托福独立写作范文_3包含与被包含型
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托福独立写作高分范文 3
● 包含与被包含型
2012/5/20
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The main purpose for people who have jobs is for money rather than social status.
People choose their careers and jobs for many different reasons. Some choose a job fo r money. Some for social status, and some even because it’s something they really enjoy to do. However, the main reason people choose a certain job is for social status.
People might choose a job for its money, but mainly a job with social status automatically has a high salary. Lots of people want to be lawyers and doctors, because they are prestigious and respected jobs in society. Another plus is that these jobs also have very high paying salaries. In comparison, jobs with a lower social status typically come with a lower paying salary. Many people grow up wanting to be laywers, but not many grow up wanting to be trash collectors. This does not sound like a very fun job and it also does not pay very well. A job with a high social status always pay more.
In addition, jobs with a higher social status require education. Being well educated is important in society, and most parents continually encourage their child do well in school. The better you do in school, the more interests you develop. When it comes to choosing a career, a person will want to put to use all of their years of education. To not do so would be a waste of all of those hours spent studying in the library. Since education gives one social status, choosing a job equivallent to one’s educatio n level in effect is motivated by social status, not money.
Admittedly, there are some exceptions, where people choose a job to make a difference in society. Jobs like being a social worker or teaching. These jobs don’t pay as well and are not considered the best jobs in society. However, these jobs require highly educated workers. Although these jobs are not considered the most glamorous by society, they deserve respect. This is case where people choose a job based neither on social status nor money.
People choose their career for many different reasons. The main reason people choose certain jobs is based on the social status these jobs will bring. (355)
2012/4/22
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A university should focus more on its facilities such as libraries, computers or laboratory, rather than on hiring famous teachers.
In this age of rapid technological development, in order to be the most advanced and successful, universities must keep their facilities and resources up to date. This not