夹叙夹议写作教案

夹叙夹议类英语写作教案

教案设计：周玲俐

Teaching aims：

1. Help students know how to choose a right story

2. Help students know how to write a story right

3. Help students know how to express ideas right

4. Help students form the strategy of semi-open writings

Difficult and important points:

1.Help students know how to write a story right

2.Help students know how to express ideas right

Teaching methods:

1.Task-based Language Teaching

2.Discussion

Teaching procedures:

Step 1. 【Task 1】. What do the writings of Hunan Province have in common?

【学生反馈1】Similarities: Both of them include TWO aspects:

One is ________________________.

The other is ___________________.

【设计思路】列出近几年高考书面表达题，让学生阅读并找出共同点，引出本课教学重点。参考答案：One is to write/describe a story/ event .

The other is to express your idea/ feeling.

Step 2. How to choose a right story

【Task 2】The following are two compositions written by the students in the NMET of Hunan Province. Please carefully compare the stories the students choose and try to find the differences between them.

Passage A :

In our daily life, everyone may have something lost or been stolen. Some may be found again quickly, but something may always be gone. So we should save what we have now.

I have been lost something important to me. It was a book. It was sent by my father. I still remember that day. When I got home, I was doing my homework like usual. After finishing my work, I took the book from my desk. The book is about a girl faces difficult brave, and at the end of the book, the girl beat the difficulty. I know why my father sent it to me at my birthday party. I like it very much. Then my mother asked me to have dinner, I took the book on the desk, Whenever I came to my room, I find the book was missing. I was worried. Three days ago, I found it behind the door. It was my cat that did it.

From this thing, I realized we should save the things around ourselves, like the love of your parents, the friendship between you and friends and so on. If I do that, I will be not regret to the lost things. (15分)

Passage B:

I do remember it was on a summer holiday that I lost a ticket of my favorite singer’s concert on my way home. To get one ticket, I queued in the sun about 2 hours, which almost drove me crazy. You can never imagine how delighted I felt when getting one ticket and how worried as well as disappointed I was when finding it lost. I was so upset that I couldn’t eat and sleep well.

The next day, I put up a note in order to inform the person who happened to pick the ticket, feeling hopeless. However, to my surprise, that afternoon, a girl came to see me with one ticket in her hand. She said she picked it up in the street and she was also fond of the singer She also