新教材2023年高中英语Unit3 SectionⅣ写作指导课件新人教版选择性必修第一册

3．介绍某地的风景、名胜等，常用语句： ①It has many places of interest, such as... ②They make the city a tourist attraction both at home and abroad... ③It’s a wonderful place with... ④It really deserves the name of...
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参考范文： Located next to Zhengkai Road, the Green Expo Garden in Zhengzhou appeals to many visitors each year. It is a very splendid garden, which covers an area of about 3, 000 mu. There are up to 94 exhibition parks, which are home to many types of flowers. Most visitors are interested in the flowers on display each day.
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Good morning, everyone! I am Li Hua from Luoyang, Henan Province of China. It’s a great honor
to be here to introduce my city to all of you！_______________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Thank you!
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UNIT 3 FASCINATING PARKS
Section Ⅳ 写作指导
写作方法指导ຫໍສະໝຸດ 介绍一所公园 写作储备 阅读教材P31－32的介绍主题公园的说明文，提炼介绍主题公园的 写作特点。
Ⅰ.黄金写作模板
Located in ， is one of the world’s five famous ．
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谋篇布局
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1．基本框架 开头(beginning)——可依照要求概述公园情况。 主体(body)——分述公园配套设施及路线。 结尾(ending)——总结陈述以吸引读者前去公园。 2．写作特点 通常情况下，文章应以一般现在时和第三人称为主，在发表看法时 用第一人称。
Ⅲ.话题词汇 1．特点 entertainment 娱乐，special 特殊的，activity活动，facility设施， performance表演，be located in位于 2．内涵 experience体验，familiar熟悉的，educational有教育意义的，creation 创 造 ， measure 测 量 ， history 历 史 ， severe 严 重 的 ， community 社 区 ， technology 技 术 ， be crazy about adventure 热 衷 于 冒 险 ， combine entertainment with education娱乐与教育相结合
3．有多达94个展园，是很多种花卉的家园。 _T_h_e_re__a_re__u_p__to__9_4_e_x_h_i_b_it_io_n__p_a_r_k_s_a_n_d__th_e_y__a_re__h_o_m_e__to__m__an_y__t_y_p_es__of _fl_o_w_e_r_s.______ 4．建造这个园子的目的是展示环保方面取得的成就，鼓励人们过 绿色生活。 _T_h_e__g_a_rd_e_n___w_a_s__b_u_i_lt__t_o__s_h_o_w__t_h_e__a_c_h_ie_v_e_m__e_n_ts__i_n__e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__e_n_tal _pr_o_t_e_ct_i_o_n_a_n_d_e_n_c_o_u_r_a_g_e_p_e_o_p_l_e_t_o_l_iv_e__a_g_r_ee_n__li_f_e_.
2．介绍某地的面积、人口及气候等，常用语句： ①It covers an area of about...square kilometers. ②Its area is... square kilometers. ③It has a population of... ④Its population is... ⑤The average temperature is... ⑥The hottest months are...
The ticket for an adult is 30 yuan. You can take Bus 568 or Bus 573 to get there.
假定你是李华，将参加你市在国外举办的旅游推介会，你将作为代 表在推介会上发言。请你写一篇英文发言稿，介绍你所在的城市。
注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．前景 provide提供，excitement 激动，famous著名的，attractive吸引人的， pleasure快乐，magical有魔力的，popular受欢迎的，central中心的
Ⅳ.话题句式 1．介绍某地所处的地理位置及以什么闻名等，常用语句： ①be located/situated in, lie in, in the north of/to the east of ②be just like, look like, as beautiful as a flower, be compared to ③be famous/well-known as/for
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is not only famous for ， but also for ， and ．
It’s really a great tourist attraction to visit.
Ⅱ.写作架构及语言特点 介绍公园时，首先要介绍公园的所在地，其次要介绍公园的主要景 观，以及各种各样的娱乐活动。要抓住其主要特点或独特之处进行介 绍，要使用描绘性语言，以达到吸引人的目的。
实践应用 请根据下面表格的内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍郑州绿博 园(The Green Expo Garden in Zhengzhou)。
地点 面积 特色 宗旨 门票 公交
紧邻郑开大道 约3 000亩
展园94个，是各类花卉的家园 展示环保方面取得的成就，倡导绿色生活
成人每人次30元 568路和573路
完美成篇 用适当的过渡词把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80 词左右的英语短文。 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________
The purpose of building the garden is to show the achievements in environmental protection and encourage people to live a green life. The Green Expo Garden has become a new tourist attraction in Zhengzhou.