雅思精讲写作班精讲班第1讲讲义
雅思英语写作
雅思基础写作精讲班第1讲讲义基础写作基本框架Procedure of writing:How to distribute the time of 40 minutes一、议论文真题类型分类：练习题目：1. Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree?2. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?3. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.4. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.5. Scientific and technological advances have changed our lives. But some scientists in some fields say that scientists are not able to find solutions to the problems they havecreated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6. Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used. They can do many things that used to be done by human. Discuss the benefits and dangers.7. In order to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution, government is determined to raise the price of petrol. Do you believe it isthe best way? What other methods can you recommend?确定关键词Procedure of writing:How to distribute the time of 40 minutes一、议论文真题类型分类：练习题目：1. Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree?2. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?3. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.4. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug useby young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.5. Scientific and technological advances have changed our lives. But some scientists in some fields say that scientists are not able to find solutions to the problems they have created. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6. Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used. They can do many things that used to be done by human. Discuss the benefits and dangers.7. In order to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution, government is determined to raise the price of petrol. Do you believe it is the best way? What other methods can you recommend?雅思基础写作精讲班第2讲讲义07年真题回顾2. 真题思路扩展brainstorming（1）specific: I. from abstract to personal: air travel, oneself study—group study, fast food-traditional food （2）general: economy, environment, efficiency, safety, pleasure, science and technology避开主题句错误类型3. 确定主题句：ascertain topic sentencesI. Some mistakes of the thesis statement or topic sentences:（1）The subject of this paper will be my parents.（2）My parents have been the most influential people in my life.（3）My parents had only one child.（4）My parents helped me grow in important ways, although in other respects I was limited.4. 开始动笔写作：1. format: block,2. pencil3. handwriting: clean and clear4. time control: 34m5. 装饰和改错：decoration and correction（1）After I cashed my paycheck. I treated myself to dinner.（2）The instructor told everyone in the room to be quiet his favorite show was on.（3）How you react to the incident reveal what side you stand on.（4）The crowd has surged forward, showing their excitement.（5）There are more and more people go abroad nowadays.（6）The student who had sat down quickly put on the headphones. 雅思基础写作精讲班第3讲讲义必备模板第二种模板形式(五段式）雅思基础写作精讲班第4讲讲义Mixed typesMethod:Successful introduction:1. “Knowledge is power,” wrote Francis Bacon long ago.Today college students are hard at study to acquire all kinds of skills, such as English, computer, and driving.People, however, cannot reach a general consensus on what subjects should be attached more importance to,academic or practical.( academic subjects Vs. practical subjects) (As the old saying goes)Art is long, life isshort;(Rudyard Kipling wrote) East is east, and West is west, and never the twain shall meet!; Experience is the father of wisdom and memory the mother; Knowledge isa treasure, but practice is the key to it; Knowledgeadvances by steps, not by leaps; Great works areperformed not by strength but by perseverance; Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.2. What can be done to solve the problem of watershortage? Surely, modern people frequently are plagued with this question. As for me, there are three methods as followings.（the problem of water shortage）3. Is the history of no avail to modern society? Recentdiscussions concerning the function of history haveraised some very real doubts in the minds ofcontemporary people. As far as I am concerned, we can benefit a lot form the past.(whether history is useful to cotemporary society)4. A recent survey reports that there were about one thirdof college graduates who could not find an ideal job in2005. This fact prompts us to make a thorough analysis of the root reason of this alarming phenomenon.(theissue of unemployment of graduates)5. It is generally agreed that the main responsibility ofteachers is to pass on knowledge to students. As a result, if students can do well in academic subjects, theirteachers are qualified enough. However, I assert thatassisting students in distinguishing right from wrong is more significant for teachers.(the relationship between students and teachers)6. With the development of computer technology, books, asa traditional medium, are more and more challenged.Many libraries are faced with such a dilemma, whether they should invest on computers or on books. With every aspect taken into consideration, I believe that to invest on computers would be a better choice.(investment inbooks or computers for a library)Successful body:1. One main reason for water shortage is lack of theawareness of water conservation. For example, moreoften than not we can come across such a phenomenon that a person turns a faucet on and forgets to turn it off.Precious water has been totally squandered. （theproblem of water shortage）2. Smoking should be banned without any hesitation for it israther detrimental to people’s health. Cigarette smokecontains nicotine, several cancer producing or irritatingsubstances and carbon monoxide gas. Damage to the lining of the bronchial tubes is much more among cigarettesmokers than non smokers, even when there is no obvious disease. Some of these changes are considered to bepre-cancerous. Lung function is generally reduced among cigarette smokers. Cigarette smoking is a greater hazard than other factors---such as community air pollution—in the causation of lung cancer and chronic bronchitis.(nosmoking)3 Due to great strides of modern technology, dramatictransformations have taken place in our life. In the past, if we were anxious to contact friends, we had to drop in on them in person, which was inconvenient andtime-consuming. Now, fashionable cell phones can be an efficient bridge between acquaintances.(the benefit of modern technology)4. There are a lot of benefits of raising dogs. First, dogscontribute to the health of their owners. Often theirdemands for walks and play improve their owner’sexercise routine. In fact, statistics show that dog owners get more regular exercise than non-dog owners do. Also, they enhance health simply be being around to bepetted. Second, they provide a means for parents toteach their children responsibility. When parents givechildren a dog, they provide them the opportunity tofulfill the responsibilities of walking, feeding, and caring for its other needs. Finally and most important of all,dogs enhance the well-being and emotional stability of families. Older people who live alone especially rely on dogs to give them enjoyment and company. Childrenalso find a great deal of comfort in their dogs. As anexample, a family dog helps a little boy adapt when his mother leaves him with a sitter and goes towork..(advantage of keeping pets)5.lot of advantages. Firstly, after three or four years ofschooling, students can undoubtedly acquire valuableexpertise, which is essential to their future jobs. As weknow, through compulsory and optional courses,students lay a solid foundation in a particular field andare confident to solve the relevant problemsconfronted.(benefits of college education)6. By contrast, the opponents argue that its drawbacksshould not be ignored. For one thing, some existingmajors are so out of date that they serve no purpose for the future job. In such a dilemma, there is no doubt that graduation means exactly unemployment. If whatstudents learn in colleges is only theoreticalargumentation definitely unconnected with reality, what is the point in wasting such prime time? (drawbacks of college education)Successful conclusion:1. The extinction of species, the shortage of lumber anddrug ingredients, the reduction of oxygen and theincrease of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere all signal that we cannot afford to lose any moreforests.(protection of forests)2. To stop losing more forests, we should educate people,especially those who have destroyed and who are going to destroy forests for one reason or another, in why forestsmust exist on the earth. (protection of forests)雅思基础写作精讲班第5讲讲义写作的素材素材Topics:1. If a five-year old commits a crime, should his/her parents have the responsibility and are punished? What is the age of a child when parents no longer bear the responsibility for children's behavior? /Unlike other countries, police in UK donot carry guns. Some think it leaves citizen unprotected, while others think it reduces the overall violence in our society. Discuss both the views.2. We know that university graduates should earn higher salary than less well-educated members, so in this way they should pay all the full cost. /Quality of people that we need in our society can’t be learned in universities and other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?3. International tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/ Government should build new buildings in a traditional way in order to protect traditional culture.4. The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? / Billions of money is spent on the space research. Some people say that it should be spent on improving the living standard of the people on the earth. Do you agree or disagree?5. Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection is a waste of resource. Agree or disagree? /Some people think killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary and some people think is essential for dairy diet. To what extent what do you think about the both issues?6. Nowadays motorized flight is considered as the most important and influential invention in the world. Not any other invention has such a significant impact on our lives. Agree?/ Maintaining public library is a waste of money, because computer technology has already replaced its function. Do you agree or disagree?7. Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories with their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/ The environmental problem is so serious to most countries and individuals that it needs the international cooperation. Do you agree or disagree?8. Mass media have a significant influence on our life and this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?/ Do thenegative effects of some international media such as TV and magazine for example overweigh the positive effects?Topic Word:I.1. society: Society is flooded with unhealthy substance in the mass media, such as violence and pornography, therefore having inevitably downside effect on people, Citizens are preoccupied by money worship to make profits by hook or by crook; parents never discipline children strictly, divorce rate rockets, children are in need of solicitude, youngsters fall victim to prevalent domestic violence and are prone to aggressive impulse; students are heavily encumbered by knowledge acquisition, psychological education has been neglected, confronted with frustration, children have no efficient outlet to alleviate stress.素材（2）犯罪处罚2. Government should mount a crackdown on crime and bring criminals to justice, the aim is to reform those who have gone astray, offenders can turn over a new leaf and are endowed withproficiency in a particular line, inferiority complex and psychological shadow should be avoided, delinquents harbor vengeful sentiments against others and society as a whole, lawbreakers resume committing crimes or committing suicide.II.1. students can acquire academic qualification, learners can develop expertise, pupils have practical ability to apply what they have learned to society; campus and dormitory life instill discipline into students, living together can cultivate cooperation and strengthen the skill of interpersonal relationship, learners get tolerant of others, schooling can help students tell right from wrong2. course framework ought to be more flexible, such as more optional subjects rather than compulsory ones, interests can be aroused, subjects are practical and related to future jobs, learners should be more motivated, they have convenient access to relevant information of majors.III.1. advantage: cultures are mutually beneficial, theycan pool and share resources, the platform of exchange of ideas will assist diverse countries in comprehending actual state of affairs of distinct cultures, globalization will facilitate mutual understanding and dispel misunderstanding; disadvantage: the conflict between mainstream and marginal cultures will result in lesser-known cultures on the verge of extinction, the world is turned into a similar and monotonous entity.2. tradition is precious and unique, it symbolizes identity of a nation, people in the homeland are bristled with pride, for example, Forbidden City, fantastic buildings witness resplendent culture of feudalism, the Bastille, time-honored prison appreciates glorious history of French Revolution; peaceful coexistence between tradition and modernity should be guaranteed, tradition serves as places of tourist interests and boost the development of economy, we can invest money in the conservation of tradition and promote the education of protecting tradition.雅思基础写作精讲班第6讲讲义第四大主题1. the ultimate purpose of government is to serve the people, dispelling adverse substance is the obligation, authority should make overall planning and give consideration to the interests of all sides in adopting policies, it can exercise executive power if necessary.V.1. animals are in an unfavorable situation, they are entitled to the right of subsistence and deserve impartial treatment, it is unjustifiable to expropriate the right of living,2. humans enjoy the right of priority, in medical field, human beings can carry out clinical experiment on laboratory animals, they can achieve breakthrough in medical treatment, vivisection is justifiable.3. a reciprocal relationship is strongly recommended, equilibrium in biosphere and harmonious development can be beneficial to each other, they are indispensable to each other,1. white-hot technology transforms the life of drudgery into a convenient and comfortable one, entertainment at a finger’s click is not beyond our wildest dream, the means of communications, traffic, and information have been changed dramatically, humans are more confident about the future2. people adhere to hedonist philosophy and become indolent, declined ability is accompanying the progress; humans are heavily dependent on modern science, they become alienated, environment falls victim to advance of science and technology, environmental pollution has been aggravated.素材7VII.1. modern society are flooded with one-off products, such as chopsticks, shopping bags, and purified water bottles, some of them are non-biodegradable, industry, fossil fuel in industrial development is widely applied, petrol, coal, gas, the increase of carbon dioxide leads to global warming and air pollution, it will deplete ozone layer, farming, fertilizer andpesticide give rise to erosion of soil.2. government should pursue strict policy and popularize biodegradable packaging, coordination should be ensured among various countries, education will fire the masses with enthusiasm for environmental protection.VIII.1. Readers are thoroughly informed of current affairs, they can have access to up-to-date information and enjoy the right to know the truth, the freedom of speech will be guaranteed.2. Because of lack of professional ethics, shameless and unscrupulous journalists always carry gloomy news, such as murder, to promote circulation, paparazzo(singular), hordes of paparazzi(plural), invade privacy, chequebook journalism leads to sham news, the mass media follow the fashion and pander to the low taste, it encourages vulgar interests雅思基础写作精讲班第7讲讲义写作中必备的词汇和句式词汇和句式：第一:1.appalling/drug-related/commit/tackle crime, turn to crime: bored youngsters turn to crime. hardened criminal, teach criminals salutary lessons, unwilling victims, fall victim to,2.decent education, enter higher education, education authority, education resources, encyclopedic knowledge, broaden knowledge,3. alien/indigenous/dominant/mainstream culture, assimilate the culture, experience culture shock, a mutual exchange of ideas, facilitate communication, eco-friendly tourismernment agency/backing, guarantee equality, maximize efficiency, supplement meagre income,5.prove medically beneficial for human beings, endangered animals, laboratory animals, slaughter animals,6. white-hot technology, communication/telecommunications technology, treat the world with difference,7. safeguard the environment, damage the environment, environment issues/protection, pollution of the environment, fragile balance, sit in traffic jam, strike a balance8.tabloid journalism, fashion/literary/science journalism, the world of journalism, information bombard, create serious disturbance to people, accurate information, misleading advertisements, classified advertisements,第二：1. give rise to/lead to/arouse a heated discussion/perplexity; when it comes to.., it is commonly believed that…; one indisputable fact is that….;it goes without saying that…; it cannot be denied that…; recently, …has been brought into focus; with the rapid of development of…, …has gained an ever-increasing popularity in modern people’s life;…..is not strange to modern people.I assert…; in my opinion…; what I emphasize is that…;2. the reasons are multiple, it is manifest that…., it is conceded that…, in other words, that is to say, for example.3. from what has been discussed above…, taking into account all the points.., from the above-mentioned facts,.. I am convinced that..第四种词汇第三：alarming issue/ thorny problem, crucial reason/contributing factor, profound impact/ disruptive influence, charismatic culture/ time-honored tradition, beneficialinterest/spectacular result, persistent effort/genuine dilemma, pollution prevention/prevailing attitude, efficient solution/mass production, harmoniousrelationship/sustainable development, rosy picture/ monotonous routine, infallible methodology, severepenalty/impending crisis, draconian measure/appropriate punishment, widespread phenomenon/current situation, rampant corruption/petty crime, improperly undoubtedly, inevitably, indiscriminately, absolutely, responsibly第四：1.In addition/additionally: Computers provide efficient work. In addition, they make our life more colorful.Furthermore/further: This method can, furthermore, be used in environmental protection. Moreover: private cars are cheap and, moreover, it can improve our life. In other words: Killing live animals is cruel, a murder in other words.2． Hence: The cost of transport is a major expense for a person. Hence job location is an important consideration. Consequently: Globalization is a widespread phenomenon and consequently the domestic culture has been affected. Thereupon: Nature will revenge on humans. Thereupon people begin to realize the power of nature.3．Whereas: Smoking is something personal whereas it will affect others’ right. Conversely: S ome policemen prefer to carry guns when on duty; conversely others are reluctant to do that.4．Although/though: Although some young men really have no idea of what a new culture is, they absorb it without any reservation. Granted: Granted that the deed is not perfect, the disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages.5. for example, specifically: Specifically, the departmentwanted answers to the following questions.6. On condition that: Television enrich our lives a lot on condition that we are not addicted to it. Given that: Given that pets have become an indispensable part of some people’s life, the key is to coordinate the relationship between them.雅思基础写作精讲班第8讲讲义第六种词汇positive words:1. strive for a harmonious society/greater efficiency/striveto do something争取2. take suitable/timely steps to address this problem.采取合适/及时的措施3. top the central government's agenda.位于…最重要的位置4. assist sb in sth.在…方面帮助5. play an increasingly more integral role in wealthdistribution.起到越来越整体的作用6. contribute to sth/doing做出贡献7. implement the policy执行8. exert a positive/baneful effect on9. embark on reform and opening开始做…10. t ake initiative to eliminate negative effects.主动做…11. l aunch a spate of stringent measures发动，采取12. n avigate one’s way through the difficult situation.通过13. P roblems triggered by income composition are easy toresolve.解决/ muster enough resolve to quit smoking.鼓起勇气/Distribution of wealth is tainted and distorted by corruption must be redressed.纠正14. P roblems arising from development-based factors can berelieved and eased.减轻/ improve and ease减轻 thedifficulties and frustrations faced by travelers15. e liminate/ weed out 消除the structure of unscientificdesign.16. u tilize利用 their rich resources.17. i mprove/upgrade/optimize改善 the conditions18. f acilitate 推动the country's future sustainabledevelopment.19. b oost 推进the employment20. s houlder 承担起greater social responsibilities/bridge 消除，减少the cultural differences./ sth is mirrored by被反映21. m ake a difference有很重要的作用22. a vail oneself of something利用23. a bide by traffic rules遵守24. e nhance their job opportunities/enrich one’s life丰富，提高25. a spire to careers in finance/aspire to study abroad努力想要26. v oice their support for the movement表示了27. m ake efforts to do努力做事情28. h elp with 帮助weight loss and control; improve 改善fitness; reduce 减少stress, and of course save 节省money on petrol and parking.29. m inimize 减轻air and noise pollution, traffic accidents,oil consumption, road repairs and beautifies cities. 30. T hose measures, coupled with 与…一起advanced science andtechnology, will be taken without any delay.31. H ouse prices will start to calm down, saving the sector.下降32. T he current campaign to curb控制 the use of tobacco shouldbe stepped up.加速33. n urture/ cultivate a great number of learned people/培养，培育34. F igures released 公布on World No Tobacco Day serve as asource of frustration for everyone who wants to curb smokingin China.35. a slew of/a spate of/ a skyrocketing number of多数量第五：negative words:1. fail to do没能做…2. be a heache to…对于..是个难题3. pose a potential threat to residents' health.有潜在的威胁4. mean a formidable battle to do艰苦的斗争5. is now confronted with the same question that haunts/ beplagued with/be afflicted with (overpopulation/youth drug abuse/traffic accidents) 受到…问题的困扰6. be detrimental to sth对..有害7. focus attention on/bring something to somebody's attention引起…注意8. be blind to this point注意不到，忽视9. be of no avail没有用处10. crack down on(严厉的处罚) smoking in public places andpenalize(处罚) those who sell cigarettes to juveniles.11. exert a negative effect on sth有负面的影响12. exacerbate income disequilibrium/ The situation wascompounded by…加剧了13. squander natural resources浪费14. deprive sb of sth剥夺15. We believe that car tax should be scrapped.废除16. If it is hard to rein in控制17. The move has aroused controversy引起争论18. Apart from that, numerous factors are to blame for thecurrent situation. 责备19. We must stop pampering children纵容20. take various measures to tackle such malpractices处理玩忽职守21. Air pollution has turned into a major hazard affecting urbanresidents' quality of life. 巨大的危险影响了.22. an apparent total lack of明显的完全缺乏23. social and economic disequilibrium/ gauge(衡量) incomeinequality/disparity不平衡24. the severity of the pollution levels严重性25. lung damage and respiratory problems肺部损害以及呼吸问题26 be mind-boggling/ a problem of mind-boggling complexity令人难以置信的27. People cannot help but wonder why efforts to cut the numberof smokers have proven to be so futile. 没有效果的28. Smokers are six times more likely to be infertile（不生育的）and have a greater chance of becoming disabled,（残疾的） while women who smoke have a higher chance ofcontracting（得…病） breast cancer.29. looming environmental and public health disaster逐渐显现的30. leave others to the mercy of market forces受到..控制31. The abuse（滥用） of power for financial gain veils behind(隐藏)monopolies32. a hard nut to crack is that..困难是…33. Emissions from car exhausts have been found to be one ofthe major sources of urban air pollution. 尾气的排放34. carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide二氧化碳，一氧化碳35. We have no reason to be optimistic about the improvementof urban air quality. 对..不乐观第六：同义必备词：66. youth, teenager, minor, fledgling67. the old, elderly, grizzled, grey-headed68. conserve, preserve保存，如：We must conserve our waterresources for future generations.69. assure, ensure(insure), guarantee, pledge, avouch保证，如：Government should assure consumers of the quality of commodities. /It is important to insure that universities have enough funds to carry out important research inscience subjects./ The law guarantees equal rights for men and women./ The new government pledged to reduce crime./ Some criminals avouched that they themselves wereinnocent.70. Ideal, aspiration(beyond normal expectation), ambition(aparticular end)理想，雄心71. compare with/to, contrast, analogize(elaboration on thefunction of families in social life, sociologists like to analogists them to the cells of a human body.) 比较72. change, alter, modify(change of function), convert into,transform(appearance),改变73. argue, controversy(long-continued argument),dispute(angry manner), debate(formal argument)争论74. standard, criterion, gauge, yardstick标准75. inevitable, inescapable, unavoidable难免76. wealth, property, assets, fortune财富77. attend, take part in, participate in(formal), partake in,join in,参与。
雅思A类写作讲义
雅思A类写作讲义第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument. People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班 Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7 • uses a variety of complex structures • produces frequent error-free sentences • uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms • makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication • uses only a limited range of structures • attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences • errors can cause some difficulty for the reader
• uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task • attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy • uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task • may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty for the reader
新东方雅思写作讲义
雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing俞伟国－2009－雅思考试作文部分题型课时安排：Marking SystemEssay WritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReport Writing近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(From Mat Clark)Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6: 15%-20% Band7: <5% Band8 or above: RareKey Language Features in Marking SystemTask Response:1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content2. Adequate Words3. Position + Supporting Ideas + DevelopmentCoherence and Cohesion1.Logical overall structure2.Topic Sentence3.Cohesive devicesLexical Resource1.Accurateness2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)3.VarietyGrammatical Range and Accuracy1.Accuratenessplex Sentence3.Variety欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Chapter One－Essay Writing第一章. 议论文完全攻略______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Part One－Introduction－闪亮开篇－－Version －Structure of Introduction1. Background Information(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)(2). Public Opinion2. Statement(State your position)1．主体背景（Background Information）(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for mankind”. However, some people think it ma de______________________________, when ________________________________________________________________for the first time, he _____________________________________________________ that it was a great step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually _____________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一－具体化(笼统概念－缩小范围)(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to human health.Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery. Nevertheless, some people hold the methods used may ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:Paraphrase 方法之二－单词转换（优先考虑三大词类：）Paraphrase方法之三－句型转换（方法1 ）(方法2)(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects；Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong.Some people hold the opinion that ______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________While some argue that ______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill: 句型转换(方法3)(4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causes pollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement You should use your own experience to support your argument.According to some __________, air travel should be _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase思路顺序：单词转换>句型转换>具体化(5Some people propose that___________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法4)(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:信息量偏少的Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法－Factor(s) [因]－Phenomenon (Subject) [果]2. 总论点(Statement)Topic－If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punishedAverage Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished. Decent Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behave badly.Topic－Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpointsFrom my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools ______________________________Exercise1: Topic－Should college students be allowed to get married______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法5)Exercise2: Topic－Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法6)3. Report－Introduction写作对策Today, the phenomenon that_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern.In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article, I would like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to the following causes, which could be regarded as the apple of discord.Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A: Essay StatementPlan B: Linking SentenceExercise1:Exercise2: Topic－Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to studyExercise3: Topic－欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Part Two－Body－中流砥柱－－Version －分论点的要求：1.字数要求：One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.2. 分论点四项基本原则：(1). 内容原则：分论点应该体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。
雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义
雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义Unit 1 雅思IELTS 考试写作简介雅思考试写作部分在听力和阅读后进行，由两部分组成，TASK1和TASK2。
要求考生在60分钟内完成两篇文章的写作。
普通培训类和学术类考生在写作的考试内容上有一些区别。
两类写作TASK2题目类型基本相同，考试的结构和要求也大体相同，要求在40分钟完成250字左右的议论文。
类似英美国家学校里任课教师布置的课堂讨论作文。
一般要求考生根据自己的知识和经验就一个现象阐明自己的态度和见解，或就一个观点发表自己赞同或反对的观点。
学术类写作TASK 1（ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE）要求考生对题目中给出的各类图表加以观察和分析，并根据已知的图表和资料写一篇不少于150字的小短文。
考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格、饼图等。
也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。
另外，流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。
时间20分钟。
普通培训类写作TASK1（GENERAL TRAINING MODULE）则要求考生就某个假设的场景写一封信. 到目前为止，出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。
20分钟内完成150个字的文章。
总之，就题目的难度而言，GENERAL TRAINING MODULE 普通类写作比ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE学术类写作稍微简单一些。
评分标准The examiner reads your answer and awards band score of between 1(did not answer the question) and 9 (native speaker-like ) according to these criteria: ? 1.T ask Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported; the extent to which the candidate's position isclear and effective)2.Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organized and presented i.e. paragraphing; how well the information is linked) ?3.Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task)4.Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)The band scores are then added together divided by 3 and rounded to determine your band score for this task.Writing Overall Band = 1 / 3* Task1 + 2 / 3*Task2For example: Task1 =6Task2 =7Overall Band = 1 / 3* 6 + 2 / 3*7= 6.5Unit 2 曲线图1.描述上升的单词increase rise grow go up词汇升级：creep up ≤10edge up 10 ease up 20boom 30 surge 45 soar 60 swell 70 escalate 80 rocket 902．描述下降的单词decrease drop decline fall go down词汇升级：creep down ≤10edge down 10 ease down 20ebb 30 subside 45 slump 60 collapse 70 plunge 80 plummet 903．描述波动的单词fluctuate --- fluctuation go up and down rise and fall例：Sales of Computers 1995There was a slight growth in the sales of computers from Jan to Feb. However, they increased dramatically to a peak in the next month. After that, there was a downward trend in sales between Mar and Aug, which leveled off by the end of Dec.Task 1每部分的结构:例题分析example 1WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the number of passengers in a London underground station at different times of the day.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.Number of passengers at a London underground stationThe line graph illustrates the fluctuation in the number of people at a London underground station over the course of a day.开头段三种万能方法：①改单词②换句型③加信息The busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a sharp increase between 06:00 and 08:00, with 400 people using the station at 8 o'clock. After this the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 2 pm the number rises, with a plateau of just under 300 people using the station.In the afternoon, numbers decline, with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. There is then a rapid rise to a peak of 380 at 6 pm. After 7 pm, numbers fall significantly, with only a slight increase again at 8pm, tailing off after 9 pm.Overall, the graph shows that the station is most crowded in the early morning (around 08:00) and early evening (around 18:00) periods.例题分析2:Sample 2WRITING TASK 1---“例2”You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the annual amount of fish caught in North America from 1972 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.line graph with two linesThe graph reveals changes in fish catches for the US and Canada over the last 30 years.Between 1975 and 1981, US fish catches averaged between 2.5 and 2.75 million tons per year, while Canadian landings fluctuated between 600,000 and 900,000 tons. …In 1981, however, there was a significant increase in fish caught in the US, and this rise continued and peaked at 5.6 million tons in 1991. During the same period, Canada's catch went up from 1 million tons to 1.6 million tons, a growth of over 50%.From 1991 onwards, a sudden decline in fish catching was reported in both countries. US figures plummeted to 4 million tons in 2001, a drop of 28%, and Canadian catches plunged to 0.5 million tons, a decrease of 66%. In the following four years, US catches remained stable at 4 million tons, while Canadian catches rose and fell around the 0.5 million tons mark.In general, fish catches have declined drastically in both the US and Canada since the early 1990s. Although Canadian production was much lower, it echoed US figures, declining or increasing at thesame rate.习题③You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.The line chart illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb andchicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams) However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreasedover the period.★考试高分必备表 3——Phrase。
雅思写作第一讲
雅思写作第一讲：雅思写作简介+评分标准+如何写作首段1 雅思写作简介（20minute）task1+task2（小作文+大作文）task1（至少150words，20minutes）task2 （至少250words，40minutes）雅思评分标准讲解Task Response(任务完成情况）Coherence and Cohesion（逻辑）Lexical Resource（词汇量）Grammatical Range and Accuracy（语法）2 雅思写作题型以及提问方式简介（20minute）议论文题型介绍（三种提问方式）1 Advantage & Disadvantage2（To what extent) Do you agree or disagree?3 Discuss both views and give your opinion•说明文(提问方式）causes、solution、influence1 What are the reasons? Who should take responsibility fordealing with it?Opening Sentence 三种常见写法(40minutes)eg:Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of the mass media.1. 开门见山,直接入题a. Recently, it has been a hot-debated issue about the how to evalute theadvantages and disadvantages of mass media in our daily life.b. There is much discussion about the influence of mass media on our dailylife.c. There has long been a debate about how to view the influence of the massmedia on our life.2. 因果分析入题With the development of the science and technology, mass media is playinga increasingly important role in our daily life.3 转折对比入题Although mass media plays a vital role in delivering effective information in our daily life, its advantages and disadvantages are controversial issuesamong the public. / its advantage and disadvantages have spurredhot-discussion among the public.Although it is commonly believed that mass media plays a crucial role in delivering effective news, this is actually not the case.Although many people subscribe to the belief that media plays a crucial role in delivering effective news, we need to clear up the disadvantages and advantages of it.。
雅思强化口语精讲班第1讲讲义
雅思强化口语精讲班第1讲讲义001 雅思Part I 问题雅思Part I问题学习说明：在这一部分中，请考生听CD中的问题，然后试着自己用3－4句话回答。
注意：在雅思口语考试中，在回答考官问题时，必须使用完整句子回答问题，因为这样才能体现考生的语法水平。
另外，考生试图通过否定回答来转换问题内容的方式是徒劳的，考官会继续询问相关的方面。
所以请各位考生还是要准备好相关的词汇和答案。
参考答案：在每个部分的后面都有参考答案，对于语言能力较差的考生，只要熟练使用这些句子，就能在考试中获得理想分数。
回答技巧：在个人信息问答过程中，一定要详细描述自己的情况。
考官希望听到一些完整的句子表达方式。
在谈论工作或学习的细节时，越具体越好。
但是关于内容的真假，可以由考生自己控制。
毕竟，这是一个语言考试，而不是对个人情况进行调查。
时间：第一部分的内容在雅思口语考试中持续时间为4-5分钟左右。
必考题：这部分是每个考生在考试中都要遇到的问题。
思考题：这个是需要额外了解的问题，只有很少一部分考生遇到这方面问题。
（设计说明：奇数页背白）个人信息确认这部分中，考官会询问考生的名字，工作或学习情况，家乡。
这是每位考生都要准备的内容。
002 NameExercise 1: NameCould I see your identification card?What’s your full name?What can I call you?What’s the meaning of your Chinese name?What’s your surname (last name, family name)?What’s your given name (first name)?Have you ever changed your name? Why or why not?Do Chinese people like changing their names? Why or why not?What kind of people like changing their names in China?What’s their purpose in changing their names?必考题Interviewer: What’s your full name?Candidate: My name is Wang Qiu.Interviewer: What can I call you?Candidate: My English name is Sarah.Interviewer: What’s the meaning of your Chinese name?Candidate: My name was given by my parents. I was born in autumn and my father named me after theseason.Interviewer: What’s your surname (last name, family name)?Candidate: Wang is my last name.Interviewer: What’s your given name (first name)?Candidate: Qiu is my first name.思考题Interviewer: Have you ever changed your name? Why or why not?Candidate: No, never. My name sounds ok, and there is no need for me to change it. Besides, it is too complicated to change a name in China. We have to go to the police station and change all our relevant documents.Interviewer: Do Chinese people like changing their names? Why or why not?Candidate: I guess not. According to us, our names are from our family tree or given by fortune-tellers. Our names can bring them good luck.Interviewer: What kind of people like changing their names in China? Why?Candidate: I guess some famous stars prefer to change their names because they believe that their new names are easy to be remembered.003 WorkingExercise 2: Working or Studying这部分中，工作的考生只需要准备工作的内容，上学的考生只准备关于学校的内容。
雅思真题写作班精讲班第1讲讲义
雅思真题写作班精讲班第１讲讲义最新真题播报雅思写作考试议论文对中国考生的难点(The Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test)2007年－2008年最新真题播报Schools offer a wide range of courses, such asphysical education,music,economics,philosophy,math,English，geography,physics and history. Of all these subjects, which one do you think isthe most important and which one is the least impor tant?Some people think imported food exerts positive impact on our lives.To what extent do you agree?An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious.”Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree? An increasing number of people choose to live in big cities. What problems will this cause? Should the government enco urage people to livein small towns?Some people think humans can exploit animals for any purpose that they need while others disagree. What is your opinion?Unemployment is increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education while others think secondary education is necessary. To what extent do you agree? Old generations often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thinking and behavior. Most people argue that it is not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life in the future.What is your opinion?Some people think to lower the crime rate, criminals should be given longer terms in prison. To what extent do you agree?Some people believe children spending time on TV, video and PC games is good while others believe that is bad. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.We can see more image of disasters and violence shown on TV. What are its causes and what effects will they exert on the individual and society?经典结构回忆I 3-4II 1+4III 1+6IV 2。
雅思基础写作第一讲解析【优质PPT】
❖ 2. Some people believe that those who are not talented in language learning should not be required to learn a foreign language. What is your opinion?
TA: Task Achievement(任务完成)--1
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Task 2议论文评分标准：
Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论 点和论据)；
Communicative Quality(交流质量)；
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❖ Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s opinions and ideas. Why is this the case and do you think it is a positive or a negative situation? 2009年3月5日
❖ Some people think music plays an important role in society. Others think it is it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion. 2009年3月7日
❖ More and more children are putting on more
weight than ever before. What are the causes of
《全能写作精讲班》第一讲 讲义
《全能写作精讲班》第一讲讲义当我们说学写作，我们究竟要学些什么?Punctuation Marks标点符号有什么重要的?每次从澳洲回来上的前天在城市都会感慨们怎么把楼建的那么的觉得可思议机能也挺可思议的“学习就怕’认真’ 字。
”张师说:“‘态度决定切’!确实很有道!”写一个句子的雷打不动的原则:Always start a sentence with a capital letter.Always end a sentence with a full stop or its equivalent (question mark or exclamation mark).Do the following sentences need a question mark or not?Will you be able to attend the meeting on MondayI know you will be able to attend the meeting on MondayWould you attend the meeting on Monday, pleaseYou can’t go wrong if you use this rule about question marks:Is the sentence a definite question?( not a wish, hope, or a command )Exclamation markSave your exclamation marks for something really surprising and unusual.Would you like us to send you a brochure about camping in ScotlandPlease complete the form and return it to usCamping in Scotland can be a wonderful holiday—even when it rainsUse a full stop to indicate that a word is abbreviated.Mr. Zhou e.g. etc. ie.最现代的英文中，已经不需要省略符了下面的句子的eg用法是否正确Many teachers in New Oriental school, e.g. Romeo, are good at inspring students. He is so nice to me, eg he often cooks breakfast for me.那么问题来了:什么是句子?下面哪个(些)不是句子1. In reply to your letter of 8 January.2. We acknowledge the receipt of your application form.3. Regular income, security, good prospects.4. Introducing the latest personal computer.5. The latest money supply figures, showing a record rise in bank and building society lending.A complete sentence must have a subject and a verb.The subject of a sentence is the person or thing which actually does or is something. 造句:长沙下雨了。
IELTS基础写作第一讲
动名词 Studies reveal that there is a link between obesity (肥胖) and diseases. 从句
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
定语
修饰名词的成分叫定语，最常用的定语就 是形容词。
Studies reveal that there is a link between obesity and diseases.
(Recent) studies reveal that there is a (close) link between obesity and (serious) diseases.
还有一种用句子修饰作定语： Those who want to go to the English Party must get to the school by 7:30pm.
LOGO
Task 1
Task 1
要求考生在40分钟内完成一篇不少于250字的 议论文。考生需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳 意见，或者讨论针锋相对的一组观点，或者解 释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办法。
Task 2
SECTION 3
Assessment Criteria
Task Achievement (for Task 1) Task Response (for Task 2) Coherence and Cohesion Lexical Resource Grammatical Range and Accuracy
状语
表时间：e.g. on Monday, every week. 表地点：e.g. at school, in classroom.
I’ll see you at the airport. My husband finishes his work at 6:00 pm.
《雅思写作讲义》课件
2 辩论类
详细讲解辩论类题目的 写作方法，包括分析正 反观点、选择立场和提 供支持证据。
3 议论文类
介绍如何写议论文类题 目，包括提出观点、给 出论据和结论，并给出 高分范文分析。
写作流程
1
构思
2
组织自己的思路，找出合适的论点和
支持证据，确立文章结构。
3
修改、 语法正确，提高内容的质量。
《雅思写作讲义》PPT课 件
本PPT课件旨在帮助学生们提高雅思写作能力，介绍写作任务类型、写作流 程、语言表达技巧和参考范文分析，以及备考建议。
课程目的与重要性
本节课程将介绍《雅思写作讲义》PPT课件的内容和目标，以及为什么学习 和掌握雅思写作对考试备考的重要性。
写作任务类型
1 图表类
介绍写作任务中的图表 类题型，如图表描述、 图表比较等，并提供解 题方法和技巧。
参考范文分析
经典参考范文
分析一些经典的参考范文，解读优秀的写作思路 和技巧。
避免失分点
提供一些常见的失分点，并给出避免失分的技巧 和策略。
总结
通过本次课程，学生们将掌握雅思写作任务类型和流程，提升语言表达技巧，并通过参考范文分析了解 高分写作思路。最后，给出备考建议。
思考
认真思考写作题目，理解要求和重点， 制定写作计划。
写作
按照构思的思路开始写作，注重逻辑 清晰、表达准确。
语言表达技巧
词汇选择
介绍如何选择恰当的词汇 表达自己的观点和论据， 提高写作的表达力。
句型构造
强调一些常用的句型和表 达方式，帮助学生在写作 中运用多样化的语言结构。
注意重点
指导学生在语言表达中注 重重点内容，突出关键信 息，使文章更有说服力。
雅思强化写作精讲班第讲讲义一
雅思强化写作精讲班第 1 讲讲义Timing 时间安排难点：时间长，强度大。
对策：练习时控制时间Academic writing 学术类写作文体的特殊要求1 Some teachers don‘t know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 文体2 Historic buildings attract lots of visitors and can improve the local economy.非正式词汇3 The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 拼写4 Children in wealthy families are more and more dependent on their parents.实词5 Serious crimes harm people’s lives. 实词6 The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.实词7 Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to do advertisements. 句式8 The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with it.句式9 So,we must take steps to deal with the environmental problems! 色彩10 We must be friendly to others because the Bible said,‖ Treat your neighbors as you would like be treated.”文化背景toDifferent tasks 写作任务复杂Different tasks 写作任务复杂写作任务task 1 图表题和task 2 议论文之间差异大Some people think criminals should get longer terms in prison while others think thereare others ways to reduce the crime rate. Discuss.Many animals and plants are dying out today. What are the causes and what are your solutions?Some people believe that we should not use air transportation to carry fruits andvegetables. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think the high sales of products reflect the power of advertisements insteadof the demand of customers. To what extent do you agree?Today we can do some everyday tasks such as shopping, banking and business transactions without meeting each other face to face. What are the effects of this phenomenon on individuals and society as a whole?Many people use emails and mobile phones today instead of writing letters. Some people think the skill of letter-writing will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree?Individual persons and countries cannot do anything about the environment. Environmentalproblems can only be solved by international effort. Do you agree？Some people think public libraries are useless today because we can use computer technology to get the information that we need. Do you agree?Some people think universities should only teach theories, not employment skills. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree?Health is a basic human need. Some people think medical care should not be provided by private profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree?Some people think the best way to solve environmental problems is to raise the priceof fuel. Do you agree?Some people think we need more female leaders to create world peace and reduce violence. To what extent do you agree?Multi-cultured societies are mixtures of many ethnic groups. To what extent do you think the disadvantages of multi-cultured societies outweigh their advantages?When we learn a language, we should also learn the culture and lifestyle of that country. Do you agree?Some people think the purposes of museums should be to educate people while others think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain people. Discuss.Some people think students should live with their parents instead of living at school.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think the housing shortage in big cities can only be solved by the government. Do you agree or disagree?Today many young people cannot find a job after they graduate from university. What are the individual and social reasons for this phenomenon?There are many security measures in big cities today to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?Long-distance flight consumes natural resources and pollutes the air. Some people thinkit should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Technology and science have great influence on our lives. But some people think we should also value the work of artists such as musicians, painters and writers. To what extentdo you agree or disagree?Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or disagree?Some people think children who are brought up in families without a large amount of money are better prepared to solve the problems in their adult years than children broughtup in wealthy families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to be made in the new century?对策: 考试之前至少全程练习一次task 1 和task 2雅思强化写作精讲班第 2 讲讲义熟练掌握思考素材的三种方法No specific topic pool. 不断增加的题库对策: 雅思话题不会超出十大类别：文明类TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and FamiliesLanguage and CultureTechnology and the MediaDevelopment and Globalisation野蛮类CrimeAnimalsEnvironmental ProblemsUnfamiliar topics 素材思考困难对策：熟练掌握思考素材的三种方法a 分类法Some people think old buildings should be destroyed and replaced with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree?Some high-school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they goto university. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?b 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century.Do you agree or disagree?Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective wayto improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think animal experimentation should be banned. To what extent do you agree?c 裸奔法TM STREEC $Technology & Efficiency Environment & HealthMind & Soul Employment & CompetitionSociety & Crime Culture & PopulationTime & Space Money & FunR ights & Responsibilities写作中可以引用的16 句名人名言IELTS 写作中可以引用的16 句名人名言Education1 ―A child miseducated is a child lost." - -John F. Kennedy2 "Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire."-- W. B. Yeats3 ―Technology is j ust a tool. In terms of getting the kids working together andmotivating them, The teacher is the most important." --- Bill Gates.Technology“The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think like people, but that people will begin to think like machines.‖ ―― Albert Einstein5―As we go forward, I hope we're going to continue to use technology to make reallybig differences in how people live and work." ---Sergey BrinMedia6―He who controls the media, controls the mind. ―---Rupert MurdockGovernment7―Millions of individuals making their own decisions in the marketplace will always allocate resources better than any centralized government." – Ronald ReaganTourism8―The world is a book, and those who do not travel, read only a page.‖Saint AugustineWomen and Families9―The bond that links your true family is not one of blood, but of respect and joy in each other’s life.‖ Richard BachLanguage10―To possess a second language is to possess a second soul.‖ –CharlemagneCulture11―Culture means the widening of the mind and of the spirit.‖ – Ruth BenedictGlobalization12― Globalization is not something that we can hold off or turn off. It is the economic equivalent of a force of nature—like wind or water.‖---Bill ClintonCrime13―He who does not prevent a crime when he can encourages it. ―--- Roman philosopher SenecaAnimals14The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated. ----GandhiEnvironment15―Many anthropogenic activities foul the air, contaminate the water and devastate the forests.‖ --- quoted in Newsweek1 6―Don’t blow it -- good planets are hard to find.‖ quoted in Time magazine。
新东方雅思写作讲义
新东方雅思写作讲义新东方雅思写作讲义第一部分：写作基础知识介绍（500字）1. 什么是雅思写作？雅思写作是雅思考试的一项重要组成部分，涵盖了一系列的写作任务，包括图表描述、图表解释、观点阐述等。
写作考试的目的是测试考生的语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力和写作组织能力。
2. 准备雅思写作需要注意的事项- 掌握基本写作技巧：如如何概括图表信息、如何展开论述、如何论证观点等。
- 增强写作词汇量：扩展词汇储备，提升表达准确性和多样性。
- 阅读大量范文：学习优秀范文的写作结构、句式使用和观点论证方式。
- 练习写作：进行频繁的写作练习，提高写作速度和思维流畅度。
3. 雅思写作评分标准雅思写作总分为9分，分为四个维度对写作进行评分：任务响应（Task Response）、语言表达（Coherence and Cohesion）、词汇使用（Lexical Resource）和语法准确性（Grammar Range and Accuracy）。
考生需在这四个方面都达到一定的水平才能取得高分。
第二部分：写作技巧及范文分析（1000字）1. 图表描述类写作图表描述类写作是雅思写作的常见形式，考察考生对图表信息的表达能力。
常见的图表形式有柱状图、饼状图、折线图和表格等。
在写作时，考生需要概括图表信息并进行详细描述，同时还要注意使用适当的语言连接词来连接句子和段落。
范文分析：柱状图描述了1990年至2000年间英国人口变化趋势。
从图中可以看出，英国人口总数在这十年间一直在增加，但增长速度有所波动。
具体来说，1990年英国人口为52.4百万，而2000年则达到了58.6百万，增长了大约11.8%。
在这十年间最大的增长出现在1997年，而最小的增长出现在1991年。
因此，可以看出英国人口的变化是不稳定的。
2. 图表解释类写作图表解释类写作是考察考生对图表信息的解读能力。
此类题型通常以饼状图、表格或流程图为主要形式，考生需要从中找出关键信息，并进行准确解释。
【讲义】刘洪波雅思写作真经班(1)
刘洪波雅思写作真经班
Exercise 3: Some people said the government should not spend money on building theaters and sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
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Coherence and Cohesion
7 • uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use • presents a clear central topic within each paragraph • uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical • may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
原因1.现代人均寿命增长，生育期相应延后； 2.社会竞争压力大，选择事业收入稳定后生孩子。 影响1.父母与孩子的年龄差会变大，交流中代沟会明显； 2.会出现劳动力缺口，老龄化社会。
刘洪波雅思写作真经班
Exercise 1: In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
IELTS 写作课程讲解(一)
IELTS 写作课程讲解（一）LESSON ONEG 类写作TASK 1：IELTS 写作部分测试要求写两篇文章。
测试时间是60分钟。
General training 写作的第一篇一般要求写一封英文信，字数不少于150个单词。
给定一个问题，要求写信咨询、抱怨、感谢、邀请、道歉、给出建议，或提出申请等等。
General training 写作的第二篇要求写一篇议论文，字数不少于250个单词。
Academic 写作第一篇一般要求对图表数据进行描述、解释和说明，字数不少于150个单词。
Academic 写作第二篇也要求写一篇议论文，字数不少于250个单词。
General training 信函的种类主要有以下几种：1、Requests ①Application②Advice③Suggestion2、Complaint3、Thanks4、Arrangement5、Invitation6、Apology7、Explain信函的基本格式有两种：即full-block; semi-block. 这一节主要介绍的是full-block.FULL-BLOCK:(１)．WRITER’S ADDRESS(２)．RECEIVER’S NAME AND ADDRESS(３)．DEAR SIR (S), /MADAM, /HI,(４)．BODY(５)．YOURS ┅ ┅，(６)．SIGNATURE.Letter of RequestParagraph 1: Explain why you write the letter, make simple requests. Paragraph 2: Introduction/Explanation Paragraph 3: Make requests in detailsParagraph 4: ComplimentaryGolden rules:PoliteUse transition words, phrasesAvoid repetitionAPPLICATION:SAMPLE LETTER 1Dear Sir,I’m writing to you to inquire about information from your university.My name is Li Ming and I graduated from Tsinghua University Beijing, China in 1995 and gained my Master’s degree in compute r science there. I would like to continue my study and research in Artificial Intelligence in your university so as to pursue my Doctor’s degree.Could you please send me materials concerning enrollment prerequisites, tuition and other fees? Also, I would like to know something about the teaching staff and the postgraduate students.If I had the opportunity to study in your university, I would prefer to live in the students’ dormitory because of the conven ience it presents. I wonder if you could tell me details about living on campus? How many people will share one dorm and how much will it cost? It would also be helpful if you could list the facilities in it.I would appreciate it very much if you could provide me with the relevant information by return mail.I’m looking forward to your kind reply.Yours truly,SAMPLE LETTER 2Dear Sir,I’m a student from China. I’m writing this letter to inquire about the entrance to your university because I wish to pursue m y Doctor’s degree there.I graduated from the Electrical Engineering Department of Wuhan University in 1995. In my job, I use computers very often and I find that I am very interested in Computer Science. Therefore, I wish to pursue my studies in this field. I have taken TOFEL and GRE tests and I’ve alr eady asked ETS to send the scores to your university.I want to know whether the computer department can supply a scholarship, because if I can not obtain a scholarship, it will be very hard for me study abroad. Would you please tell me the fees and cost for each year of study? Is it possible for me to live on campus? What is the rate? Would you be kind enough to send me an application package, which will inform me more about your university?I’m looking forward to your kind reply.Yours truly,Homework:You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Next month you are coming to Britain to study at a university in Scotland. On the way you have a two-day stopover in London. You need accommodation for one night and you would like to use this time to see as much as possible of London. You will need to use public transport. As a student you have a limited budget.TaskWrite a letter to the London Travel Information Center explaining your situation and asking for advice on accommodation,sight-seeing and transport facilities in London.You should write at least 150 words.You do not need to write addresses.Begin:The London Travel Information Center188 Regent StreetLondon W1English Dear Sir/Madam,。
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第一章 第一章 写作概述
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Task 1 150w G: letter A:graph 1/3
Task 2 250w Essay
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第二章 第二章 议论文----概述
一、字数、时间 250-300 words 35-40m
As one of the most important inventions of the past century, TV is playing a more and more important role in modern life. However, some people are starting to worry about its negative effects on traditional families. I am convinced that the existence of TV has brought about alienation among family members.
Those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.
二、理由段 2-3 段 12 句左右 主题句(1 句)+支持句(3 句左右/5 句左右) Topic sentence: Announce the main idea of the whole paragraph Supporting sentences: Why Topic sentence? One paragraph, one main idea
二、命题形式 1.Argumentation 辩论型题目 80% 2.Explanation 解释型题目 20%
第三章
第三章 argumentation 辩论型题目
结构一 一边倒结构 ☆开头 ☆理由 1
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☆理由 2 ☆（理由 3） ☆结尾
一、开头段 3-5 句 1.（背景）+双方观点+说出自己的观点（+引起下文） 2.（背景）+对方观点+对方观点的一到两个理由+说出自己的观点（+引起下文）
Tobacco is a wonderful commodity to tax. It contributes much to the government’s revenue. For example, the government of Britain collects enough from smokers to pay for its entire educational facilities. If smoking is banned, there will be a great loss to the government’s income. In addition, more serious social problems will arise such as unemployment because tobacco industry employs a lot of workers.
government’s income. In addition, more serious social problems will arise such as unemployment because tobacco industry employs a lot of workers.
Those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.
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缩进式
Some people suggest that the government should ban smoking completely. Indeed, smoking is harmful to people’s health and it violates the rights and freedom of nonsmokers. However, in my opinion, smoking should not be totally banned for the following reasons.
Furthermore, families often quarrel over what programs they should watch. Thanks to hardworking TV workers, we enjoy more TV channels and more colorful TV programs. But a question has arisen: it is difficult for families to choose a common channel because they have different interests. It is inevitable to give rise to quarrel among them.
Tobacco is a wonderful commodity to tax. It contributes much to the government’s evenue. For example, the government of Britain collects enough from smokers to pay for its entire educational facilities. If smoking is banned, there will be a great loss to the
In addition, poor-quality TV programs can have severe effects on people’s mood and behavior. For instance, a person who watches too many idealized programs may become unrealistic. In addition, unhealthy programs which contain obscene and violent contents may cause people’s curiosity.
To sum up, I do not think that smoking should be banned. Tobacco industry makes much contribution to the government’s economy. Smoking brings many psychological benefits to smokers. Moreover, the complete ban of smoking will give rise to many social problems.
三、结尾段 1-5 句 重申观点(+重申理由)(+写点别的)
例1
Topic. Some people propose that smoking should be banned. What is your opinion?
Some people suggest that the government should ban smoking completely. Indeed, smoking is harmful to people’s health and it violates the rights and freedom of nonsmokers. However, in my opinion, smoking should not be totally banned for the following reasons.
例2 Topic: Some people hold that it is the television that makes the relationship of family members not as close as before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
First, Watching TV occupies our time to communicate with our families. TV provides a ready means of relaxation for people who spend their days doing routine and busy jobs. As soon as TV enters into our home, most of our free time is controlled by it. What is more, the one-eyed monster requires absolute silence and attention. If any member dares to open his mouth, the others order him to shut up immediately. Therefore we communicate less with our family members.