18-19 Unit 5 Section Ⅶ Writing——如何写音乐会评论

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人教版高中英语必修第二册 Unit 5 Music Section Ⅳ Writing

人教版高中英语必修第二册 Unit 5 Music Section Ⅳ Writing

参考范文 Hello,I'm Li Hua,a senior high student from Grade One. I'm here to talk about how music has a great impact on my life.
Last year,I lost my left leg in an accident,which made me in low spirits.My parents often comforted me and advised me to listen to some music.At first,I didn't like it,but gradually I began to enjoy it very much.Some soft music made me relaxed,while some encouraging music made me regain hope. Finally,I recovered from the accident and began to live a happy life.
十年寒窗磨利剑, 一朝折桂展宏图!
4.Music has a great impact on... 音乐对……有着很大的影响。
5....has improved my life greatly. ……很大程度上改善了我的生活。
6.When I listened to music,I... 当我在听音乐时,我…… 7.I hope all of you...with the help of music. 我希望你们大家在音乐的帮助下…… 8.I hope all of you will begin to love music... 我希望你们大家会开始喜欢音乐……

2019-2020版高中英语新教材人教必修第一册Unit 1 TEENAGE LIFE:Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——建议信

2019-2020版高中英语新教材人教必修第一册Unit 1 TEENAGE LIFE:Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——建议信

Section ⅦReading for Writing——建议信本单元的写作任务是读一封建议信,了解建议信的结构和语言特征,然后再写一封建议信。

Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learning to write after the model10 September,2018Dear Worried Friend,You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.All the best,Susan Luo(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases①recommend v t.建议②unhealthy adj.不健康的③encourage v t. 鼓励④useful adj. 有用的⑤advice v t. 忠告,建议⑥in on e’s spare time 闲暇⑦look forward to 盼望,期望⑧be worried about 对……担心⑨be attracted to 喜爱⑩be addicted to 对……上瘾⑪concentrate on 集中精力于⑫be good for/do good to 对……有益处⑬make friends 交朋友⑭hear from 收到……的来信⑮enjoy oneself/have fun玩得愉快Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李华,你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难,请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。

高中英语人教版必修二《Unit5 music writing》课件

高中英语人教版必修二《Unit5 music writing》课件

Please give me some advice and I will appreciate it very much. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
Writing Task
Use the information and ideas you have collected to write about the musician you have chosen. There are some more information on page 74.
I got to know their music when I saw them on television. They seemed so kind and friendly to their fans. They had such a good sense of humor too. Their songs seem to talk about things that I feel strongly about like growing old or being lonely. Their music is always squence
Could you please give us some advice? Could you tell me how to...? I’m not sure ... I would like to know ... I wonder ... What’s your opinion on this matter?
Above all, just have fun! Yours sincerely, Freddy
写作指导

高中英语讲义:Unit+5+THE+VALUE+OF+MONEY+Section+Ⅶ Reading+for+Writing——剧本写作

高中英语讲义:Unit+5+THE+VALUE+OF+MONEY+Section+Ⅶ Reading+for+Writing——剧本写作

Section ⅦReading for Writing——剧本写作本单元的写作任务是戏剧剧本创作。

戏剧剧本属于记叙文。

在写作形式上以对话为主,应主要包括戏剧人物、人物的语言、舞台说明性文字等。

Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learning to write after the modelTHE MILLION POUND BANK NOTEAct 2,Scene 1Narrator:Henry is walking along the street holding the bank note in his hand.His coat is worn in several places.He sees a sign for a tailor’s shop.Henry:(entering the shop)I’d like to have a suit coat.1st Clerk:(in a rude manner)See him there.(pointing to another clerk)2nd Clerk:Ready-made suits?Downstairs.Henry:(after going do w n some stairs)Can you show me a suit,please?3rd Clerk:Yes ,I can ,sir.This way,please.Ah,here we are,the very thing you need.1st Clerk:(pulling the3rd clerk aside and w hispering)Mr Reid says you’d better serve him quick and get him out quick!3rd Clerk:I know what I’m doing.I’ve got eyes,haven’t I?Henry:It’s a little too bright,isn’t it?3rd Clerk:(looking at him w ith a fro w n)It’s all we have in your size.Henry:Well,I suppose it ought to do for now.I’ll take it.3rd Clerk:Good.Shall I put it in a box?Henry:No.I’ll wear it.Oh,I’d rather not pay you now.I’d like to pay in a month.You see,I don’t have any small change.3rd Clerk:(trying not to sho w he’s angry) I suppose a gentleman like you only carries very large bills.Henry:Now,you shou ldn’t judge people by their clothes.I just don’t want to cause you trouble with a large note.3rd Clerk:It’s no trouble at all.,Henry:In that case,there’s no problem.(He gi v es the clerk the bank note.The clerk drops Henry’s coat.Then he folds the bill and slo w ly unfolds it again,as if looking at something he can’t belie v e is there.)Owner:Well,what seems to be the trouble?Henry:I’m just waiting for my change.Owner:Give him his change,Todd.Get going...(after getting the bank note from Todd)Would it...could it be the one I saw in the papers last week?I remember thinking that never would I hold such a note as this ...(to Henry)Oh,take off this coat,sir.(to Todd)Go get the others,Todd!(to Henry again)Allow me,sir!This way,sir. (in another part of the shop,w here there is a w ide range of options for Henry to choose from)Henry:This is nice,but I really don’t need it.Owner:Never mind.(w ith a broad smile) Oh,it’s perfect!It was made for some king but he’ll just have to wait.You’ll need many suits for many occasio ns.Yes,indeed you will.Henry:Wait a minute.I only came here to get a suit coat to wear today.I dare not buy all these things.You would have to wait a long time to get paid.Owner:A long time,sir?Why,you don’t have to worry about that!3rd Clerk:Yes,we can wait forever!Henry:Well,all right.I’ll take the suit coat for now and get the others later. Owner:Fine,fine.Your address,sir?Henry:I don’t have one.Er...I’m moving.Owner:Of course you are!That’s very normal!A busy man,I’m sure.,篇章结构Before showing the bank note:the clerks look down upon Henry and treat him in a rude manner.After showing the bank note:the clerks and owner respect Henry a lot and even try hard to please him.(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—words and phrases①a__large__bank__note一张大额支票②in__a...manner 以一种方式③show__sb__sth 向某人展示④serve v t. 服务⑤suppose v t. 认为⑥would__rather 宁愿⑦pay v t. 支付⑧small__change 小额零钱⑨judge...by__... 通过判断⑩worry__about 担心Ⅱ.While-writing根据下面提示,写一篇戏剧,介绍亨利带着100万英镑的钞票去理发的过程。

2019_2020学年高中英语Unit5RhythmSectionⅦWriting——音乐会评论课件北师大版必修2

2019_2020学年高中英语Unit5RhythmSectionⅦWriting——音乐会评论课件北师大版必修2

第二步:把列举的内容用适当的句型连缀成句,然后再用 适当的连接词连句成篇即可。
积“黄金”词句,写高分文章 1.On the evening of ...,sb. watched the concer t given by ... 2.Dur ing the 3 hour concer t, ...sang a lot of songs/played the
3.虽然天气很热,观众还是很开心。 ①It was very hot in the summer time.All the audience had a very good time. ②It was very hot in the summer time, but all the audience had a very good time.
[三步写作规范] [题目要求]
昨天晚上你去莲花体育馆(Lotus Stadium)观看了香港歌星 张学友(J acky Cheung)的演唱会,请你根据要点提示写一篇短 文。 要点提示: 1.场内座无虚席,音响系统极佳,张学友的演唱很精彩; 2.虽然天气很热,观众还是很开心,全场欢呼,跟着唱; 3.演唱会上他边唱边跳,虽然已 50 多岁了,还是充满激情;
第二步:由词造句 1.昨天晚上我去莲花体育馆观看了香港歌星张学友的演唱会。
①I attended the concert at Lotus Stadium last night. The concert was given by Jacky Cheung at Lotus Stadium last night.Jacky Cheung is a pop singer from Hong Kong. ②I attended the concert given by Jacky Cheung, a pop _s_in_g_e_r_ from Hong Kong, at Lotus Stadium last night.

人教版高中必修一Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——有关英语学习的建议信公

人教版高中必修一Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——有关英语学习的建议信公
skills. Here are a few suggestions.First of all,I think we should memorize as many words
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18-19 Unit 5 Section Ⅶ Writing——如何写音乐会评论

18-19 Unit 5 Section Ⅶ Writing——如何写音乐会评论

18-19 Unit 5 Section ⅦWriting——如何写音乐会评论音乐会期间的氛围令人相当振奋。

7.His performance is very popular with the audience.他的演出很受观众的欢迎。

8.I hope I will watch his performance again in the future.我希望在不久的将来能再看到他的表演。

[满分佳作构建][文体指导]请根据以下内容写一篇音乐会评论:1.去年,中国著名歌手周杰伦在上海举办了演唱会。

我很幸运买到了一张票。

他的歌曲很受年轻人的欢迎。

2.虽然天气很热,观众还是很开心。

3.周杰伦是中国最知名歌手之一,出了很多唱片。

他在全国各地巡回演唱过。

我们经常在电视上和收音机上听到他的歌。

4.他此次唱了《七里香》《青花瓷》等歌曲。

我被他的歌曲深深打动了,盼望能再次听到他演唱。

参考词汇:周杰伦Jay Chou;《青花瓷》Green Flo w er Porcelain;《七里香》Se v en Feets Soundly注意:1.词数100个左右;2.不要逐句翻译。

[审题谋篇]体裁评论时态以一般过去时为主主题周杰伦的音乐会人称以第三人称为主结构第一段:介绍音乐会的时间、地点和演出的歌手第二段:介绍音乐会的表演场景第三段:表达自己的感想Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1.performance n.演出2.such as 例如3.look forward to 盼望4.be popular among 受……欢迎5.have a very good time 过得很快乐6.be deeply impressed by 被……深深打动Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一) 完成句子1.去年,周杰伦在上海举办了演唱会。

Jay Chou gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.2.他的歌曲很受年轻人欢迎。

高中英语Unit1 SectionⅦWriting__如何写文学评论教案 牛津译林版选修8

高中英语Unit1 SectionⅦWriting__如何写文学评论教案 牛津译林版选修8

Section ⅦWriting——如何写文学评论[文体指导]文学评论是一种以作家、作品、文学创作和文学思潮作为评论对象的文体。

文学评论的作者旨在表达自己对文学作品的理解和认识,启发和帮助读者提高阅读水平,对作品的作者提出正确而有益的建议。

写文学评论可分为以下几步:1.介绍所要评论的文学作品(标题、作者和类型);2.简述作品情节;3.讨论作品的主题和意义;4.介绍读者对作品的评析。

要想写好文学评论,首先,我们要细致地品读文学作品,准确把握评论对象;其次,写文学评论的过程中,我们要做到以下几点:1.评价要明确。

2.结构要清晰。

对作品的评价常常是一开始就明确提出,下文加以证明,形成总分结构。

3.评论语言要简洁、形象、生动。

4.文学评论经常使用一般现在时,但是有时也可根据需要使用其他时态。

5.文学评论通常采用夹叙夹议、评析结合的写法。

[亮点句式]1....is a novel by...writer...2.The novel is told in the form of...3.The book written by...is about...4....written by...is one of the most popular and highly regarded...in...5.The book tells us a story of...6.From the story,we can learn...7.I am greatly impressed by...8.I think/In my opinion...[写作任务]根据表格中提供的信息,写一篇关于“The home­made ball”的文学评论。

Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1.modern­day adj.现代的;当代的2.theme n.主题3.author n.作者4.brand new sneakers 全新运动鞋5.main character 主要人物6.be set in 以……为背景7.be worth doing sth. 值得做某事Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1.故事发生在现代美国。

《Celebrations》Section Ⅶ PPT教学课件

《Celebrations》Section Ⅶ PPT教学课件

感到荣幸的 传统的 作为……而出名
4. make...feel at home让……感觉在家一样 5. show...around 领某人参观
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Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法 (一)完成句子 1.很高兴知道你要来北京几天。 Glad to learn you're coming to Beijiinnagcouple of days. 2.我们很荣幸你在北京期间和我们待在一起。 We feel honored you can stay with us while you are in B.eijing 3.我相信我们会玩得很高兴。 I believewe will have much funtogether.
Unit 3 Celebrations
Section Ⅶ Writing——描述事件
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[文体指导] 1.人称 描述事件时一般以第一或第三人称角度来叙述。用第一人称表示 由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻,它的优点在于能把事件的情节通过 “我”来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。 用第三人称叙述的优势在于描述事件时不受活动范围的限制,而 是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面 前,使文章的客观性更强。
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3.You can't imagine how wonderful the contest is. 你无法想象这次比赛有多么好。 4.What attracted us most was the English Word Contest,which let us realize the pleasure of memorizing words. 最吸引我们的是英语单词大赛,让我们意识到了记忆单词的乐 趣。

人教版高中英语必修一Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——个人小档案

人教版高中英语必修一Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——个人小档案

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5.A proper hobby does not occupy our too much time. 一个适当的爱好并不会占用我们太多的时间。
6.A wide variety of interests and hobbies enrich the school life and
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1.I was born in Beijing on Oct.12,2003. 我于2003年10月12日在北京出生。
2.Born of a poor clerk’s family,she had little schooling. 出生于一个贫穷小职员家庭,她几乎没上学。
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The first,second and third sentences:tell us Ann Wells’s name ,grade,school and personality. The fourth and fifth sentences:tell us Ann Wells’s learning style and favourite subject. The sixth and last sentences:tell us Ann Wells’s hobbies, future plans and dreams.
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Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishing the passage Exchange your passage with your partner,and pay attention to the following points.

高中英语人教版必修二 Unit 5 Music-关于音乐的Topic writing写作课件(共16

高中英语人教版必修二 Unit 5 Music-关于音乐的Topic writing写作课件(共16

4.In my opinion,music is a magical tool which raises me up w hen I am down and helps me find the bright side of life. Now let me tell you music in my life. 5.My daily life is as usual as others.So sometimes I feel bored .When I feel bored,I often listen to music to enjoy how beautif ul the life is!And it is the best way to pastime. By doing that,it would be a useful idea to practise my languag es.I often busy doing my homeeork,and I usually have trouble in it,when this time,I often listen the music to help me relaxed
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2.Nowadays more and more people like music,and generally speaking,different people like different music. Some like pop music, such as the songs sung by HK singer. Some like Jazz, and others like classical music.As far as I am concerned, of all music, I like Soul music and classical music best.

同步译林英语选修六新突破讲义:Unit 1 Section Ⅶ Writing——如何写电子邮件 Word版含答案

同步译林英语选修六新突破讲义:Unit 1 Section Ⅶ Writing——如何写电子邮件 Word版含答案

Section ⅦWriting——如何写电子邮件[文体指导]电子邮件(e-mail)属于应用文中的一种,是高考考查的重点和热点。

一、基本结构英语e-mail在内容结构上主要由以下几部分组成:1.标题栏一般情况下,开头需要填写的地方主要有“To:”(即填写收件人的e-mail地址)及“Subject:”(即填写电子邮件内容的主题)。

2.称呼语在e-mail中,正文前的称呼无需太正式,目前,省略Mr.或Ms.(或Mrs/Miss),直呼对方名字的做法很普遍,如“Dear John”或“Tommy”,“Mary”等。

即使省略称呼,在e-mail中也不算太失礼,不过这要视情况而定。

给长辈或上级发e-mail最好用头衔加上姓名相称,如“Mr.Smith”,“Dr.Wang”等。

3.正文写正文时要注意把握以下两点:(1)首先要明确写给谁。

对不同的收件人,写作的语气要有所不同。

假如是写给朋友的,则可以用一些俚语或缩写词,但如果是高考中的书面表达题,则属正规写作,最好不用俚语或缩写词。

(2)写电子邮件要多用短句,使意思表达更加清楚,当然,对重点部分要作详细介绍。

比如高考中,就必须根据(汉语或图画)提示,将要点写全,并注意语言的规范。

也就是说,应把它当作一篇小作文来对待,而不是像我们平时给朋友发的邮件那样随随便便。

4.结束语结束语也很简明,常常只需一个单词,如“Thanks”,“Cheers”,或者一些非正式用语,如“Take care”,“See you”。

但在正式的商业性质的e-mail中常会出现“Best wishes”或“Best regards”等。

5.签名签到结束语下一行左下角处。

[亮点句式] 一、常用开头语1.表达问候⎩⎨⎧How is everything going on with you ?How are you ?Is everything going well with you ?2.谈谈心情⎩⎪⎨⎪⎧How have you been lately ?I'm glad/happy/sorry...to receiveyour e-mail.Learning that...I'm so glad/happy/sorry...3.直言目的:I'm writing to... 二、正文部分1.As we discussed on the phone... 如我们上次在电话中讨论的……2.As mentioned before ,we think this product has strong unique selling points in China.如先前所述,我们认为这个产品在中国有强有力且独一无二的销售点。

18-19 Unit 2 Section Ⅶ Writing——介绍某项运动的历史

18-19 Unit 2 Section Ⅶ Writing——介绍某项运动的历史

努力使中国武术早日进入奥运会
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注意:1.词数 100 左右;


2.文章的开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。
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Dear David,

Very glad to read your e­mail.You say you are a wushu fan.Now I will tell you

技 法
something about Chinese wushu.

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I hope you can come to China to learn the Chinese martial art.


Yours,
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2.武术在中国文化中起着重要作用。



Wushu plays an important part in Chinese culture.

构 建
3.有很多武术流派,其中以少林武术最为出名。
There are a variety of wushu styles.Shaolin wushu is the best-known.
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(2019版)Unit5-Music-Writing

(2019版)Unit5-Music-Writing
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Section ⅦWriting——如何写音乐会评

[写作技法指导]
[文体指导]
每当我们读完一本书、看完一场电影或听完一场音乐会,我们或多或少都会有一些感想,如果我们把这些感想写出来那就成了评论。

音乐会评论可以分成三部分来写:
1.音乐会的开始
介绍举办音乐会的时间、地点、演出的歌手/乐团、音乐会的开场状况、观众的情况等。

2.音乐会的过程
描述音乐会中节目的具体内容、表演的场景、自己的反应以及其他观众的反应等。

3.音乐会的结束
描述音乐会结束时的情景,如歌手为歌迷签名、合影留念。

[亮点句式]
1.On the evening of last Sunday,I watched the concert given by Wang Leehom.
上星期天晚上,我看了王力宏举办的音乐会。

2.During the 3-hour concert,he sang a lot of songs.
三个小时的音乐会期间,他唱了很多歌曲。

3.It shows that he/she has a great talent for music.
他/她表现出很强的音乐天赋。

4.The audience enjoyed his/her performance very much.
观众非常喜欢他/她的表演。

5.Everyone felt excited at the performance.
大家对表演感到很兴奋。

6.The atmosphere during the concert was extremely exciting.
音乐会期间的氛围令人相当振奋。

7.His performance is very popular with the audience.
他的演出很受观众的欢迎。

8.I hope I will watch his performance again in the future.
我希望在不久的将来能再看到他的表演。

[满分佳作构建]
[文体指导]
请根据以下内容写一篇音乐会评论:
1.去年,中国著名歌手周杰伦在上海举办了演唱会。

我很幸运买到了一张票。

他的歌曲很受年轻人的欢迎。

2.虽然天气很热,观众还是很开心。

3.周杰伦是中国最知名歌手之一,出了很多唱片。

他在全国各地巡回演唱过。

我们经常在电视上和收音机上听到他的歌。

4.他此次唱了《七里香》《青花瓷》等歌曲。

我被他的歌曲深深打动了,盼望能再次听到他演唱。

参考词汇:周杰伦Jay Chou;《青花瓷》Green Flo w er Porcelain;《七里香》Se v en Feets Soundly
注意:
1.词数100个左右;
2.不要逐句翻译。

[审题谋篇]
Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1.performance n.演出
2.such as 例如
3.look forward to 盼望
4.be popular among 受……欢迎
5.have a very good time 过得很快乐
6.be deeply impressed by 被……深深打动
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
(一) 完成句子
1.去年,周杰伦在上海举办了演唱会。

Jay Chou gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.
2.他的歌曲很受年轻人欢迎。

His songs are very popular among young people.
3.周杰伦是中国最知名歌手之一。

Jay Chou is one of the most famous Chinese singers.
4.周杰伦已经出了很多唱片。

Jay Chou has made many records.
5.他在全国各地巡回演唱过。

He has given performances throughout China.
6.我们经常在电视上和收音机上听到他的歌。

We often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio.
7.周杰伦唱了《青花瓷》《七里香》等许多著名歌曲。

He sang many well­known songs such as Green Flo w er Porcelain and Se v en Feets Soundly.
8.这些歌优美自然。

These songs were beautiful and natural.
(二) 句式升级
9.把句1和句2合并成定语从句的复合句
Jay Chou,whose songs are very popular among young people,gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.
10.把句3和句4合并成一个含同位语的简单句
Jay Chou,one of the most famous Chinese singers,has made many records.
11.用not only...but also...合并句5和句6
Not only has he given performances throughout
China but also we often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio.
12.把句7和句8合并成含定语从句的复合句
He sang many well-known songs such as Green Flo w er Porcelain and Se v en Feets Soundly, all of which were beautiful and natural.
[妙笔成篇]
【参考范文】
Jay Chou,whose songs are very popular among young people,gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.I was lucky enough to get a ticket.It was very hot in the summer time,but we had a very good time.
Jay Chou,one of the most famous Chinese singers,has made many records.Not only has he given performances throughout China but also we often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio.
He sang many well­known songs such as Green Flo w er Porcelain and Se v en Feets Soundly,all of which were beautiful and natural.I was deeply impressed by his singing and am looking forward to hearing him sing again.。

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