运用高级词汇与高级句式

如何运用高级词汇与高级句式
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如何运用高级词汇与高级句式
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一、使用高级词汇
1．短语优先
多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。

To achieve one’s d ream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.
→To achieve one’s dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.(2013·北京卷满分作文)
2．避免重复
尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。

I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.
→I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.
[练一练]用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语。

1. We all have the same chance.
possess 2．We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.
_endless 3．I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.
put_up_with 4．He didn’t listen to what I said in the class.
turned_a_deaf_ear_to 5．We’ll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.
promote 6．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.
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二、使用高级句式，让句子靓起来
1．恰当使用被动语态
②I’m delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to select the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.
→I’m delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to select the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.(2013·上海卷满分作文)
2．使用强调句
①As a saying goes，the little thing matters most.
→As a saying goes，it is the little thing that matters most.(2013·上海卷满分作文)
②Our parents have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.
→It’s our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.(2013·重庆卷满分作文)
3．使用倒装句
①The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.
→Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(2013·福建卷满分作文)
②I didn’t realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways until then.
→Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.(2013·湖北卷短文写作)
4．使用省略句
①If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.
→If so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.(2013·山东卷满分作文)
②Although they were faced with many problems，they didn’t lose heart.
→Although faced with many problems，they didn’t lose heart.
5．使用感叹句
It is a very splendid moment.
→How splendid a moment it is！(2013·辽宁卷满分作文)
I am very worried about his condition.
→How worried I am about his condition.(2013·湖北卷满分作文)
6．使用with复合结构
①His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him，and we can see sweat on his face.
→His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him，with sweat on his face.(2013·福建卷满分作文)
②As the society develops rapidly，it’s necessary for us to have a good know ledge of English and computer.
→With the society developing rapidly，it’s necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.
7．使用虚拟语气
①It is high time for both children and parents to take action to make small changes.
→It is high time that both children and parents took actio n to make small changes.(2013·福建卷满分作文)
②I missed being hit by the car with your help.
→Without your hel p，I would have been hit by the car.(2013·安徽卷满分作文)
[练一练]用较高级句式转换下列句子
1．Above all，we must do something to stop pollution.(被动语态)
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2．I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school. (强调句)
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3．We don’t know its value un til we lose health. (倒装句)
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4．If it isn’t well organized，the meeting will be a failure.(省略句)
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5．We had a very good time with the peasants that day. (感叹句)
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6．Because there was too much noise，I couldn’t go on studying.(with复合结构)
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三、如何写好there be句型
1．There be句型的基本意义：某地有某物
There is an increase of about 10 percent，compared with last year.
与去年相比较，大约增加了百分之十。

点睛：由于受汉语影响，有些同学在使用这个句型时常常把be误用成have的某种形式。

下午将有一场演讲。

①There is going to have a lecture this afternoon. (×)
②There is going to be a lecture this a fternoon. (√)
2．Where there be...there be...“哪里有……哪里就有”
As the detailed analyses above have shown us，where there is life，there is hope.
正如上面详尽的论述所示，活着就有希望。

3．There be＋名词＋分词短语
There are three factors contributing to this attitude as follows.
有三个因素促成了下面的观点。

有些学生支持这个主意。

①There are some students support the idea.(×)
②There are some students supporting the idea.(√)
4．There be＋no doubt/no denying/no need/no sense/no use...that...“毫无疑问/不可否认/没有必要/没有意义/没有用……”
There is no sense in waiting here without knowing when he will come back.
在这里傻等却不知道他什么时候回来，一点意义都没有。

[练一练]翻译句子
不可否认，我们的环境质量已经每况愈下。

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5．There be的非谓语形式
there being...(动词-ing形式)；there to be...(不定式形式)
There being no bus，we had to walk home.
由于没有公交车，我们不得不步行回家。

[练一练]翻译句子
我们盼望着有个晚会来庆祝即将到来的新年。

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Ⅰ.句型转换
1．We can successfully build an economized society only in this way.(倒装)
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2．He had hardly reached the station when the train left.(倒装)
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3．I can not only keep in touch with my friends and family through my cell，but also almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.(倒装)
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4．I didn’t take his advice，so I failed in the exam.(虚拟语气)
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5．Because I was ill that day，I didn’t take part in the sports meeting.(虚拟语气)
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6．They carried out a survey among 260 students.(被动语态)
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7．They didn’t realize the importance of environment protecting until all the fish in the river died out.(倒装句，强调句)
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Ⅱ.佳句习作
请按以下内容要点写一篇短文，尽可能多地使用高级句式。

1．众所周知，世界人口在一天天增长，因此需要大量的新鲜用水。

2．随着工业的快速发展，产生了很多有毒的气体和废水，结果导致了水污染，尽管水是新的，但却不能再运用。

3．这时候人们才意识到水源的重要性，确实到了人们行动起来保护水源的时候了。

不要再污染用水，否则，我们就不能再在这个地球上生存，那会是怎样的一种可怕的景象啊！
4．只有充足的水源，世界才能蓬勃发展。

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