新课标新高考英语人教版高三一轮：书面表达强化训练(七) 含解析

新课标新高考英语人教版高三一轮：书面表达强化训练(七)
写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友George对中国文化很感兴趣，你想邀请他来参加你市举行的国际文化交流节，请你根据以下提示给他写一封邀请信。

主要内容：
1．提出邀请；
2．简单介绍活动；
3．表达你的期望。

注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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第二节读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

Kusa, a 10-year-old boy, has looked out for his big sister, 12-year-old Pahnuly, for as long as he can remember. At school, he helps her unpack her things at her locker. At home, they read together, make up games and practice counting.
Pahnuly has autism (自闭症). People with autism often have trouble talking with others. They might repeat things over and over, or be interested in only one subject. But it was Pahnuly that inspired Kusa to think differently. One day, they played ping-pong with their parents at home in Brooklyn Park. But Pahnuly struggled with it. So Kusa wanted to find a way to make it more suited to his sister's needs. He came up with a new game based on ping-pong. It is called Aeropong because the ball seems to float in the air. In Aeropong, a ping-pong ball hangs from a frame. The players hit the ball back and forth. It's kind of like tennis, but no one has to go chase the ball.
At first, Pahnuly didn't show much interest. But soon, Kusa heard a sound coming from the front room. Clack (吧嗒声). Clack. Clack. Pahnuly had picked up a paddle (球拍) and was tapping the ball. Then, she started hitting it back and forth with Kusa and their dad. Eventually, the family took a trip to Menards to buy some PVC pipes and fashioned a portable frame for the ball to hang from. They also designed rules and ways to score points.
Word spread at school about Kusa's game. His teacher, Stasica, asked him to tell his class about Aeropong. Kusa is usually shy. But when he talked about his game, his face lit up with excitement, Stasica said. Kusa told classmates the game is meant to make people smile, especially his big sister. “When she scores，”he said, “she dances.”
Paragraph 1：
Aeropong has become an essential family activity in Kusa's home.
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Widely spreading on the Internet, Kusa's game got attention across the country.
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新课标新高考英语人教版高三一轮：书面表达强化训练(七)
第一节
【佳作展台】
Dear George，
I'm more than delighted to tell you that an international cultural festival is to be held in my city. I wonder if you would like to enjoy it with me.
As scheduled, the festival is to be held in the city hall on October 26th, lasting for three days. Participants from all over the world will show their country's cuisine, costumes, arts and crafts. Chinese painting and calligraphy are also included. I'm sure the festival will promote your understanding of different cultures.
I promise you will learn a lot and have a good time.
Yours，
Li Hua 第二节
【文章大意】十岁的小男孩Kusa虽然年幼，但是很懂事和有创造力，在照顾患有自闭症的姐姐的时候，发明了Aeropong这种好玩又方便的游戏，不仅丰富了家庭活动，更为自己赢得了荣誉和发展机会。

【写作指导】Paragraph1的开头是“Aeropong已经变成Kusa 家必不可少的家庭活动”，再根据Paragraph2的开头可知，Kusa家把玩游戏的视频发到了网上，引起了大家的广泛关注。

因此，Paragraph 1应该讲的是Kusa一家共同享受游戏的过程并将其制作成视频的内容。

Paragraph2的开头是“Kusa的游戏在网上迅速传开，在全国引起了大家的广泛关注”，显然接下来的内容应该是Kusa的游戏受到了普遍的欢迎以及该游戏的成功对Kusa的影响。

【佳作展台】
Paragraph 1：
Aeropong has become an essential family acti v ity in Kusa's home. The family all play wearing T-shirts with the game's name on them. They've enjoyed the time of picking up a paddle to play. The family has also made videos to capture these kinds of moments. Pahnuly watches the online clips nearly every day. At the end of one clip, she jumped up and down. She was celebrating a win at Aeropong over her dad. She waved her pink cat paddle in the air. Cats are Pahnuly's favorite animal.
Paragraph 2：
Widely spreading on the Internet, Kusa's game got attention across the country. It soon gained great popularity. Meanwhile, an increasing number
of kids with autism began to play it, which not only helped to improve their hand-eye coordination but also gave them an opportunity to communicate with their families. Actually, a toy company decided to produce Aeropong on an industrial scale. For Kusa, the success of his game has led to a change in his dream. Now, he dreams of becoming a “creator and businessman”. He said his big sister has already inspired him to create other inventions.。