中考英语写作专题指导-记叙文课件
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中考英语作文叙事记叙文专题复习指导ppt课件
Which is better?
最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。
A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.
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我认为学英语很有趣。
A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .
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“爱心”表现(examples)
1. I often help classmates with lessons. 2. I help old people cross the road on my way home. 3. I often give my seat to people in need on a bus. 4. I often help clean up the park.
中考作文指导
--记叙文(叙事篇)
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叙事记叙文写作
主要特点：
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记叙文
记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以写人、叙事 为主要内容。它可以包括历史，游记，报道，回忆，故 事，琐事等。
这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三人称角度出 发，表达自己或他人的经历或感受，使读者对事情十分 明了以获得强烈感受。
A I wish you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help.
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Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
well work well. （the ending）
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
2022年中考英语作文专题(叙事记叙文)课件
鼓励+帮助表达 I always told her not to give up. I helped her to learn ... after school everyday. She was very happy when her ... became better and better.
叙述记叙文
Hale Waihona Puke Thank you for your watching
Step 1 :审题 体裁：写事类记叙文 人称：第一+第三人称 时态：一般过去时（主）+一般现在时（辅） 要点：人物、时间、内容、原因、想法
黄金分段：3段式+10句话
Step 2: 提纲 开头：人物 正文：时间、经过、原因 结尾：结果（感受）
词汇层面
名词：前用形容词，中用同位语，后用定语从句，介词短语，with短语修饰 动词：用强调词do的适当形式，副词修饰，或＋意义相近的动词 形容词：用副词修饰，或+意义相近的形容词
Step 3 正文
2. When was it? 3. What did you say or do? 4. Why did it make him/her happy?
句1：One day, my classmate met a English problem. 改1：（one of+the+最高级句型）One day, one of my classmates met a very difficult English problem. 改2：（强调句句型）It was last week that my classmate had trouble/a problem/difficulty in learning English. 改3：(原因状语从句)Last week, my classmate got herself into trouble because she was weak in Englsih.
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
断句
Stage2: 抓
动词 短语语块
句式结构
(mind map)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)Βιβλιοθήκη (preview)审
书面 表达
连
(link)
抓 (focus) 扩
(expand)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
因并果列
顺序
Stage4: 连
观点 原句美化
Stage3: 扩
造句
Stage5、6:查改和誊写
Stage1:审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他（Jim）理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
第五档（13-15分） 能写明全部或绝大部分内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 （1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏 投稿。 （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他 看上去又冷又饿。 （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。 （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。 （5）你很感动…… 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
中考英语写作专题指导-记叙文课件
审题 写前
Step 1
looked after my sister Nana
my sister Nana and I
who
what 记叙文 when
where
last week
at home
第一人称
审题 写前
Step 2
looked after my sister Nana
my sister Nana and I
to my sister._A_f_te_r_th_a_t We sang songs__to_g_e_th_e_r .
In the afternoon, I cooked noodles for her.__________
__S_h_e_s_a_id__th_e_n_o_o_dl_e_s_w_e_re__ve_r_y_d_e_licious, so I felt very happy.
a rest for about an hour. In the afternoon, we played games,
read books and watched cartoons until my parents came
back.
I was very tired but really happy, because I could look
In the afternoon, I cooked noodles for my sister. I had a rest.
In the evening, We played games and watched cartoons.
I was very tired but very happy.
添加信息 （写作技巧）
初中英语作文—记叙文 PPT 课件
满分文展示
It was fine and sunny last
①准确使用现在分词做伴随状
Saturday,so our class decided to go to 语，一方面显示其对语法知识的
West Hill for a picnic.We went there by 娴熟运用，另一方面把一副轻松
2.常用句型
(1)There are a lot of activities at the beach.海滨有很多活动。 (2)Autumn is rich with fruit and grain.秋天是瓜果飘香的季节。 (3)In the early spring the scenery is very beautiful.初春的景色分外美 丽。
一般来说，记叙文它大致分为三类：一是 以记人为主的记叙文，即以人物为中心组织材 料，围绕这个人物可以写一件事，也可写几件 事；二是以写事为主的记叙文，即以事件为中 心组织材料，围绕中心事件可以写一个人，也 可以写几个人；三是以写景状物为主的记叙 文。
但应注意的是，在一篇记叙文中，写人、写 景、写事往往是交织在一起的，不能截然分开，但 各有侧重。
试题及满分文赏读
经典命题
上个星期六学生们去西山进行一次野餐，请参考所给词语，记叙此次活动。 go to West Hill, by bike, a short rest , after, the foot of, sing, dance, climb,see,hear,happy 要求：1.条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整；2.不少于70词
(4)Last week I am so busy with homework that now I was delighed to be having an outing. 上周我忙于做作业，以至于现在我很高兴出去 游玩一次。
初中英语记叙文写作课件
• 爱好
• (When she is free,) She likes…(doing/ to do) • Her hobby is…(doing) • She is good at…(doing), she always …
• 难忘之处
• help • strict
外貌
• • • • • • • • She is a pretty woman with long straight hair. She is short and a little bit heavy. She has short curly hair. She is of medium build/height. She looks young/old. He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He has blond hair. He is short/ tall/fat/thin.)
家庭生活作文题材
第一类:（以下题材应以记叙为主） • My mother(father)（写人） • My flat(neighbourhood)（写地方） • My favourite present(写物） • A birthday party/ A trip to…(写事情） 第二类:（以下题材应夹叙夹议，着重写自己感受） • My family life • My thanks to my mother(my father) 第三类（以下题材应以议论为主） • How to spend pocket money • The importance of breakfast • The advantages of doing housework
借助图画标题等形式借助图画标题等形式确贴近学生生活符合学生的年龄特点确贴近学生生活符合学生的年龄特点具有教育意义具有教育意义具有教育意义
中考英语写作专题课件写人记事专题(共26张PPT)
【例文2】 你校将举办“感恩行动日”（thanks-giving campaign day ）
活动，让同学们用实际行动表达对老师、同学、家长的感
恩之心。你作为班级的代表发言，请根据表中学校的要求，
并结合自己的想法，写下你的活动安排，并说一说你的感
想。
People
Activities
Teachers
She works hard and is strict in everything. 她学习刻苦，并且对任何事都要求严格。 He is outgoing(外向的). Everyone likes to talk with him. He gets on well with us。 他性格外向，每个人都喜欢跟他交谈，他和我们相处得很 好。 He often helps me with my English。 他经常帮助我学英语。 At the age of six, he began to play the piano。 他六岁时就开始学习弹钢琴。
for
my
parents
to
give
them
a
big surprise. Also I’m going to help As for my classmates, they really help me with my schoolwork.
How time flies! Three years passed in a blink.
【例文1】 在你的各学科老师中，给你印象最深的是哪一位
呢？他（她）最让你喜欢的是什么呢？请以 “My__________Teacher”为题，写一篇不少于80 词的短文，像我们介绍一下这位老师吧。
My English Teacher My English teacher , Liu Shulin, is a middle-aged man with thick glasses on his nose. We all like him because his classes are lively and interesting. He has many ways to make his classes lively. We usually play games and have English short plays in class. The English class is always full of joy and laughter. Mr. Liu is also our good friend. He often plays basketball with us after class. We all like talking with him about everything.When we had trouble, he often helped us out.
中考英语作文指导 PPT课件(共38张)
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句) We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon. ( 扩展句 ) If you would like to take photos, you’d better take a camera. (扩展句) The time to return is 4:30 p.mthe outing. (扩展句) Wish all of us have a good time. (结尾句)
要求：１、词数：８０个词左右；题目及文章的 开头已给出，但不算在词数内。 ２、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当 增加细节，使行文连贯。 ３、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称， 否则答案作废。 Notice Good morning, everyone! I’ll tell you a piece of good news. We are planning an outing. __________
中考英语 作文指导
——黄志林
《中考英语写作指导》公开课课件共25张PPT
一、写作要点 • “一审”即审题。 • “二写”即列纲或打腹稿。 • “三连”即连词和句成文。 • “四改”即修改润色全文。
审题：做到三审
• 体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达
的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么
• 时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采
用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现 在时态。
列纲：做到三思
中考英语作文指导
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
九 （2）
2017年4月26日
英语写作在中考英语中占据重要 的地位，写作分值的高低直接影 响到英语测试的成绩，怎样才能 写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获 取高分呢？
习作范例
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers. •What exactly your hobby is; •When and how you became interested in this hobby; •Why you enjoy your hobby; •About your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将 提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 3.词数60-80.
• In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will thank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much.
中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
中考英语写作专题精讲精品课件(共39张PPT)
important to be confident about yourself. We Chinese are very friendly so you needn’t
be afraid of making any mistakes.
it’s better to speak slowly and clearly. In
02 真题回顾
真题回顾
真题回顾
个性化
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多样化
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生活化
04 创新化
真题回顾
评分标准
第五档：（很好）（21～25分）完全完成规定任务，要点全面，或发挥新 意有亮点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。
第四档：（好）（16～20分）完成规定任务，涵盖基本要点，语言有少量 错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
应试策略
One of the most popular words is Dianzan.
Another example is Renxing.
The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping.
If you describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.
应试策略
2015年安徽省中考英语书面表达（说明文）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思，请
根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。
●点赞（Dianzan）：赞同、喜爱 ●任性（Renxing）：随心所欲
说明文、第三人称、一般现在时
●秒杀（Miaosha）：快速达到目的
●土豪（Tuha
注意：1. 词数80-100；
中考英语书面表达之写人记叙文课件
写人记叙文
1
1 写作指导 2 真题再现 3 题目分析（审题+构思） 4 素材积累（词汇+短语+句型） 5 范文赏析（全文背诵） 6 真题训练
2
写作指导
1.写人要写“魂” 写人记叙文是通过对人物思想性格的刻
画来表现中心思想的。 2.写作角度要新、小、集中、典型。
3
真题再现 假设Lucy是你的好朋友，下面是Lucy的个人信息，请你根 据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词 左右的短文。 注意：内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不 必逐条翻译。
10.此外
besides / what’s more
11
➢ 句型练习
1. 我有一个好朋友，名叫 Lucy.
I have a good friend __n_a_m__ed__/c_a_l_le_d__L_u_c_y__. 2. 她是一名14岁的女孩，来自美国。
She is _a__f_o_u_r_te_e_n_-_y_e_a_r_-o_l_d_g_i_r_l_ from America. 3. 她个子高，很漂亮，金发碧眼。
4
要点提示：
Name
Lucy
Age
14
Country America
Appearance good-looking, tall, blue eyes, golden hair
Character kind, outgoing, helpful
Hobbies reading, listening to music, doing sports
5. 喜欢做……
like/enjoy doing sth.
10
1
1 写作指导 2 真题再现 3 题目分析（审题+构思） 4 素材积累（词汇+短语+句型） 5 范文赏析（全文背诵） 6 真题训练
2
写作指导
1.写人要写“魂” 写人记叙文是通过对人物思想性格的刻
画来表现中心思想的。 2.写作角度要新、小、集中、典型。
3
真题再现 假设Lucy是你的好朋友，下面是Lucy的个人信息，请你根 据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词 左右的短文。 注意：内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不 必逐条翻译。
10.此外
besides / what’s more
11
➢ 句型练习
1. 我有一个好朋友，名叫 Lucy.
I have a good friend __n_a_m__ed__/c_a_l_le_d__L_u_c_y__. 2. 她是一名14岁的女孩，来自美国。
She is _a__f_o_u_r_te_e_n_-_y_e_a_r_-o_l_d_g_i_r_l_ from America. 3. 她个子高，很漂亮，金发碧眼。
4
要点提示：
Name
Lucy
Age
14
Country America
Appearance good-looking, tall, blue eyes, golden hair
Character kind, outgoing, helpful
Hobbies reading, listening to music, doing sports
5. 喜欢做……
like/enjoy doing sth.
10
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美丽校园，健康生活（2020年陕西英语中考）
二、话题类型
• 1、教育类话题
• 如：How to improve English? • How to deal with the books and • notebooks? (2019年陕西中考英语)
• 2、实践生活类
• 如: 暑假计划、周末旅行、走亲访友的经历等 • （2018年陕西中考英语）
教育类
1
记叙文
2
议论文
记叙文
写前
审题
写中
书写
写后
检查
① “4W+1H”: what, who, where, when, how
② 人称、时态subject, tense ③ 头脑风暴:brainstorming ④ 列提纲: 组织、提取信息
① 组织信息 ② 添加内容 ③ 选取信息 ④ 自我检查
We should improve
5. 学会使用简单的句子， pronunciation as well by
避免过度重复。
listening to the conversation
in English movies.
My family and I had a good and relaxing trip.
listen to music to relax myself.
I fail in math so I am upset.
We should improve pronunciation by listening to the conversation from
English movies.
学生：老师， 我还是不会写 作文怎么办啊？
• 3、热点话题
• 如：新型冠状病毒、环保 • （2020年陕西中考英语)
三、文章类型
1.记叙文: 2018年陕西中考作文 2.说明文2：019、2017年陕西中考作文 3.议论文：
四、评分标准
第一档 （14-15分）
第二档 （10-13分）
第三档 （7-9分）
第四档 （4-6分）
符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确 无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完整，语言 流畅。
① 检查内容（主要信息） ② 检查词数 ③ 检查语法 ④ 拼写、标点、结构等
who
when
where
假如你是李华，上周你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容，
写一篇短文。(2018年陕西中考作文)
what
上午 讲故事，唱歌, ……
活动
中午 煮面(cook noodles), 休息(have a seat), ……
Most students like chatting on the phone after
school/in the free time.
I love reading. I enjoy reading.
First, I can talk with my good friend. Second, I can
符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语 言基本无误。有语法或完整。
基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通 顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，但表达疑似清 楚。
基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词 数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。
审题 写前
Step 1
looked after my sister Nana
my sister Nana and I
who
what 记叙文 when
where
last week
at home
第一人称
感受
下午
玩游戏， 看动画片(watch cartoons),…… ……
要求 ：1. 参考表格内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，疑似连贯， 书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等） 4. 词数：不少于70个词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home._____________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________
第五档 （0-3分）
能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均 与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
五、写作小技巧
写作小技巧
学生例句
更改例句
1.用两个词而不用一个 My family and I had a good
词。
trip.
2.适当添加副词或者介 Students like chatting on the
有话 可说
教 育 类
考查 范围
评分 标准
五 档
实践 生活
类
话题 类型
中考 作文
文章 类型
记 叙 文
议 论 文
说 明 文
写作 技巧
五大写作 小技巧
范文 赏析
不同类 型文章
一、考查范围
根据《新课标》和《中考说明》，作文考查的范
围基本上与学生日常生活、学习生活息息相关。 做到有话可说。例如： Live a life without much pressure. How to improve English?
词短语。
phone.
3. 同义替换，避免重复。 I like reading books.
4.使用关联词表示文章 的逻辑。
I should talk with my good friend, and I should listen to
music. I fail in the math. I am upset.
二、话题类型
• 1、教育类话题
• 如：How to improve English? • How to deal with the books and • notebooks? (2019年陕西中考英语)
• 2、实践生活类
• 如: 暑假计划、周末旅行、走亲访友的经历等 • （2018年陕西中考英语）
教育类
1
记叙文
2
议论文
记叙文
写前
审题
写中
书写
写后
检查
① “4W+1H”: what, who, where, when, how
② 人称、时态subject, tense ③ 头脑风暴:brainstorming ④ 列提纲: 组织、提取信息
① 组织信息 ② 添加内容 ③ 选取信息 ④ 自我检查
We should improve
5. 学会使用简单的句子， pronunciation as well by
避免过度重复。
listening to the conversation
in English movies.
My family and I had a good and relaxing trip.
listen to music to relax myself.
I fail in math so I am upset.
We should improve pronunciation by listening to the conversation from
English movies.
学生：老师， 我还是不会写 作文怎么办啊？
• 3、热点话题
• 如：新型冠状病毒、环保 • （2020年陕西中考英语)
三、文章类型
1.记叙文: 2018年陕西中考作文 2.说明文2：019、2017年陕西中考作文 3.议论文：
四、评分标准
第一档 （14-15分）
第二档 （10-13分）
第三档 （7-9分）
第四档 （4-6分）
符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确 无误，大小写及标点运用得当。全文结构严密、完整，语言 流畅。
① 检查内容（主要信息） ② 检查词数 ③ 检查语法 ④ 拼写、标点、结构等
who
when
where
假如你是李华，上周你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容，
写一篇短文。(2018年陕西中考作文)
what
上午 讲故事，唱歌, ……
活动
中午 煮面(cook noodles), 休息(have a seat), ……
Most students like chatting on the phone after
school/in the free time.
I love reading. I enjoy reading.
First, I can talk with my good friend. Second, I can
符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理清晰，语句较通顺，语 言基本无误。有语法或完整。
基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通 顺。语法或标点错误较多。文章结构不严密，但表达疑似清 楚。
基本符合题意要求，表达不清楚，语法或表达错误过多，词 数不够，语意表达不清晰，文章逻辑混乱。
审题 写前
Step 1
looked after my sister Nana
my sister Nana and I
who
what 记叙文 when
where
last week
at home
第一人称
感受
下午
玩游戏， 看动画片(watch cartoons),…… ……
要求 ：1. 参考表格内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，疑似连贯， 书写工整； 3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等） 4. 词数：不少于70个词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home._____________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________
第五档 （0-3分）
能传达给读者少许信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均 与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
五、写作小技巧
写作小技巧
学生例句
更改例句
1.用两个词而不用一个 My family and I had a good
词。
trip.
2.适当添加副词或者介 Students like chatting on the
有话 可说
教 育 类
考查 范围
评分 标准
五 档
实践 生活
类
话题 类型
中考 作文
文章 类型
记 叙 文
议 论 文
说 明 文
写作 技巧
五大写作 小技巧
范文 赏析
不同类 型文章
一、考查范围
根据《新课标》和《中考说明》，作文考查的范
围基本上与学生日常生活、学习生活息息相关。 做到有话可说。例如： Live a life without much pressure. How to improve English?
词短语。
phone.
3. 同义替换，避免重复。 I like reading books.
4.使用关联词表示文章 的逻辑。
I should talk with my good friend, and I should listen to
music. I fail in the math. I am upset.