最新高考英语写作专题辅导课件-基础写作[调查报告]

• 2. 第五点写作内容, 给予考生很大的发挥空 • 间,也是体现考生写作水平的很好机会。考生尽量 避免使用“I like Jay Chow because he is handsome.”等语言简单、观点肤浅的句子，而 应该运用高级语句, 争取高分, 如：My idol is Langlang because he is a person with strong determination. 或The person I admire most is Gou Jian because he is able to realize his dream with his courage and strong will.
rank first / be in the first place
• 相关句式 • 1. Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. 上周我们就“谁是你的偶像”在2, 600人中 进行了调查。 • 2. Recently our League Committee , has carried out a survey whose results are as follows.最近我们团委进行了一次调 查, 其结果如下。
上月，我们公司以35岁 以下的人群作为调查 对象, 选取了1000人进 行了关于“网上购物” 的一项调查, 调查情况 如下：
你是否愿意在网上购物？
结 果 原 因 64%愿意 1.方便, 在家可买到所需物品 2.网上商品比较便宜, 而且可 选择的品牌多 36%不愿意 1.害怕买到赝 品 2.担心被骗钱
• 3. 扫清难点, 译句成文。翻译以下重要短语句式, 为写作作准备。 • (1) 开展了一项关于……的调查 • ______________________________________ make /do / conduct/carry out a survey about • _________________ on sth.; survey sb. about sth. • (2) 调查结果表明…… • ____________________________ The survey /result shows that
5. A recent survey suggests that students are different from each other in learning styles.最近的一项调查显示, 学生在学习方 式上是各有差异的。
• 6. As is shown in the survey , drunk driving may result in serious accidents. 正如调查所显示的那样, 酒后驾驶会导致严 重事故。
写作模块练习(四）
四、调查报告
as for how to 1. 至于怎样 Update the website 2. 更新网站 3. 50%的女生 50% of the girls 4. 接下来; 位居第二 next in line 5. 同……比起来 compared with
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• ［能力提高］ • 一、填空 请用所给动词的适当形式填空。 • 1. Recently, I ① _____________ (survey) my have surveyed classmates about their views on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students are quite satisfied with it, while 15% ② dislike (dislike) it and 5% ③ ______ have (have) no opinion. Students who ④ ____ like ____(like) it say the pictures with the texts are very attractive, which greatly arouse their interest in learning.
• (6) 某人或某物排在第一位 • sb. / sth. rank the first place, sb. / sth. is _____________________________________ _____________ the first place • (7) 某人把……放在第二位 sb. put...in the second place • ________________________
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• (3) 把……看作偶像 • ______________________________________ consider / choose / figure sb. as idols; think of sb._________ as idols
• (4) 50%的女生 50% of the girls, half of the girls • _____________________________ • (5) ……与……是一样的________________ be the same as
1. 注意审题, 转换图表。撰写调查报告时, 通 常需要结合图表, 观察、对比调查数据, 并 把调查结果和数据转换为文字表达, 并按写 作内容给出的要点按顺序进行写作 。
• 2. 确定时态, 规范全文。引出报告结果或数 据时，发表议论和个人观点, 通常用一般现 在时。若出现具体的时间状语, 如last year， next year, recently等时, 应根据具体使用 适当的时态。 • 3. 变换表达, 丰富语汇。调查报告中多出现 相同内容的描述或分析, 为避免重复, 建议 使用不同语言和句式表达同类信息。
2. The result ① ______ (show) that 75% shows of the students ② were _____(be) in favor of surfing the Internet for information last year. And the data also ③ suggest _______(suggest) that the number ④ will continue ____________(continue) to rise next year.
• (10) 表示对比、比较 • however, on the contrary, but，while _______________________________
• [参考范文] • Last week, we did a survey among 2, 600 students on “who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys figure sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.
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11. 与……相处融洽 get along well with... 12. 激发了他们的兴趣 arouse their interest 13. 更好地了解 a better have understanding of put... in the second place 14. 把……放在第二位 15. 排在第一位 rank the first place /
• (2007年广东) • 上周, 我们以“谁是你 的偶像”为题, 在2600 名考生中进行了一次 调查(survey)。以下 是调查数据：
偶像 (idol)Baidu Nhomakorabea伟人 父母
影视明 星
女生
18% 25% 50%
男生
18% 11% 14%
体育明 星
没有偶 像
6%
1%
48%
9%
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Moreover, the book is very interesting, ⑤ covering ________(cover) many hot topics and ⑥ providing __________(provide) lots of cultural knowledge of the world. However, students who dislike it ⑦complain ________(complain) there ⑧ are _____(be) too many new words and difficult sentences, ⑨making ______(make) the texts difficult to understand. In conclusion, the new English textbook ⑩has helped _________ (help) most students improve their English enormously already.
6. 与……交流 communicate with account for/take up 7. 占(多少比例) be in favor of... 8. 支持/赞成…… as far as sb. is concerned 9. 就某人看来 have a lot in common 10.有很多共同点
3. According to the survey , about half of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble. 根据调查结果, 大约一半的学生有困难的时候会去找他们 的同学或朋友。 4.Different persons may have different choices on how to spend pocket money.关于怎样用 零花钱, 不同的人有不同的选择。
[写作内容] 根据以上数据, 写一篇短文, 包括以下内容： 1. 调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2. 男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异； 3. “父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异； 4. 男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同； 5. 你的偶像及理由。
• [例题导写] • 1. 认真审题, 理清要点。第一点写作内容 “调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象”是 在表格以外的写作引入说明部分找到具体 信息, 第二至四写作点中, 要求找出男女生 数据的“差异”，写作时要一语中的, 第五 点写作内容则让考生自由表达观点。
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• (8) 据某人看来 as____________________________________ • far as sb. be concerned, in one’s opinion
• (9) 某人持……的观点 • __________________________________ sb. hold the opinion that，sb. be of the opinion that ___________