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2024雅思写作IELTSWriting课件

雅思写作是雅思考试中的一部分，主要评估考生的英语写作能力。

Task 1通常要求考生根据所给图表或数据写一篇报告，主要考察考生的数据分析和描述能力；Task 2则要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，主要考察考生的议论和表达能力。

雅思写作考试要求考生在限定时间内完成两篇作文，分别是Task 1和Task 2。

雅思写作考试简介0102雅思写作评分标准主要包…任务完成情况、语法和拼写、词汇使用、句子结构和连贯性。

任务完成情况评估考生是否按照题目要求完成了写作任务，是否清晰地回答了题目中的问题。

语法和拼写评估考生的语法和拼写是否正确、准确，是否影响了读者的理解。

词汇使用评估考生使用的词汇是否丰富、准确，是否能够恰当地表达自己的意思。

句子结构和连贯性评估考生的句子结构是否多样、复杂，是否使用了恰当的连接词和过渡语，使文章更加连贯和流畅。

030405雅思写作评分标准03要求考生根据所给的图表或数据写一篇报告，分析数据并得出结论。

常见的图表类型包括柱状图、折线图、饼图等。

图表作文要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，并给出理由和证据支持自己的观点。

常见的话题包括教育、环境、科技、社会等。

议论文要求考生在一篇文章中同时完成图表分析和议论两种任务，既需要描述数据又需要发表自己的观点。

这种题型对考生的综合能力要求较高。

混合类型作文雅思写作题型介绍审题与立意仔细阅读题目，理解题意在写作前，务必认真阅读题目，确保完全理解题目的要求和限制。

确定文章主题和观点根据题目要求，明确文章的主题和要表达的观点，确保立意明确、不跑题。

列出要点和论据在审题和立意的基础上，列出文章的主要要点和支持观点的论据，为写作做好准备。

03注意段落内部的逻辑关系在每个段落内部，要注意句子之间的逻辑关系，确保段落内部的连贯性和一致性。

01合理安排段落根据文章的主题和要点，合理安排段落，确保文章结构清晰、层次分明。

02使用合适的转折词和连接词在段落之间和句子之间使用合适的转折词和连接词，使文章更加连贯、流畅。

优质课件-超级经典版之雅思写作全解析.ppt

Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 怎样的观点“正确”？怎样写顺手？
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Overall=40%×task1 + 60% × task2
That is to say… Task1: 8 Task2: 3 Overall=3.2+1.8=5
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《雅思写作》课件-2024鲜版

《雅思写作》课件CATALOGUE 目录•雅思写作概述•雅思写作任务类型与技巧•文章结构与段落展开方法•词汇、语法和句式运用指导•观点陈述、论证和批判性思维培养•模拟试题与范文欣赏01雅思写作概述CHAPTER雅思写作考试形式与要求考试形式雅思写作考试分为两部分，第一部分为图表作文（Task 1），第二部分为议论文（Task 2）。

字数要求Task 1要求考生写至少150字，Task2要求考生写至少250字。

时间限制Task 1的建议用时为20分钟，Task 2的建议用时为40分钟。

评分标准及考生常见问题评分标准考生常见问题如何备考雅思写作熟悉考试形式和评分标准积累词汇和句型练习写作请教老师或专业人士02雅思写作任务类型与技巧CHAPTER1 2 3理解图表信息选择重要信息使用适当的语言和结构图表作文写作技巧明确观点提供充分的论据逻辑清晰030201议论文写作技巧混合题型应对策略分别应对识别题型针对不同类型的题目，采用不同的应对策略。

例如，对于包含图表和议论的题目，可以先描述图表，然后提出观点并进行论述。

整合信息03文章结构与段落展开方法CHAPTER引言段写作方法开门见山背景介绍提出疑问论证方法运用举例、对比、因果等论证方法，充分阐述主题句。

主题句每段开头明确主题句，概括该段主要内容。

过渡与衔接使用过渡词和衔接手段，确保段落间逻辑清晰、连贯。

正文段落展开策略结尾段总结技巧重申观点01展望未来02简洁明了0304词汇、语法和句式运用指导CHAPTER高级词汇选用及替换建议使用具体、生动的词汇01避免重复使用同一词汇02注意词汇的准确性和正式程度03复杂句式构造和变换技巧使用从句和复合句变换句子结构注意句子的流畅性和简洁性避免常见语法错误确保主语和谓语在人称和数上保持一致。

注意动词的时态和语态的正确使用，避免混淆。

正确使用标点符号，避免句子结构的混淆和歧义。

例如，避免使用双重否定、注意冠词的正确使用等。

雅思大作文和小作文精华PPT

主谓宾
小作文
动态图VS静态图
Line Graph
Pie Chart
Bar Chart
Table
Flow Chart
Map
常用表达
词组搭配
介词使用
• 观点：好处多 • 第二段：经济消费增加 • 第三段：基本需求生活质量
开头段
• 改写题干+表达立场
例证段
• 中心句 • 因果 • 因果 • 结尾
例证段
• 中心句 • 举例 • 结尾
结尾段
• 表达观点
大作文句子练习
• 主谓宾 • 主系表 • 被动语态 • it形式主语宾语 • there be 句型 • 状语从句 • 名词性从句 • 定语从句
雅思作文介绍
学习要点
评分标准
计算方法
评分标准细则
段落分布
实战写作五步骤
1 审题
2 想观点
3 写开头段
4 主体段-中心句主体段-中心句-扣题
5 结尾段
大作文题目类型
头脑风暴
大作文结构练习
思维拓展
思维拓展
作文稿

雅思小作文写作教学全能版 ppt课件

图表作文的文章结构
一般分为三个部分 1. Introduction 引题 2.Describing the graph in details 主体
3. Concluding sentences 结尾
时态的使用（重要）
• 文章的起始句作为全文的介绍，说的是图表告诉（show, indicate, demonstrate, illustrate)我们什么，所以用现在时态；
表示变化程度很小、不明显
Adjectives Slight 轻微的 Slow 很慢的 Moderate 温和的
Steady 稳定的 Gradual 逐渐的
Adverbs Slightly Slowly Moderately
Steadily Gradually
• A decreasing trend in general
比例型(precentage)图表
• 百分比 • 除法、减法比较
• Bar chart, pie chart, table
表达比例常用句
The highest The greatest The lowest The most The smallest Sth. Is the
percentage of … Sth. +句子 proportion of… number of…
• 在文章的主体部分，时态的选择根据图表给出的时间信息 • 具体决定是一般现在时态、一般过去、还是一般将来。
表示趋势的常用表达
趋势变化上升下降
不变波动
动词表达（过去）名词表达
rose, increased, went up,
A rise, an increa ascended growth, an upward

雅思写作步骤PPT课件

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• 题目5： More and more people travel by car today, instead of using public transport. Why has this happened? How does it affect individuals and society ?
• Step4：转化成英文。
Private car use can cause air pollution. It involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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• Step5：使用并列句、3大从句（名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句）进行拓展。 Private car use is a major environmental issue around the world, because it can cause air pollution. It is a habit that involves fuel consumption and creates exhaust fumes.
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Task2 作文第2步思考观点
• 雅思作文大致可分为两种题材：非教育类和教育类
非教育类：经济（效率；收益和成本）科技（进步；缺陷）社会（价值和传统观念；环境；社会关系）个人（生活方式；基本权利；健康快乐；行为）
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教育类：身体健康学习能力社会能力和实践经验（与人相处、调节情绪等）工作能力（动手能力、价值观和道德观、遵守法律等）
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• e.g. Today, children appear to spend most of their free time watching TV and playing computer games. The focus of this essay is on the causes of and solutions to this problem.

雅思写作小作文PPT PPT课件(共19张)

雅思写作
王中祺/Sonny Wong
雅思写作小作文部分精讲
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王中祺老师简介：
英语经贸翻译硕士，工商管理硕士，毕业于北京外国语大学和对外经贸大学，英语专业八级、翻译二级。曾就职于北京海淀外国语实验学校初高中部，新东方、杰克斯爱德专职雅思托福英语老师，环球雅思、励学国际兼职雅思托福英语老师，曾任中石化胜利油田区高级英语翻译。翻译类代表作：《把男孩培养成男孩》（译著）；教学类代表作：《2015-2016雅思阅读真题精选解析集》。
主干： 1. Behaviorists suggest that 行为主义者认为
定语从句翻译的基本步骤：
1. 切分句子，确定主干。
其他成分：
2. the child will experience greater intellectual development.
2. 确定词义，直译意群。
3. 调整语序，润色译文。 4. 通读译文，查缺补漏。
行为主义者认为抚育，抚养 1. 切分句子，确定主干。
an environment where there are many stimuli 刺激，刺激物，促进因素（stimulus的复数） which develop his or her capacity for appropriate 发展能力适当的，恰当的，合适的经历 development. 更大的智力的
responses // will experience greater intellectual development.
系统性权威性全面性
翻译考试例题解析
Example Analysis for Translation Examination
词汇突破：定语从句翻译的基本步骤：

新航道雅思作文课件

新航道雅思作文课件As an AI language model, I am programmed to assist with generating text based on the input provided to me. In this case, I am tasked with creating a response in English that meets the requirements outlined for a New Oriental IELTS writing courseware. I will strive to produce a response that is engaging, informative, and meets the specified criteria. When it comes to writing an IELTS essay, it is essential to consider various perspectives and present a well-rounded argument. One key aspect to keep in mind is the structure of the essay. A typical IELTSessay consists of an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The introduction should provide a clear overview of the topic and outline the main points that will be discussed in the essay. The body paragraphs should present arguments and evidence to support the main points, while the conclusion should summarize the key points and provide a final thought on the topic. In addition to the structure of the essay, it is crucial to consider the language and vocabulary used. IELTS essays are expected to demonstrate a high level of English proficiency, so it is important to use a wide range of vocabulary and grammatical structures. This can help to show the examiner that the writer has a good command of the English language and can effectively communicate their ideas. Another important aspect to consider when writing an IELTS essay is the content and arguments presented. It is essential to address multiple perspectives on the topic and provide a balanced argument. This can help to show the examiner that the writercan think critically and consider different viewpoints. Additionally, providing examples and evidence to support the arguments can strengthen the essay and makeit more convincing. Moreover, it is important to engage the reader and evoke emotions in the essay. This can be done by using descriptive language,storytelling, or personal anecdotes. By connecting with the reader on an emotional level, the writer can make their essay more compelling and memorable. This canhelp to leave a lasting impression on the examiner and potentially improve the overall score of the essay. In conclusion, writing an IELTS essay requirescareful consideration of various aspects, including structure, language, content, and emotional engagement. By following these guidelines and incorporating theseelements into the essay, the writer can create a strong and effective piece of writing that demonstrates their English proficiency and critical thinking skills.。

雅思小作文写作教程~含作文评分标准。新东方教学课件!

ELTS WRITING
Coherence and cohesion
a) Then/from this time onwards/from then on b) After/before (prior to) c) again d) S, which was followed by an increase/ decrease …// which led to //which preceded// e) <上一句时间词>, when … f) 其他关联词: while, however, by contrast, conversely/ similarly, likewise/ as to, as for, in terms of/ The number of people at the subway station increases from 6:00 to 8:00, when it reaches a peak. It went up gradually until 1976, when there was a leveling off at eight million for the next ten years.
IELTS WRITING
① Show: indicate // unfold// display// reveal// reflect// relate// illustrate//depict// describe// demonstrate// represent// provide an overview of…// ② Graph: picture// diagram// chart// figure// table

横坐标作主语：The years from ___ to ___ saw a rise/decrease in the number of teachers from ___ to ___.

雅思小作文写作教学全能版 ppt课件

IELTS Writing Task 1 作文写作教学全能版
共有5种图形 1. The bar chart 柱状图 2. The line graph 折线图 3. The pie chart 扇形图/饼图 4. The table 表格 5. The flow chart 流程图 * The map 地图/地形图
In addition
Then
Further more
Next
Meanwhile
Before, followed by
while
After that
At the same time
雅思小作文写作教学全能版
most second most last
Adj. +属性
雅思小作文写作教学全能版
• The highest percentage of vehicle companies that are used in the USA are GM. It accounted for 19.1% in the market in 2010.
stayed constant, maintained
the same level + at
Fluctuated from…to…, moved up and down
A fluctuation from…to…,
雅思小作文写作教学全能版
表示变化程度很大、很显著
Adjectives Dramatic Sharp Significant Considerable Huge Enormous Rapid Quick Sudden
雅思小作文写作教学全能版
流程型(procedure)图表
• 逻辑关系 • 起承转合，顺序

雅思写作(lesson2)课件PPT资料64页

首段 – 首句
The above figure indicates the amount of fulltime teachers of regular schools in China between 1960 and 1990.
首段 – 首句
请写出本图的第一句话：
This graph shows the number of full-time teachers of regular schools in China during 3 decades from 1960 to 1990.
下降：decrease, fall, drop, decline, go down, reduce, slump
不变：level off at /level out at; maintain, remain stable, steady, stay constant, maintain the same level
The subway station witnesses a steady increase in the number of people from approximately 300 at 6 a.m. to 450 at 8 a.m.
The time from 6 a.m. to 8 a.m. witnesses a steady increase in the number of people from about 300 to 450.
幅度大：dramatically, suddenly, significantly, sharply, steeply, rapidly
幅度中等：moderately, gradually, steadily 幅度小： slightly, slowly, minimally

雅思写作ppt课件

次要推展句
❖次要推展句是指对主要推展句作进一步的事实分析和举例说明。它从属于某一个或某几个推展句。
❖ I don’t teach because teaching is not easy for me. Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic, carpenter, writer. For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty-palm, sink-stomach profession. Red-eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing. Sweaty-palm, because I’m always nervous before I enter the classroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am. Smoking-stomach, because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual.
❖Indeed, a dessert is always enjoyable.
转折
❖But, however, although, though, yet, except for
❖Yet there was still a chance that he would win.
举例
❖for example, for instance, a case in point, such as

雅思写作小作文上课课件

e.g. 从2008年到2010年专职教师的人数在增加。
The number of full-time teachers was on the increase form 2008 to 2010.
雅思写作小作文上课课件
开始动笔写图表作文：变化趋势常用结构
2) 表示下降
动词+副词结构 e.g. 当地学校的失学人数在去年略有下降。 The number of drop-outs in the local
开始动笔写图表作文：基本内容
文章内容
与任务2写作一样，图表写作也要紧紧围绕任务去完成。也要依据题目提供的已知信息进行写作。与任务2不同的是图表作文的信息载体不是文字而是图表，考生将图表承载的信息用文字表达出来。在转化的过程中很容易遗漏信息。所以写完后的审查就显得更加重要。
雅思写作小作文上课课件
that ...
The figures /statistics show that
more other verbs: describe, illustrate, display, exhibit,
indicate, reflect, represent, reveal, unfold, summarize etc.
IELTS WRITING
雅思写作小作文上课课件
开始动笔写图表作文：基本情况
任务1：图表写作要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的短文。
以考核图表为主。主要有: 曲线图 line chart, graph 柱状图 bar chart 饼状图 pie chart 表格等 table 偶尔也会有流程图flow chart、地图geography和示意图diagram/figure

雅思精品写作小作文词汇和思路 ppt课件

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3. 小幅度上升：
go up / ascend / grow / increase / rise/ climb up +
modestly / slightly / marginally / moderately
experience a slight growth in…
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4种数字类：
1.倍数基础表达法： ①A +is…times +as+ adj.原级+as +B ②A +is…times+ adj.比较级+than +B ③A +is…times+ the
size/length/height/width/depth +of + B ④The size/length/height/width/depth…
reach the minimum / the smallest part of bottom out at … reach the bottom at… reach the lowest point at…
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3.多于…
more than …, over…, above…, upwards of… upwards of 60 years old exceed, surpass, overtake, ---v.
是原来的3倍 / 增加或减少了2倍例: Between 1971 and 1975, the population
was up eight-fold. 是原来的8倍,增加了7倍
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雅思写作之小作文(讲义1-2课)

机密雅思写作之小作文张家铭CHRISSelf-intro 张家铭Chris四级，考研，TOEFL ，SAT ，GRE ，IELTS ，GMAT.微博：@张家铭Chris微信：zjmxhxmm已接受雅思写作TASK 1TASK 2分数目标 6.5-7分范文分析The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. (C11T3W1)范文分析Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (C13T1W2)It is clear that living in a foreign country has its own benefits and drawbacks to consider.I agree with this statement;however I think that anybody coming in another country should respect national culture.In this essay,I would like to outline the social and practical problems.The social problems would be language barrier,which means that a person coming from another country might not be able to speak and understand the language which might be a problem as far a person who is living in a country,and a person who came in the country.Another problem is linked to the language barrier,but it might influence the behaviour of others.An individual who come into the country might offend others with their behaviour or language.For example;some cultures like English people prefer to be very polite and say things differently from other cultures.Therefore,a person who doesn’t know how to behave in a particular culture might offend others around him.The practical problems would be misunderstanding of culture.That means that a person who visits other countries does not understand other culture and he behaves as he wants to.The second practical problem is finding a job.An individual who works in foreign country might not be appropriate for people who he serves.For example if an individual works in a restaurant,the people who live in a country and they were born in that country might not respect and not like the behaviour of a person who works in a restaurant,it might be because,the cultures are different.To summarise,it can be said that there are a lot of misconceptions which people have when they come in a foreign country,and in my opinion and from my personal experience people should educate themselves in order to know how to behave in different situations with different cultures.TASK 11.题型综述2.Task1的段落结构3.趋势的表达4.副词的写法5.常用短语的介绍Task 1 的六大题型题型考点与难点难度星级Pie chart Diversity of describing percentages **Bar chartCombination ****Line/curve chartTrends & classification ***TableHow to list statistics effectively ****diagramWriting sequence& imagination ****map Location/change *****Task1的段落结构1.Opening改写题目2.Body宏观描写：图标整体特征(main feature)微观描写：趋势，关键数值，对比等3.Ending/Conclusion明显特征：图中稳定的一些趋势、特征，极值隐藏特征：合理客观推理信息Opening一：换词：show:describe,illustrate,demonstrate proportion / percentageinformation / datanumber / figurecategories / kinds / types二.换句Opening 句型1As is shown / illustrated / demonstrated in the (1)图的类型，the (2)图的单位(number/amount/percentage/figure) of 图的主题(3)图的主要趋势(4)图的时间趋势：vary —动态图Differ —静态图(4)图的时间From...to...During...and...within...The graph below shows the difference modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city, in 1950,1970 and 1990.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.As is shown in the (1)图的类型, the (2)图的单位of 图的主题(3)图的主要趋势(4)图的时间As is demonstrated in the bar chart, the percentage of travellers to and from work by different modes of transport in one European city varied dramatically from 1950 to 1990.句型2The _____ chart(s) illustrate(s) a clearpicture/overview/information of the characteristics and trends(differentiation/contrast) of _____ .The table below shows the kilometers of route,date opened and passengers per year of the underground railway system in 6 cities.▪The table illustrates the differentiation concerning the length of route, launching year and the annual capacity of the metro system in6 metropolises.句型3▪两图题▪The ____ graph describes data(趋势) about ___ whilst the ____ chart illustrates information about ________.The line graph describes data about water use worldwide while thetable illustrates information about consumption in two different countries –Brazil and Congo.▪剑6 Test 1▪The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Ending/Conclusion写1~2句结论:合理，客观即可1.明显特征：图中稳定的一些趋势、特征，极值2.隐藏特征：合理客观推理信息明显特征1.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.2.what is worth mentioning is that before1989 beef was the most popular food and after that chicken became the most consumed meat.trend四种趋势：涨跌平波上涨下跌平稳波动increase decrease词语说明词语说明common words rise fallgrow declineclimb dropswell sinkPreferred words rocket90plummetsoar60slumpsurge45subsideboom30ebbascend20slidecreep up<10creep downSpecial words accrue小平涨abate小平跌leap大平涨plunge大平跌上升表达例1：意大利的工业产值增长了5%。