2024届高考英语专题复习读后续写语篇训练 第一节 人与自我(语篇训练)四、个人成长

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In the morning, I went into class cheerfully as usual.
“Your mom says you are sick and have been in your room since school,” my father asked.
Plot
How did the author feel about the test?
There would be a unit test on Friday. I thought I couldn’t pass.
I planned to study for the test, but I couldn’t concentrate.
读 后续写
语篇训练
人与自我
语篇训练
01 家庭生活 02 校园生活 03 工作与职业 04 个人成长 05 情感情绪 06 计划与愿望 07 饮食与个健人成康长
四、个人成长
四、自然灾害
语篇训练1： 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续 写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Thursday, Mr. Burke announced there would be a unit test the next day and anyone who didn’t pass would have to come to school on Saturday, most particularly me, since I didn’t pass the last unit test. I did plan to study just to prove to him that I was plenty smart which I was mostly except in math, which I’d be okay in if I’d memorize the multiplication table. Just when I was ready to study, Nicho, my fiveyearold brother, came into my room with our new rabbit and it jumped on my desk and knocked the flashcards all over the floor. I asked my mother to help me pick them up, but she said I was old enough to help myself. Anyway, Nicho and I took the rabbit outside and before long it was dinner. After dinner my father said I could watch a special on television if I’d done all my homework. Of course I said I had. That was the beginning. I felt terrible telling my father a lie about the homework so I couldn’t even enjoy the special. Not much was important in our family. My friend Plummer had to do well in school and he was smart in math. And Andy had so many family rules to follow. My parents didn’t bother making up a lot of rules. But we did have to tell the truth even if it was bad. You could imagine how I didn’t really enjoy the special and felt uneasy. It was nine o’clock when I got up to my room and that was too late to study for the test so I lay in bed with the light off and decided what I would do the next day. But when I thought about Mr. Burke, it seemed perfectly sensible to cheat. Not passing the test was such a terrible thing that I just forgot my parents’ big thing about telling the truth.
续写线索： 通知考试→未认真准备→作弊→难过→坦白→感悟。
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
In the morning, I went into class cheerfully as usual. When the test began, I just sat down
next to Plummer and from time to time, I’d glance over at his paper to copy the answers. It would be an easy thing, because our desks were practically on top of each other. After the test, I couldn’t believe what I’d done in cold blood. I began to wonder about myself. All of a sudden, I felt that I had turned into a criminal. Then my stomach was upside down. I went back home and told my mother I was sick. She didn’t believe me, but put me to bed anyhow. I lay in bed in the early winter darkness when my father came in and sat down on my bed.
②由第二段首句“‘你妈妈说你生病了，从学校回来就一 直待在房间里，’爸爸问道。”可知，本段可描写“我” 与父亲的对话，要写出“我”如何对父亲坦承自己考试作 弊以及父亲的反应，并讲明最后是如何解决这件事情的。
Step 3 增加细节，开始写作
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在考试之前没有 认真准备，因而在考试中作弊，作者心里很难过和父母坦白， 并在父母的帮助下向老师承认错误。
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
1. Read for information
Who When Where What Why How
I, Mr. Burke, Nicho, my parents, Plummer, Andy On Thursday, on Saturday, nine o’clock, the next day
At school, at home I was afraid I would fail the unit test on Friday.
I didn’t pass the last unit test. I intended to cheat in the test.
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
Step 4 检查优化，整洁誊写
“Your mom says you are sick and have been in your room since school,” my father asked.
“My stomach is feeling sort of upset,” I hedged. Luckily, it was too dark to see his face. “Well, take a rest,” my father got up to leave. I could tell he didn’t believe me. Just as he shut the door, I called out to him in a voice I didn’t even recognize as my own. I told him I cheated on the math test. He asked me to call Mr. Burke and tell him exactly what had happened. And I did that. Mr. Burke said that I should come on Saturday to take another test. He was not friendly but was not absolutely mean either. “Today I thought I was turning into a criminal,” in relief and not feeling sick any more I told my father when he turned off my light. Sometimes he kissed me good night and sometimes he didn’t. But tonight he did.
【高分词汇】 ②知道，看出：tell/know ③关门：shut the door/close the door/slam the door
【出彩语句】 语句2：Mr. Burke said that I should come on Saturday to take another test.（that引导的宾语 从句）
2. Read for plots
A. I planned to study for the test, but I couldn’t concentrate.
B. I forgot the family rule and intended to cheat in the test.
C. There would be a unit test on Friday. I was afraid I couldn’t pass.
D. I recalled my family rule—tell the truth.
③Climax D
②Development A
①Beginning C
④Later Development B
⑤Ending ？
Step 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
3. Read for emotional changes
【高分词汇】 ①浏览：glance over/scan/run one’s eyes over
【出彩语句】 语句1：When the test began, I just sat down next to Plummer and from time to time, I’d glance over at his paper to copy the answers.（when引导的时间状语从句）
worried relaxed
I forgot the family rule and intended to cheat in the test.
anxious&afraid
I went into class…
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Step 2 细读首句，构思框架
①由第一段首句“早上，我像往常一样高高兴兴地走进教 室。”可知，本段可描写“我”作弊的细节，作弊后的感 受以及感觉生病的描述。