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英语专四写作便条1.邀请便条：①发出邀请发出邀请aApril 20, 2008Dear Fiona,I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours. The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m. today, I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very happy time together. Please let me know whether you can make it.Yours,Amelia发出邀请bApril 20, 2008Dear Fiona,Here is a piece of good news for you. The * will give a performance in the * tomorrow evening. I am sure that you will be happy to watch it .The performance will begin at seven o’clock sharp. I will wait for you at the theater entrance. Please let me know whether you can make it at your earliest convenience.发出邀请cApril 20, 2008Dear Professor Zhou,I am Amelia from class 052; I need you to give me some suggestion on my project. If it doesn’t trouble you too much, shall we have a meet at your office tomorrow? Time is up to you.Respectful yours,Amelia发出邀请d(通知)April 20, 2008Dear girls and boys in Class 0403,This Saturday evening, from 7 p.m. to 9 p. m., at Singeing dining hall, there will be a ball held by Class 0301. We warmly invite you to take part in it. There you can enjoy yourselves with dance, music and various g ames. And we’ll have a chance of communication, which will enhance the friendship between us. Come and enjoy ourselves together.Yours, MikeMonitor of Class 0301②接受邀请April 20, 2008Dear Amelia,It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I wou ld like to come. I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p.m. this evening. (如果是办在家里：I shall be very happy to call at your house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.) Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Fiona③拒绝邀请April 20, 2008Dear Amelia，It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to but I have a meeting to attend this evening, please give my best regards to them all and I hope my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience, have fun.Yours, Amelia2.请假条April 20, 2008Dear Ms. Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning two periods of English Class (I‘m terribly sorry to apply for ten days’ lea ve from the Aug. 23rd to Sep. 3rd)due to a bad cold and high fever. I will show you the certificate from the doctor to support my application. I will go back to school as soon as I recover.(I promise I will do my best to catch the missed lessons on after I come back.)Wish for your allowance.Yours respectfully, Amelia3.请求便条a.讲清事情的因由(为什么请求)b.请求行为c.请求实现方式d.致谢套句：请求帮助： Would you do me a favor? Would you be so kind as to…?/ Could I trouble you to send this book for me?/ If it is not too troublesome, could you…?/ I hope this request will not trouble you too much.范文：April 20，2008Dear Professor Hu,I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “American Literature”. But it is a pity that I was late that day due to an accident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout. Your lecture is really instructive for my English study, so I wonder if you could kindly e-mail the handout to the address: ******************.cn.Heartfeltthanks.Respectfully yours,Amelia4.抱怨投诉便条(关键词complain, dissatisfaction)a.抱怨投诉行为b.投诉内容具体描述c.要求弥补纠正赔偿d.抱怨投诉者对弥补纠正赔偿等的敦促或威胁套句：行为描述I’m writing to bring your attention to the problems I have had with … . Here’s the problem…解决方式的要求：It would be very kind( considerate) of you to…address this problem soon. / t ake steps to rectify this situation soon. / turn it down a little?敦促或威胁: Frankly, I really can’t put up with the situation any more. You must rectify the situation, or I will take it to the court. / If you can’t give me a satisfactory answer, I will compl ain it to the Consumer Association.英文书信有正式与非正式之分，英文便条为非正式书信。

英语专业四级考试便条写作评分标准(2006)

英语专业四级考试便条写作评分标准（2006）便条满分为10 分，从格式、内容、语言以及语言得体性四方面进行评分。

2006 年英语专业四级考试的便条写作为例，其要求是：“Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You have got to know that your classmate, Michael, is organizing a weekend excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip. Write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and ask for information on two details related to the excursion.”2001年5月专业四级考试：Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a note ofλ about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.λλ2003年5月专业四级考试：Write a note of about 50 - 60 words based on the following situation: You have heard that your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.λ英语应用文写作之便条写法(03/02)λ便条是一种简单的书信。

英语专业四级考试便条写作

2. Accepting an invitation
A note of accepting an invitation a. appreciation of being invited b. his/her certainty if having a good time c. his/her assurance of being punctual, his/her apology for having to be late d. his/her offer help e. his/her looking forward to the occasion
9. The help you give me is sincerely valued. 10. I hope everything will be well with you. 11. Please let us know if you want more information. 12. I hope you always enjoy yourself. 13. I wish you every success in the coming year. 14. Please remember me to your family. 15. With best regards to your family. 16. All the best. 17. With love and good wishes.
Workshop 4 You are Kate, write a note of accepting your friend, Rebecca’s invitation to her birthday/Christmas party/housewarming party.

TEM4NOTES便条

TEM4NOTES便条专四满分便条写作冲刺SECTION B NOTE-WRITING[10MIN]⾸先仔细读题，分解内容，标出重点，特别是便条中必须完成的任务要⽤数字标出来！Write a note of about50—60 words based on the following situationYesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher. Professor Wang. Write him 1.a note of apology and 2.make a request for another meeting. You should also 3.suggest the time for the requested meeting. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.参考答案：(1.交代写便条时间)Sep.16Dear Professor,（2.按提⽰写称谓）（3内容) 1)先道歉I am deeply sorry that I missed the appointment with you because of my mistake.2)提请求I know you’re busy these days, but I wonder if you could arrange for another appointment with me because I badly need your help with my thesis.3)约时间地点）Would this Friday afternoon be OK for you? If possible, I will go to your office at two p.m. I look forward to your early reply. (4.客套话)（68 words）（5.致敬签名）Yours sincerely,John格式:⽇期、称呼和结尾三部分内容与语⾔1.注意：⾸句需⽤⾃⼰正确的语⾔表达，不要抄提⽰。

英语专业四级考试便条写作解析

Marks will be awarded for contents, organization, grammar and appropri, 2008
Dear Jane,
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Hearing you want to subscribe an English-languge newspaper. I
• 2)假设情景、灵活处理人际关系、圆满解决实际问题。
• 语言得体内容和语言是一个统一体。内容抓住后，应以恰当的语言来表达。一般来说，便条的语言要简单明嘹，用词平易。当然，语言风格还应与情景一致，不同的对象，所使用的语言应有所不同。相对来说，对上级、长者、不熟悉的人的语言较为正式，对亲朋好友的语言则较为随便。不过，不管对方是谁，行文中都应体现态度诚恳礼貌。
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2.称呼
April 22, 2014 Dear Professor Wang,
I’m very sorry I didn’t keep the appointment with you yesterday because of my sick roommate. As his close friend, I had to look after him the whole day. I wonder if you’d mind having another appointment with me at your office at four o’clock tomorrow afternoon.
I’m expecting your reply. Yours sincerely, George
1.日期 3.正文
5.署名
4.套语
Part I: Note-writing(便条写作） ---格式

英语专业四级便条写作训练

Note writing（便条写作）1.便条的特点及要求便条是完成介绍、预约、道歉、请求、致谢、投诉等功能的简短的书信形式。

（1）特点A.构件简单（simple）书信由7个部分组成：●发信人信息（包括地址、邮编、写信时间）●收信人信息（如果彼此熟悉，此部分可省去不写）●对收信人的称呼（后边的标点符号一般用逗号）●正文●结尾客套语（之后一定有逗号）●签名（之后一定不能有标点符号）●职务名称（若写信人不是以集体名义写的，此部分不写）而便条相对简短，仅仅由时间、对方称呼、正文、结尾客套语和签名组成。

如便条是以集体名义写的，则要添加职务名称。

（2）文体适中（casual）与书信相比，便条文体的通俗，倾向于非正式化、始终口语化的语言。

●书信中，除了和亲近的、熟悉的人交流，一般不用缩略形式，如I'm,we’re,it’s,couldn’t等。

●一般要用较为正式的、略显复杂的语言结构，即句子完整、复杂而且比较长的句子；而便条不拘泥于此。

●书信中，除了和亲近的、熟悉的人交流，一般用词较正式，如“We are greatlyhonored to write to you”;“witnessed”等；而便条中可以用比较随意的“I’m sorry;many thanks”等等。

但是，以上区别并非绝对，如在双方地位悬殊或非常陌生的情况下，便条用正式的文体也是合理的。

（3）内容凝练（precise and to the point）（4）规矩细腻●日期写法：“月日（基数词），年”法，如Sep.23,2011;或“日（序数词）月年”法，如“23rd Sep.2011”。

为避免失误，建议一般用第一种，注意“日”与“年”之间要用逗号。

月份的写法除五月（May）外，其余均可用简写形式：Jan.,Feb.,Mar.,Apr.,Aug.Sep.,Oct.,Nov.和Dec.等，但考试时写全称保险。

●称呼的写法1）对有一定社会距离、不熟悉的人：Dear Madam，Dear Sir，Dear President，Dear Mr.Smith等；2）对相识的人：Dear Shirley，Dear Smith等；3）对亲近的人或家人：Dear Mom，Dear Dad，Dear Mary等，甚至可以没有Dear一词。

专四便条写作

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Dear Hilda, There’ll be a concert in Da Huo Theter at 10 a.m. tomorrow morning by Dick Rock band. It’s very hard to get one ticket, but I happen to get two. How lucky am I! I will be very happy if you can go with me. We can have dinner together after the concert. Yours George
格式（日期，称呼，结尾）是否正确？（各占１分）描述音乐会了吗？（２分）提出邀请了吗？（２分）句首是否照抄原句？（照抄扣１分）有无严重语言错误？（酌情扣１－２分）语言得体吗？主要考虑双方关系，在措词上是否合适？（１分）得９分．
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格式（日期，称呼，结尾）是否正确？（各占１分）不规范，日期，落款有错．描述音乐会了吗？（２分）没对音乐会做一定的描述,却浪费字数写得票不易及音乐会后安排．提出邀请了吗？（２分）句首是否照抄原句？（照抄扣１分）有无严重语言错误？（酌情扣１－２分） Theter错，happen 应为happened. am I!应为 I am! 语言得体吗？主要考虑双方关系，在措词上是否合适？（１分）得５－６分
便条写作
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • 题材：围绕学生日常生活中常发生的情况命题．体裁：邀请、感谢、祝贺、道歉、请求、安慰、通知、告示等．评分标准：１．格式：日期（１分）．正确写法：Saturday, April 17th【美】或 Saturday,17th April 【英】. 不用写年份。月份不要缩写。考试时最好写上日期。正确位置：右上角．称呼（１分）：正确写法：Dear Mike,(:)/ Mike,(:) （非正式）位置：日期下一行左侧。在正式便条中，如不知道对方的姓名、性别，用Dear Sir or Madam 来称呼。如对方有头衔，如教授、博士，则在头衔后加上对方的姓，如： Dear Professor Lin. 结尾（１分）：正确写法：Yours sincerely,/ Yours, / Sincerely yours, （正式）。非正式便条可用 Take care 或用你的（要求的）名字。别忘了写名字，没署名的便条是没用的。人名用XXX 或汉字扣０．５分。位置：正文下面空一到两行左、右侧．注：不符合上述正确格式或表达者，错一部分扣０．５分。错两部分以上扣1分。没有格式扣1分。

英语专业四级写作便条(样例)

I trust that myher you. Respectfully yours, Jim
apology
April 14, 2003 Dear Miss Nancy,
Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday, owing to the fact that my little son was suddenly taken ill early that day.
Grading specifications - Format: 3 points - Content: 6 points
* Purpose * Organization * More or less words: deduce 1 point * Grammar, spelling errors: 3=1 point
1. Apologize for failure to turn up for the appointment 2. The reason for failure to turn up 3. Make a request for another meeting 4. Suggest the time for the requested meeting
apology
April 14, 2010 Dear Victoria,
I was surprised not seeing you at my party yesterday until I terribly realized that I forgot to invite you. I am really sorry, Victoria. I planned to invite you when I borrowed your cook yesterday morning. However, you know, I saw you were really busy answering the phone from your mother at the time, so I forgot to invite you. Please accept my apology, Victoria. I hope that you can come to my home tomorrow afternoon and we can have tea together.

英语专业四级考试作-便条[1]

英语专业四级考试作文———便条三江大学英语系余丽华在英语专业四级考试的六大部分，即听写，听力理解，完形填空，语法和词汇，阅读以及写作中，写作占据了25％的比重，其中便条的写作是10％的比重。

便条写作是英语应用文写作的一部分，它有其一定的写作规范要求，并且针对不同的写作目的，都有一些常见常用的句型，就此我简单对这些句型作了一个总结，附上一些范文，可供大家参阅。

要了解便条的结构，首先我们可以先了解一下书信的写作结构。

一般书信的结构由上而下：信头(Heading, 发信人地址和日期在右上角)、收信人姓名和地址(Inside Address，Introductory Address；在左上)、称呼(Salutation)、信的正文(Body of the Letter)、结束语(Complimentary Close)、签名(Signature)、附件(Enclosure，简写为Encl., Enc.)、再启(Postscript，简写为P.S.)，其中前六项是书信的主要部分，一般不可缺少；最后两项是否需要，则视情况而定。

亲戚朋友间的私人信件也可酌情省略第一二两项。

便条是一种简单的书信。

虽然内容简单，但却有其独特的风格。

主要目的是为了把最信息、通知、要求或者活动的时间、地点简明地告之对方。

常见的便条有留言，请假条，邀请信及回函，通知，感谢信，祝贺信等。

特点：语言尽量通俗口语化，简单扼要，直截了当，无需使用客套语言；中心内容务必突出，更要注明活动的时间及地点；便条不需邮寄，不用信封。

通常请人代为转交；有时可写在留言板或留言簿上。

基本写作格式：便条内容和类型不尽相同，格式可以灵活变通。

但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素；1．Date：便条日期2．Salutation：称呼3．Body：正文4．Signature：签名。

Contents1. Notes of thanks2. Notes of invitationNotes accepting invitationsNotes declining invitations3. Notes of introduction4. Notes of congratulation5. Notes of asking for leaveNotes of asking for an extension of leave 6. Notes to make arrangementsNotes to cancel appointments7. MessagesTelephone messages8. Notes of condolence9. Notes asking after one’s health10. Notes that give informationReceiptA bill signed in acknowledgement of debtNotes returning something borrowed11. Notes to keep in touch with friends12. Notes regretting not seeing someone13. Notes offering tickets to friends14. Notes accompanying presentsNotes of thanksIn notes of thanks, besides expressing our gratitude, we also show our pleasure at the gift itself, for example, we may say that it is exquisite or it is just what we want, etc. We may also show our appreciation of the sender’s considerateness or he/ her cleverness at picking out the rig ht thing, etc.感谢信往往在开头就要点明写作的目的，下面是一些常用句型1．Thank you very much for ....2．Many thanks for your ...3．Please accept my sincere appreciation for ...4．I am truly grateful to you for ...5．It was good (thoughtful) of you ...6．You were so kind to ...7．I wish to express my profound appreciation for ..8．Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.9、I find an ordinary "thank-you" entirely inadequate to tell you how much...10、I sincerely appreciate ...11、I wish to express my profound appreciation for ...12、Many thanks for you generous cooperationReference version1)St. Jones Hospital10 Howard StreetAug.14, 200Dear John,Very many thanks to you, my dear friend, for the splendid present that you have sent me, and I feel deeply moved by this token of your affection. The book you chose to offer me is very interesting and instructive. I have read a few pages with great eagerness. It is a great consolation for me, in my confinement to the hospital by illness. I am sure there will be great pleasure and benefit in store for me.I am glad to tell you, friend, I am making rapid progress toward health every day. It is my hope that I shall soon be able to inform you of my complete recovery.Looking forward to joining you at school as soon as possible.Yours affectionately,Jane2）26 December，2006 Dear Aunt Mabel，Thank for your wonderful gift! How could you possibly have known? I did need a more sophisticated recorder. The old one that I have has seen me mature from a lanky schoolboy to a college student. Indeed, it has more than served its purpose. Remember? It was also a present from you. Again a million thanks!Your loving nephewHenry3)2 January, 2006Dear Father,Imagine my pleasure when I returned home for the weekend! An exquisite computer on my desk! Though not of the latest model, it’s more than enough for me. It will not only make my studies easier, but will save me a lot of time as well. Dear father, you are always so thoughtful. It’s indeed lucky to be your son! Thanks a million.Love,MikeNotes of invitationAny note of invitation should state precisely the following:1. What invitation it is2. The time and the place3. The pleasure of seeing the addressee on that occasion4. A reply is expected ( In some, this is not mentioned.)5. The reason for inviting the addressee (optional)以下是邀请信的11个常用句型1、I’d like ...to come to dinner2、request the pleasure of3、The favor of a reply is requested4、May I have the honor of your company at dinner?5、Thank you for inviting us to dinner6、I hope you’re not too busy to come.7、The reception will be held in ...,on ...8、We sincerely hope you can attend9、We are looking forward to ...10、We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion11、Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenienceReference version1)20 October, 2006Dear MeiliWe are going to have a music appreciation evening in our classroom this coming Saturday. The time is 7:30 pm. Symphony No. 9 of Beethoven will be on the program. We would like to have you join us, as we know you are one of the classical music lovers. Drop me a line if you are interested. Hoping to see you on Saturday.Wang Fang2)17 September, 2006Dear Frank,There will be a sports meet on Thursday, 25 September, in our university. Some sports stars will participate to show their skills. Lots of our friends will be here, too. And there will be a tea party afterwards. Call or write to say that you are coming.Yours,Gerald3)6 June, 2006Dear Mary and John,We have just moved to a suburban district in southwestern Shanghai. Now that everything is more or less orderly again, we are going to have house-warming party this coming Saturday afternoon, 11 June.We want you to see for yourself that living in the country is not so terrible after all, what with the fresh air, clear sky and, above all, the subway that can take us to the city proper almost in no time.We will have a good time on Saturday, we are sure. Many old friends are coming, too. Give us a ring to say that you are coming.Yours,Jill and JackNotes accepting / declining invitationsA). A note accepting an invitation includes:1. Appreciation of being invited2. His/her certainty of having a good time3. His/her assurance of being punctual / his/her apology for having to be late(optional)4. His/her offer of help (optional)5. His/her looking forward to the occasionReference version1)16 March, 2006Dear Rebecca,Thank you for asking me to come to your house-warming party. I have long heard that you’ve moved to the suburbs, away from all kinds of conveniences. I’m a little surprised that you seem quite happy with your new house. I’d be only too happy to come and see for mys elf. You can count on me to be punctual. You’re quite a green hand at housekeeping, as is known to all. Do you want me to come earlier to help? Looking forward to seeing you.Love,Kate2)18 May, 2006Dear Bill,I’m happy to be informed of our alumni get-together. Surely I will meet many old friends and we will be able to chat over days long gone by. Incidently, do you know that Prof. Chadi arrived in our city yesterday? I think his presence will make our meeting more memorable. He can be reached by phone no. 84123348.Yes, I’ll be prompt. I’m counting the days to see you all.Yours,MartinB). A note declining an invitation includes:1. Appreciation for being invited2. Reason for not being able to attend3. Regret for missing such an occasion4. Extending felicitation, etc, should the occasion requireReference version:1)14 April, 2006Dear Rebecca,Thank you for inviting me to your 20th birthday party. But alas, I must stay away from this gala occasion, which, to me, is excruciatingly painful. You see, I’ve been down with the flu for some time now. And I was told that I wouldn’t be able to recover soon. I can’t pass on the virus to you all. It really breaks my heart to miss this party! All the same, my heartiest congratulations!Yours,Kate2)9 June, 2006Dear Wenhua,Thanks for inviting me to the chamber music concert to be given at the golden wedding anniversary party of your grandparents. I really ought to be there, but as I have an appointment with professor Zhang, who is leaving for the United States the next day, I’m afraid I can’t be present. I’m dreadfully sorry to have to be absent from this very important occasion. Indeed, their kindness to me when I was a child has always been remembered with gratitude. I also regret to have to miss the chamber music, which I adore. Please extend my heartiest congratulations to your grandpa and grandma.Yours,MinhaoNotes of introductionIn notes of introduction, the following are usually included:1. The name of the person to be introduced2. His / her identity3. The purpose of introduction4. Appreciation (It would be highly appreciated that…./ I would appreciate it if…)Reference version1)1 June,2006Dear Mr. Sullivan,This is to introduce Mr. Hu Ming. He is a linguistics student at our university. Mr. Hu is looking for a teaching assistant’s post. Any assistance rendered h im would be highly appreciated. Thank you.Sincerely yours,Geoffrey Jackson2)16 October, 2006Dear Mr. Wang,Liu Li is an English literature student. She is presently working on a paper on modern English literature. I would appreciate it if you could help her locate some reference books she needs badly. Thank you.Liang BeijunNotes of congratulationIn writing a note of congratulation, one usually relates how he/she hears of the good news, what the good news is, how he/she is happy for the addressee…, and t hen extends his/her congratulations.Reference version1)20 November, 2006Dear Prof. Cai,We have just been informed that your lifework on elementary Chinese teaching methodology had been fully recognized during thr recent international conference on language education where your article “ Teaching Chinese as a Foreign Language” was awarded first prize. This is the first honor ever won by a Chinese scholar. Since we are your students, we know, of co urse, how you’ve worked. You are fully worthy of it! Please accept our heartiest congratulation!Respectfully yoursRon, Mabel, Kay, Pete2)1 April, 2006Dear Henry,I read from the newspaper that you were awarded the second prize at the National Photo Contest. Congratulations! I also learned that you were the only amateur participant, and you are only a first- year college student. Your parents must be very proud of you, especially your father, who has trained you in this hobby. Again my felicitations to you!EdwardNotes asking for leave/ asking for an extension of leave 往往指由于生病或特殊情况不能亲自当面请假，用假条的形式告假。

历年专四真题便条范文(2002~2013)

历年专四便条真题及范文Model of Note-writing (TEM4-2013) 道歉April 20, 2013 Dear Mathew,I'm writing to show my apology for being unable to wait for you in my dorm. I'm really sorry but I have something urgent to do. You can come to Room 1003, No. 3 Teaching Building to find me. The map on the back of the note will help you. I'll wait for you there.Yours,TracyModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2012) 感谢April 22, 2012 Dear Lucy,I’m writing to express my appreciation for all that you did for me yesterday. It was so kind of you to meet me at the railway station when I came back from hometown. What’s more, your help in cleaning my dorm really saved me from getting exhausted. I’m so lucky to such a warmhearted friend. I will be willing to reciprocate your kindness if you need any help in the future.Yours,JulietModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2011) 邀请May 26，2011 Dear Mary：The summer vacation is coming next month. I hope you can come to my hometown Hangzhou, and spend the vacation with us. There are a lot of places of interests to visit. After arriving at the North Coach Station, you can get to the Yan’an Xincun stop by taking No.188 bus. I am looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible.Sincerely,ChristineModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2010) 建议（活动组织）April 17, 2010 Dear John,It’s kind of you to organize a party at the end of the term. How relaxing and enjoyable the party will be. I would like to offer a helping hand for the preparation of the party. I will be very glad to buy fruits and desserts. I will be also delighted to pick up our classmates. I will call you to discuss more details of the party later. Good luck!Yours sincerely,TomModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2009) 建议（应聘家教）April 17, 2009 Dear Lily,I know you’re looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. And I have just seen an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy on the campus. Since you’re good at English and like teaching, I think this job is very suitable for you. It will help you both earn some money and practice yourself. So please think about it.Yours,EllenModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2008) 建议（订阅报纸）April 17, 2008 Dear Jane,I heard you want to subscribe to an English-language newspaper and I would like to recommend 21st Century to you. It is a weekly newspaper, covering many topics that we are interested in. First, you will surely be attracted to the vocabulary section, from which we can learn a lot of useful words and phrases. Besides, the testing section introduces different English tests that college students may take. I love the newspaper, and I hope you will like it too.Yours,LindaModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2007) 拒绝邀请April 20th, 2007 Dear Jimmy,Thank you so much for inviting me to the swimming club. I really appreciate that. It would be great joy to swim on hot days, but I'm afraid I have accepted the invitation from the Judo club. I've been practicing Judo for several years, and I don't want to quit the sport. Thank you again for your invitation. I may introduce a friend of mine to you if you are interested. He's really into swimming.Yours,JennyModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2006) 询问April 23, 2006 Dear MichaelI’m very interested in the weekend excursion you’re organizing and I’d like to join you. Can you call me and let me know when and where we are going to meet and what I shall bring? I can be reached at 68895687. Thank you.Yours,JoanModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2005) 邀请April 15, 2005Dear Hilda,I got two tickets to a concert given by S.H.E, the most popular group nowadays, this Saturday evening at Hongkou Stadium. Since you are their great fan, I’d like to invite you to come with me. We are sure to have a good time together. Please let me know whether you can come or not, I can reached at 54723129.Yours truly,BettyModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2004) 安慰May 10, 2004 Dear Jane,You’ve been in low spirit for the whole day for your failure in the maths exam. And I’m very concerned about you. You know we often have “those days” in our life and ups and downs are unavoidable. It is useless “crying over the spilt milk” and the best thing right now for you is to cheer up and get yourself prepared for the make-up exam. Smile and life will smile at you.Yours,MaryModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2003) 拒绝邀请April 18, 2003 Dear Clare,I’m very sorry to tell you that I can’t attend your house-warming party this weekend. I have to be away then in that I must take care of my mother who is now in hospital. Next week I’ll probably be free. I sincerely hope that you will enjoy every minute of the party to your heart’s content.Yours,JoanModel of Note-writing (TEM4-2002) 询问April 15, 2002 Dear Jack,I heard someone say that you wanted to sell your walkman. I want to buy a new walkman because since my English is so poor, I really want to improve it. What about the condition of your walkman? Can it still go forward and backward? Can it record? Does it have a radio? I can give you 200 Y uan if you sell it to me.How about it?Yours,Laura。

TEM4便条注意事项

便条注意事项便条的格式见复印的资料（周二给）便条的内容要求内容完整一般而言，一封理想的TEM4便条应包括以下三点：(1)写便条的原因；(2)要告诉的事情；(3)有关的希望、建议或要求等。

便条写作提示的情况都是与人们日常生活或学习相关的事情。

例如，对别人提供的帮助表示感谢，邀请朋友参观书展，因不能准时赴约而表示道歉，把信息转告给朋友等。

所提示的内容就是考生要表达的思想内容。

思想内容有先后之分，要讲究其逻辑性，还得注意其完整性。

生活中有些约定俗成的东西，写作时，应考虑这方面的因素。

例如，写道歉信时，一般都先向对方表示歉意或内疚，同时说明发生疏忽、过失、或错误的原因，提出弥补的办法，这样有利于取得对方的谅解。

现以近年一次英语专业四级考试便条写作为例加以说明：该提示是：Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher，Professor Wang．Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting．you should also suggest the time for the requested meeting．仔细阅读这一提示，你就会发现，第一句为第二句所要求的道歉确定了内容；为了求得对方的谅解，获得另一次会面的机会，你就必须说明前次未能赴约见面的原因。

因此，本便条的内容必须包括以下四项：(1)apologizing for failure to turn up for the appointment，(2)the reason for failure to turn up，(3)making a request for another meeting，(4)suggesting the time for the requested meeting。

2023年英语专四应用文写作之便条

英语应用文写作之便条便条 (Notes)便条是书信旳一种形式，常用旳有请假条和留言条两种。

较一般书信来说，其特点是格式简朴，内容简短。

一、请假条（Written Request for Leave）这里所讲旳请假条包括病假条、事假条以及续假条等。

写请假条要注意把请假旳原因和请假时间写清晰，并且请假旳理由要讲充足。

假如有证明原因旳证据，如医生旳证明等最佳随条附上。

1. 请病假（Asking for Sick Leave）April 24,Dear Prof. Smith,I am very sorry to apprise (=inform) you that I am unable to attend school today owing to a bad cold. I enclose doctor’s certificate and ask you for sick leave of three days.Your student,Li YongEncl.: doctor’s certificate for sick leave亲爱旳史密斯专家：非常抱歉，我因患重感冒今天不能到校上课，现附上医生证明并向您请病假三天。

附：医生证明您旳学生：李勇4月24日2．请事假（Asking for Business Leave）May 15,Dear Director Zhang,A telegram has just come to hand saying that my mother is seriously ill and urging me to go home at once. Because of this I should very much like to have a leave of three days, beginning on May 15. I hope that my request will be given due consideration.Very truly yours,Zhao LiangEncl.: a telegram from my home亲爱旳张主任：我刚刚收到一封我母亲病重、催我立即回家旳电报。

专四作文写作技巧——如何写好英文便条

专四作文写作技巧——如何写好英文便条专四作文写作技巧——如何写好英文便条.txt 我不奢望什么，只希望你以后的女人一个不如一个。

真怀念小时候啊，天热的时候我也可以像男人一样光膀子！TEM4( 英语专业四级考试 )把写便条(note～writing)列入必考项目之一，其目的是按照((高等院校英语专业英语教学大纲>)的要求，测试英语专业学生在基础阶段末用英语书面表达思想的能力。

便条成绩在TEM4笔试成绩中虽只占10%，却如同一面镜子，能反映出学生英语书面交际的能力。

有关英文便条写作，国内外学者多有论述(可参见宁有权、刘永军，1999;王崇义，1995;杨俊峰，1997;Aired，Brusaw&Oliu，2000; Bates，1990)。

学者们认为，便条是一种简短信函，多使用非正式语体，它的形式比一般书信简单。

例如，写便条的人与收便条的人的地址、称呼中“Dear'’一词、日期中的年份以及结尾套语(complimentary close，亦称结束语)，都可以省去;便条正文篇幅可小至一、两句话。

可是，~TEM4便条写作而言，并不完全像以上说的那样，它有一定的限制。

英语专业四级考试大纲EM4写便条的要求是，“根据提示写大约50-60~]的通知、便条、请贴等。

要求格式正确，语言得体。

”英语专业四级考试大纲的要求其实也给TEM4便条制定了评分标准。

1TEIM4便条的评分往往从格式、内容、语言、字数这四方面来考虑。

因此，要想写好TEM4便条，就必须掌握TEM4便条的基本要求，注意TEM4便条写作中常见的问题，以便对症下药，充分发挥自己的英文写作水平。

一TEM4便条的基本要求(一) 格式(format)正确TEM4便条的格式与普通英文书信格式基本相同。

具体来说，它应有日期(date)、称呼(saluwfion)、正文(body)及结尾(ending)，结尾包括结尾套语(complimentary close)和签名(signature)。

TEM-4便条

便条的写作便条是一种简单的书信形式。

要求考生仔细阅读和分析所给的情景，确定便条所涉及的内容，如写便条者与便条接收者的身份、两者之间的关系及情景的正式程度等。

便条的特点在于内容简短，大多是临时性的询问、留言、通知、要求等。

与正规书信相比，便条的语言更为口语化，比如要通知某事只需这样开头：Just a line to tell you that ...而无须像正规书信那样This is to inform you that ...开头。

有急事需要告诉别人而又不能面谈时，就可以写便条，如请假条、留言条等。

一般不写地址，与普通书信基本相同。

结尾时也无需要结尾礼词，只需要写上便条者姓名。

便条的日期通常写在右上角，一般只要写上星期几，也可以写明上午、下午的具体时间；日常应用中，写上几月几日的也很普遍。

但一般不写年份，因为便条的内容多半是当日或近日内要办的事情。

便条具有用途广泛、形式简单、文字要求不十分严格的特点。

基本写作格式便条内容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。

但必须包括以下四个基本要素；1）Date：便条日期2）Salutation：称呼3）Body：正文 4）Signature：署名注意事项1.词句简洁，尽量避免应酬语和敬词2.切忌内容空洞、言不达意。

分类举例1）请假（Asking for Leave）例1 Directions: You are about to write a Business Leave Note of about 60 words. Please describe the information clearly. 1) the reason you ask for the leave 2) the time and how long you will leaveAug. 22ndSecretary Li,I’m sorry to apply for ten days’ leave from the Aug. 23rd to Sept. 3rd instant. As I have to leave with the time is urgent. My father now in the hospital is badly ill. I have to go to see him and take care of him for a few days. You know I’m the only child in my family. Of course I will show you the telegram about my father’s illness which is received from my mother to support my application.As concern as the missed lessons during my absence, I promise I will do my best to catch them on after I come back to the campus. Wish for your allowance.Yours respectfully,×××本文是一封请假条，一般我们要向上级或老师请假，通常用的是ask for leave这个短语，请三天假可写作：ask for three days’ leave;因病请假则是ask for sick leave. leave 在这里是名词用法，文中用的短语是apply for意为“申请”，含有更加郑重的意味，常用于下级对上级或晚辈对长辈的书面语中，“Only child”意为“独生子女”相应的，“独生女”译作“only daughter”而“独生子”译作“only son”. As concern as后面跟名词性结构，意为“涉及到，至于”与Concerning同义，两者可以互换。

TEM4便条

便条样本英文便条的写作难度不大，但是要得满分或高分就必须保证格式正确，内容符合所给的条件要求, 即所给条件的每一点内容都要在便条中具体化。

1. note of introduction1.The name of the person to be introduced2.His/Her identity3.The purpose of the introduction4.AppreciationOctober 20, 2011 Dear Mr. Sullivan,This is to introduce Mr.Hu Ming. He is a linguistics student at our university.Mr.Hu is looking for a teaching assistant's post. Any assistance rendered him would be highly appreciated.Thank you.Sincerely yoursGeoffrey Jackson2. note of invitation1.What invitation it is2.The time and the place3.The pleasure of seeing the addressee on that occasion4.A reply is expected.(In some, this is not mentioned)It is evident that Meili and Wang Fang are close friends, thus Wang Fang signs herself as "yours".October 20, 2011 Dear Meili,We are going to have a music appreciation evening in our classroom this coming Saturday. The time is 7:30pm.Symphony No.9 by Beethoven will be on the program. We should like to have you join us ,as we know you are one of the classical music lovers. Drop me a line if you are interested. Hoping to see you on Saturday.Yours,Wang Fang3. note of a telephone messageIt is necessary to give the name of the person who called and exact time of call. The message must be stated clearly and in good order.10a.m.,1 March Prof. Johnson,Prof. Smith called at 9:50a.m. He said his rheumatism prevented him from leaving the house in this nasty weather. So he would not be able to come to discuss the energy project with you and your colleagues. He sent his regards to Mrs. Johnson.Mary4. note of thanksBesides expressing our gratitude, we also show our pleasure at the gift itself, for example, we may say that it is exquisite or it is just what we want, etc. We may also show our appreciation of the sender 'considerateness or his/her cleverness at picking out the right thing ,etc.October 20, 2011Dear Aunt Mable,Thank you for your wonderful gift! How could you possibly have known? I did need a more sophisticated recorder. The old one that I have has seen me mature from a lanky school boy to a college student. Indeed, it has more than served its purpose. Remember? It was also a present from you. Again a million thanks!your loving nephew,Henry5. note of congratulationOne usually relates how he/she hears of the good news, what the good news is, how he/she is happy for the addresses...,and then extends his/her congratulations.October 20, 2011Dear Prof Cai,We have just been informed that your lifework on elementary Chinese teaching methodology had been fully recognized during the recent International Conference on Language Education where your article "Teaching Chinese as a Foreign Language" was awarded first prize. This is the first honour ever won by a Chinese scholar. Since we are your students, we know, of course, how you've worked. You are fully worthy of it! Please accept our heartiest congratulations!Respectfully yours,Ron, Mable, Kay, Pete6. note that gives informationOne must state the news/information clearly. Since it is a note, It should be short and to the point.August 22, 2005Dear Liuping,This is to inform you that Prof. John Jefferson has arrived in Shanghai. He will give a series of lectures on banking. We are going to have a welcome party in his honour. The date is set foe next Tuesday,26 August,at3p.m.,at the College Guest House. It is expected that everyone in our class will participate, so that he can get to know our Department and his future students. Please write if you cannot come.Huang An7. note to make arrangementsOne has to be very precise as to the time, place and what has been arranged. Everything must be stated very clearly. Usually a reply is expected.October 20, 2005Dear Dr. Baker,As previously arranged, you are invited to deliver a lecture on humanism at our university sometime in August. Your lecture is now scheduled for Monday,14 August, at the University Auditorium. A car will be sent to bring you to the university at 1:30p.m.Please inform us if you are otherwise engaged. Thank you..Mary Cooper8. note to keep in touch with a friendWe usually give information as to our present work, address, etc. Then we ask after our friend and express our wish to keep in touch with him/her.October 20, 2011Dear Minliang,We haven't met each other since July, after the crucial matriculation exams. I have eventually passed the examination and am now a first-year business administration student. My present address is P.O. Box No.101,PuJiang University. I heard that you are now an English major in Hujiang University. How do you feel about being a college student? I'm now a freshman, and I think the name suits me well as I do feel that everything around me is so fresh to me. If you are not too busy, drop me a few lines. Hoping to hear from you soon.Jiawei9. note offering tickets to a friendIn notes of this kind, the specific offers should be clearly mentioned. Usually the reason for the offer is given. Sometimes a reply is required if the contents require one.October 20, 2011Dear John,I've got two tickets for the Chinese Folk Song Concert, which is on this coming Sunday at theLyceum Concert Hall,at7:30p.m.I know you have always been a music lover. But do you care for vocal recitals? The singers are all famous vocalists from all over the country. And the orchestra is also composed of top Chinese instrumentalists. If it suits you, we can go together. Please let me know by calling me up at the office.Ken10. note accepting an invitation1.appreciation of being invited2.his/her certainty of having a good time3.his/her assurance of being punctual/his/her apology for having to be late(optional)4.his/her offer of help(optional)5.his/her looking forward to the occasionOctober 20, 2011Dear Rebecca,Thank you for asking me to come to your house-warming party. I have long heard that you've moved to the suburbs, away from all kinds of conveniences. I'm a little surprised that you seem quite happy with your new house. I'd be only too glad to come and see for myself. You can count on me to be punctual. You are quite a green hand at housekeeping, as is known to all. Do you want me to come earlier to help? Looking forward to seeing you.Love,Kate11. note declining an invitation1.appreciation for being invited2.reason for not being able to attend3.regret for missing such an occasion4.extending felicitation, etc. should the occasion requireOctober 20, 2011Dear Rebecca,Thank you for inviting me to your 20th birthday party. But, alas, I must stay away from this gala occasion, which, to me, is excruciatingly painful. You see ,I've been down with the flu for some time now. And I was told that I wouldn't be able to recover soon. I can't pass on the virus to you all. It really breaks my heart to miss this great party! All the same, my heartiest congratulations!yours,Kate12. note regretting not seeing someoneThe tone must be apologetic and an explanation of the reason for being absent is also necessary. A hope to remedy missing the opportunity is usually suggested.October 20, 2011Dear Conrad,I just got back from a lecture. I saw your note and read it with great regret. When you were in my neighbourhood I had to be away! What a trick Lady Luck played on us! Fortunately you'll still be in town for the next two days. We'll still be able to meet and have a nice chat.I'll call on you at your hotel at 6:00p.m.tomorrow.Be seeing you.Bernard13. note returning something borrowed1.the thing that is being returned2.his/her gratitude for the address's kindness3.the thing has served its purpose4.hope to get more help in the future(optional)October 20, 2011Dear Marian,Here are the six cassette tapes you were so kind as to lend me. I'm happy to inform you that they have helped me enormously. I more than passed the listening test---I was highly praised by the teacher. They have really helped me wonderfully. I really don't know how to thank you enough. I hope you'd help me again in the future. Again my heartfelt gratitude!Laura14. note asking after one's health1.source of sad news2.expression of regrets3.some comforting words4.some "get well soon" wordsOctober 20, 2011 Dear Harold,Gary told me yesterday that you are down with the flu. To tell you the truth, I was a little surprised. You never used to be sick .Then I recalled that you'd been extraordinarily busy with your work recently. You must have been weakened physically somehow. You do need a good rest. I'm sure you'll be up and around very soon. Take care and best regards!Paul。

英语专业四级便条书写

Note-writingA note usually includes the following components:■ Date■ Salutation■ Body■ Complimentary Close and SignatureDate Compared with formal letters, more flexibility is allowed as to writing dates in notes. Y ou can include the year, the month and the date, or you can omit the year. Y ou can even just put the day of the week and the time of writing.Salutation If the note is addressed to your teacher, boss or other superiors, include “dear” to show your respect. If i t is left for your friends or peers, “dear” can be omitted.Body The message in the body of a note is colloquial. Less formal expressions and less complex sentence structures are preferred. In spelling, the abbreviated terms are often used.Complimentary Close and Signature A complimentary close like “yours” or “yours respectfully” can be put under the body of the note, but if you know the addressee well, you only need to include your name (surname or given name) or even nickname. Family name and given name are seldom used together in notes.Here is an example of a note. David is writing to Jane canceling a date. Please read it and pay attention to its informality as reflected in style and language.ExampleMonday 9:00 a.m.Jane,I am sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to come this afternoon because I have to go to the airport at 4:00 p. m. to meet an overseas visitor from Canada. I really have kept our date in my mind all these days. However, my boss called me this morning, asking me to go to the airport to meet one of his friends from abroad. It is urgent and I have to go. Please forgive me. I will ring you up to make another time.David1.2 Notes for Different Purposes■ Note of Invitation■ Note of Accepting an Invitation■ Note of Decl ining an Invitation■ Thank-Y ou Note■ Note of Apology■ Note of Congratulations■ Note of Consolation■ Telephone MessageNote of Invitation In a note of invitation, you should includea.What is the occasion for the invitation,b.The reason for inviting the addressee,c.The time and the place.Here is a note of informal invitation. Johnny is inviting Sunny to a Cosplay show. Does this note include all the elements mentioned above?ExampleJuly 19Sunny,I learn from Bob that a Cosplay show will be held in Nanjing International Exhibition Hall on July 22nd. Bob and I have decided to take a look there. We guess as a fan of computer games, you must be very interested in it. Please join us if you do not have other engagement. We will pick you up at 8 a.m. on July 22nd. Contact me if it is inconvenientto you.Y ours,JohnnyNot every invitation can be sent in the form of a note. Here, a note is enough because Johnny and Sunny are good friends and Johnny writes the note for a personal reason. For more formal invitations, sending invitation cards or invitation letters are required. Though the tone of this note is causal, Johnny is cautious enough to state the time of the Cosplay showtwice in the note.Note of Accepting an Invitation In a note of accepting an invitation, you shoulda.Show your appreciation of being invited,b. Repeat the time and the place in your reply to check the information,c. Indicate your looking forward to the occasion.Let us look at an example. In this note, Sunny is responding to the invitation from Johnny. Besides showing her willingness to accept the invitation, what else has Sunny included in the note?ExampleJuly 21Dear Johnny,Thank you very much for your invitation. I will be very glad to go to the Cosplay exhibition to be held in Nanjing International Exhibition Hall on July 22nd. It must be very exciting. I will wait for you at home at 8 o’clock that morning.Thanks for thinking of me.Y ours,SunnyIn this note, out of politeness, Sunny thanks Johnny and expresses her expectation of the show. She repeats the time and the place for the exhibition in order to check the information with Johnny. This makes sure that she has taken the information correctly.Note of Declining an Invitation In a note declining an invitation, you shoulda.Show your appreciation of being invited,b.Offer a detailed reason for declining the invitation,c.Express your good wish for the occasion.Let us still take the invitation to the Cosplay show as an example. Here, Sunny declines Johnny’s invitation. Has she explained the situation clearly and effectively?ExampleJuly 21Dear Johnny,Thank you very much for your invitation to the Cosplay show tomorrow. I really want to go there, but I am sorry to say that I can’t make it. I will set out to Mount Huang for a trip tomorrow. Do have fun at the exhibition. Take some pictures for me to take a look when I am back.Y ours,SunnyThough she couldn’t take the invitation, Sunny extends her thank s for the invitation, which is a must in declining an invitation. She follows with her regret for and a detailed explanation of being unable to meet the occasion.Thank-Y ou Note In a thank-you note, you shoulda.Express your gratitude for the help (gift, hospitality etc.) you got,b.Describe how helpful the help (gift, hospitality, etc.) is.Please read the following thank-you note. Here, Jeff is expressing his thanks for Judy’s visit when he was in hospital.ExampleJuly 26Dear Judy,Thank you for your kind visit when I was in hospital. The beautiful flowers and interesting books you brought me accompanied me through my loneliness and cheered me up.Now I am out of the hospital and I am going back to work soon. Y ou don’t know how much I miss you.Best regards.With thanks,JeffA thank-you note is a personal touch that is enjoyed by all involved. It only takes a few minutes, but the results last much longer. In this example, Jeff shows his gratefulness byexpressing how soothing Jude’s visit was to his recovery. He also introduces his current situation and expresses his wish to meet the colleagues again. This note will surely draw Judy and Jeff closer and helps in keeping a strong personal relationship.Note of Apology In a note of apology, you shoulda. Express your apology,b. Give a detailed reason,c. Show how to make up for the loss.Here is a note of apology, in which Shirley, a student in Professor Wang’s class, is apologizing for her absence today.ExampleNov. 8Dear Professor Wang,I am terribly sorry that I missed your class today due to a sudden high fever the early morning. I went to the hospital and the doctor told me to stay in the hospital for observation.I will come back to your class as soon as I recover. I will make up the missing class with the help of my classmates.I do apologize for the inconvenience my absence brought you.Y ours sincerely,ShirleyThe explanation given for the absence is detailed and convincing. Shirley promises to come back soon and make up the class. To show her sincerity, she apologies again for her absence at the end of the note.Note of Congratulations In a note of congratulations, you shoulda.Explain the occasion for your congratulations,b.Express how happy (glad, excited) you are for the addressee,c.Extend your hearty congratulations.Please read this note of congratulations. The son is congratulating his mother for her promotion.ExampleSept. 10Dear Mom,Congratulations! Y ou cannot imagine how excited I was when Dad told me that you were just appointed general manager of the company. Y our excellent performance during the last five years has paid.Dad and I are proud of you. Y ou are sure to make the best general manager.Love,TimCompliments are inevitable in a note of congratulations. This note is no exception. The son expresses his confidence on his mother’s future performance. Looking into the future is a skill notes of congratulations often apply.Note of Consolation In a note of consolation, you shoulda. Show your sympathy,b. Extend your good wish.Here you will read a note of consolation from Tony to his colleague Helen, who was hurt in an accident lately.ExampleMay 22Dear Helen,I just can’t tell you how shocked I was to learn of your accident. It is good that you r injury is not very serious and you will be out of the hospital next week.All of us are missing you. Do not worry about your work. Mr. Li has done all thearrangement.With every good wish for your quick recovery.TonyTony not only shows his sympathy with Helen but also informs her of the arrangement of her duties, so that Helen will feel rest assured. It is a good way to comfort the patient.Telephone Message In a telephone message, you shoulda.Give the name and the telephone number (if necessary) of the person who called,b.Give the exact time of the call,c.State the message clearly and in a good order.Read this telephone message. Mr. Smith called when Prof. Smith was not in. Cissy leaves the following message.Example3 p.m. WednesdayProf. Smith,Mrs. Smith called at 2:45 p.m. today. She said she had an urgent meeting. So she would not come back for dinner tonight.CissyA telephone message is taken in the third person. Usually the message taker will not appear in the message itself. The example is brief but it includes everything a message needs. The telephone nu mber of the caller is not provided because Mr. Smith knows Mrs. Smith’s number too well.。

12种便条类型范文

TEM-4——Note Writing专四作文12种便条类型范文1.邀请便条：①发出邀请 aApril 18, 2010Dear Fiona,I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours . The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m. today , I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very happy tim e together. Please let me know whether you can make it.Yours,Amelia发出邀请bApril 18, 2009Dear Fiona,Here is a piece of good news for you. The *** will give a perform ance in the ** tomorrow evening. I am sure that you will be happ y to watch it .The performance will begin at seven o’clock sharp. I w ill wait for you at the theater entrance. Please let me know whether you can make it at your earliest convenience.Yours,Amelia发出邀请cApril 18, 2009Dear Professor Zhou,I am Amelia from class 052; I need you to give me some suggestio n on my project. If it doesn’t trouble you too much, shall we hav e a meet at your office tomorrow? Time is up to you.R espectful yours,Amelia发出邀请d（通知）April 18, 2009Dear girls and boys in Class 0403,This Saturday evening, from 7 p.m. to 9 p. m., at Singeing dining hal l, there will be a ball held by Class 0301. We warmly invite you to take part in it. There you can enjoy yourselves with dance, music an d various games. And we’ll have a chance of communication, whic h will enhance the friendship between us. Come and enjoy ourselve s together.Yours,MikeMonitor of Class 0301②接受邀请April 18, 2009Dear Amelia,It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to co me. I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p. m. this evening. (如果是办在家里：I shall be very happy to call at y our house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.) Thank y ou again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward t o seeing you soon.Yours,Fiona③拒绝邀请April 18, 2009Dear Amelia，It’s so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to bu t I have a meeting to attend this evening, please give my best regard s to them all and I hope my absence will not cause you any serious i nconvenience, have fun.Yours,Amelia2．请假条April 18, 2009Dear Ms. Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning two p eriods of English Class （I‘m terribly sorry to apply for ten days’ lea ve from the Aug. 23rd to Sep. 3rd）due to a bad cold and high feve r. I will show you the certificate from the doctor to support my application. I will go back to school as soon as I recover.（I promise I wil l do my best to catch the missed lessons on after I come back.）Wis h for your allowance.Yo urs respectfully,Amelia3．请求便条a．讲清事情的因由（为什么请求）b．请求行为c．请求实现方式d．致谢套句：请求帮助： Would you do me a favor? Would you be so kind as to…? / Could I trouble you to send this book for me?/ I wonder if you wou ld tell me…?/ If it is not too troublesome, could you…?/ I hope this r equest will not trouble you too much.请求允许：Please give me a few more days./May I have a loo k at your dictionary? / Would you mind if I opened the windo w? / I wonder if I could open the door. / Would it be possible to hav e a talk with you?请求做事(要求与暗示)：Let’s go to the bookstore this afternoon./ I want to have a look at your book. / I wish you could…/ I woul d like ask you to clean the room./ You are making a big mess./ I fee l a bit hungry now. What time is it now?范文：April 18，2009Dear Professor Hu,I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “Ame rican Literature”. But it is a pity that I was late that day due to an acc ident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout. Your lec ture is really instructive for my English study, so I wonder if you cou ldkindlye-mailthehandouttotheaddress:******************.c n .Heartfelt thanks.R espectfully yours,Amelia4．抱怨投诉便条(关键词complain, dissatisfaction)a．抱怨投诉行为b．投诉内容具体描述c．要求弥补纠正赔偿d．抱怨投诉者对弥补纠正赔偿等的敦促或威胁套句：行为描述I’m writing to bring your attention to the problems I hav e had with …Here’s the problem…解决方式的要求：It would be very kind( considerate) of you to…ad dress this problem soon. / take steps to rectify this situation soon. / tu rn it down a little? /敦促或威胁: Frankly, I really can’t put up with the situation any mo re. You must rectify the situation, or I will take it to the court. / If yo u can’t give me a satisfactory answer, I will complain it to the Consu mer Association.范文：April 18，2009Dear Sir or Madam,I went to your store to buy a Radio watch last Sunday. When I menti oned the high price, the No. 5 saleswoman replied in a sarcastic ton e, “Yo u can go ahead and buy a cheap fake from other stores”. She d idn’t know how to treat a prospective buyer! I hope you can improv e your service and give me a face-to-face apology. My telephone nu mber is 010-********.Sincerely yours,Amelia5.道歉便条a道歉的行为与内容，b具体理由，c弥补方法，d进一步致歉。

专四Note类型

Note-writing从历年真题的便条题目来看，便条的题材主要是围绕学生们日常生活中常发生的情况来命题。

常见的体裁有告示、祝贺、道歉、请求、拒绝、安慰、留言、邀请等简单的应用文。

便条评分标准(一)格式包括日期，称呼和结尾三部分．各占1分日期、称呼和结尾不符合正确格式或要求均扣1分。

结束语和谦语在同一行，人名没有写或用××表示等扣一分，最多扣2分。

（二）内容6分必须按照便条的具体要求，完整写出各项内容，缺一项就会扣分；语言较差（包括语法和拼写错误）也要扣分．拼写错误超过3个扣2分．以05年邀请函作文为例：①描述(2分)②邀请(2分)③语言表达(2分)④首句需用自己正确的语言表达，若完全抄提示扣1分。

⑤语言表达较差(包括语法和拼写错误)，扣1-3分。

（三）语言要求语法，词法正确。

严重词法、句法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误两个扣1分，最多扣4分。

（四）语言得体性（1分）总分在8分及以上可考虑加此分。

语言风格与情景不一致，扣1分。

(如：Yours truly, Truly yours, if you consent, etc.) 只有语言表达较好才可得分。

评分总体要求：①语言没有严重错误，格式对，内容完整，语言得体，字数符合要求(<80，>40)，可给9-10分。

②便条总字数(包括三部分格式在内)要求在50-60字；不到40字或超过80字扣1分。

第一节邀请类四步：1.告知There will be… We have held…I want to tell you that…2.解释in the Beijing Grand theater tomorrow evening3.询问If you are interested in it4.确认Please let me know whether you are prevented from coming or not.书写要求：1.时间、地点、场合一定要清楚，不能让对方有疑问。