初中英语写作技巧指导公开课

During the winter holidays, It happened a lot of things.
a lot of things happened. One of the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother.
helping When my friends and me shopping in a shopping mall, we
practice
1._A_l_th_o_u_gh_/_th_o_u_gh_I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
2.He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _i_n_s_t_e.ad
3.We like doing kinds of sports _l_ik__e_ swimming, running and hiking.
__4_beautify
__2__collect materials __2_list an outline(提纲）
__3__build
__3_write
Free talk
English is the most widely used all over the world.We may used it when we…
Step2 list an outline to improve our writing
目前
Widely used,base
英语
language
Beginning
使用 情况
… useful
作用
important
How to
…
learn Body English
well
学英 语的 方法
Listen to English music Join an English club Keep an English diary …
2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, because of,so, therefore,as a result… 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but,
4._F_i_r_s_t, he stood up. Then he got out. n__e_x_t_, he went back. _F__in__a_ll_y_, he smiled.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法二:善用高级词汇
Which is better?
他们很早就到了。
中考专题复习课 Writing
Enjoy writing
---skills for writing
writing
25points
How to improve our writing skills?
教学目标
• 1 培养学生写作兴趣 • 2 提高学生写作能力 • A 基础稍差的学生学会写简单句 • B 中等生句子通顺、行文连惯。
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法三:活用多种句型
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.
B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she can’t carry the … D She is not old enough to carry the…
Put them in order
Writing articles is just like building houses
Building a house
Writing an article
__1__design the house __1_read topic carefully
__4__decorate
How to give advice Let me tell you my ideas/ways/opinion!
Here are my suggestions! Here is my advice!
How to give advice
If we want to improve listening We can listen to English music because music is fun and useful.
English ,base language,world’s airlines,International business
English has become the base language for world’s airlines and International business
welcome
I were shopping
saw a small girl cried in a corner. We asked what
in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, in a word, generally speaking, in
short…
practice
1. We should review the day’s lesson _b_e_c_a_u_s_e_ it help us learn easily. 2 .I_n__o_rd_e_r__to___improve reading, we can read more passages. 3. There are many ways to learn English F._o_r_e_x_a_m__p_l_e, We can listen to English music join an English club .Also,watching English movie is a good way. 4. Most students prefer to watch English movies,__H_o_w_e_v_e_r__,others like reading English Newspaper.
• 二档16—20分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构 和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。
• 三档11—15分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句 子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。
• 四档6—10 分 只包含了少数要点，语言表达不规范句子无条理 ，行文不连惯，语言错误严重，影响理解。
Brainstorm
Ways to learn English
Read English newspaper
Listen to
Keep an
English music English diary
join an Speak with English clubforeigners
Discuss the following ways of learning English in groups. and then give me your advice.(3’)
on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示列举: for example, such as,
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: first(ly), second(ly),then, next,
from then on, finally,at last, in the end; 9.表示目的: in order to, in order that, so as to, so that,
Ending 总结 In short/I think…
Step3 .writing . Time for writing
. Pair-correction:
1. Exchange your composition with your partner and correct the mistakes with your partner
Practice writing
英语是当今最广泛使用的语言，学好英语对 我们很重要。那么请以How to learn English well 为题，写一篇文章：
内容包括： 1.目前英语使用情况（作用） 2.有什么学英语的好方 法（至少列举三个 ） 3.字数：80字左右
Step1 read and find the key words
少量错误。 • C 优生学会应用丰富的语言结构
和词汇、语法正确。
Let’s share some pictures
Brainstorm
How can we build a beautiful house?
Building a house Put them in order __1__design the house __4__decorate __2__collect materials __3__build
English is so usefuFra Baidu bibliotek and important
for us that we should learn it well
Could you give me some advice on how to learn English well?
I say ! You say !
Everybody say !
2. Write your compositions again after the
corrections. Later, hand in your compositions to me.
How to get good grades?
中考英语作文评分标准
• 一档21—25 分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词 汇、准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连惯、表达清楚，具有 较强的语言运用能力（从句，短语等）。
• 五档1—5 分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言 错误多。
Step4 . Correct mistakes Language mistakes in writing
Check and correct this article.(10)
The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.
In order to speak English well, we can join an English club.
connection words 关联词
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;
Preview(预习）,take notes, review（复习） Read a passage and retell. Join the English club. Read a good English newspaper Study grammar Speak with foreigners Keep an English diary
A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.
我们应该保护环境。
A We should protect the environment. B It’s our duty to protect the environment.
How to give advice
In order to speak English well,we can join an English club.
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:妙用关联词
connection words(连接词）
If we want to improve listening We can listen to English music because music is fun and useful.