雅思：大作文审题

开头段常用语言
• 以惊人的速度向前发展 ： • is advancing at an amazing(staggering/astonishing/accelerated) speed • 越来越流行： • is increasingly prevalent/ popular in the contemporary world • 问题越来越严重： • The problem of… is becoming increasingly severe( grave/ serious/ worrying/ disturbing/ worrisome)
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• There have always been differences in the types of men and women have done. • However, the trend in modern times has been for both men and women to have greater freedom of choice in terms of employment. • Some people might say that there is no need to go further. • However, in my view, wherever possible, gender equality should be encouraged.
Lesson five：task two 开头段&审题
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开头段写法
审题
大作文类型
观点讨论类 agree or disagree positive or negative advantage outweigh disadvantage Discuss both…give your own opinion. 问题解决类 why happened? How to solve the problem?
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• 背景：近年来儿童体重剧增这个问题日益热化。 • The issue of the rocketing average weight of children has heated up in recent years.
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• 焦点：有观点认为家长应为他们错误的养育方式 负责，而持相反观点 人认为是现代生活方式是 导致恼人局面的根本原因。 • There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
Task 2 Introduction (argumentation)
Task 2 introduction
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• The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.
焦点句
S2 Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed • 观点陈述型： • There is a perception that …, while a counterargument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether it is necessary to…… • 转折让步型： • However, some people believe this is …and … should be …as much as possible.
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题 目 A The obesity rate of children is growing nowadays. Some people believe it is mainly due to parents’ inappropriate way of raising them. Do you agree or disagree?
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Restriction on air travel；
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Funding education 背景：前十年以来高等教育的资金一直是整个国 家最焦点的讨论及争论话题。 In the last decade, the funding of higher education has become one of the most vital focuses of discussion and disputes across the whole country. 观点：关于谁应为快速增长的高学费负责，人们 观点各有不同。 Opinions are deeply divided as to who are responsible for paying the increasingly high fees.
观点句
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Your personal view on the issue
• Personally,… • My personal view is that … • From my point of view,… is of benefits/its benefits are far more over its downsides/its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects. • （上句是反方观点） However, in my view（自己 观点）
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Protecting the environment
现阶段没有人会否定保护环境的重要性，但关 于如何完成人们却没有达成一致。 These days, no one would deny the importance of protecting the environment. But there is no consensus on how to achieve this end.
开头段常用语言
• 在当代： • In the present age/ in this day and age/ in the present-day society/ in contemporary society/ at present/ in current society/ in the contemporary world • 众所周知： • It is generally(widely/commonly/extensively/universally) believed that • 越来越重要： • play a/an –role in perform an– function in • Adj. Important significant critical crucial essential fundamental pivotal vital • N: be of importance/ significance
• 事实陈述开头法： • （普遍性）It is quite common for sb. to do sth. • （纠结性）It is always interesting to find that individuals take different views towards… • （表关注）In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to …/… have become a controversial issue … • 定义法（需要加个原因）： • The importance of …to ..is a matter for debate. • The influence of …is a subject matter.
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• 个人观点：我个人认为家庭 社会都无法免责。 • My personal view is that both the households and the society cannot avoid the obligation.
背景句
S1 To introduce the topic in general
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• 事实开头法：
• 一个普遍的事实是…（普遍性） • It is quite common that women and men normally have greater freedom of choice in terms of employment. • 令人困惑的是…（纠结性） • It is always confusing to find that women still earn less and enjoy fewer promotions than men in spite of the fact that gender equality has even been highly demanded by the public. • 越来越多的人关注… （表关注） • In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to gender equality since women’s social status has been increasingly promoted.
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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
题 目 B In modern society, an increasing number of children suffer from obesity. Some people think parents are main reasons for this, while others think there are other causes leading to this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.