雅思考试A类大作文范文

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2013.9.7雅思考试A类大作文范文

题目:Nuclear energy is better than other resources in meeting ever-increasing needs of the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

津桥国际学院雅思写作范文:

第一段:社会背景描述+正向观点+自己观点

Nowadays, on account of increasingly serious environmental pollution and gradual depletion of fossil fuels, nuclear energy which should be based on safety remains one of the major choices for most countries in tackling the global energy shortage and climate change. Therefore, some individuals are convinced that nuclear energy to be given foremost consideration can meet ever-increasing demand of humans toward energy. After serious consideration, I deem it is not only conducive to sound development of environment for mankind, but to maintaining social stability and harmony. .

第二段:支持观点

论点:核能利于人类生存环境+反向例证:矿物燃料危害+结论:核能势必优先发展

To begin with, nuclear energy utilized in reasonable and effective way plays an active role in promoting the benignant and sustainable development of survival environment of human beings. For example, utilizing the nuclear energy is a valid way to greatly eliminate deteriorating environmental situation triggered by the excessive use of fossil fuel, because fossil fuel can conduce to global warming that triggers a series of issues including melting glaciers and sea-level rise. Besides the global sea-level rise can directly submerge the coastal lowland areas with dense population, and developed industries and agriculture. Therefore, nuclear power is bound the preferred way to replace the traditional energy resources.

第三段:支持观点

论点:核能有利于社会和谐稳定+反向例证:石油资源导致区域冲突与不稳定+结论:核能有效规避此问题In addition, reasonable development and utilization of nuclear energy can be the energetic motivation to maintain stability and harmony of the society. Namely that United States waging war toward Iraq was intended to seize the plentiful oil resources in the Middle East, which imposed great regional conflicts and made Iraqi people suffer from irretrievable pain. Furthermore, suppressing European oil resources and crippling the European economy by the means of United States getting the command of oil resources in the Middle East gave rise to conflicts and instability between European countries. However,Utilizing and popularizing nuclear power adequately can effectively evade the series of issues evoked by seizing the energy sources .

第四段:让步段

另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳

另一种观点:核能带来致命危害+和平隐患对此反驳:双边多边合作解决此问题+核能与社会经济发展紧密

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Admittedly, radioactivity of nuclear power can bring about the fatal detriment, such as the Nuclear leak of Fukushima Nuclear Power Station. Besides, it also generates hidden dangers toward World Peace, such as nuclear issue in Iran and North Korean. However, multilateral and bilateral cooperation utilized by various countries can adequately share the precious experience, communicate information and enforce the law to tackle the relevant issues. Besides, to tackle the climate change, nuclear industry, especially in 21 century, is bound to maintain vibrant momentum of development and get more closely related to economic and social development of countries around the world.

第五段:总结段:总结观点+建议/倡导

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