九年级英语英语初中英语书面表达附答案附答案(1)

九年级英语英语初中英语书面表达附答案附答案(1)
一、初中英语书面表达
1．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达
假设你是刘莉，你的美国笔友Amy来信想了解中国的传统节日端午节。

请你回信给她介绍端午节。

参考词汇：农历：Chinese Lunar calendar 糯米:sticky rice
Dear Amy,
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
2．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
为响应我市“创建国家卫生城市”的号召，6月3日，5000多名市民以绿色出行的方式参与了“生态随州——环白云湖健步走”活动。

请以“共建绿色城市”为主题，根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

注意：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文的意思连贯，语句通顺；2．词数：80词左右：（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名．
参考词汇：吐痰spit 垃圾箱dustbin 交通拥堵traffic jams 环境environment
As a middle school student of Suiz hou, it’s our duty to help build a green city._______
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3．（·上海中考模拟）In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ ..and I”.（以“我和……” 为题，写一篇60-120 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

）每一个生命个体都和这个世界发生着联系，你也不例外。

请分享一个你和他人、社会或自然之间的故事，并谈谈自己的体验或感受。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

）4．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
幸福是什么呢?是父母细心的呵护，是成功时朋友的祝福，是帮助他人后会心的一笑，还是……？其实幸福很简单，幸福就在你身边。

请你以“Happiness”为题，写一篇英语短文，让我们分享你的感受。

词数：不少于80。

温馨提示：l、短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。

2、这些词汇也许对你有帮助：treasure（v. 珍惜），comfort （v．安慰），share （v．分享）
Happiness
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 5．（·江苏中考模拟）临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告．
要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等
Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.
6．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
学校英语社团正在举办英语征文比赛，请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learn to Smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。

注意：
1．短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译；
2．表格中省略部分须用2至3句话作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude （态度） to life．
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_______________________________________________________________________________ 7．（·天津中考模拟）根据联合国教科文组织的统计显示，北欧国家国民每年读书24本左右,美国人年均阅读7 本书，.韩国人11本书，日本、法国国民每年读书数量为8.4本左右，而中国国民人均读书数量低于5本。

你的阅读量是多少？作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

要求:1.文中必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥；
2.条理淸晰,字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息：
4.开头和结尾部已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:身心健康：mental and physical health
Nowadays,reading is becoming more and more popular among us._____________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s be active readers and enjoy reading.
8．（
·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆发，据报道114个美国孩子在今年2月死于流感。

流感季节我们应该如何保持健康呢？
要求:1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。

参考词汇：weaker immune systems （较弱的免疫系统）；influenza virus （流感病毒）The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February.
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9．（·北京中考模拟）现在，某英文报纸正在开展以＂遇见美＂为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

谈一谈生活中你遇见美的一次经历，主要内容包括你什么时候在哪里遇见了美，经历了什么事情以及你为什么觉得它美。

提示词语：visit, touch, impress, meaningful, amazing, memory
提示问题：
1. When and where did it happen?
2. What did you experience?
3. Why was it beautiful?
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10．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达
I’d Like to Say “ ” to My
提示：即将毕业了，在你三年的初中学习和生活中，你有什么想要对家长、老师或者朋友说？有歉意、有感谢，有怀念还是其它？请以I’d Like to Say “ ” to My 为题，任选一位倾诉对象，用英语写一篇文章，谈一谈你的想法。

要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上。

写在本试题卷上无效。

11．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人际关系和情感态度）
现在社会普遍对90后，00后有一些误解，认为他们自私、无礼，所以不能很好地与人沟通，那么，作为一名00后学生，你又是怎么看待这个问题的呢? 请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，分别列举至少三条优点和两条不足之处进行描述。

要求：1.短文内容必须包括全部要点提示，可适当发挥。

2.短文次数80-100。

12．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假定你叫John，最近从报纸上得知英国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。

要点如下：
表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等；
感到担忧：造成环境污染等；
希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。

适当提出一点你的建议。

注意：1．词数80—100；
2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully,
John
13．（·南通市通州区金北学校中考模拟）书面表达
阳光中学为了丰富学生的课余生活，每学期都会举办各种各样的活动。

请根据提示，为校报写一篇有关的报道。

注意：
1. 必须包含所给要点, 省略号部分适当发挥, 不要简单翻译；
2. 词数90左右, 开头已写好, 不计入总词数；
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.
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假设格林（Green）先生是你班的一位外籍教师，在他回国前夕，学校将为他举行欢送会。

请用英文写一篇欢送辞，内容要点如下：
1. 格林先生是澳大利亚人，三年前来到我校教英语；
2. 他与我们相处融洽，但对我们要求严格；
3. 这些年来，…… 我们深表感激；
4. 下星期他将离校回国，祝他一路顺风。

15．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。

原因：1.考试太滥
2.自身勤奋不够
3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上
4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴
看法与建议：1.作弊有害； 2.要做人诚实，学习发奋； 3.学校应减少考试。

要求：1.字数 80-100； 2.围绕要点可适当发挥； 3.文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。

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16．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
假设你叫李明，曾荣幸成为天津国际马拉松赛的一名志愿者。

请根据以下要点，用英文写一篇演讲稿，谈谈这一段美好的经历。

（1）年4月国际马拉松赛在天津举行；
（2）作为志愿者，赛前接受了培训；
（3）在闲暇时间里，和运动员用英语交谈，为他们提供帮助；
（4）和许多运动员成为了朋友，也了解了许多不同的文化；
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：志愿者 volunteer
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Ladies and gentlemen,
My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________
17．（·四川中考模拟）（题文）书面表达
课外活动可以让我们增长知识，发展智力，开阔视野和塑造性格。

许多学校创造性地开展了课外活动，如朗诵、唱歌、讲故事、演话剧、办刊物以及举办各种体育活动等。

最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目。

请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。

1.你校开展课外活动的情况；
2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；
3.为同学选择课外活动或为学校开设课外活动提出建议。

注意：1.词数 80 以上；
2.文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名；
3.稿件的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

After-class Activities
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools.
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18．（·四川中考模拟）（题文）书面表达
在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：
1. 定时做饭、洗衣服；
2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；
3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）
假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。

要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；
2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）
3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时
emergency 紧急情况
ccompany sb. 陪伴某人
Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 19．（·山西农业大学附属学校中考模拟）书面表达
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。

对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。

但很多人缺乏的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。

请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。

你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。

注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实的人名及校名。

Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?
20．（·全国中考模拟）每位同学都希望成为班级中受欢迎的人。

请你根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇题为“Being a Popular Student”的英语短文,谈谈你是如何做的。

要求：
1．词数100左右。

开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2．所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。

3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers.
All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers comes to those who keep improving their personal qualities.
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一、初中英语书面表达
1．Dear Amy,
I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional fe
解析：Dear Amy,
I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival. I ‘m happy to share what I know about it with you.
The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.
In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on
history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍中国的传统节日端午节。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I learn from your letter that……，I’m happy to……，The festival has a history of……，These two are……，we all love……，I hope that……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头表达了我很高兴向你介绍端午节，接下来介绍端午节的历史，日期，庆祝活动，特色食物和目的，最后表达我的感受。

此处want to do sth, share sth with sb, according to, in a word, look back, get together等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

2．As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoid
the t
解析：As a middle school student of Suizhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoid
th e traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the envi ronment and make our city beautiful.
In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can also
save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city.
【解析】
本文属于给出一个主题，对这个主题的相关内容进行论述。

实际上就是要求书写一份倡议书。

人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。

动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中所给的信息，并补充两条个人的观点。

注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯，丰富文章的文采。

高分句型一：
We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. 通过骑自行车或步行，这样就可以避免交通阻塞，减少空气污染。

and是并列连词，连接的是两个相同的谓语，by是介词，意思是"通过某组织方式"。

高分句型二：
In my daily life，I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. 在我的日常生活
中，无论我走到哪里，我会捡垃圾，把垃圾放进垃圾箱里。

pick up是固定短语，意思是"捡起"，put into是固定短语，意思是"放进"wherever引导的是让步状语从句，从句的意思是"无论我到哪里"。

3．My friends and I
Before I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the cam
解析：My friends and I
Before I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.
【解析】
这是一篇要求介绍自己和他人、社会或自然之间的故事，并谈谈自己的体验或感受。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。

英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

4．Happiness
Dad has been away from our city since he found a job in Guangzhou years ago. He seldom co
解析：Happiness
Dad has been away from our city since he found a job in Guangzhou years ago. He seldom comes back home except Spring Festivals. I stay with Mom and Grandma in the countryside. They care for me a lot. When I meet something difficult, I prefer to talk with Dad on the phone. Grandma also enjoys our chatting online. No matter where Dad is, my family is always full of happiness. How I wish next S pring Festival would come soon so that the whole family can get together!【解析】
话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。

英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

5．Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He i
解析：Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.
I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。

在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。

表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。

这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。

在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。

同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。

这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。

写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。

短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。

如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

6．Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For exam
解析：Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了大量短语，例如in our life，may be，something unpleasant，for example，fail in，laugh at，why not，cheer up，help sb. to do，get closer to，each other等。

同时Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship.等多种特殊句式和非谓语动词结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，条理清晰，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们翻译拓展成一个个英文句子。

还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短
语，会给习作增色。

7．Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver
解析：Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying"To open a book is always helpful"clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．
As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．
Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，行文之前，把表格里的要点内容通读一遍，做出框架，开始写作时，把表格里所列内容全部表述到文章中，并且自己适当增加内容，注意人称、时态、单复数，词形的变化。

适当增加衔接词，使文章更出彩。

如对长句不好把握，就尽量使用短句。

8．The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It
解析：The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February.
The flu hits children and elderly people the hardest. This is because they have weaker immune system. It is easy for them to get the flu.
In fact, most people don’t know much about the flu. The influenza virus causes the flu. The virus can get on your hands. If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu. Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public.
How do we keep the flu away? We should get lots of rest and exercise. Put on enough clothes to keep warm. Take a shower every day and wash hands often. Remember if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如from to，every year，get the flu，in fact，get on，pay no attention to，spread from，person to person，in public，keep away，lots of，put on，take a shower，make sure，go to the hospital，as soon as possible等。

而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in
public.等多种从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

9．Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the gian
解析：Last year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.
The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.
From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.
【解析】
试题分析：本文以＂遇见美＂为主题的短文，谈谈生活中遇见美的一次经历，所以句子的主语是第一人称单数，句子的谓语动词用一般过去时，要注意不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接，用自己熟悉的短语和句式。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give sb.sth给某人某物；用了that引导的定语从句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during WWII.用了as和as if引导的从句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.增加了文章的亮点。

10．I’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My Teacher
How time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always fee
解析：I’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My Teacher
How time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always feel sorry for one thing in my heart. I’d like to say sorry to my English teacher, Mrs. Chen.
When I began to learn English, I hated remembering new words. So I wasn’t good at English. Once I copied my deskmate’s paper during an English exam and handed it in. I got an “A”. Mrs. Chen didn’t know the truth and praised me in class. Now I still remember her words clearly, “ It’s a good beginning. I believe you will be better and better.” When I heard these words, I really felt regretful in my heart. I decided to tell Mrs. Chen the truth and say “sorry” to her after class. But I didn’t.
Since then, I have tried my best to learn English well. And my English is becoming better and better. But I’d like to say sincerely. “ Sorry, Mrs. Chen.”
【解析】这是一篇要求介绍你三年的初中学习和生活。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，
注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

11．As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When some
解析：As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand.
We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently.
On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways; sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t communicate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.
【解析】
本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。

灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。

语言力求准确，简洁。

最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；communicate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

12．Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that yo
解析：Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.
Would you please offer us more information about it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John
【解析】
这是一篇提纲作文。

内容是针对英国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂这件事，写一封电子邮件，表达欢迎和你的担忧。

注意电子邮件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。

要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性；文章必须涵盖所提供的各个提纲要点，不要遗漏。

行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。

作文完成后，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏需要表达的要点和细节。