12月10日托福写作答案解析

12月10日托福写作答案解析

综合写作】

关于加拿大一种当地语言的保护。阅读说了几个影响语言消失的factor，听力反驳。

阅读文章：

1. 根据一个survey,当地十六岁以下才有百分之二十的人说当地话，而且在减少。

2. 当地渔业为了实现国际化，只说international话，比如说像English这种语言。因此，父母不鼓励孩子学当地话。

3. 电视和电台大部分都是用English和French播的，这对年轻人影响比较大的。所以也造成这种语言的后继无人。

听力文章：

1. 阅读中survey的数据不准确，实际收据比这个要多。因为survey 只是针对traditional的当地话，而年轻人说的也是当地话，只不过比较modern。

2. 听力说及时发展渔业也还是需要和local交易的。而local人只说当地话，所以在工作中说当地话也很重要，父母们也意识到了，开始让孩子们学。

3. 听力说确实电视和电台是这样的，但是网络媒体并不这样，人家大部分还是用native language的，而且听众也挺多的。

【独立写作】

Which option do you prefer? Travel to foreign countries when you are young than when you are older. Give specific reasons or examples to support your decision.

题目解析：

这道题算是一道老题，和今年5月29日那场考试的题目(It is better to take risks and explore new things when you are older than when you are young.)极其类似。并且，也呼应了2015年北美考场的真题。所以，部分同学对此可能并不陌生。

写作思路解析：

选择年轻时旅行

1. 丰富生活

列出细节(the Golden Gate Bridge ，The Pyramids and The Louvre)具体描绘世界之五彩缤纷。拿书本所学和实际经历对比，感叹纸上得来终觉浅。拿年轻实现旅行梦想和年老后悔对比，鼓励年轻人尽早行动。

2. 对未来有帮助

一是能在旅行中经历困难，解决困难。二是交到更多朋友，培养同理心，看问题更多深刻。

3. 让步段：老年人虽然更有时间和金钱，但是旅行应趁早，可以提前体验到生活的多彩，而且老了身体可能还不好就会错过。

Globalization has made the world become smaller and the people from all over the world become closer. Many people show a desire to experience different natural and cultural environment in foreign countries. Traveling is usually their first choice. Although the cost may be high for the young, from my perspective, traveling to foreign countries in youth is better than at old age.

To begin with, the young are going to obtain a richer life through traveling to foreign countries. The world is a stunning place, full of treasures for people to explore. Although the young may learn the magnificence of The Pyramids and The Louvre in books, their impression of them are just limited to pictures and verbal descriptions. Only when the young visit these places in person will the sites become part of their lives. If one wants to ride a bicycle across the Golden Gate Bridge in youth, but he fails to achieve the dream, he will live in regret for the rest of his life. On the contrary, if he achieves it, he will have many proud moments when he looks back on his life.

their future careers and studies. The charm of traveling lies in its unexpected adventures. The young may encounter all kinds of difficulties, but anything is possible as long as they have confidence and wills. Traveling to different countries will force the young to care for issues that are bigger than those in their daily lives. Compassion and love will arise in the heart of the young for the pain and suffering experienced by others. Deep and consistent connections may be created with those new friends who they meet during traveling. Along with the new friends during the trip, the young can listen to the sour, sweet, bitter or hot stories, talk to people with different personalities and acquire insights on their own lives.

Granted, some people may argue that young people usually lack money and they are supposed to work hard. Retirement period is a good time to travel to foreign countries, because the senior could usually afford both the time and money. However, it’s worthwhile to invest money and sacrifice time into tasting various aspects of life in the world as early as possible.

In conclusion, it is highly rewarding to travel in foreign countries in youth and it is better to start earlier, for people won’t always be young. Instead of regretting at old ages due to poor physical conditions, it is better to travel in youth.

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