高中英语作文公开课课件
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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高考英语写作公开课课件(共25张PPT)
Step3. Combining the sentences into a passage
【连句成篇】 Dear Editor, I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely ,which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs, Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries, more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua
公开课_高中英语写作课件1
Modify and supplement the subject and predicate to make the sentence more specific and vivid.
Simple sentences, compound…
Master different types of sentence structures to enhance the sense of hierarchy and logic in expression.
目录
• Appreciation and imitation of model essays • Common problems and solutions in writing • Summary, Review, and Outlook for the Future
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Course Introduction and Objectives
Format specification
Follow the basic format and specifications of the application text, such as title, title, main text, and ending.
Content accuracy
Ensure the accuracy of the conveyed information and avoid misunderstandings or ambiguities.
Improving comprehensive English proficiency: Writing involves multiple aspects such as vocabulary, grammar, and sentence structures. Through writing training, students can enhance their comprehensive English proficiency.
Simple sentences, compound…
Master different types of sentence structures to enhance the sense of hierarchy and logic in expression.
目录
• Appreciation and imitation of model essays • Common problems and solutions in writing • Summary, Review, and Outlook for the Future
01
Course Introduction and Objectives
Format specification
Follow the basic format and specifications of the application text, such as title, title, main text, and ending.
Content accuracy
Ensure the accuracy of the conveyed information and avoid misunderstandings or ambiguities.
Improving comprehensive English proficiency: Writing involves multiple aspects such as vocabulary, grammar, and sentence structures. Through writing training, students can enhance their comprehensive English proficiency.
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
Verb tensions
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
高中英语作文公开课 高中课件
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❖ 3. 1968年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 （08广东）
❖ Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.
❖ 4. 约5. 4亿人受二手烟影响，死亡人数超过 10万／年 。（10广东）
❖ Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths a year.
lost friend.
3
❖ When I was young I_l_is_t_e_n_e_d_ (listen) to the radio iting for my favorite songs. When they _p_la_y_e_d_(play) I'd sing along.
❖ It _m__ad__e_(make) me smile. Those _w_e_r_e_(be) such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they _h_a_d__g_o_n_e___(go).
❖ It _____me smile. ❖ Those _____ such happy times and not
so long ago. ❖ How I wondered where they ________. ❖ But they're back again just like a long
❖ Tip 3 主动不如被动巧 ❖ Eg.最近学校就“谁是你的偶像”进行了一
次调查。（07广东）
❖ Recently a survey has been done on “ Who is you idol?” in our school .
❖ 3. 1968年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 （08广东）
❖ Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968.
❖ 4. 约5. 4亿人受二手烟影响，死亡人数超过 10万／年 。（10广东）
❖ Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths a year.
lost friend.
3
❖ When I was young I_l_is_t_e_n_e_d_ (listen) to the radio iting for my favorite songs. When they _p_la_y_e_d_(play) I'd sing along.
❖ It _m__ad__e_(make) me smile. Those _w_e_r_e_(be) such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they _h_a_d__g_o_n_e___(go).
❖ It _____me smile. ❖ Those _____ such happy times and not
so long ago. ❖ How I wondered where they ________. ❖ But they're back again just like a long
❖ Tip 3 主动不如被动巧 ❖ Eg.最近学校就“谁是你的偶像”进行了一
次调查。（07广东）
❖ Recently a survey has been done on “ Who is you idol?” in our school .
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
2
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件
●__正__文_____________(_注__意__：____英__文__书__信__不__要__写___一__些___ (B__o__d____y__o____f __L__e__t__t__e__r__）______h②__e__l__正l__o__文,______部h__i__分之____，类____严的____格问____按候____照语______文)____章____的____提
●签名（Signature） (文章一般都会给出）
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Organization
Mood
In a moderate mood!!
Content:
Cover all the information
Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.
Good points
书写有较大进步， 总体来说书写认真， 字迹较工整
书信写作的格式及其要求：
Dear Mr. Smith●，称呼（Salutation） 文章一般会给出
__________________________________①____起____首____语______-__-__-__-____亮____明____身____份______，____开____门____见 _________________山__说__意__图_______________________
Language:
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes
In accordance with the requirements of the composition
●签名（Signature） (文章一般都会给出）
Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Organization
Mood
In a moderate mood!!
Content:
Cover all the information
Better to arrange the passage according to the given order of the content.
Good points
书写有较大进步， 总体来说书写认真， 字迹较工整
书信写作的格式及其要求：
Dear Mr. Smith●，称呼（Salutation） 文章一般会给出
__________________________________①____起____首____语______-__-__-__-____亮____明____身____份______，____开____门____见 _________________山__说__意__图_______________________
Language:
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes
In accordance with the requirements of the composition
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
要点一
要点二
Description
The teacher can provide examples of both narrative and argumentative essays and explain the differences between them They can then assign topics for both types of essays and ask the students to write them, ensuring they understand the nuances of each type of writing
Parts of speech
It involves understanding the different types of words and their functions in a sense (noun, verb, objective, etc.). The correct usage of each part of speech is essential for clear communication
Writing evaluation and feedback
04
Content: The evaluation criterion for content includes the accuracy and depth of information, the coherence and logic of ideas, and the originality and creativity of the content
Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
要点二
Description
The teacher can provide examples of both narrative and argumentative essays and explain the differences between them They can then assign topics for both types of essays and ask the students to write them, ensuring they understand the nuances of each type of writing
Parts of speech
It involves understanding the different types of words and their functions in a sense (noun, verb, objective, etc.). The correct usage of each part of speech is essential for clear communication
Writing evaluation and feedback
04
Content: The evaluation criterion for content includes the accuracy and depth of information, the coherence and logic of ideas, and the originality and creativity of the content
Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
高中英语写作公开课课件(共61张PPT)
表示转折关系的并列句 这类并列句常用but （但是；可是），yet（可是；然 而），while （而）等来连接，后面分句与前面分句之间 有意义上的转折关系。
She said she would be late, yet she arrived on time. Certainly he apologized, however, I won't forgive him. I like tea while she likes coffee.
状语从句（Adverbial cause):从句用作状语
When you cross a main road, you must be careful. Sit down wherever you like. As I didn’t know the way, I asked a policeman. You’ll be late, unless you hurry.
Tom and Mike are American boys.
She likes drawing and often draws pictures for the wall newspapers.
简单句的五种基本句型
不及物 动词
宾语
主语
及物 动词
间宾+直宾宾语
宾语+宾补
系
动词
表语
第一种句型：S+V
Guide in Writing
丰城二中
Teaching Objectives(教学目标）
By the end of this lesson you’ll be able to ■ find out the mistakes of the compositions given. ■ find out what problems cause you not to get higher marks in your writing. ■know some practical ways to improve a composition. ■feel less scared in writing.
高中英语作文(32张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
表起始的过渡语有first of all，to begin with，in my ／our opinion，according to，so far， as far as等。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
2021/10/10
20
有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
2021/10/10
1
内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
2021/10/10
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
It provides a comprehensive guide to help students develop their writing ability, including essay writing, letter writing, and other practical writing tasks
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
01
02
03
04
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
01
02
03
04
Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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高中英语复习 写作讲评课
Assessment & practice of Writing
• 2008年奥运会刚刚落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上 征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设 你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写 一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由． 内容包括：
• １．向公众开放，用于健身 • ２．租给体育公司，创造经济效益 • ３．开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客． • ４．………
• Dear editor,
• I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper.
• ………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………
评分的四大纬度
内容
Beijing were held successfully. 11.The 29th Olympic Games which were
hosted in Beijing were held successfully.
写作步
骤: 体裁
1. 审题 时态 结构 要求
2. 列提纲/要点
字数 内容
3.连词成句
问题:
7.句子结构不完整 8.Only make full use of them does it make
sense . 9.Only by making full use of them does it make
sense 10.The 29th Olympic Games which hosted in
attract
问题:
2.时态语态问题 We may given it to the PE company. We may give it to the PE company..
3. 主谓一致问题
The sport stadiums is very great and is highly spoken of by the foreigners. The sport stadiums are very great and are highly spoken of by the foreigners.
①向公众开放，用于健身.
O.pen/be opened to the people/public/open them to
public.
Be used for/as; be made to;
D②o s租om给e体ex育er公cis司e/，bu创ild造ou经r 济bo效die益s/.strengthen our
body. 6. 介词短语的运用问题 I am writing to make some advice for how to
make full use of the sports stadium. I am writing to make some advice on how to
make full use of the sports stadium.
②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.
Collect some advice
How to use/make use of /make the best of the stadium
After the Olympic Games
After Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games .
4. 逐字翻译问题 The stadiums can open to people for do exercise use.
The stadiums can be opened to people for doing exercises.
问题:
5. 词性混淆问题 It can creative money.. It can create/bring in money. Many people can use them to strong our body. Many people can use them to strengthen our
要点全，拓展有度，有效
语法
准确，复杂语法结构， 高级词汇，多种句型
框架---组织结构
连接词，作文结构紧
凑；流畅
思想
开放能引起读者的共鸣,灵魂
常见错 1.单误词:拼写或用错：
Give you some advise advice
I just provide you my own suggests.
suggestion They can attact visitors.
4.连句成篇
5. 润色修正
6. 定稿
1.审题: 体裁 书信格式
人称 第一,三人称
时态 一般现在时
要求
字数 内容
抓要点,
120个左右
①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.
Para.1 开头 信息1
②征集奥运会后如何综合利 用体育场馆的建议.
③你想写一些建议.
Para.2正文 信息2 向公众开放，用于健身
结构
信息3 租给体ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ公司，创造经济效益
信息4 开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客 Para.3结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
2.列提纲 开头 /要点 信息1
①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.
①08年奥运会刚刚落幕. ②征集奥运会后如何综 合利用体育场馆的建议. ③你想写一些建议.
T.he 2008 Beijing Olympic/
were over/finished/held successfully in Beijing.
Gibvoed…ietso/Rent…to/be rented to
Sport company/companies which organize matches/organizing
matches
M③ake开/ c辟rea成te 旅mo游ne景y; b点rin，g 吸in m引o游ney客/make more profits
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
Contribute some suggestions to you.
2.列提纲 /要点
正 文
信息2 向公众开放，用于健身 信息3 租给体育公司，创造经济效益 信息4 开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客
Assessment & practice of Writing
• 2008年奥运会刚刚落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上 征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设 你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写 一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由． 内容包括：
• １．向公众开放，用于健身 • ２．租给体育公司，创造经济效益 • ３．开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客． • ４．………
• Dear editor,
• I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper.
• ………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………
评分的四大纬度
内容
Beijing were held successfully. 11.The 29th Olympic Games which were
hosted in Beijing were held successfully.
写作步
骤: 体裁
1. 审题 时态 结构 要求
2. 列提纲/要点
字数 内容
3.连词成句
问题:
7.句子结构不完整 8.Only make full use of them does it make
sense . 9.Only by making full use of them does it make
sense 10.The 29th Olympic Games which hosted in
attract
问题:
2.时态语态问题 We may given it to the PE company. We may give it to the PE company..
3. 主谓一致问题
The sport stadiums is very great and is highly spoken of by the foreigners. The sport stadiums are very great and are highly spoken of by the foreigners.
①向公众开放，用于健身.
O.pen/be opened to the people/public/open them to
public.
Be used for/as; be made to;
D②o s租om给e体ex育er公cis司e/，bu创ild造ou经r 济bo效die益s/.strengthen our
body. 6. 介词短语的运用问题 I am writing to make some advice for how to
make full use of the sports stadium. I am writing to make some advice on how to
make full use of the sports stadium.
②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.
Collect some advice
How to use/make use of /make the best of the stadium
After the Olympic Games
After Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games .
4. 逐字翻译问题 The stadiums can open to people for do exercise use.
The stadiums can be opened to people for doing exercises.
问题:
5. 词性混淆问题 It can creative money.. It can create/bring in money. Many people can use them to strong our body. Many people can use them to strengthen our
要点全，拓展有度，有效
语法
准确，复杂语法结构， 高级词汇，多种句型
框架---组织结构
连接词，作文结构紧
凑；流畅
思想
开放能引起读者的共鸣,灵魂
常见错 1.单误词:拼写或用错：
Give you some advise advice
I just provide you my own suggests.
suggestion They can attact visitors.
4.连句成篇
5. 润色修正
6. 定稿
1.审题: 体裁 书信格式
人称 第一,三人称
时态 一般现在时
要求
字数 内容
抓要点,
120个左右
①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.
Para.1 开头 信息1
②征集奥运会后如何综合利 用体育场馆的建议.
③你想写一些建议.
Para.2正文 信息2 向公众开放，用于健身
结构
信息3 租给体ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ公司，创造经济效益
信息4 开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客 Para.3结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
2.列提纲 开头 /要点 信息1
①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.
①08年奥运会刚刚落幕. ②征集奥运会后如何综 合利用体育场馆的建议. ③你想写一些建议.
T.he 2008 Beijing Olympic/
were over/finished/held successfully in Beijing.
Gibvoed…ietso/Rent…to/be rented to
Sport company/companies which organize matches/organizing
matches
M③ake开/ c辟rea成te 旅mo游ne景y; b点rin，g 吸in m引o游ney客/make more profits
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
Contribute some suggestions to you.
2.列提纲 /要点
正 文
信息2 向公众开放，用于健身 信息3 租给体育公司，创造经济效益 信息4 开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客