基础写作――句子整合(精华).ppt.Convertor

写作基础――信息整合（精华）高考作文, 特别是基础写作, 提供的信息点多, 但句数有限, 熟练掌握以下四种整合信息的方法非常重要。

用介词短语合并句子有两种情况我们常常可以用到：(1)介词短语作定语, (2)介词短语作状语。

[典型例题] 用介词短语将下列句子合并成一句。

(1) Waste water is making the river worse and worse.(2) The waste water is from a factory.(3) The factory lies on the river.合并：Waste water from the factory on the river is making the river worse and worse.[课堂练习] 用介词短语合并每一组句子, 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。

1. Xiaxi Town is not big but beautiful. It has an area of about 8 square kilometers.2. There is an old tower there. The tower lies in the east of the town. There is a river behind the tower.3. (此题用并列结构合并) The sun rising from the river was very beautiful. Yesterday we took a bus there to visit the tower.4. We started early. We wanted to enjoy the sunrise on the top of the tower.5. As soon as we got there, we began to take photos.Xiaxi Town, with an area of about 8 square kilometers, is not big but beautiful. In the east of the town lies an old tower, behind which there is a river. The sun rising from the river was very beautiful, and we took a bus there to visit the tower yesterday. We started early for the purpose of enjoying the sunrise on the top of the tower. On arriving there, we began to take photos.课堂练习[课外作业] 用介词短语合并每一组句子, 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。

1. A professor gave us a talk this morning.He came from Beijing University. He talked about how to learn English well.2. He told us of his own interesting experiences of learning English. We laughed a lot.3. His talk lasted an hour. He asked us some questions.4. His talk was vivid and instructive. I learned a lot from his talk.5. I went back home. I decided to work hard at English.A professor from Beijing University gave us a talk on how to learn English well this morning. On hearing his own interesting experiences of learning English, we laughed a lot. During the one-hour talk, he asked us some questions. I learned a lot from his vivid and instructive talk. On my way back home, I decided to work hard at English. 课外作业在写作中, 正确使用非谓语动词, 无疑为文章增色不少。

非谓语动词包括不定式、现在分词和过去分词。

使用时应注意以下几点：(1) 不定式的动作发生在谓语动词之后(一般情况下, 尽量用不定式的主动式)。

(2)现在分词表主动, 该动作与谓语动词的动作同时发生或紧接着发生。

(3)过去分词表被动, 或表示该动词的动作在谓语动词的动作之前发生, 或没有时间性。

(4)现在分词的被动式表被动, 与谓语动词的动作同时发生。

[典型例题] 用非谓语动词将以下各组句子分别合成一句话。

1. (1)He looked up.(2) He saw a bird in the tree.用不定式合并：He looked up to see a bird in the tree.2. (1) I don’t like the man.(2) The man is wearing a pair of dark glasses.用现在分词合并：I don’t like the man wearing a pairof dark glasses.3. (1) The temple is visited by thousands of people every year.(2) It was built 1, 000 years ago.用过去分词合并：The temple, built 1, 000 years ago, is visited by thousands of people.[课堂练习] 用非谓语动词合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。

1. I’m writing to you. I want to express my sincere thanks to Good Man.2. Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car. I was walking on the road at that time.3. I was seriously injured. I couldn’t standup.4. Mr. Li saw what had happened to me.He stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital.5. I don’t know his name. I call him Good Man.I’m writing to you to express my sincere thanks to Good Man. Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car while walking on the road. Seriously injured, I couldn’t stand up. Luckily, a man stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital when seeing what had happened to me. Not knowing his name, I call him Good Man.课堂练习[课外作业] 用非谓语动词合并每一组句子, 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。

1. On the morning of last Sunday I went to the park. I wanted to take a walk there.2. After one hour’s walk, I got tired and sat down on a stone by the road. I wanted to have a rest.3. Suddenly I saw an ant. She was trying hard to move another ant who was dead.4. She failed many times. She managed to carry him away.5. I saw that little creatures also have sincere love as human beings. I was greatly moved.在写作中, 我们运用并列连词合并句子是最常用的手段。

常用的并列连词有and, but, or, nor, so，yet，for,as well as, both...and, not only... but(also), either... or, neither...nor, (and) then, since等。

[典型例句] 用并列连词合并下列各组句子。

1. (1) He is a friend in word.(2) He is a friend in deed; too.用as well as合并：He is a friend in word as well as in deed.2. (1)I know her.(2)I am her best friend.用not only...but also合并：Not only do I know her, but(also)I am her best friend.[课堂练习] 用并列连词合并每一组句子, 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。

1. Nowadays, a lot of attention is focused on education. The fact that many childrenfrom migrant workers’ families have dropped out of school is ignored.2. These children are wandering in the streets and other public places. Some of them commit crimes, such as theft and robbery.3. The government should be aware of the importance of providing education for all the children. The average people should be aware of the importance, too.4. Children from native families can enjoy good education. I hope children from peasant workers’ families can also enjoy good education.5. Children from peasant workers’ family are part of our society. They will also play an important role in building our country in the future.Nowadays, a lot of attention is focused on education, yet the fact that many children from migrant workers’ families have dropped out of school is ignored. These children are wandering in the streets and other public places, and some of them even commit crimes, such as theft and robbery.课堂练习The government, as well as the average people should be aware of the importanceof providing education for all the children. I hope children not only from native families but also from peasant-workers’ families can enjoy good education. Children from migrant workers’ families are part of our society,and they will also play an important rolein building our country in the future.[课外作业] 用并列连词合并每一组句子, 然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。