can visit to our museums and churches. You don’t have to worry about language problems there. Just have a pleased trip and come again next year.No. 23This is said that Great biologist Darwin was a man with a sense of humor. Once he is invited to dinner. At the dinner, he happened to sit next a young good-looking woman. “Mr. Darwin,” the woman asked a biologist, “I heard of you have made a surprising conclusion which the person's ancestor is the monkey. I am suitable for yourow of judgment?” “Certainly.” Darwin well-mannered replied. “I am like the monkey?” "Yes, you aren’t. And you were changed not from the ordinary monkey, but from the extreme attractive monkey.”No. 24I am shy when at school. I was afraid of speaking in front of the class. When I had to face such many classmates, I felt nervous but my voice and legs shook. My teachers helped me a lot of. They often encouraged me to answer question in class and to go to the teachers’desk to read lessons. Sometime I felt I didn’t do so well but they spoke high of me. Meanwhile, my classmates kindly asked me to join them all kinds of activities. All these helped me with my confidence. Since then on I dared to do that I wanted to.No. 25When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Swede decided to find whether this was true or not. It was happened that there were two brothers whom were in prison then. The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and the others coffee. All of them lived formany years without any problem. The one who had to drink tea died in the age of 83 and the other lived even long. Therefore, Swede is one of the countries there much tea and coffee are drunk.No. 26My wife and me spent two weeks in London last year. We went here in autumn. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End. It was convenient as we do most of our sightseeing on foot. Taxis was quite too expensive. We coul dn’t understand the bus routes, but my wife didn’t like traveling by the underground. She said it made her to feel sick. We went to look at the places which all tourists see. We saw the BuckinghamPalace. We came shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money. What we liked most, though, was going to theatre.No. 27One day I happened to find out a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprise, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hourpractise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expression. With time going by, I found I could even communicate some college students freely.No. 28The Internet is a computer network use the telephone system to link together million of computers around the world. Once you’re connected to the Internet, and there are lots of difference things you can do. You can send “e-mail” to your friends as long as they were on the Internet, or looking through all sorts of information on the World Wide Web. You don’t need know how the Internet works in order to use them. But if you understand the basics which may help you solve many problems you have and you can impress your friends by your Net knowledge ! No. 29Mr. Huang is sixty years old and had retired. He taught our chemistry when we were in Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. He usually made well preparations for the lessons and was strict with us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor inchemistry. He often helps me with my study patiently. With his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As experienced teacher he was respected or loved by all the students.No. 30Last week I went to a movie, which was very touched. It was a sad movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him for a rich family who had no child. The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor. In his hospital, he had a patient, an old lady. He doesn’t care too much about her, for she could hardly afford for the medical care. One evening, the lady died quietly and on her bed the doctor found a letter, in which he discovered truth and felt the love of a great mother. He wanted to call his mother, and it was too late. Everybody in the theatre was moved to tears.答案:8.改错四:1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。
PETS2写作&短文改错
短文改错&写作一:短文改错短文改错一般给出一篇100余字的短文,设10个小题,是一种较全面考查考生英语知识水平及能力的题型,其宗旨在于测试考生发现、判断、纠正文章中错误的能力。
错误的形式分为三种,即缺词、多词和错词。
一般而言,短文改错的考点主要包括:(1)语法方面;(2)选词用词方面;(3)句子结构方面;(4)重复累赘方面;(5)语篇方面。
总之,就是考查学生的词、句、篇加语法的综合水平。
学生只要在平时的学习中加以注意对语法能力的培养和语感的形成,打好基础,再加上适当的技巧,对付该题不会有什么大问题。
下面详细介绍一下短文改错题的解题思路、步骤和技巧:1.通读全文。
有些考生拿到题便动手做,有时改了这里,又发现那里似乎也有问题。
故要先有整体概念,先通读一遍全文,迅速弄清短文大意,然后再动手做题。
做题时要注意每次必须看完一个完整的句子,有时还要再看看下面的句子,或返回头看前一句,这样才能为准确判断打下基础。
2.确定正误。
通读之后便可开始做题,先对所在行作出正误判断,如无错,便打“√”,如有错,再按错误类型进行改错。
①缺词:作者出题时会有意漏掉一些虚词如冠词、介词或连词,这与前后词的搭配有关。
考生可从下面几个方面分析:a:名词前是否缺冠词。
如:on (a) sunny morningb:是否用不及物动词带宾语。
如:Don’t look (at) me that way。
c:不定式符号“to”是否不该省。
如:He was often heard (t o) shout。
d:被动语态中的be是否缺少。
如:The work has (been) done ahead of time。
e:是否误将形容词、介词或副词作谓语。
如:We (are) agains t smoking。
f:固定搭配中是否漏了词。
如:as (a) wholeg:倒装句中是否混淆了全部倒装与部分倒装。
如:So fast (did) he run that nobody could catch him。
山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作(15).pdf
6.3.2 生日相同的概率(二) 教学目标 (一)教学知识点 能利用计算器或计算机等进行模拟实验,估计一些复杂的随机事件发生的概率. (二)能力训练要求 1.经历实验、统计等活动过程,在活动中进一步发展学生合作交流的意识和能力. 2.鼓励学生的思维多样化,避免思维的单一性. (三)情感与价值观要求 1.鼓励学生积极参与数学活动,培养学习数学的兴趣. 2.形成实事求是的态度以及进行质疑和独立思考的习惯. 3.在数学活动中获得成功的体验,锻炼克服困难的意志,建立自信心. 教学重点 利用计算机或计算器等进行模拟实验。
估计一些复杂的随机事件发生的概率. 教学难点 用模拟实验代替实际凋查,估计一些随机事件的概率. 教学方法 探索交流法. 教具准备 若干个大小相同的球. 计算器. 教学过程 Ⅰ.创设问题情境,引入新课 [师]我们上节课利用全班的调查数据设计了不同方案。
估计6个人中有2个人生肖相同的概率.要想使这种估计尽可能精确,就要尽可能多地增加调查对象,而这样做既费人力又费物力.能不能不用调查即可估计出这一概率呢?请同学们在小组内交流,思考具体方案. Ⅱ.讲授新课 [生]不同的生肖有12个,而我们要估计的是6个人中有2个人生肖相同的概率.可以设计一个自由转动的转盘,并将其等分成面积相等的十二个扇形.分别在每个扇形区域标出相应的生肖或绘出相应的生肖图,然后自由转动转盘6次,记下每次转出的生肖,为一次实验.重复多次实验,即可估计出6个人中有2个人生日相同的概率。
[生]也可以取扑克牌中任何一种花色12张分别代表12个生肖.这样每个人的生肖都对应着一张扑克牌.6个人中有两个人生肖相同.就意味着6张扑克牌中有2张扑克牌完全相同.因此,我们充分“洗”过这12张扑克牌后,从中抽取一张,记下它的牌面数字,放回去;再重新“洗”牌,从中抽取一张,记下它的牌面数字,放回去……直至重新“洗”牌后.从中抽取一张,记下第6个牌面数字。
PETS-2全国英语等级考试二级考试真题改错.doc
56.56. ____________第四部分:写作第一节:短文改错此题要求改止所给短文中的错误。
对标冇题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边 横线上画一个勾(7);如有错谋(每行只有一个错课),则按下列情况改正:多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A ),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Once there lived a scholar ・ Although he was as poor as a church mouse, he was afraid for losing 57. face ・ One night the thief broke into his house, 58. but could find nothing worth of stealing. The 59. thief murmured, "What a bad luck! 60. I've run into a rich man's house!1161. Heard this, the scholar quickly took a few coins 62. from his pocket what he had managed to save, and then 63. run after the thief. When he caught up xv 让h the thief, 64. he whispered, M Just took away these coins ・ Please65.don f t let anyone know about my poverty …don't let me lose face !n56. 7. 57. for —>of, be afraid of 为固定搭配.58. the —>a,故事叙述过程中,第一次被提到的人 或物前使用不定冠词.59.去掉of . worth 直接跟名词活动词的ing 形式.60.去掉a, luck 为不可数名词61. rich 应为poor.由文意可知.62 Heard-Hearing, hearing 与主语the scholar 为逻辑主谓关系E,用现在分词作状语.63.去掉what 或将what 改为which /that,用which/that 引导定语从句,fl.在从句充当宾语64. run —> ran, and 连接两个并列 句,要求 与took 时态一致.65. took —► take 在直接引语的祈使句屮谓语用动词原形.第四部分:写作第一节:短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作(12).pdf
课 题6.1 频率与概率(二)课型新授课教学目标1.经历实验、统计等活动过程,在活动中进一步发展学生合作交流的意识和能力。
2.通过第一课时问题的变式推广,掌握并运用列表法计算简单事件发生的概率。
3.关注在实际问题情境中的意义,培养应用概率解决问题的能力,感受其实际价值。
教学重点掌握列表法计算简单事件发生的概率。
教学难点理解概率的内涵。
教学方法合作交流法教学后记 教 学 内 容 及 过 程备注 一、实践操作、获取新知 问题提出: 如果每组3张牌,它们的牌面数字分别是1,2,3,那么从每组牌中各摸出一张牌,两张牌的牌面数字和为几的概率最大?两张牌的牌面数字和等于4的概率是多少? 探索解决问题的方法:对于这个问题,可以要求学生先自己尝试求解,然后再对小明、小颖、小亮的做法进行讨论和评判。
学生小组合作,尝试求解这个问题。
议一议 1.你认为谁做得对?说说你的理由。
2.用列表的方法求概率时要注意些什么? 3.从表格中你还能获得哪些事件(如两张牌的牌面数字和为奇数)发生的概率? 学生小组合作,相互交流。
二、继续探究、实验牵引 做一做 用列表的方法求概率: 1.将一枚均匀的硬币掷两次,两次都是正面朝上的概率是多少? 2.游戏者同时转动图6-1中的两个转盘进行“配紫色”游戏,求游戏者获胜的概率。
学生书面练习,同桌交流、巩固。
三、随堂练习 课本随堂练习 1、2 学生小组合作交流,进一步掌握列表法求概率的具体步骤。
四、课堂总结 1.本节重点掌握运用列表法求概率,通过学习,理解概率与统计之间的内在联系。
2.培养大家积极主动地投入到活动中去,与同伴交流。
具有良好的合作意识。
3.鼓励思维的多样性。
五、布置作业 课本习题6.2 1、2 初中学习网,资料共分享!我们负责传递知识!。
2020高考英语全国卷一二三改错专集
2020高考英语全国123卷改错专集2020全国一写作(共两节,满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
、修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove, I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.2020全国二第四部分写作(共两节,满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分).假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
改错PDF练习
1.I can’t swim but I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a nei ghbor drowned. Since then I have been more frighte ning.2.Boys and girls,May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday afternoon , our class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in lecture hall. Everybody is required to takepart in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as judges. The activity will benefit from you in many ways. For example, it will give us a good chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original. That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English. Finally, your story must be fin ished within three minutes. Ghat’s all, thanH you.3.Dear Jack,I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time ina fast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experiences with you during the past summer.In the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as shopping guide in a big supermarket.I stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met. Sometimes I was laughed at, and most of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people. Half a month passed quickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.Above all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.Best wishes,Yours Sincerely,Li Ming4.Yesterday morning I was surprising to hear that my friend Allen had been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day he is going to cross a street. He was very careful and didn’t go after he saw traffic lights turn green. But when he got the middle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and come directly towards him. That was too late for Allen to dodge(躲闪). He was hit by a car and thrown a few meter away. He was sent to hospital immediate and had an operation. When I went to see him last night, he out of danger but still looked pale.5.Nowadays, a increasing number of people are joining in the activities of volunteering. It’s well-known that volunteering job are making contributions to society with something in return. It’s liHe the Spirit ofLei Feng. Therefore, knowing this, there are still many people would like to devote themselves to this trend. For instance, the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers. They make lots of contributions to the success of the Olympics. Moreover, we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warmth to them. Even though some people’s career is a volunteer. Ghey are ready to helping othe rs. Although the volunteersare much more common, we still need to thank them in devoting themselves to society.6.I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys thanI did. Ghere was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocHet when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy orfaced my cousin again; I would always Hnow I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.7.Miss Cooper was a teacher works at a school for boys and girls. She taught the chemistry for all the students from different grade in the school. Sometimes the new classes learned rapidly, but sometimes they were slowly. One day, one of the classes has been studying for minutes while Miss Cooper suddenly asked, “What is water?” Luckily, nobody could answer the question, so Miss Cooper felt sad. The moment Danny, who was not one of the brightest boys in the class, raised hand, Miss Cooper said in an exciting voice, “Please, Danny!”“Water is a liquid what has no color until you wash your hands in it, then it turns grey,” replied the boy.2016 年高考英语短文改错专项训练 1参考答案1I can’t swim but I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that threebecause/so/and Lookingreasons might explain … fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was athe waschild, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see the wateras something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in dangerous glassesthe water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I onceasanythingsaw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.frightened2Boys and girls,May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you.somethingNext Sunday afternoon, our class was going to hold an English story-tellingiscompetition in︵lecture hall. Everybody is required to take part in the activity.theTwo foreign teacher will be invited to act as judges. The activity will benefitteachersfrom you in many ways. For example, it will give us a good chance to去掉youpracticing your oral English and train your communication skills. However,practice Besidesit will inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows.inFirst, the story can be original. That is, the story must be made up by yourself.mustSecond, the story must be presented in English. Finally, your story must be finished within three minutes. T hat’s all, thank you.3Dear Jack,I am pleasing to hear from you and know that you had a greatly time working part-time in aPleased greatfast-food restaurant. Now I would like to share your working experiences with you during the past summer.MyIn the beginning of the summer vacation, I was hired as∧shopping guide in a big supermarket.At aI stood for ten hours a day and smiled to everyone I have met. Sometimes I was laughed at, andbutmost of the time, I was praised for my wonderful works by many people. Half a month passedworkquickly after I knew it, and I learned how to deal with different people.BeforeAbove all, I have learned that smile is the key to solve any problem.solvingBest wishes,Yours Sincerely,Li Ming4Yesterday morning I was surprising to hear that my friend Allen had been hitsurprisedby a car and was in hospital. The other day he is going to cross a street. He was verywascareful and didn’t go after he saw traffic lights turn green. But when he got …thebefore tomiddle of the street he saw a car suddenly appear on her right-hand side and comehisdirectly towards him. That was too late for Allen to dodge(躲闪). He was hitItby a car and thrown a few meter away. He was sent to hospital immediate and hadthe meters immediatelyan operation. When I went to see him the last night, he was out of danger but still looked pale.5Nowadays, a increasing number of people are joining in the activities ofanvolunteering. It’s well-known that volunteering job are making contributions to societyjobswith something in return. It’s liHe the Spirit of Lei Feng. Therefore, knowing this, there are nothing Howeverstill many people…would like to devote themselves to this trend. For instance, the 2008 whoBeijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers. They make lots of contributions to theso madesuccess of the Olympics. Moreover, we can often see many students go to visit the old totake warmth to them. Even though some people’s career is a volunteer. Ghey are ready tohelping others. Although the volunteers are much more common, we still need to thankhelpthem in devoting themselves to society.2016 年高考英语短文改错专项训练 161.cousin –cousin’s2. rich – richer3.on -- in4.put ---put it/that5. enjoy to-- enjoy6.faced---face7. Late--Later8.slow -- slowly9. knows --- knew10. ever – never71. works→working2. the chemistry 去掉 the3. grade→grades4. slowly→slow5. has→had6. while→when7. 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英语作文改错范文There are several common errors found in English writing. In this essay, I will discuss some of these errors and provide examples of how to correct them.One common error is the misuse of apostrophes. Many people use apostrophes to make a word plural, but this is incorrect. For example, "apple's" is incorrect when used to mean more than one apple. The correct form is "apples." Another common error is the confusion between "its" and"it's." "Its" is a possessive form, while "it's" is a contraction of "it is" or "it has." For example, "The dog wagged its tail" is correct, while "It's a beautiful day"is also correct.Another common error is the misuse of homophones. Homophones are words that sound the same but have different meanings and spellings. For example, "their," "there," and "they're" are often used incorrectly. "Their" is a possessive form, "there" indicates a place, and "they're"is a contraction of "they are." It is important to usethese words correctly to avoid confusion in writing.Additionally, many people struggle with subject-verb agreement. This means that the subject and verb in a sentence must agree in number. For example, "The cat eats" is correct, while "The cat eat" is incorrect. This error can lead to confusion and should be carefully checked for in writing.Furthermore, sentence fragments are a common error in English writing. A sentence fragment is an incomplete sentence that does not contain a subject and a verb. For example, "Running down the street" is a fragment, while "I was running down the street" is a complete sentence. It is important to ensure that all sentences are complete and make sense on their own.In conclusion, there are several common errors in English writing, including the misuse of apostrophes, homophones, subject-verb agreement, and sentence fragments. It is important to be aware of these errors and tocarefully proofread writing to correct them.中文翻译:在英语写作中常见一些错误。
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《英语周报》2019高考模拟题题型冲刺——短文改错实战演练(一)Yesterday my mother let me to help her make chocolate cookies.First we measure ingredients (配料).As soon as the butter was soft,we put them into a large bowl and mixed it with sugar.Next, she asked me to add eggs into the butter or sugar.Then it was time to adding flour.You must be careful that you don’t add too many flour at one time or you’ll cover everything in a white dust.Final, we added chocolate and some nuts.The mixture put on a cookie sheet with a spoon and twenty minute later,our delicious creations were ready.After taste some,I found that cookies taste the best when they are still warm.实战演练(二)Last Friday,our school was held its first coming-of-age ceremony.All parents were invited to attend them.We did a lot of things at the ceremony,like taking an oath(宣誓)or walking through the adult gate.That moved me most was when I hugged my father.I see his eyes were full of tear.When remembering the wonderfully time I spent with my parents,I burst out cry.From then on,I decided be a responsible and faithful adult.There is no doubt that the ceremony will play an important role on our growth.实战演练(三)My father has a real neat vegetable garden.Every year he planted different kinds of vegetables for us to st year his corn were ten feet high and his tomato plants grew six feet high!I often help with him in the garden.We dig the hard ground in early spring,sow rows of seeds,and keep them water and safe from insects.When harvest time arrives they happily pick the vegetables we have grown.We usually have too much vegetables by the end of August.As result,my mother will freeze some for the winter month from December to March.实战演练(四)Before my sister went for her interview,she researched the company on the Internet and consult a few people.That way worked well and after the interview she offered the position.But she soondiscovered that her new boss worked extreme hard and never left an office before9p.m.He expected the same degree of commitment from his employers.My mother advised her to speaking to her boss, and she felt she couldn’t.After about a month my sister was so tiring that twice,on her journey to home,she fell asleep on the bus and missed her stop.That was when she decided to talk to her boss, who surprisingly permitted him to leave on time.实战演练(五)My mom is a best cook in our neighbourhood.All my friend love to have supper at my house because of they love my mom’s cooking.I especially love my mom’s dumplings,what have various kinds of fillings,and all of them are deliciously.When we have a neighbourhood gathering everyone insisted that my mom should do all the cooking.Though sometimes tiring,she is willing to cooking things for others.Seeing people enjoy what she cooks are her happiest time.I’ve decided to be good a cook as my mom so I’m learning how to cook now.参考答案:(一)1.…let me to help…去掉to2.…we measure…measure→measured3.…put them into…them→it4.…butter or sugar.or→and5.…to adding flour.adding→add6.…too many flour…many→much7.Final,we…Final→Finally8.…mixture put…mixture后加was9.…twenty minute…minute→minutes10.After taste some…taste→tasting(二)1.…school was held…去掉was2.…to attend them.them→it3.…or walking…or→and4.That moved me…That→What5.I see his…see→saw6.…full of tear.tear→tears7.…wonderfully time…wonderfully→wonderful8.…burst out cry.cry→crying9.…decided be…decided后加to10.…role on our…on→in(三)1.…a real neat…real→really2.…year he planted…planted→plants3.…us to eating.eating→eat4.…his corn were…were→was5.…help with him…去掉with6.…keep them water…water→watered7.…they happily pick…they→we8.…have too much…much→many9.As result…As后加a10.…the winter month…month→months (四)1....and consult a few...consult→consulted2.…she offered the...she后加was3....worked extreme hard...extreme→extremely4....left an office...an→the5....from his employers.employers→employees6....to speaking to...speaking→speak7....and she felt...and→but8....so tiring that...tiring→tired9....journey to home...去掉to10....permitted him to...him→her(五)1.…a best cook…a→the2.All my friend…friend→friends3.…because of they…去掉of4.…what have various…what→which5.…are deliciously.deliciously→delicious6.…everyone insisted…insisted→insists7.…sometimes tiring…tiring→tired8.…to cooking things…cooking→cook9.…cooks are her…are→is10.…to be good…be后加as。
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学 生 自 主 学 习 方 案七年级 班 小组: 姓名: 科 目语文课题编号7-1-037设 计刘 瑾审核督查课时1学习目标1、用自己的话复述原文和概括寓意。
2、翻译《智子疑邻》、《塞翁失马》,积累文言词语。
《赫耳墨斯和雕像者《蚊子和狮子》1、给下列加点字注音: 庇护 饶头 较量 粘住 塞翁 何遽 堕 将骏马 折其髀 2、解释加点的词 ⑴天雨墙坏( )不筑 ⑵暮而果大亡( )其财 ⑶ 其家甚智( )其子 ⑷近塞上之人有善( )术者 ⑸马无故亡而人胡 ( ) ⑹此何遽不为( )福乎 ⑺居( )数月 ⑻家富良马其子好( )骑 ⑼引( )⑽堕( 而折其髀⑾死者十九( ) ⑿此独以跛( )之故 翻译下列句子。
暮而果大亡其财,其家甚智其子,而疑邻人之子。
马无故亡而入胡,人皆吊之。
家富良马,其子好骑,堕而折其髀。
此独以跛之故,父子保全。
3、分别写出这四则寓言的寓意 《赫耳墨斯和雕像者》 《蚊子和狮子》 《智子疑邻》 《塞翁失马》《赫耳墨斯和雕像者》 2、《蚊子和狮子》中,蚊子在与狮子战斗前吹了一次喇叭,战斗后又吹了一次喇叭。
蚊子两次吹喇叭的原因分别是什么?如何理解蚊子的形象? 战斗前: 战斗后: 蚊子的形象: 3、思考一下,《蚊子和狮子》和《塞翁失马》的寓意分别给你带来怎样的启发? 课堂延伸 阅读下则寓言,回答问题 1、请说出文中前者后者各指代什么? 前者指 后者指 两只桶分别可以比喻哪两种人? 盛着酒的桶 : 空无所有的桶: 智子疑邻 宋有富人,天雨墙坏。
其子曰:“不筑,必将有盗。
”其邻人之父亦云。
暮而果大亡其财,其家甚智其子,而疑邻人之父。
1、断句完全正确的一项是( ) A.宋有/富人 B.天/雨墙/坏 C.其/邻人之父/亦云 D.其家甚/智其子 2、用自己的话说说这则寓言的大意。
3、富家被盗的原因是什么?其家甚智其子,为什么? 4、读了这则寓言,你最想对文中的哪个人发表一些感慨?请写在下面。
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第九期技巧篇——写作和短文改错一、英语写作十大加分句型1.分词作状语分词作状语的用法:当状语从句的主语与主句的主语一样时,可直接省略从句的主语,并把从句的谓语改成分词(从句是主动语态时,改成现在分词;从句是被动语态时;改成过去分词),从而构成分词作状语结构。
eg:原句:When I saw Dad working so hard,I could not help bursting into tears.改写:Seeing Dad working so hard,I could not help bursting into tears.2.副词位于句首eg:Oddly enough,my most precious memory lies in the days when I was ill in hospital.3.动名词作主语eg:Besides,taking some small sports equipment along with you can help you do exercise whenever you are free.4.强调句型的基本模式It is/was+句子要强调的部分+that/who+句子中剩余的部分。
eg:原本我们想写的句子是:Eric found a beautiful vase in the cave.要强调主语Eric,则为:It was Eric that/who found a beautiful vase in the cave.5.同位语从句同位语从句的基本结构是:抽象名词+that+抽象名词的内容(从句)+主句剩余部分。
eg:I have just received the message that a serious earthquake struck a county of Taiwayesterday.6.经典句型There is no denying that+陈述句不可否认……There is no doubt that+陈述句毫无疑问……Needless to say,陈述句不用多说,……It is widely accepted that+陈述句众所周知……As is known to all,陈述句众所周知,……From my point of view,+陈述句我个人认为,……As far as I am concerned,+陈述句我个人认为,……As far as I know,+陈述句据我所知7.巧用as当:随着as time goes by随着时间的流逝认为:regard A as B把A当做B作为:As a student,we should work hard.正如,就像:as we all know/as everyone knows正如我们都知道的as we had expected正如我们期待的那样as is mentioned before正如前面所提到的as the saying goes就像谚语说的那样as it turns out正如结果所展示的那样因为:As you don't feel well,you had better stay at home.比较:as...as it used to和过去一样……8.定语从句eg:The man,who is called father by me,is trying to ensure us a better life with all his effort.9.倒装句四种倒装句:Only+状语位于句首时Not only+一般疑问句位于句首,but(also)+陈述句eg:Not only did we play basketball together,but we also talked for a while.Never/Seldom位于句首时eg:Seldom have I seen him recently.So+adj/adv+一般疑问句+that+陈述句;Such+名词性短语+一般疑问句+that+陈述句eg:So handsome is Jack that everyone likes him.eg:Such a handsome man is Jack that everyone likes him.10.虚拟语气If条件从句从句的谓语形式主句的谓语形式对现在的虚拟did/were would/should/could/might do对过去的虚拟had done would/should/could/might have done对将来的虚拟didwould/should/could/might do should dowere to doeg:If I were you,I would help my parents do more housework.11.善于替换(1)动词替换①Improve提高:advance;promote促进;enhance;reinforce.提高②change改变:transform多指改头换面,完全改变③emphasize强调:highlight突出highlight/emphase the significance magnitude of...强调...的重要性;④develop培养:cultivate cultivate the ability of...培养情操;nurture养育,同样可以指培养人才⑤break破坏:impair impair ability主要是破坏能力,莫乱用;undermine抽象意义上的破坏,逐渐削弱之意;devastate特指毁灭,蹂躏。
⑥keep保存:preserve、conserve保护资源用的就是这个词,protect保护具体的东西。
⑦deal with解决:tackle the problem;解决问题resolve解决争论、冲突、危机,比较正式。
⑧need需要:require;call for.要求(2)形容词替换①everywhere普遍的:widespread;广泛prevalent;流行overflow泛滥;rampant特指有害的东西泛滥,比如疾病、犯罪等,并且难以控制。
②good好的(太多了):impressive令人印象深刻;glorious辉煌;amazing惊人;brilliant辉煌;incredible难以置信;attractive有魅力;advantageous特指有益的。
③harmful有害的:unfavorable不利;horrible可怕;disgusting恶心的;inhumance没人性的。
④rich富有的:wealthy富裕;affluent富裕的;ample充足。
⑤serious严重的:severe严重.⑥obvious明显的:manifest明显的;apparent明显的;evident明显的;patent明白的.⑦cheap便宜的economical经济的,不浪费,而不是单纯指某物便宜;reasonable价格合理的;affordable能够支付的。
(3)名词替换①forefather祖先:ancestor;predecessor.②difference不同:gap沟;distinction区别;schism分裂.③crime犯罪:delinquency;criminal act犯罪行为。
④environment环境:circumstance相当抽象的词,情况;surrounding表示周围居住环境,相当具体,nearby可与之互换;atmosphere、ambience这两个词可替换,但是当atmosphere表示大气层时则不能。
⑤pollution污染:contamination污染.⑥human人类:individual;men;ones以及一切表示工人、农民工、公务员等等的词。
humanity:特别指出,用来表示人性。
其他一概不要用。
in modern society在当今社会:in contemporary society在当代社会;in this day and age当今年代.二、短文改错技巧短文改错口诀:动词形,名词数,还要注意形和副;非谓语,细辨别,代词用法前后顾;介词短语需关注,冠词连词常光顾。
1.动词形主要包括三类错误:动词的时态错误;动词的语态错误;主、谓不一致的错误。
时态:Both Dad and I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We get up early in thegotmorning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went shopping.主、谓不一致:My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowerslooks语态:Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.used2.名词数可数名词单、复数形式错误;不可数名词错加复数可数名词Since then—for all these year we have been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where theyyearsplease.常见的不可数名词news,advice,homework,housework,imformation,progress,fun,equipment3.还要注意形和副注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。
(1)形容词修饰名词;(2)主系表结构中的形容词做表语;(3)副词修饰动词;(4)副词置于句首修饰整个句子,用逗号与主句隔开;(5)原级,比较级和最高级的误用。
1.Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.Steadily2.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.helpful3.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!wonderful4.非谓语,细辨别主要有现在分词,动名词-ing:主动进行过去分词–ed:被动完成不定式to do:将来目的We can choose between staying at home and take a trip.takingHe would ask who we were and pretend not to knowing us.know5.代词用法前后顾(1)前后人称不一致;(2)人称代词,物主代词,反身代词的误用;(3)主格宾格误用(动词,介词后);(4)不定代词的误用及混用。