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新航道雅思语法状语从句

7、让步状语从句
• 引导词包括： • ★ : although/though, even if/even though, while/whilst, whether, • ★★★: • granted/granting, • notwithstanding, • despite (in spite of) the fact that
• 【练3/3】他们认为应该让更多的妇女进入大学
学习这些课程，以便于这些女性可以在这些领域中发展事业。（剑5，T1，W） • They argue that it is necessary to get more women onto these courses at university in order that they may
• 【练】我认为，如果工作条件安全，工作时间合理，薪酬公平，参与有偿劳动是可以接受的。（剑3,T3,W） • I believe engaging in paid work is acceptable if the conditions are safe, the hours are reasonable and the wages are fair.
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状语从句=副词从句。重点: 连词(引导词)
1、时间状语从句
• 引导词： • ★: when, whenever, while/whilst, as, before, after, since, once, till / until, • ★★★: • the moment / minute/ second/ instant , • directly (immediately, instantly) • = as soon as··· ···

雅思大作文语法句式

雅思写作高分秘籍主打时态：一般现在时/现在完成时/一般将来时/现在进行时牢记：●双谓语，如果被考官发现有双谓语，5分就是顶头了。

解决办法：to do/doing不要被汉语中的，“有多少人做什么事”所欺骗，目前，有越来越多的人出国留学●主谓不一致，注意下列表达做主语的谓语变化：PeopleNews/by means ofTo do/doing句子●词性误用一，名词的适度扩展a)介词短语后置：introduction about the function of productsb)动词不定式后置（可加适度的状语）：the plan to build more roads(soon/after a month/before caraccidents happen)c)分词后置（可加适度的状语）（现在分词doing/过去分词done）: the criticism heard often isthat …/private cars causing severe pollution to the environment keep rising1，与市场和服务的相关信息大部分要从广告中得到2，短时间内要控制住污染的计划几乎是不可能的简单句主要句型（主动）1，主+谓+宾（最流行）2，主+谓（最简单）●整个社会将会受益：The whole society/community will benefit.●有很强意志的人容易成功People with strong willpower succeed easily●我必将成功I will surely/definitely succeed.3 there be +There be 句式There has/have beenThere have been more and more developing countries to pay attention to environmental protection There will beIf immigrants adopt local customs and habits, there will be fewer and fewer conflictsThere seems to beThere seems to be more and more findings showing nature and nurture are interactingThere is a growing trend/tendency that…There is a growing trend that modern buildings are built in traditional stylesThere is little room for doubt thatThere is little room for doubt that frequent job hopping makes job hoppers in dangerThere is bound to beThere is bound to be another convincing reason to be against the view●似乎有愈来愈多人使用因特网获取信息●如果私家车持续增长，新鲜空气就会越来越少●越来越多的人在外面吃饭来放松呈现不断上升的趋势●几乎不用怀疑，只学习一门课程不能拓宽知识面●越来越多的人都认可，十八岁才适合学车●注定有一些人反对这个观点4 主+系动词+表语Get/become/sound/remai n/seem/prove=turn out to be●情况变得越来越糟糕Things are becoming worse and worse污染变得越来越严重Pollution is getting increasingly serious.●哪个因素会有更大的影响一直难以预测/一直是个谜.Which factor has greaterEffects remains unpredictable/a mystery.●是否应该在小区建学校似乎是很有争议的Whether a school need to be built seems to be disputable/controversial●手机似乎变得越来越流行●对于减肥，饮食要丰富证明是很有效的For losing weight, eating a variety of food proves/turns out to be effective/productive. 主系表句式练习：1 海外留学生应该变得心胸开阔2大学生活变得越来越乏味3 孩子们过去依赖父母，现在却变得越来独立了4 有的解决办法听起来很实用5问题似乎很复杂5 主谓宾+宾补一、主语+及物动词+宾语+形容词（做补语）●Keep sb well-informed/fed/dressed/equipped/up-to-dateAdvertisements keep us well-informed about products大城市可以使我们丰衣足食Make/find feel it impossible/possible/easy/difficult/well-known/clear/necessary/an undoubted fact/an inescapable factThe invention of air plane makes it possible to travel around the world in a short period私家车的快速增长是我们呼吸到新鲜空气成为几乎不太可能大部分家长明确表示，体罚对学生的身心产生了负面的影响越来越糟糕的家庭关系使人们花太多的时间在工作和学习上成为无法逃避的事实几乎所有国家都感到采取有效措施来控制污染时十分必要的二、主语+谓语+宾语+名词（做补语）●名词系列Take/consider//treat it as +nWe consider the practice of censorship a violation of human rights有的人把安装监控器当成是对隐私的侵犯三、主语+及物动词+宾语+介词短语（做补语）Take it for grantedPut sb in danger/risk有的人把穿校服可以改善学生的行为当成一种想当然有的人把国际旅游业的发展可以加强国家之间的团结当成一种想当然旅游业的发展是脆弱的生态系统处于危险之中保命句式：● A 对 B 有好处A benefit B/ A is beneficial to B/A brings immediate/economic/cultural benefits to B/A does a good job to B/A is favorable to B/A is conducive to B● A 对 B 有坏处A harm B/ A is harmful to B/A causes harms/risks/dangers to B/A is detrimental to B/, A is unfavorable to B● A 在…. 发挥了……作用A plays/fills a(an) important/vital/crucial/essential/significant/major (重要的) rolea(an) key/leading/indispensable(关键/首屈一指的)an educational (教育的)a supervisory/watchdog （监督的）a recreational (娱乐的)a deterring （震慑的）role/part(作用) in …B● A 在。

雅思写作句子改错(参考答案)

雅思写作常用语法错误分析1．We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.错因：statement是可数名词，在这里要么加冠词，要么变复数。

改正：We are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity．大意：我们经常听到关于语言多元性快速丧失的言论。

2．Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause．错因：惯用法。

介词使用错误，blind后面常加to.改正：Globalization will always have supporters who are blind to the destruction it can cause.大意：全球化总有一些支持者，他们对由全球化造成的破坏视而不见。

3．One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．错因：句子结构。

有两个谓语动词，分别是is和fail，需要将其中一个改成从句。

改正：One problem that has not yet been addressed is that the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．大意：一个仍然还没有被解决的问题是现有的基础设施和设备不能够满足越来越多的游客的需要.4．Children，if grown up in a multicultural society，are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．错因：从句部分不能用过去分词，小孩与grow up之间是主动关系。

雅思写作语法——定语从句练习

定语从句写作练习1 许多人谈论的一个最严重的问题集中在缺乏足够的居住空间（center on）2 任何忽视这一点的政府都将付出巨大的代价（be blind to）3 对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老学到老（just as an old saying goes）4 同时仍然有许多人持有传统的观点认为全日制学校对孩子的学习发挥着极其重要的作用（live under the traditional ideas）5 同时，拥有私家轿车的数量在这几年快速地增加6 违反交通规则的人应该受到惩罚（violate traffic regulations）7 夏天很闷热，这就是我不喜欢它的原因（sultry）8 最后一点，森林是人类可以接近自然的地方，如果人类学会了爱护自然，就会想保存地球上所有的天然资源（get close to）9 另一方面，那些坚持自己本国风俗习惯的人，觉得这样做让他们更加自在（follow their own customs feel more at home）10 沉迷于网络的人经常觉得孤独，感到与外面的世界隔绝开来，变得越来越内向和自闭（indulge in isolated withdrawn ）11 经常沉迷于电视的小孩不懂得区分现实和虚幻（reality fantasy）12 沉迷于上网的孩子往往比较内向，不善交际，甚至对人冷漠（unsociable indifferent）13 死刑是个野蛮的做法，应该从现代社会中清除（death penalty cruel and barbaric do away with）14 那些反对强制退休制度的人持有以下理由（mandatory retirement）15 取得巨大成功的人，毫无例外，都是善于利用零碎时间的人（with no exception utilize their own odd moments wisely）16 我喜欢到气候宜人的地方生活（agreeable）17 博物馆是游客体验当地文化和了解当地历史的好地方18 有些家长把小孩送到私立学校去学习，那里孩子们能够享有更好的教学质量和更好的教学设施（teaching facilities teaching quality）19 许多政府禁止克隆的原因是因为它不符合伦理道德（ban human cloning）20 这就是许多人强烈反对城市禁养宠物的原因（the ban on pets）。

雅思写作大作文专用讲义

第一讲雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点(Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test)难点一: Academic Writing 学术类写作问题的特殊要求(改错练习) 1. Since private companies don't care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research. (不能缩写)2. Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed. (英式美式拼法不能混用)3. We must do our best(utmost) to protect (preserve) animals. (词汇用法太嫩)4. It is clear (manifest) that pornographic shows do harm to (undermine, endanger, jeopardy) the lives of lots of youngster (adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰5. Nowadays (In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas.6. In these day and age, many companies have replaced telephone with internet.7. We are confronted with many environmental problems. They are becoming more and more serious. (句式,语法)8. The traffic problem is becoming worse. We must work together to solve it.(句子结构)9. So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard tofight crime! (不应该带感情色彩)10. We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, "Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated." (文化背景,圣经不可用)难点二: No specific topic pool. 题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多.对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法对策: 雅思写作"语法的七宗罪"改错练习1. Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee. (n.可数不可数)2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. (v.原型不可做主语)2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. (被动语态)Poor children can face problems when they grow up.2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. (主谓一致)2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. (时态)3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 副词4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 介词4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6. These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed. 逗号7. These are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.补充材料IELTS 作文复杂句的七种内部关系(Seven possible relationships Underlying a complex sentence)Cause and effect因果关系标志词1)表示原因的because, as, since, due to, owing to (画横线的连接词请重点掌握)2)表示结果的hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…)E.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment. 生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染.Exemplification 举例关系标志词…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…for example.(以…为例) for instance. (比如…) To Illustrate…(例如…) As an illustration…(作为例证…)e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. TakeChina for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films. 亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影. Comparison and contrast 对比关系标志词While …,whereas…,whilst…,in contraste.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could oftenperform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧X,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务.e.g. The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.Concession 让步关系标志词Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)e.g. 1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的.2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous.死记硬背有时候是必要的,尽管很枯燥和机械.3The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.Definition 下定义关系标志词A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…) A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成).e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations.一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察.Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals.Supposition假设论证, 标志词provided that…(如果) given the choice…(如果可以选择的话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要) if…, suppose that…e.g. Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentation should be continued.e.g. Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside.Modification 修饰关系标志词that, which, whoIn this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly likethe buildings our ancestors built.Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.补充资料IELTS 写作考试的常用模板和句型进步类1) In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas.=in many fields. 在当今社会,人类正以前所未有的速度在很多领域向前发展.2) Today we have embarked upon the …era. 今天,我们已经进入了…的时代.We have embarked on the information era. –he has embarked on the road of committing crimes.3) Since the advent/arrival of the…era… 随着…时代的到来…例句:Since the advent of the information era, our efficiency at work has been greatly enhanced.随着信息时代的到来,我们的工作效率得到了很大的提高.例句 2 With the advent of the information era, school education has undergone profound changes at an accelerated rate.倒退类4) But A is accompanied by B 但是伴随着…(某种好现象)的到来,某种坏现象也出现了.例句:But the proliferation of English is accompanied by the extinction of many lesser-known languages.但是随着英语的广泛传播的是大量小语种的消亡.5) Accompanying all the advantages brought about by the profound social changes have come some sufferings; and …is very prominent among them. 随着深刻的社会变革带来的种种好处,出现了很多问题,…是其中很显著的一个.Please analyze causes of traffic congestion, and give some solutions. Accompanying all the conveniences brought about by violent social changes have come some negative effects, and traffic congestion is the most pressing one / the most serious one.6) With the incidence(发生率) of …hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. …的发生率居高不下,这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉.Traffic offenses have become a problem confronting modern people, please give some suggestions of how to deal with it effectively.With the incidence of traffic accidents hovering at high level, many people, especially sociologist and anthropologist, have shown great concern.7) In this day a nd age, it is standard practice for … to do something. 今天,某些人做某事是很普遍的.例句:In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush around all day busying themselves with their work. Many of them cannot spare some time to take care of their children,which has led to some serious social consequences. This essay will make some analysis concerning this phenomenon.8) Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注.Juvenile delinquency is an issue/topic worth our concern / discussion / analysis.Efforts will be made to analyze this topic in this essay.9) The issue of … has been thrown into sharp focus. …引起了人们的强烈关注.例句:Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into public attention / widespread concern.10) Howev er, there is no consensus on …yet. 或者people hold divergent /contrasting/conflicting view on… 或者people are divided over… 不同的人关于某个问题持不同的看法.例句:People hold contrasting views on animal experiments.人们对动物试验持不同的看法.Some people hold that the experimentation on animals is justified. However, others believe that this practice is a reflection of cruelty. From my perspective, it is advantageous to some degree whilst its drawbacks can never be overlooked. / As for some experiments, animals are irreplaceable subjects but I think we should be kind as possible as we can when carrying out these experiments. /I think this practice is to some extent cruel and unjust to animals but at least in the near future we cannotget rid of it completely.11) Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate. 某事物正在以令人震惊的速度增长.例句:With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate. Accompanied by the dramatic development of society, women crimes have been growing at an alarming rate. Such a grave situation has aroused widespread concern, especially sociologist and educationists. In essay attempts will be made to explore the causes of this issue and provide some feasible solutions.12) Whether…has triggered /aroused heated debate / discussion.是否应该…引起了激烈的辩论Whether… is an issue open to debate 或者Whether…is a controversial issue. 例句:Whether student should appraise their teachers' performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论的问题.13) Some (people) assert/ argue/hold/maintain/claim/assume that… 有一些人认为…例句:Some people assert that relocating large companies to the countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities. 一些人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法.14) …is largely fuelled by...某现象主要是被…所推动.例句:The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by the pursuit for lowercosts.IELTS 议论文主体段写作加分37句型前进类1 profit fromPeople throughout the world can profit from the advancement in motorized flight.Flight to transport fruits to places where there is no such fruits or not in season.Mobile phones can bring about some drawbacks such diseases. Whether we should avoid using mobile phones.People throughout the world / in every corner of the world can profit from the advancement of information technology. Nowadays we can keep in touch with each other and communicate with our friends or clients quickly by means of mobiles phones. However, some research reveals that mobile phone may cause some medical complaints and thus it is suggested that we should cease using them. In my viewpoint, the advantages of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages.2 A is an integral /indispensable part of BAdvertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.3,S omething plays a pivotal /key role in …It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success.4, Enable /allow somebody to do somethingCultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new societysuccessfully.5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt toNew immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed.6Someone can have access to something 或者can access something 或者can utilize somethingIn this day and age, many individuals can have access to the Internet via /by means of computer or mobile phone.倒退类1…is attended by /…is accompanied byThe staggering advancement of technology is attended by severe pollution of the ecosystem.2The more…the more…The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur.3A can be attributed to B 或者B stems from AThe proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough.4be afflicted with/be plagued withIn present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty.5deprive someone of somethingModern cities deprive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.6something prompt/impe ls somebody to do…Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories.7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology. 其中We must ensure that..意思是我们必须确保…我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶.The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another.With the acceleration of living tempo, modern people are confronted with many physical and psychological problems. Among them, stress is the most prominent one. This has brought about numerous negative social consequences and aroused widespread concern especially among psychiatrists and sociologist. This essay focuses on exploring the causes and providing some ways to relieve stress.快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远.8A recent study conducted by the organization / association / institution /union / scientist reveal that…如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Justice 交通问题可以用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可以HSUS and GreenpeaceA recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today.9 be addicted to /preoccupied with somethingIn present-day society, many individuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various forms of gambling.10 something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of …The population explosion is the chief culprit in water scarcity.11be confronted with somethingIn contemporary society, we are confronted with a large number of violent and pornographic TV shows.12 present/pose a threat to…In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a grave threat to humanity.13 be awash with/be inundated with somethingThe media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverage.14 if…something will ensueIf parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue. 15With the incidence of … hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.16something is unwarranted /unjustifiableExperimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/unjustifiable.中间类1…on the grounds that…Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane.2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on somethingIn this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live,play and learn.3 A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance BThe advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disadvantages.4 A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B. Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas.5 A is a key determinant of BIn an individual's career, tenacity is a key determinant of success.6 It is manifest that …或者It is universally acknowledge that…It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries.解决类1 give priority to somethingThe government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources.2 dedicated A to BThe government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty.3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable toWithout proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows.4 something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵) Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned ratherthan condoned.5 it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ essential that… 或者something is of paramount/ overriding importance.To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immediately.6 abide by/ comply withIt is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law.7 something requires/ necessit ates /call for…The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nations on the globe.8 distinguish between A and BMany youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong.9 must ensure thatParents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring.结尾段常用模板1) based on the above discussion, I am convinced that…(用于一边倒文章的结尾段)基于以上的讨论,我确信…2) In the final analysis, I concede that… However, ….On balance…(用于折衷式文章结尾段) 作为最后总结,我承认…但是…综合起来看… 3) The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something,prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大于弊(如果弊大于利把顺序颠倒一下就可以了)IELTS 作文常用同义词人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个与其最强)影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implications危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about积极的,好的beneficial, advantageous消极的,坏的baneful, detrimental好处-坏处benefits, blessings, boons—banes, pros—cons, advantages—disadvantages, merit—demerit无处不在的prevalent, pervasive大量的a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of (后面跟可数名词复数) a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数)增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich污染contamination代替pollution 需要(及物动词)require, necessitate, call for第二讲十大全真版本X文,词汇与模板Education 类Some peoplethink students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers' job performance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss and give your own opinion.开头段(不少于4句)In this day and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill out performance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates' work. But when it comes to the evaluation of school teachers' job performance by their students, people hold divergent views. Some argue that students should be allowed to do so. Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate their teachers work. Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit.主体段1(不少于5句)Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers' work. First, if not well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthless or even misleading. It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluation responsibly and some students may make mean comments. Secondly, some students criticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack attitude about their job. Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling.主体段2(不少于7句)However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons. In the first place, it is an effective means of motivating theteachers to improve their lectures.Teachers have to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of the student. In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balanced ideas about their own performance. Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher to have accurate assessment of their own teaching. In the third place, a measure of students' autonomy can make the student better prepared for their adult life. The student becomes better at decision-making and critical thinking.结尾段(不少于3句)In the final analysis, I concede that enabling the student to evaluate their teachers' performance might have some potential drawback. However, by averaging out student's appraisal and encourage them to evaluate responsibly can eliminate the downside of this practice. On balance, I am convinced that allowing students to evaluate their teachers is in the best interests of students, teachers, school administrators, and the society as a whole.教育类8分X文Children who grow up in families without large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with problems in their adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree题目点评:这道题目是IELTS writing task2当中比较少见的"看着容易写好太难"的题目(很多IELTS作文题目看起来很难,写好却不一定特别难).首先要注意到区别"families without large amounts of money" 和"poor families" 这两个概念的差异,前者不仅仅指"low-income families" 还包括"middle-income families", 所以题目的意思和一些同学概括的"穷人的孩子早当家不同";另外一个误区在于因为这道题目和中国的文化比较贴近,很多同学会举过多的简单生活事例但是忽略了推理,论证缺乏深度.从论点上看,考虑到多数考生更熟悉中国的国情,肯定是totally agree 更好写,布什的内阁里面现在也有拉洋板儿出生的(不过美国的富豪的孩子当中牛人还是出了不少,四十三位总统里面也有大量的富家子弟,从整体上看西方有钱的家长更舍得让自己的孩子经历风雨).既然观点写一边倒,那么结果当然就是五段式――开头段转述题目+主旨句,主体段1讲一般家庭的孩子比富家孩子有更强的心理承受能力,主体段2讲一般家庭的孩子有更强的独立性,主体段3讲普通家庭的家长对小孩的要求往往更严格,几位段总结上三层意思.Thesis statement 和topic sentences (X文里用横线标明) 关键词:income gaps 指收入差距income inequality 指收入不均intergenerational 两代人之间的turn the table 是个idiom, 有点像中文说的"打翻身仗" offspring 孩子counterpart 相对应的人(或事务) meritocratic society 说白了就是"凭本事吃饭的社会"self-restraint 自制能力infancy 婴儿期frugality 勤俭financial strains 说白了就是缺钱,名词well-off/affluent (adj)/ well-to-do/ well heeled/ wealthy 自己管理自己,名词initiative 主动性well-acquainted 对某事很熟悉,mitigate缓解,要说解决问题,雅思里面词汇也特多tackle/ address/ solve resolve grapple with /combat 再加题目里面的deal with,大家挑着用啦It is widely accepted that we have been living in a "the rich get richer whereas the poor get poorer" age in terms of income gaps within a generation. However, to this day, there has been no consensus yet over the extent to which income inequality is intergenerational. Some contend that the offspring of low-income and middle-income parents can largely grow up manifest better problem-solving abilities during adulthood than their high-income family counterparts thereby turning the table socially and financially. Personally, I believe this is generally the case in any meritocratic society. (Thesis statement) First and foremost, children raised in household not in possession of a good fortune are conditioned early on in their lives to exercise self-control and self-restraint. These individuals learn from their infancy onward that not everything they crave will become theirs instantaneously. Every so often their wishes go beyond their parents' means and they have to come to terms with the resulting sense of frustration or rejection. Throughout the childhood and early adulthood years they are tempered by the repeated experiences of parents' denial of their requests and frugality is inculcated into their minds as a virtue. Consequently these children, for the most part, are apt to interpret scrimping and saving, emotional uneasiness, not infrequent financialstrains and menial first jobs as an integral part of life rather than a devastating ordeal. Hence they end up being better able to manage stress in their adult years and less likely to panic or get daunted when problems occur.11Further, children brought up by parents of low or middle economic status often grow up to be physically, mentally and professionally more independent than children brought up by affluent parents. It goes without saying that children whose parents are not particularly well-off are more likely than children of affluent households to know how to get the most out of a modest allowance, if they ever get such a thing at all. To the former group of children most desirable things in life have to be "earned"—that is, more often than not they must put forth great effort before their desire is fulfilled. On the other hand, busy, low or medium salaried parents translate into more autonomy and initiative on the children's part. This originally disadvantaged group becomes spontaneous and handy through crafting toy on their own, resourceful by cooking their own meals, tactful with coaxing their parents into buying them gifts, intelligent thanks to the absence of private tutors, savvy in doing summer jobs, and above all, unrelenting in pursuing their dreams. Lastly, non-wealthy parents typically have higher and more definite aspiration for their children than well-to-do parents. Well-acquainted with all thedisadvantages a meager or fair-to-middling bank account generates, many non-wealthy parents pin their hopes on their children to get their families upwardly mobile. These adults mostly have high behavioral, educational and (subsequently) occupational expectations for their children. As a result, they cannot afford to be permissive parents. Spoiling their offspring rotten is the last thing they care to do and they are always ready to discipline their children when they misbehave. They keep tabs on their children's grades at school and do not spare the rod when their offspring do not measure up academically. The odds of children raised in such rigorous environments having good problem-solving skills are apparently better than children raised otherwise. To conclude, the chief determinant of individuals' problem-solving skills is not the amount of money their parents can amass when they are little. Rather, hands-on experience in comprehending, analyzing, resolving, mitigating or circumventing problems is more essential to the cultivation of problem-solving abilities. Hence, I am convinced that families without great wealth are more advantageous to the development of individual capacity to tackle problems.Education 类词汇Education:1) 培养(某种素质)cultivate/ foster/ nurture(vts)促进学生身心发展promote the student's physical, mental (或者用intellectual) andemotional development 心理健康psychological soundness/ well-being/ welfare(nouns) 学习能力(先天就有的)aptitude/ talent 学习能力(后天学习到的)ability/ skill 学生接受的学校教育(名词)schooling(noun) 儿童接受的家庭教育(名词)upbringing(noun) 给学生以动力give the students motivation to do something 或者motivate (vt) the student to do something 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youths2) 传授知识impart(vt)/inculcate(vt) knowledge 灌输高尚的道德观念instill(vt) high moral values (注以values 复数比试价值观) 给学生以灵感stimulate the students; thought 或者give the students inspiration 家长教育子女的方式(名词)parenting/ upbringing 教学法teaching methodology/ pedagogical methodology 适应(动词)adapt to do something/adjust oneself to do something/ become accustomed to do something 适应能力adaptability 学生对老师所教授的知识的掌握students' grasp/ command(nouns) of what has been taught 就业技能employable/ marketable skill 3) 限制创造力的发展extinguish(vt)/ stifle(vt)/ constrain(vt) creativity(noun) 打击学生的积极性dampen/sap(vts) the students' enthusiasm 或者frustrate the students 产生不不要的压力beget/ create undue pressure 塑造某人的性格mould(BrE,vt) one's character 责任感a sense of obligation 学生不应该只是被动的接收简单知识的容器student should not be treated as passive receptacles of predigested ideas. 死记硬背learn thing by rote.4) 记忆方程式,公式,定理,定律memorize equations, formulas,theorems and laws(nouns) 应用apply (vt) 盲从follow something blindly/ indiscriminately(adv) 用填鸭式教学教育学生force-feed(vt) the students 为了记忆而记忆memorize for memorization' s own sake 5) 把学生分开教育(比如根据智力或者课堂上的表现) segregate(vt) students 来自于其他同学的压力peer pressure 逆境adverse circumstances /adversity 团队精神team spirit(noun) 独立思考: think independently(adv) 6) 在理解的基础上学习learn things through understanding 鼓励学生用辨证的眼光看问题encourage students to think critically(adv) 学生的反馈students' feedback 或者students' input 学生评价老师的教学students appraise / evaluate their teachers' performance7) 学生学习的各门功课加在一起curriculum(noun) 具体的一门课的内容syllabus 课外活动extra-curricular activity 学校是社会的缩影A school is society in miniature 不遵守纪律(名词)indiscipline/ misbehavior/ mischief (nouns) 不遵守纪律的(形容词)学生disruptive/ unruly students 8) 理论只是theoretical knowledge 通才generalist 专才specialist 全面发展的well-rounded /versatile 为社会健康发展做贡献contribute to societal well-being/ welfare (注意这里welfare不是"福利"的意思)9) 大学学科的分类可以分为:人文学科(包括文学,历史,语言学等)humanities 社会科学(包括政治,经济,社会学等)social sciences 艺术(包括音乐,雕塑等)arts 文科的总称也可以称为liberal arts 或者liberal studies 理科(包括物理,化学,生物等)sciences 工科(包括工程,自动化等)engineering 大学里的任何一个学科都可以叫做一个discipline 基础科学basic sciences 应用科学applied sciences 小学教育primary-level education 中学教育secondary-level education 大学教育tertiary-level education 职业教育vocational education/ training 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youthsEducation 类模板1 In this day and age, it is universally acknowledged that education is one of the key determinant of individual success. 众所周知,在当代教育是一个人成功的决定因素之一.2In contemporary society, education plays a pivotal role in individual development. 在当代社会,教育在个人发展中扮演着至关重要的角色.Technology & media 类科技类2/26 people today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole开头段(不少于3+1句)The interactivity of the Internet and the mobile phone has enabled a multitude of people to purchase their desired items or pay their phone bills without stepping out of their offices or homes. And many others can even register for tests or sign contracts online. This。

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（过去现在未来都有影响，客观，单数）Taking part-time jobs exerts profound impacts on one’s future career.国际旅游业促进经济发展。

（过去现在未来都促进，客观，单数）International tourism promotes the economic development.现在进行时：表示正在进行的动作或存在的状态。

现在进行时表示动作发生的时间是“现在”，表示逐渐的过程is developing rapidly/dramatically.现在完成时： 1.表示结果和影响，一般表示变化大，发展了。

2.表示过去的动作或状态持续到现在注意常用搭配：In recent years, In the past decades…最近几十年期间，世界发生了巨大的改变。

In the past decades, dramatic changes have taken place in the world.最近几年，科技极大的改变了人们的生活。

In recent years, technology has reshaped people’s life.犯罪率已经急剧上升了。

The crime rate has increased sharply.will do电脑将会在教育过程中起越来越关键的作用，但是它们绝对不能在教室中取代老师的地位。

Computers will play an increasingly critical role in education, but it is not possible that they could replace teachers in the classroom. /but it is impossible for them to replace teachers in the classroom.二．语态问题：常见被动语态结构：be done一般现在时Am, is, are done正在进行时Is being done现在完成时Have/has been done一般将来时Will be done应该把优先权给教育Priorities should be given to education.很多动物的栖息地正在被破坏Many habitants of animals are being destroyed书信已经逐渐被先进的科技所代替Letters have been replaced by advanced technology gradually.三．简单句：1）简单句：主流句型，主要结构会使用就可以了。

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雅思基础+写作语法总结一．时态问题：四种：一般在，在行，在完成，一般将来一般在表示通常性、律性、性、真理性的状或者作：用第三人称数，例如：打工一个人的将来的事有深的影响。

（去在未来都有影响，客，数）Taking part-time jobs exerts profound impacts on one’ s future career.国旅游促展。

（去在未来都促，客，数）International tourism promotes the economic development.在行：表示正在行的作或存在的状。

在行表示作生的是“ 在”，表示逐的程is developing rapidly/dramatically.在完成： 1.表示果和影响，一般表示化大，展了。

2.表示去的作或状持到在注意常用搭配：In recent years, In the past decades⋯最近几十年期，世界生了巨大的改。

In the past decades, dramatic changes have taken place in the world.最近几年，科技极大的改了人的生活。

In recent years, technology has reshaped people ’ s life.犯罪率已急上升了。

The crime rate has increased sharply.一般将来表示将来某一刻的作或状：will do将会在教育程中起越来越关的作用，但是它不能在教室中取代老的地位。

Computers will play an increasingly critical role in education, but it is not possible that they could replaceteachers in the classroom. /but it is impossible for them to replace teachers in the classroom.二．语态问题：常被构：be done一般在Am, is, are done正在行Is being done在完成Have/has been done一般将来Will be done把先教育Priorities should be given to education.很多物的栖息地正在被破坏Many habitants of animals are being destroyed信已逐被先的科技所代替Letters have been replaced by advanced technology gradually.三．简单句：1）句：主流句型，主要构会使用就可以了。

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电驴/topics/2804538/3G雅思网/太傻论坛/无忧雅思论坛/大家网/我的英语程度概况：四级558 六级519一战雅思：二战雅思：最近终于有时间了，把自己准备雅思过程中个人感觉还有点用的东西总结下，给需要的同学们一些参考。

首先要说明的是，我从来都很鄙视论坛上一些所谓的牛人自称什么“20天雅思8分”之类的误导别人，增加我等平凡之辈的心理压力。

考试有技巧，但是学英语却没有捷径——唯一的捷径就是持之以恒。

试问一天没学过英语去考雅思，你能考几分？请负责任的说，在你这“20天”之前，你付出了多少努力？我的一个好朋友，复习了相对较短的一段时间后，首战TOEFL 104分。

但在这之前他积累了多少呢？大量的记忆和背诵，不断的练习口语和写作。

我们要相信因果报应，没有付出就没有回报。

本贴只适合能够静下心不单纯为了应付考试、能够踏实学习的人参考，期望“灵丹妙药”者，别耽误时间，绕道。

其次，在复习过程中请记住两个字：坚持。

我对一个准备雅思的曾经的朋友说过“再试试”。

其实很多时候我们会出现百步半九十的情况，距离胜利只有一步之遥的时候，有的人放弃了，有的人胜利了。

只要我们还有信念，坚持住，相信下一秒钟就会有曙光，我们终会见到曙光的。

第三，针对RLWS四部分按照以下结构介绍：1.复习资料；2.复习中我采用的一些方法；3.考试感受实录。

一、Speaking 口语：Part 2跑题了，还有机会上6吗？口语和写作是我的弱项，花费时间最多。

虽然第二次分数还是不高，但我希望大家能少走一些我曾走过的弯路。

1.复习资料博客：Chris Green /慎小嶷/ieltsguru王冬/书籍：《剑桥国际英语语音教程(英音版第三版)》作者：（英）贝克编著出版社：北京语言大学出版社《生活英语情景口语100主题》作者：（美）罗克特，王恩波著出版社：外文出版社《雅思考官口语实战指导》作者：（英）克拉克（Clark，M.）编著，赵志杰，黄厚忠译出版社：群言出版社（大漠学习笔记——精简版）《十天突破雅思口语》作者：慎小嶷编著出版社：机械工业出版社2.我的方法在口语考试中，我们需要解决两个关键问题：怎么说&说什么。

英语雅思试题及答案

英语雅思试题及答案听力部分1. 根据对话，下列哪项是Tom和Mary讨论的主题？A. 旅游计划B. 工作安排C. 学习课程D. 家庭聚会答案：C2. 在对话中，Mary提到了她将要参加的课程类型是什么？A. 线上课程B. 线下课程C. 混合课程D. 自学课程答案：A阅读部分3. 根据文章，以下哪项不是作者提到的提高英语听力的方法？A. 观看英语电影B. 听英语歌曲C. 参加英语角D. 阅读英文小说答案：D4. 文章中提到，提高英语听力最有效的方式是什么？A. 持续练习B. 学习语法C. 学习词汇D. 参加英语考试答案：A写作部分5. 以下哪个论点不是文章中提到的支持学习英语的理由？A. 提高职业机会B. 促进文化交流C. 增加旅游便利D. 学习计算机编程答案：D6. 文章中提到，学习英语可以带来哪些好处？A. 职业发展B. 文化理解C. 国际交流D. 所有以上选项答案：D口语部分7. 在口语考试中，考生需要描述一个他们曾经参观过的地方。

以下哪个描述是不合适的？A. 描述地点的地理位置B. 描述地点的建筑风格C. 描述地点的自然风光D. 描述地点的购物体验答案：D8. 在口语考试中，考生需要谈论一个他们感兴趣的话题。

以下哪个话题是不合适的？A. 个人爱好B. 科技发展趋势C. 环境保护问题D. 个人隐私问题答案：D注意：以上试题及答案仅为示例，实际雅思考试内容和形式可能有所不同。

3月16日雅思小作文答案

3月16日雅思小作文答案
英文回答：
The topic for the IELTS Writing Task 1 on March 16th was about a bar chart showing the percentage of people in different age groups who use the Internet in a particular country. Here is my response:
According to the bar chart, the age group with the highest percentage of Internet users is 16-24, at approximately 90%. This is followed by the 25-34 age group, with around 80% of people using the Internet. The percentage gradually decreases as the age group increases, with the lowest percentage of Internet users being in the 65+ age group, at about 20%.
中文回答：
3月16日雅思写作任务1的题目是关于一个柱状图，显示了特定国家不同年龄段使用互联网的比例。

以下是我的回答：
根据柱状图，年龄段中使用互联网比例最高的是16-24岁，大约为90%。

其次是25-34岁年龄段，约80%的人使用互联网。

随着年龄段的增加，使用互联网的比例逐渐下降，65岁以上年龄段的互联网用户比例最低，约为20%。

2021年6月26日雅思写作真题及范文

2021年6月26日雅思写作真题及范文Task 1柱图Task 2大作文题目：Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries， while other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion？范文We live in a multifaceted society that. has its own cultural and traditional values. Traditions that vary from place to place are unique in their own form. These norms and distinctive cultural values attract people to visit different places in order to learn more which is laudable， but others believe that we live in a digital world know where all the information is available through paper and print media then there is no point to visit those places physiclly. This essay will analyze both viewpoints to understand their merits before presenting an opinion.People believe that culture can be best understood when one physically visits that place. Proponents of this viewpoint argue that films and books do not cover all the aspects and often show onlypositive attributes and customs of a place. Cultural values and traditions are best analyzed when we live： with them and participate in their festivals， religious gatherings， weddings， and other events. Moreover， they say that books and the Internet give us limited information and physical presence in instruments to observe and understand their emotion， feelings， sentiments， and so on showcased during different occasions. For instance， Malay culture is rich in folk music， artworks， poetry， festivals， and so on， which we usually see in different videos， but there are some hidden traits like their disliking for non-Malay， which is not mentioned in any book or shownin the contrary， others believe that one can easily learn the traditions and cultural norms through different documentary movies，historical books， or digital content available over the Internet. Theysay that books written over different cultures were written by authors that visited those places or heard about them from others.Moreover， the Internet is a massive repository of digital content in the form of textual and visual information， instrumental in learning various cultures without the need to travel. For instance，Indian culture became popular in western countries due to different Bollywood movies revealing the customs and way of living of people residing in different cities like Gujarat， Rajhi stan， Kashmir， etc.Furthermore， documentary videos and movies are a good source of information as they cover different aspects of culture in visual form，and one gets absorbed in it while recapitulate， the aforementioned provides plausible arguments over both viewpoints. However， I believe that one should travel to explore different cultures as a physical presence cannot match the virtual information.雅思小作文提高方法我们以A类雅思小作文为例，为大家讲解雅思小作文的提高方法。

雅思写作句子改错--(参考答案)

雅思写作常用语法错误分析1．We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity. 错因：statement是可数名词，在这里要么加冠词，要么变复数。

改正：We are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity．大意：我们经常听到关于语言多元性快速丧失的言论。

2．Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause．错因：惯用法。

3．One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．错因：句子结构。

有两个谓语动词，分别是is和fail，需要将其中一个改成从句。

改正：One problem that has not yet been addressed is that the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．大意：一个仍然还没有被解决的问题是现有的基础设施和设备不能够满足越来越多的游客的需要. 4．Children，if grown up in a multicultural society，are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．错因：从句部分不能用过去分词，小孩与 grow up之间是主动关系。

雅思写作改错练习（附答案）

雅思写作改错练习(附答案)为了帮助大家备考雅思作文，提高写作水平，下面小编给大家带来雅思写作改错练习(附答案)，希望大家喜欢!雅思写作改错练习(附答案)1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters tomagazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.参考答案1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.错误: and并列连接两个谓语，应该是平行结构。

雅思写作句型分析：强调句

雅思写作句型分析：强调句雅思写作总是有套路的，有时候灵活运用句式，能让判卷老师眼前一亮哦!这时可能需要用到一些复杂的句型，强调句就是其中一个。

强调句在雅思写作中并不常用，如能恰当使用会产生意想不到的效果!雅思写作提分之语法多样性-强调句式一、强调句式的基本结构It + be + 强调中心成分 + who/that + clause.注意强调句式的特点：去掉it be…that结构，句子成分依然完整，句意依然全面。

请大家注意分析一下以下句型中的强调关系体现在哪里：It was Jane who called continually this morning. (这里强调的是谁)It was a parcel that she gave him as the birthday present. (这里强调的是什么)It is them who often help me with me lessons. (这里强调给了谁)It was in Greece that the Olympic Games first started. (这里强调在哪里)It was in 1976 that Tom knew her. (这里强调在什么时候)注意：1.当被强调成分为主语时，可用who，也可用that，其他情况一律用that2.强调主语时，who/that后的谓语动词必须和被强调的主语人称和数保持一致二、强调句式可以强调除谓语动词外的大多数句子成分。

如主语，宾语(直接宾语，间接宾语)，状语等。

John gave Mary a handbag at Christmas.--- It was John who/that gave Mary a handbag at Christmas.--- It was Mary who/whom/that John gave a handbag (to) atChristmas.--- It was a handbag that John gave Mary at Christmas.--- It was at Christmas that John gave Mary a handbag.三、强调句式可以强调多种多样的状语成分，如时间状语，地点状语，方式状语，原因状语等。

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