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记叙文作文大全（6篇）记叙文作文篇1那天刚好是立春，心情很好，我去邮局取东西。

邮局里的人并不多。

前面是个小伙子，正在给家里寄钱，后面是一位70岁左右的老人，戴着一副老花镜，穿得破烂邋遢。

他肯定是来取儿女们的.汇款的吧。

他手中还拿着一张报纸，我扫过一眼，是我从来没读过的报纸。

老人的外套油迹斑斑，我不由站远了点。

我正戴着MP3耳机听歌呢，老人突然伸出手来，我忙摘下耳机，他说：“姑娘，麻烦你帮我那张汇款单。

”我拿了一张给他，他又说：“姑娘，你能帮我写一下吗?人老了，戴了老花镜也怕写出错。

”我有点无可奈何，但看他恳请，也只好从命。

“寄到哪里?”我问。

“就照着报纸上印的地址寄吧。

”他指着巴掌大的文章说。

我很快看完了那篇文章报道——原来是某村的一个女孩，父母去县城卖菜的途中出了车祸，肇事司机至今没有消息，她只好跟着80岁的奶奶生活，学费、生活费够没有着落。

记叙文作文篇2青春，是人一生之中最值得回忆的时刻；青春，是我们最难忘的一段时光；有句谚语说得好：“莫等闲，白了少年头，空悲切”，有人说时光是一去不复返的，其实，青春同样也是一去不复返的。

每个人的青春都是多姿多彩的，青春就像一瓶五味酱，酸，甜，苦，辣，种种滋味尽在其中，相信每个人都品尝过青春的滋味，是谁说青春不知愁滋味呢，其实，青春更知愁滋味，青春是可歌可泣的，青春是值得珍惜的，一个人，要想有所成就，就必须趁年轻时期有所付出，不要年少时期碌碌无为，到年老时一事无成啊。

曾听说过一个故事。

从前，有一个小孩子一点都不喜欢上学，甚至旷课、逃课，但他唯独喜欢玩电子游戏，在别的孩子在教室里认真上课时，小孩却在电子游戏厅里乐滋滋地玩着游戏。

一日复一日，十几年过去了，当其他人拿着毕业证’文凭，东奔西走地找工作时，这个孩子一句在家里当一个蛀米虫，而他的妈妈却从早到晚地帮儿子找工作，当由于这个人无一技之长，每家公司都拒绝他的应征，几十年过去了，你们也许会好奇这个年轻人过得怎么样了，会有所成就吗？我就告诉你们，这个无所事事的年轻人的.父母早已过世，他变成了一个孤魂落魄的乞食者。

记叙文作文(8篇)

记叙文作文（8篇）记叙文作文篇1“小菲，过来喝点奶吧，香香甜甜的奶可好喝了！”带着满脸笑意的妈妈对正在玩耍的小菲说道。

天真的小菲一听有奶喝，想也不想，伸手就接过奶瓶往嘴里放去。

站在一旁的我一看可是感觉有点不大对劲：平时奶的颜色应该是乳白色的，今天的奶怎么变颜色了，看起来有点灰白色的。

我扭头去看妈妈，而妈妈脸上的表情十分的正常，没有一点异样。

咦，今天小菲喝的奶里加了什么？过了一会儿，小菲喝完奶跑到里屋去玩了。

趁着这个空隙，我拿起她的奶瓶，将里面剩余的奶滴了几滴到我的嘴里。

妈呀，这奶甜里带苦，真不好喝。

这苦味我好象有印象呀！对，就是昨天小菲喝的药味。

妈妈是把小菲的药加入奶里让她喝了。

前天小菲有点发烧，到医院一看说是嗓子发炎，需要吃药。

而据叔叔所说，喂小菲喝药那是十分艰难的一件事，往往需要两三个人来协助完成。

就在昨天，我就亲眼见识了小菲喝药的场景：妈妈抱着小菲，叔叔拿着勺子喂，婶婶在一边按住小菲的手和脚，而我在一边也是忙个不停，要给叔叔递水拿纸。

而小菲呢，则是哭的惊天动地，小脸憋得通红，眼泪刷刷直流。

这样强制喂药的结果是有一少半药都撒了出来，而且还容易让小菲呛着。

后来，只要是家里的任何一个人手里拿着勺子和小碗，小菲一看见，都会哇哇的哭起来。

最后，叔叔就说把药掺在小菲平时喝的奶粉里，趁她不备，哄骗她喝下去。

这不，就上演了刚才的那一幕“骗局”。

而在这个“骗局”里，我也是承担和扮演有一定的角色的。

这不，又到了小菲吃药的.时间了，妈妈又拿着掺了药的奶过来让小菲喝了。

而这次小菲拿起奶瓶喝了一口后，就把奶瓶扔到了地上不喝了。

估计是妈妈这次奶和药的比例没有调和好，让小菲尝到了药味。

于是，我就捡起地上的奶瓶对小菲说：“小菲，姐姐去把这里的奶倒了，再给你换新的。

”过了一会儿，我把又加了一勺奶粉的奶递给小菲，并用甜的发腻的声音对小菲说：“小菲，来，来喝甜甜的奶了。

”这次，小菲尝了一口后，咕咚咕咚，不一会儿就把一瓶奶给喝完了。

记叙文作文(5篇)

记叙文作文(5篇)记叙文作文篇1每一步那踏在坚实的土地上的就是生命。

——题记直线和曲线，永远都是一种统一的美。

有的人过生活，就像是旅行，捧着相机，自由地在旖旎的风景中漫步和穿梭。

他们没有很躁的心态，但他们拥有足够的时间，于是他们不急着走。

为什么要急着走呢?他们说，生活是一种享受，是一杯美酒的点滴酝酿，需要用丰富的原料来倾注。

于是他们会更注重生活的细节，就像用相机的镜头把路边的小花一多多放大。

他们会拥有简单的快乐，会因为路边的大片向日葵而向阳光膜拜，会因田野里的麦穗而享受收获的喜悦。

正因如此，他们会更懂得珍惜，珍惜现在的瞬间和小幸福。

他们会单纯的企盼，路不会向前延伸，只是简单地横向发展，永远停留在他们生活中美好的那一刻。

还有一种人，永远都在叹息时间的流逝，叹息生命的短暂。

于是他们更快的'奔跑，因为他们在这有限的生命里有着更伟大的目标。

于是，他们的追求定然不会弯弯曲曲，他们选择最短路径——他们喜欢直接，喜欢直奔梦想而去。

这样的一种状态里多的不是留恋的幸福，而是无数希望的呼唤。

他们不去在意身边的多姿多彩，因为这终究要随这时间退到身后。

他们只是向前看，看那前方的绮丽景物。

看过了不再留恋，因为更前方会有更多的精彩等待他们。

在他们匆忙的旅途中，见不到那种踟蹰与徘徊，仅有的除了洒脱还是洒脱。

他们看不到时间的一点，看到的是连成一条的一线。

虽然有人说，他们走的越快，就是越快的接近死亡，但是不管怎么样，他们走的会更远，生命所经历的思考也会更深。

如果很绝对地去评判，去认定哪种人看到的景物要多，体会的要多，是过于武断的。

弯路与直路，只不过是对生活的不同态度。

其实真正重要的不是路，而是走在路上的自己。

只要你在前行，每一步便是一处风景，而生活也在继续。

记叙文作文篇2亲爱的同学们，我们的人生之路总是阳光明媚，晴空万里，到底哪一缕阳光最耀眼？有人说是优异的学习成绩，有人说是给予别人帮助而我认为在我们的人生路上最灿烂的阳光应该属于知恩图报，感谢帮助我们成长的每一个人。

高二英语写作专题概要写作---记叙文

【例2】
For centuries people dreamed of going into space. This dream began to seem possible when high-flying rockets were built in the early 1900s.
In 1903 a Russian teacher named Konstantin Tsiolkovsky figured out how to use rockets for space travel. His plan was the first one in rocket science to use correct scientific calculation. About 30 years later, a U.S. scientist named Robert Goddard built the first rockets that could reach high altitudes. During World War II, German scientists built large rockets that could travel very far and carry dangerous explosives. After the war, scientists from Germany went to the United States and the Soviet Union to help those countries build space rockets.
Ancient Chinese texts inspired Tu Youyou's search for her Nobel-prize winning medicine. Mission 523 pored over ancient books to find historical methods of fighting malaria. When she started her search for an anti-malarial drug, over 240 000 compounds around the world had already been tested, without any success. Finally, the team found a brief reference to one substance, sweet wormwood, which had been used to treat malaria in China around 400 AD.

高二任务型写作概要写作导练记叙文1

• To challenge the theory that_t_h_e_e_a_r_th__is_t_h_e_c_e_n_tr_e_o_f_t_h_e_u_n_iv_e_r_s_e_, Copernicus collected ___ob_s_e_r_v_a_ti_o_ns___of the stars and proved_t_he__s_u_n_is__th_e__ce_n_t_re__o_f _s_o_la_r_s_y_s_te_m. He __p_u_b_lis_h_e_d__hi_s_t_h_e_o_ry______ before dying，which became the base of all the ideas of the universe.
［例2］ (2021年广州一模) 阅读下面短文, 然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。—内容略
［写作内容］ 1. 以约30个词概括这篇演讲稿的主要内容； 2. 然后以约120个词写一篇读后感, 说明“诚信的重要性〞。
[解题过程] 第一步, 根据[写作内容2] , 快速获取大
意。[写作内容2]说明“诚信的重要性〞，扫读原文可以发现该文章是夹叙夹议的记叙文, 那么我们可以形成概要框架: 作者讲述了一个故事来说明诚信的重要性。这样, 就有了方向和思路了。
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记叙文型读写任务
Possible version 1： Once, there was an apple tree which always satisfied a boy's unreasonable requirements but the boy always left it alone. Eventually, the boy realized: “The old tree root is the best place to lean on and rest.〞

高考优秀作文之记叙文概要

2010高考语文满分作文（记叙类）早湖南考生是否只有早晨的那一刻才能看到朝阳当空升起，那—片霞光灿烂辉煌?无边的黑夜一如既往，静谧的世界回荡在心房。

黑暗，是谁在痛恨你。

让我看不清楚世界的美妙。

黑色—直陪伴着我直到去年冬天，眼中的世界没有光亮，早晚在心中都是那般的相像，妈妈说：“孩子，多么希望听到你说一声早安，妈妈。

”妈妈老了，即便我看不清楚她那耀眼的白发，可她那沧桑的声音敲着我的耳膜，她不想我一直瞎着，所以母亲每天去集市卖菜时我便在心中想着——母亲出门时，那个时刻便是早晨。

我每天不分时刻地睡觉，另一种幻想也寄居在我脑中，醒来的那一刻便是早晨的阳光，可是母亲却用温柔的声音呼唤着：“孩子，吃晚饭了。

”我微笑着，拖着疲惫的身子移到桌旁，细细品尝着母亲做的饭。

不知道为什么饭中总有—股辛酸，吃到嘴中眼泪就往下掉。

母亲急了，她拼命擦，拼命擦，那颤抖的双手触碰着我的双眼，我忍住眼泪，我说：“妈，早安。

”然后，我笑了笑，所有未流出的泪都吞回了肚里。

那双颤抖的手不知在摸索着什么，后来把’大叠纸塞入了我手中。

母亲说：“孩子，我已经赚够了钱，你可以去治眼睛了。

”睁开眼，白色的墙，白色的窗帘，白色的床单，白色的世界，刺眼的东西照得我直流眼泪。

穿白色制服的护士告诉我，那是阳光。

我微笑着，即使耀眼我也不愿闭上，那么美，那么美。

我看着慈祥的医生说：“早安。

”他也微笑着说：“早安，孩子。

”于是我拼命寻找母亲的身影，我多么想对她说早安母亲，可是医生说母亲送我到医院做手术时就离开了。

我奔跑着，清晨美丽的阳光照射着我直到我跑回家门口。

我的心咚咚直跳，每一次我都听得清清楚楚。

“吱呀”推开门的一刹，一个沧桑的老人正垂着头仔细的挑选着菜叶，那银白色的头发显得有些耀眼，每—根都刺在我的心里。

我说，早安，母亲。

她说，早安，孩子。

直到现在我都记得那大早上的阳光，早上的空气，早上的蓝天，早上的白云，还有我早上的母亲。

一切都在流年的岁月里，水一样的春愁，可唯独母亲的爱，早就在我出生的那—刻寄居在我心中，早早的，早早的。

高中英语期末复习概要写作记叙文专练(PDF版)

期末概要写作记叙文概要写作记叙文体的阅读材料，相比其他文体而言，写概要相对容易。

在写概要前，除明确文章主题外，还应抓住六个要素：when,where,who,what,why,how。

在这六个要素中，所占内容比重最大的是what。

练习1I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years ago.It was really a huge lake with beautiful scenery all around.People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eyes. Later on,unlike other girls,I volunteered to go water-skiing alone.I put on the life jacket,got on the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possible.The lake seemed broad and endless.I was so thrilled(激动)to enjoy my trip among the mountains and waters that I sped my motorboat.Then,after some time,I found myself in the middle of the endless lake.A sudden fear came around me.I didn’t know where I was or even how far I had gone from the shore.What was worse,it began to rain and it became very cold and foggy.I rode everywhere but couldn’t find my way back.It was useless for me to cry or shout for help.I was so terrified that I began to think about all kinds of horrible things.After floating on the water helplessly and hopelessly for a long time,suddenly I heard someone calling my name.Soon,a big steamboat sailed to me and they pulled me up to the deck and asked me if I was hurt.I couldn’t say a word but cried in my father’s arms.答案Once the writer was on a trip to a very big lake where she went water-skiing alone.（beginning）.6分She was excited and sped up,having a very good time,but soon she got lost.She was frighted and desperate（progress）.6分.Fortunately,her father finally came to her rescue.（ending）.6分（45words）练习2After her husband had gone to work,Mrs Richards sent her children to school and went upstairs to her bedroom.She was too excited to do any housework that morning,for in the evening she would be going to a fancy dress party with her husband.She intended to dress up as a ghost and as she had made her costume the night before,she was impatient to try it on.Though the costume consisted only of a sheet,it was very effective.After putting it on,Mrs Richards went downstairs.She wanted to find out whether it would be comfortable to wear.Just as Mrs Richards was entering the dining-room,there was a knock on the front door.She knew that it must be the baker.She had told him to come straight in if ever she failed to open the door and to leave the bread on the kitchen table.Not wanting to frighten the poor man,Mrs Richards quickly hid in the small store-room under the stairs.She heard the front door open and heavy footsteps in the hall.Suddenly the door of the store-room was opened and a man entered. Mrs Richards realized that it must be the man from the Electricity Board who had come to read the meter.She tried to explain the situation,saying'It's only me',but it was too late.The man let out a cry and jumped back several paces.When Mrs Richards walked towards him,he fled,slamming the door behind him.答案Mrs.Richards had dressed up as a ghost and was just going into the dining room when there was a knock on the door.Thinking it was the baker,she hid in the storeroom under the stairs.She heard footsteps in the hall and then the man from the Electricity Board opened the storeroomdoor.Though she wanted to give explanation.When she walked towards him,he fled,slamming the front door behind him.(79words)练习3Mary and her husband Dimitri lived in the tiny village of Perachora in southern Greece.One of Mary's prize possessions was a little white lamb which her husband had given her.She kept it tied to a tree in a field during the day and went to fetch it every evening.One evening,however, the lamb was missing.The rope had been cut,so it was obvious that the lamb had been stolen. When Dimitri came in from the fields,his wife told him what had happened.Dimitri at once set out to find the thief.He knew it would not prove difficult in such a small village.After telling several of his friends about the theft,Dimitri found out that his neighbour,Aleko,had suddenly acquired a new lamb.Dimitri immediately went to Aleko's house and angrily accused him of stealing the lamb.He told him he had better return it or he would call the police.Aleko denied taking it and led Dimitri into his back-yard.It was true that he had just bought a lamb,he explained,but his lamb was black. Ashamed of having acted so rashly,Dimitri apologized to Aleko for having accused him.While they were talking it began to rain and Dimitri stayed in Aleko's house until the rain stopped.When he went outside half an hour later,he was astonished to find that the little black lamb was almost white.Its wool,which had been dyed black,had been washed clean by the rain!答案When Dimitri came home,Mary told him that her white lamb had been stolen.On learning that his neighbour,Aleko,had acquired a lamb,Dimitri went to Aleko's house and accused him of stealing it.When Aleko showed his lamb,Dimitri saw it was black,so he apologized.After staying in Aleko's house for a while because it had begun to rain,Dimitri got a surprise outside when he found the lamb was almost white.It had been dyed black!(80words)练习4Last year my company was brought by a large corporation and most of the managers lost their jobs.That was when i decided to do something I’d always wanted to do-------become a freelance writer(自由作家）.Changing professions has meant that my lifestyle has changed in a number of ways.I work about as much as I did before-------between45and50hours a week---but my schedule is much less fixed than it used to be.Before,I worked from8am to5pm,everyday,with a few extra hours on weekends.Now,however,I work when I feel like it.For instance,sometimes I work until midnight or2.am,then sleep until noon.I really prefer this kind of schedule.While I was working as a manager,I never exercised.I already felt tired after work,so I just came home in the evening and watched TV.However,last year I joined a health club and began to do regular exercise.As a result I have lost over10pounds and I feel much better,I’ve also started to eat more healthfully.I used to eat a lot of fast food,but now I do my own shopping.I buy lots of fruits and vegetables and cook them at home.Of course,not all the changes have been that easy.For example,I don’t feel as safe financially as used to.When I was working as a manager.I never worried much about money.I could always count on getting my paycheck every two weeks.Working freelance,I don’t have a regular paycheck.So now I have to make sure that there’s enough money until the next check arrives.范文：After the author quit his previous job and became a freelance writer.Some changes his life. The work schedule became more flexible.He has also done more exercise and ate healthy.But he might not get regular wages.He found that the present lifestyle is suitable for him.练习5概要写作14The real kindness and generosityThis was an unforgettable and wonderful experience．It happened about three years ago and it has had a strong effect on me．I would like to show respect here for the man I do not know personally but whose actions gave a new meaning to the words—kind and generous．I was walking down a busy street on a cold,windy day in early winter.A homeless man, probably about60andwithout wearing any shoes,was begging for change on a street corner．A BMW car pulled up on the other side of the street and an executive（主管）who was perfectly dressed stepped out of the car．He was probably about60years old．He was wearing a blue business suit with a deep red silk tie．He walked directly across the street and over to the homeless man．Without saying anything,he first gave him a lot of money and then he sat down and took off his leather gloves,beautiful black leather shoes and his black dresssocks．Then he handed them to the homeless man．The homeless man took them and stared at him with an open mouth．As he drove off,I couldn’t help thinking that it was probably the first time he had pressed the pedal（踏板）of that top-brand BMW car with a bare foot!I stood there and the looks of astonishment appeared on my face and the homeless man’s．Two men of about the same age but very different lives had met and the one who was successful in materials had offered more than his shoes．He had left this BMW car and stepped down from his high position．He lifted up the other man when he offered respect,kindness and real generosity．参考答案：On a freezing winter day,a successful businessman of60happened to come across a poor beggar of the same age.He walked out of his BMW and gave the beggar a lot of money and even his own shoes and socks.As a witness,the author was as astonished as the beggar.This unforgettable experience taught the author the new meaning of kindness and generosity.(66 words)练习6Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly.I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items，I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman.She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience she had placed on me.But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change，ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands.When she asked if she had enough to buy a reusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.As I was watching him，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman，watching the employee count the change.I realized I hadn’t been inconvenienced at all.That my daughterwas instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this valuable lesson by a complete stranger.When the woman was finished，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience and kindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through the store trying to find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employee’s kindness and patience and how much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her，we left Target with a cart full of consumable items，but what is more，a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson.If you are ever in the Glendale Target，give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him.答案One day，the author with two children went to Target for shopping.(要点2)While waiting in line，she found an old lady was troublesome，but the young employee treated her patiently.(要点3)Seeing that，the author was touched by his kindness and patience and she thought her children would learn a lot from this experience.(要点4)练习7On a damp,boring,stay-in-the-house kind of day,I was a4-year-old artist armed with a new treasure:my own big box of crayons（蜡笔）.Somehow,the usual paper wasn’t special enough for these64perfect,sweet-smelling sticks of vivid color.I looked around for a bigger canvas（画布）. If only there were hidden walls.Walls like the ones in Mom and Dad’s closet.Slipping quietly down the hall to the bedroom,I stood on tiptoe to reach the string for the closet light.Words and images filled my mind faster than my hands could make them.A brilliant rainbow was seen on one wall,with a cheery golden sun peeking out from above. Below,a giant shade tree supported a swing for stick-figure children.Around them,flowers bloomed everywhere.My masterpiece!All my very own magic!I took in the walls,the colors and the brightness. Joy swelled inside me.But as my creativity wound down,a thought popped up:I’ve got to show Mom!Suddenly I was still.Mom called out,“Dinner’s ready.”After a short time,her footsteps approached,and then finally,the closet door opened.I stood nervously in the corner.Mom breathed in sharply,then stood frozen.Only her eyes moved as she slowly looked over my masterpiece.She was quiet for a long,long time.I didn’t dare breathe.Finally,she turned to me.“I like it,”she said.“No,I love it!I feel like I have a new closet!”Now,45years later,my childhood artwork is still there.And in my own house,the closet walls are masterpieces,too,created by my own daughters when they were little girls.Every time I open a closet door,I remember that,as big as that box of crayons and white walls seemed when I was little,my mother’s love was the biggest thing of all.【范文1】One day when I was little,I created a beautiful picture on the walls in parents’closet.Although satisfied with it,I couldn’t imagine mom’s reaction.Instead of criticizing me for ruining the closet, mom thought highly of my artwork.Now I understand how much she loves me and I do the same to my children to develop their creativity.A great many people are often willing to sacrifice higher to pay for the privilege of becoming white collar workers.This can give rise to curious situations,as it did in the case of Alfred Bloggs who worked as a dustman for the Ellesmere Corporation.When he got married,Alf was too embarrassed to say anything to his wife about his job.He simply told her that he worked for the Corporation.Every morning,he left home dressed in a smart black suit.He then changed into overalls(n.工作服)and spent the next eight hours as a dustman.Before returning home at night,he took a shower and changed back into his suit.Alf did this for over two years and his fellow dustmen kept his secret.Alf's wife has never discovered that she married a dustman and she never will,for Alf has just found another job.He will soon be working in an office as a junior clerk.He will be earning only half as much as he used to,but he feels that his rise in status is well worth the loss of money.From now on,he will wear a suit all day and others will call him'Mr.Bloggs',not'Alf'.答案Many people prefer to give up higher pay to become white collar workers,which may cause some curious situation like the dustman,Alfred Bloggs.When he got married,he lied to his wife saying he worked for a Corporation.He dressed in a suit every morning,and changed into overalls at work.At night he changed back into suit before going home.He won't be found out because he will be an office worker in future.专题限时集训(四)概要写作训练2A阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

高中英语概要写作(包含议论文,说明文,记叙文)

范例
People attach great importance to getting up early.
It
enables them to have a better memory, healthier bodies and better
preparation for the day.
If not, people will be busy doing
出各段的中心句和高频词以确定要点，再根据连词确定要点的主要和次要关系。最后根据抄写原文列出提纲。
议论文
概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic( 充满活力的 ) the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all.
everything. So insist on getting up early which is of great benefit to
all people.
一、写作指导说明文的概要写作一般有三种参考模板：（1）描写某事物的性质功能。即“对象+性质功能+利弊”：（in the passage ） the writer introduces… to us,especially its….,

概要写作之记叙文概括_Melody

was really happy indeed.
Then she took out her own savings and said,“Dad, I have $20 now. Can I buy an hour of your time? Please come home earlier tomorrow. I would like to have dinner with you.”
“Oh,” the little girl replied with her head down. Looking up, she
said, “Dad, may I borrow $10?”
The father became angry. “Go to bed right now! Think about how
she really didn’t ask for money very often. So he went to his daughter’s
room and gave her $10.
The little girl jumped from the bed. “Oh, thank you, Dad!” She
不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有 2 较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。
没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多 0-1 数的句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。
Revision: 文体的写作特点和框架。
记叙文：
5 factors (When/Where/Who/What/How)
参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

概要写作记叙文说明文范文和练习

概要写作记叙文、说明文范文及练习例（一）Mike is not a traditional explorer(探险者).Yet his job can体裁：记叙文sometimes be just as exciting and dangerous as being an explorer.Mike works for MSF,an organization also known as Doctors Without Borders(无国界医生).MSF sends trained doctors all over the Who,What–his jobworld to help people after a war or a disaster.Mike is a doctor fromFrance who has travelled to many plates to organize programs that help The review(评people.At the moment,there are27,000trained medical staff taking part in MSF tasks.The organization received the Nobel Peace Prize.All kinds of doctors can volunteer for MSF.They need to be prepared to go almost anywhere in the world and of course doctors with experience in tropical (热带)diseases are especially useful because most of MSF’s work is in Africa.When doctors completed a few tasks,they might be sent on an emergency task following a disaster such as an earthquake.But why would a doctor leave a comfortable life and a good salary to join MSF?According to Mike,the experience you gain is a great help in your career.Besides,just like the explorers of the past,you need to keep an open mind and learn to mix well with the people you meet.Most importantly,at the end of each task,you have made a real difference to people’s lives.价）of his jobWhat①What②What③whereWhy:记叙文注意抓住时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因及结果(why)，尤其是发生的事件。

概要写作优秀范文26篇(附重要考试题目)

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly.I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items，I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience she had placed on me.But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change，ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she asked if she had enough to buy a reusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.As I was watching him，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman，watching the employee count the chang e.I realized I hadn’t been inconvenienced at all.That my daughter was instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this valuable lesson by a complete stranger.When the woman was finished，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience and kindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through the store trying to find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employee’s kindness and patience a nd how much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her，we left Target with a cart full of consumable items，but what is more，a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson.If you are ever in the Glendale Target，give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】要写好记叙文的概要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案：(1)谁做了什么？(2)结果如何？如果是夹叙夹议文，还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。

记叙文作文(6篇)

记叙文作文(6篇)记叙文作文篇1今天，我兴致勃勃地翻开了童年的照片，自言自语道：“看看小时的我到今天有什么大转变？”翻着翻着，便看到：一张照片上，我开心地笑着，手上拎着根绳子，绳子上拴着只知了……不知不觉，我陷入了回忆。

依稀记得，那个夏天，我到山上奶奶家去避暑。

山上的景色美得耀眼，一蛇小溪，几盒茅屋，万卷书林……都是那儿的好风景。

山上的知了呢？更是闹得要命。

因为经受不住吵闹的诱惑，我把一只黑色的`大知了用细线绑了起来，把它当做风筝来放。

那时，我乐得要命，高兴地叫道：“哈哈！放风筝喽！”。

在我的眼里啊！知了拼命地飞啊飞，好像就是风筝执意要自己飞得老高。

我一边往前跑，一边愉快地想：谁叫你们这么吵，这么不听话呢？爸爸也一时兴起，帮我拍下了这张照片。

一次去外婆家。

外婆家在农村，农村那里的田地啊！种着各式各样的蔬菜，是一片绿色的海洋。

在这片绿色的海洋里，我和表姐悠闲地散着步。

突然，一条扭曲着身子的“海蛇”吸引了我的视线。

仔细看那“海蛇”，弄得我差点吐了一地，原来是一条蚯蚓。

蚯蚓左弯弯、右扭扭、前扑扑、后滑滑，好不恶心。

我不管三七二十一，一脚往它的身子中间剁了过去。

结果，蚯蚓不但没死，反而变成了两条。

嘿！怎么回事？当时还很小的我这样想。

我不灰心，继续使劲地剁，脸都红了。

这时，我气呼呼地，同时内心又带有兴味地叫道：“什么东西嘛！”便继续向前迈步。

想着想着，我的思绪又回到了照片上。

是啊！童年真快乐，怀念那！我心里想。

记叙文作文篇2故事的开头总是会回到遥远的七年前，在那年，我最最亲爱的妈妈让我懂得了分离。

直到今天，我都在想一个问题：“母爱不就是这个世界上最纯洁伟大的爱么？”可是，为什么我不这样觉得，很长一段时间，我都忘却不了我人生中那一个重要的角色。

我不得不承认，心里还记着她。

我挪步到客厅的电话前，把话筒拿起又放下，久久不敢打给她，告诉她我很想她，很爱她。

可是，我竟那么害怕。

经过思想斗争后，我拨了她的电话，居然正在通话中，看来她很忙啊。

叙事作文概括100字

叙事作文概括100字Once upon a time, in a small town, there was a young girl named Lily. She was a kind and compassionate girl who always helped others in need. One day, she came across a stray dog and decided to take it in. She named the dog Max and they became the best of friends.As time went by, Lily and Max's bond grew stronger. They would go on long walks in the park and play fetch for hours. Max became a loyal companion to Lily, always by her side through thick and thin. However, their happiness was short-lived when one day, Max fell ill.Lily was devastated to see her beloved pet in pain. She took him to the vet, but the news was not good. Max had a serious illness and the vet recommended a costly treatment. Lily was heartbroken as she did not have the means toafford the treatment. She felt helpless and desperate, not knowing what to do.Despite the odds, Lily was determined to save Max. She started a fundraiser in her community, sharing Max's story and pleading for help. To her surprise, the response was overwhelming. People from all over the town came forward to donate and support Max's treatment. Lily was touched by the kindness and generosity of strangers.With the funds raised, Max was able to undergo the treatment he needed. Lily was overjoyed to see her furry friend getting better each day. Their bond grew even stronger as they went through this ordeal together. Max's recovery was a testament to the power of love and compassion.The experience taught Lily the importance of never giving up and the impact of community support. She realized that even in the face of adversity, there is always hope. Max's survival was a miracle that brought the town together and showed the true meaning of friendship and empathy. Lily and Max's story became an inspiration for many, reminding everyone that love knows no bounds.。

记叙文概要写作

记叙文概要写作I.真题再现阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

[1] That cold January night, I was growing sick of my life in San Francisco. There Iwas, walking home at one in the morning after a tiring practice at the theatre. With opening night only a week away, I was still learning my lines. I was having trouble dealing with my part-time job at the bank and my acting at night at the same time. AsI walked, I thought seriously about giving up both acting and San Francisco. City lifehad become too much for me.[2] As I walked down empty streets under tall buildings, I felt very small and cold. Ibegan running, both to keep warm and to keep away from any possible robbers. Very few people were still out except a few sad-looking homeless people under blankets.[3] About a block from my apartment, I heard a sound behind me. I turned quickly,half expecting to see someone with a knife or a gun. The street was empty. All I saw was a shining streetlight. Still, the noise had made me nervous, so I started to run faster. Not until I reached my apartment building and unlocked the door did I realize what the noise had been. It had been my wallet falling to the sidewalk（人行道）.[4] Suddenly I wasn’t cold or tired anymor e. I ran out of the door and back to whereI’d heard the noise. Although I searched the sidewalk anxiously for fifteen minutes, my wallet was nowhere to be found.[5] Just as I was about to give up the search, I heard the garbage truck pull up to thesidewalk next to me. When a voice called from the inside, “Alisa Camacho?” I thought I was dreaming. How could this man know my name? The door opened, and out jumped a small red-haired man with an amused look in his eye. “Is this what you’re looking for?” he as ked, holding up a small square shape.[6] It was nearly 3 A.M. by the time I got into bed. I wouldn’t get much sleep thatnight, but I had gotten my wallet back. I also had gotten back some enjoyment of city life. I realized that the city couldn’t be a bad place as long as people were willing to help each other.Step 1: Read for text type and structure1)The text is a(n) narration（记叙文）.2)Structure:六要素：time, place, character, cause（起因）, process（经过） and outcome（结果）+主题（theme）Step 2: Find out the elements of the narrationOne cold January night, I was walking home, thinking about giving up both acting and her tiring life in San Francisco. To keep warm and to keep away from any possible robbers, I began running and didn’t realize my wallet had been lost until I got home.Therefore, I ran back but failed to find it. Just as I was about to give up the search, a garbage truck driver returned the wallet to me. Moved by this, I realized that the city couldn’t be a bad place as long as people are willing to help each other.Step 3: Restate/ rewrite to make it shorterOne cold January night, I was walking home, thinking about giving up both acting and her tiring life in San Francisco. To keep warm and to avoid any possible robbery, I began running and didn’t realize my wallet had been lost until I got home. Therefore,I ran back but failed to find it. Unexpectedly, a garbage truck driver returned it to me.Moved by this, I regain faith in city life and would probably stay on.Step 5: Check and reviseStep 6: Copy your draftII.实战演练I received a call today asking if I would be ready to bring food to a family in need.The mother was having a major operation and would be lying down for several weeks.Of course, I responded with an immediate “Yes!”. As I planned the meal in my head, I reflected on how many times over the years I had been asked to prepare food. I have done so countless times with a very open heart.But the truly amazing thing is that I have received double over the course of my life. When my mother passed away, our house was filled with fresh dinners for weeks.A woman from the church of our community stopped by each evening with some food.The gift of food was her small way of trying to relieve our pain.2Later in my life, when I was on bed rest during my pregnancy with twins, men of the church again stepped in to help. They arranged babysitting for my two-year-old daughter, and brought lovely dinners to our house. Even when I was put in the hospital, my husband would bring cooked meals to my hospital room. How we relied on these dinners to feed my tired husband and young daughter.Food is all about comfort. It feeds our bodies, but it can also feed our souls. When you hear people talking about their favorite holidays, it usually includes their feelings connected with sharing food. I know that I will have many more opportunities in my lifetime to prepare food for others. It is truly a gift I want to prepare and deliver to someone in need.参考答案：One day I received a call asking me to prepare food for a family in need. I was glad to do that. When her mother passed away and when she got pregnant, the church of her community brought food to her family, which was a great relief. That’s why when others were in need of help, I was pleased to lend a hand.3。

概要写作---记叙文

概要写作---记叙文
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分层文章内容
一、叙述方式
一、事情发展顺序（总括）起因（开端）经过结果（启示）
二、时间发展顺序（总括）时间1---事件1 时间2---事件2 时间N---事件N （总括）
【例1】
Tu Youyou has become the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize, for her work in helping to create an anti-malaria medicine. The 84-year-old's route to the honor has been anything but traditional. Tu Youyou started her malaria research after she was recruited to a top-secret government unit known as “mission 523”. In 1967, Communist leader Mao Zedong decided there was an urgent national need to find a cure for malaria. At the time, malaria spread by Vietnam. A secret research unit was formed to find a cure for the illness. Two years later, Tu Youyou was instructed to become the new head of Mission 523. She was dispatched to the southern Chinese island of Hainan to study how malaria threatened human health. Ancient Chinese texts inspired Tu Youyou's search for her Nobel-prize winning medicine. Mission 523 pored over ancient books to find historical methods of fighting malaria. When she started her search for an anti-malarial drug, over 240 000 compounds around the world had already been tested, without any success. Finally, the team found a brief reference to one substance, sweet wormwood, which had been used to treat malaria in China around 400 AD.