河北省武邑中学2018届高三英语复习-如何提高高中英语写作二课件
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With the development of the economy, people are living a happy life. However, how about the nature? Just as we can see in the picture, we aren't in harmony with the nature. If you were the fish and had to take a bottle to drink wherever you go, how would you feel? And if nothing is acted to save the fish, save the river and save the environment, the river
differences between Chinese and western cultures）
V. Handwriting (neat and a feast for the eyes)
Convincing
Informative 小品词：
kind help; much in demand; full/real/true significance; Fully absorbed in; be a hundred percent sure;any possible assistance; No one could be more generous; It rained cats and dogs; got wet all over; readily/widely available(=very easy to obtain); a large/small/tiny/significant/growing/good/ high number of sth; a big/broad/large smile;
Write a broad outline for your passage. I. A rough description of the picture II.illustrate the phenomenon and express your feelings
III. Take some necessary steps
2016高考英语全国 I卷作文预测：(make a
prediction)
假如你叫李华，是校英语俱乐部成员。下次英语俱 乐部活动的内容围绕“How to protect Chinese traditional cultures?”这个主题进行轮流发言。请 根据下面的写作提示，写一个英语发言稿。内容包 括： 1. 保护传统文化的必要性(necessity)； 2. 保护传统文化的建议(proposals)。 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
I think it is a chance to improve my English and learn about new culture. Your prompt response will be much appreciated.
Yours, Li Hua
仔细观察下图，根据所看到的图片，描述其 所表达的内容，并发表你的感想。 注意：词数100左右。
IV. Hope to obtain the permission
Dear Sir / Madam, I’m Li Hua, an 18-year-old girl student inБайду номын сангаас
Grade Three. I hear some American students are coming to study in our school for two weeks. I am writing to apply for the oppportunity to become a host family.
Writing in an idiomatic way ---Guo Sir (郭庆炉)
I want to......
.I want to ponder something, which encourages me
to set off on my real life journey. .I want to put something, sharing with others my positive feelings. .I want to depict something, which inspires confidence in my fellows who wish to seek their own answers. .I want to appreciate something, which can generate deep thought and inner quietness in my life. .I want to write something, which makes me an exact man.
From the picture, we can see two fish drinking mineral water or pure water, instead of the water from the river, to keep alive. Apparently, the river is polluted and the implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously.
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua. I am a boy. I like playing football. I am very shy because I always feel nervous when I make a speech in front of others. My English is good and I have some English friends. I always ask some questions about English culture when I have free time. My family is rich. If an English student lives in my house, I will invite him or her to pay a visit to my country. And I can help him or her to learn Chinese. I think it is good for me. Finally, I hope you can give me your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
Write a broad outline for a application letter. I. self-introduction II. Your purpose of writing the letter.
III. Some advantages your family possesses
Write a broad outline for your passage.
I. Greeting. (Hello everyone, /Dear fellow students) II. The ideas you share
III. illustrate a phenomenon and express your worries IV. The concrete measures you propose V. Make a public appeal VI. Concluding remarks
IV. Make a public appeal
Here is a composition written by one of us students. What do you think of it? And do you know there 's still room for improvement?
Third, our apartment is large enough to accommodate a guest. More importantly, an American student stayed in my home last year, so we have experience in receiving foreign guests.
Problems and Solutions in English Writing
I.Structure（logical thinking） II. Content （add some relevant details properly to your passage, making it more coherent 可以适 当增加细节，以使行文连贯的） III. language（ idiomatic ) 汉语思维下的英文符号
The following is a letter of application about being a host family. Please read it carefully and analyze the problems that have occurred in the writing.
Hello everyone, I'd like to share with you my ideas on how to
protect Chinese traditional cultures. In the last few decades, many young people
have shown great interest in foreign cultures with the international exchanges becoming popular. As a result, some Chinese traditional cultures are being forgotten. If we don't take effective measures to protect them, it would be too late. What shall we do?
will turn into fish dessert and we will regret it. Therefore, it is high time that we should take
some measures to make up the mistakes we 've made. Let's call on the public to clean the water, protect the forest, love the soil and be friendly to the animals. Let's say no to the chemical factories that pour the waste into the river. Let's remember that it is the harmony with the nature not the money or benefit that matters.
My family has some advantages. First, I’m open-minded and like to make new friends. Second, my parents speak English so fluently that we have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.
(typical of the natural way in which someone
speaks or writes when they are using their own language说话或书写时符合某一语言习惯的，地道 的) IV. Thinking （positive; not miss the point;
differences between Chinese and western cultures）
V. Handwriting (neat and a feast for the eyes)
Convincing
Informative 小品词：
kind help; much in demand; full/real/true significance; Fully absorbed in; be a hundred percent sure;any possible assistance; No one could be more generous; It rained cats and dogs; got wet all over; readily/widely available(=very easy to obtain); a large/small/tiny/significant/growing/good/ high number of sth; a big/broad/large smile;
Write a broad outline for your passage. I. A rough description of the picture II.illustrate the phenomenon and express your feelings
III. Take some necessary steps
2016高考英语全国 I卷作文预测：(make a
prediction)
假如你叫李华，是校英语俱乐部成员。下次英语俱 乐部活动的内容围绕“How to protect Chinese traditional cultures?”这个主题进行轮流发言。请 根据下面的写作提示，写一个英语发言稿。内容包 括： 1. 保护传统文化的必要性(necessity)； 2. 保护传统文化的建议(proposals)。 注意： 1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
I think it is a chance to improve my English and learn about new culture. Your prompt response will be much appreciated.
Yours, Li Hua
仔细观察下图，根据所看到的图片，描述其 所表达的内容，并发表你的感想。 注意：词数100左右。
IV. Hope to obtain the permission
Dear Sir / Madam, I’m Li Hua, an 18-year-old girl student inБайду номын сангаас
Grade Three. I hear some American students are coming to study in our school for two weeks. I am writing to apply for the oppportunity to become a host family.
Writing in an idiomatic way ---Guo Sir (郭庆炉)
I want to......
.I want to ponder something, which encourages me
to set off on my real life journey. .I want to put something, sharing with others my positive feelings. .I want to depict something, which inspires confidence in my fellows who wish to seek their own answers. .I want to appreciate something, which can generate deep thought and inner quietness in my life. .I want to write something, which makes me an exact man.
From the picture, we can see two fish drinking mineral water or pure water, instead of the water from the river, to keep alive. Apparently, the river is polluted and the implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously.
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Li Hua. I am a boy. I like playing football. I am very shy because I always feel nervous when I make a speech in front of others. My English is good and I have some English friends. I always ask some questions about English culture when I have free time. My family is rich. If an English student lives in my house, I will invite him or her to pay a visit to my country. And I can help him or her to learn Chinese. I think it is good for me. Finally, I hope you can give me your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
Write a broad outline for a application letter. I. self-introduction II. Your purpose of writing the letter.
III. Some advantages your family possesses
Write a broad outline for your passage.
I. Greeting. (Hello everyone, /Dear fellow students) II. The ideas you share
III. illustrate a phenomenon and express your worries IV. The concrete measures you propose V. Make a public appeal VI. Concluding remarks
IV. Make a public appeal
Here is a composition written by one of us students. What do you think of it? And do you know there 's still room for improvement?
Third, our apartment is large enough to accommodate a guest. More importantly, an American student stayed in my home last year, so we have experience in receiving foreign guests.
Problems and Solutions in English Writing
I.Structure（logical thinking） II. Content （add some relevant details properly to your passage, making it more coherent 可以适 当增加细节，以使行文连贯的） III. language（ idiomatic ) 汉语思维下的英文符号
The following is a letter of application about being a host family. Please read it carefully and analyze the problems that have occurred in the writing.
Hello everyone, I'd like to share with you my ideas on how to
protect Chinese traditional cultures. In the last few decades, many young people
have shown great interest in foreign cultures with the international exchanges becoming popular. As a result, some Chinese traditional cultures are being forgotten. If we don't take effective measures to protect them, it would be too late. What shall we do?
will turn into fish dessert and we will regret it. Therefore, it is high time that we should take
some measures to make up the mistakes we 've made. Let's call on the public to clean the water, protect the forest, love the soil and be friendly to the animals. Let's say no to the chemical factories that pour the waste into the river. Let's remember that it is the harmony with the nature not the money or benefit that matters.
My family has some advantages. First, I’m open-minded and like to make new friends. Second, my parents speak English so fluently that we have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.
(typical of the natural way in which someone
speaks or writes when they are using their own language说话或书写时符合某一语言习惯的，地道 的) IV. Thinking （positive; not miss the point;