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WRITING
Task 2 写作
(一)写作要求与题目分类
Writing process
Planning
Outlining
writing
Revising
5 minutes
30 minutes
5 minutes
3
Writing process
5 minutes
How can I introduce my topic
---(动笔前3分钟你该做的事)
You should spend one or two minutes thinking carefully about the topic.People often fail to do as well as they should do in the essay writing because they do not think of this problem before beginning to write. Remember that a few minutes spent doing this could potentially improve your score by one band.
-----引自IELTS观摩会考官
(1) Task 2审题步骤
A 找对象词和性质词，进行题目解构 B 判断题型
A 找关键词，区分对象词和性质词。
a 通读题目，了解大意
第一句:背景介绍,
题目构成: 1+2+3
可有可无
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.
C 进行题目信息解构
题目构成: 1+2+3 In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience ,important for learning and taking responsibility.What are your opinion on this? (Cambridge3)
对象词: children are engaged in some kind of paid work
性质词：wrong ----valuable / important
© MA JINFENG 2009
4
2. Writing process
30 minutes
Planning
Outlining
writing
Revising
论证充分 注意段落间
衔接
Introduction
Body Conclusion
选明立场 亮明观点
简要总结 观点重申
© MA JINFENG 2009
论述政府介入健康生活方式的优/缺点
• * 单一对象词/双重/多重对象词
• 7.I.3 (A) What are the reasons for the loss of a variety of languages and cultures?
• 7.I. 7 (A) Will the popularity of English and tourism harm the minorities and minor languages?
有人认为孩子应该遵守家长和老师定下的规矩, 而另外一些人这样对孩子的未来发展不利.你 的看法是?
论述遵守规矩的优/缺点
• 老年人常常抱有对生活的许多看法, 而现在有些人 认为这些看法对现在的年轻人适应现代生活已经 没有用了. 你在多大程度上同意这种观点?
论述听老年人意见的优/缺点
• 有些人认为政府在确保人民拥有健康的生活方式 上具有责任. 但是另一些人却觉得人民在这个问题 上应该享有自主决定的权利. 讨论这两种观点, 然 后给出你自己的看法.
5
Writing process
5 minutes
Planning
Outlining
Drafting
Revising
Grammar
Punctuation
Mechanics (Spelling)
© MA JINFENG 2009
6
(二)写作流程 1 写作准备 2 写作过程 3 成文后的检查
(二)写作流程 1 写作准备: 审题 +结构+思路(写提纲)
Some people regard this as completely wrong,while others consider
it as valuable work experience ,important for learning and taking
responsibility.What are your opinion on this? (C3)
• 2.13 (A) More and more people work and study from home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?
and thesis?
Planning
Outlining
Drafting
Revising
Brainstorming relevant facts and ideas
Filtering and re-arranging facts and ideas (Formulating topics sentences & examples)
第二句:出现议论, 万分重要
第三句:写作指令句
Leabharlann Baidu ★找关键词
• 话题(topic), 即(2)句包含的客观对象与主观评论的集合
• (1)对象词：客观对象
物质名词
• (2)性质词：主观评论 原因 优劣 重要性
•
4.19 (A) Some people claim that the disadvantages of the cars are more than the advantages. Do you agree or disagree?
Task 2 写作
(一)写作要求与题目分类
Writing process
Planning
Outlining
writing
Revising
5 minutes
30 minutes
5 minutes
3
Writing process
5 minutes
How can I introduce my topic
---(动笔前3分钟你该做的事)
You should spend one or two minutes thinking carefully about the topic.People often fail to do as well as they should do in the essay writing because they do not think of this problem before beginning to write. Remember that a few minutes spent doing this could potentially improve your score by one band.
-----引自IELTS观摩会考官
(1) Task 2审题步骤
A 找对象词和性质词，进行题目解构 B 判断题型
A 找关键词，区分对象词和性质词。
a 通读题目，了解大意
第一句:背景介绍,
题目构成: 1+2+3
可有可无
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.
C 进行题目信息解构
题目构成: 1+2+3 In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience ,important for learning and taking responsibility.What are your opinion on this? (Cambridge3)
对象词: children are engaged in some kind of paid work
性质词：wrong ----valuable / important
© MA JINFENG 2009
4
2. Writing process
30 minutes
Planning
Outlining
writing
Revising
论证充分 注意段落间
衔接
Introduction
Body Conclusion
选明立场 亮明观点
简要总结 观点重申
© MA JINFENG 2009
论述政府介入健康生活方式的优/缺点
• * 单一对象词/双重/多重对象词
• 7.I.3 (A) What are the reasons for the loss of a variety of languages and cultures?
• 7.I. 7 (A) Will the popularity of English and tourism harm the minorities and minor languages?
有人认为孩子应该遵守家长和老师定下的规矩, 而另外一些人这样对孩子的未来发展不利.你 的看法是?
论述遵守规矩的优/缺点
• 老年人常常抱有对生活的许多看法, 而现在有些人 认为这些看法对现在的年轻人适应现代生活已经 没有用了. 你在多大程度上同意这种观点?
论述听老年人意见的优/缺点
• 有些人认为政府在确保人民拥有健康的生活方式 上具有责任. 但是另一些人却觉得人民在这个问题 上应该享有自主决定的权利. 讨论这两种观点, 然 后给出你自己的看法.
5
Writing process
5 minutes
Planning
Outlining
Drafting
Revising
Grammar
Punctuation
Mechanics (Spelling)
© MA JINFENG 2009
6
(二)写作流程 1 写作准备 2 写作过程 3 成文后的检查
(二)写作流程 1 写作准备: 审题 +结构+思路(写提纲)
Some people regard this as completely wrong,while others consider
it as valuable work experience ,important for learning and taking
responsibility.What are your opinion on this? (C3)
• 2.13 (A) More and more people work and study from home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?
and thesis?
Planning
Outlining
Drafting
Revising
Brainstorming relevant facts and ideas
Filtering and re-arranging facts and ideas (Formulating topics sentences & examples)
第二句:出现议论, 万分重要
第三句:写作指令句
Leabharlann Baidu ★找关键词
• 话题(topic), 即(2)句包含的客观对象与主观评论的集合
• (1)对象词：客观对象
物质名词
• (2)性质词：主观评论 原因 优劣 重要性
•
4.19 (A) Some people claim that the disadvantages of the cars are more than the advantages. Do you agree or disagree?