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8.28雅思大作文高分范文及解析毕业后GAP的利弊

8.28雅思大作文高分范文及解析毕业后GAP的利弊

8.28雅思大作文高分范文及解析:毕业后GAP的利弊8.28雅思大作文Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their studies?一些学生高中毕业后选择出去旅游或工作一段时间而不是直接上大学。

这样做对他们的学业有什么好处和坏处?思路解析这是一道利弊类的大作文,讨论的是高中毕业后gap一段时间对学生学业的利弊影响。

这个话题2020年8月曾考过一道同类型的题目,因此同学们一定要认真准备。

审题的时候要注意限定对象:高中毕业即将升入大学的学生,讨论的点可以分别围绕旅游和工作来展开,利弊一定要针对学业来说。

同学们在回应写作任务的时候利弊都要展开写,然后阐述自己的立场。

我们一起来归纳下GAP的好处和坏处。

我们先来看坏处:出去旅游或工作延缓了大学的学习时间,这样会在学业上给学生带来一定的挑战,比如被同龄人超过,重新熟悉知识点有困难等。

刚毕业的高中生出去工作或旅游很容易分散精力,对他们之后的大学学习是有不利影响的。

最后我们再来看下好处:出去工作对一个高中毕业生来说是一个好机会,可以学习到课本以外的知识,有助于开阔学生的眼界,进而更好地理解这个世界。

高中毕业出去旅游可以趁机放松心情,在放松的同时思考未来的学业方向,为之后更好地学习做足准备。

高分范文It is true these days that many high school leavers choose to start their work or take a trip before going to university. While a gap year can bring some immediate drawbacks, I am convinced that it is more likely to have long-term benefits for their lives.On the one hand, young students are very likely to encounter several difficulties when delaying their university study. One of these problems is the delay in academic progress caused by spending one year off school. It is understandably almost impossible for young people to enjoy their experiences in doing a job or travelling to a new place but still arrange a certain amount of time for revision. As a result, gap-year takers may have to face the challenge of becoming familiar with the knowledge at school again, receiving more pressure of catching up with their peers. Besides, the life outside the university campus may prove to be mentally and physically overwhelming for inexperienced school leavers. They, for instance, may be at risk of being exploited in an exhausting job or face potential dangers on their trips to a new country. If not well prepared for such possible obstacles, young high school graduates can suffer from unintended consequences.On the other hand, I would argue that these disadvantages are outweighed by the positive effects. A gap year is an ideal opportunity for students to learn about what is not taught at university. Working with other people who are experts in a particular field can give these newcomers not only an understanding of the job but also valuable practical lessons to help thembecome more mature. When it comes to applying for a position in a company, employers tend to favourably consider applicants who possess extensive experience in life and the occupation. Furthermore, in terms of recreation, having a year to relax can be advantageous as students can have a chance to relieve stress in study. With a comfortable and willing attitude, undergraduates can acquire knowledge more effectively in comparison with those who go to university right away.In conclusion, despite some negative aspects, it seems to me that the benefits of a gap year are more significant for the reasons mentioned.相关词汇high school leavers 高中毕业生start their work 开始工作take a trip 旅游long-term benefits 长期益处encounter several difficulties 遇到一些困难academic progress 学术进步become familiar with 对……熟悉catch up with 赶上;追上overwhelming adj. 势不可挡的, 压倒一切的; 巨大的inexperienced adj. 经验不足的,不熟练的potential dangers 潜在的危险outweighed vt. 比…重(在重量上);比…重要;比…有价值applying for a position 申请职位extensive experience 丰富的经验advantageous adj. 有利的。

8月6日雅思大作文真题参考范文

8月6日雅思大作文真题参考范文

8月6日雅思大作文真题参考范文| 间隔年的优劣势~每场雅思考试之后,第一时间分享本场考试雅思A类大作文的范文权威解析。

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2020年8月6日雅思大作文题目间隔年的优劣势Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages? 解析&审题题材:教育题型:讨论优劣类关键词:students + one year off + travel or work需要讨论的观点:上大学前先旅游或工作一年的优劣势建议思路:双边讨论+自己的观点复现情况:《剑桥雅思5》,test 2 ;2015年2月28日《剑桥雅思系列》今年已经出到第15本了,但本次考题居然重复了《剑桥雅思5》上的一道题目,也是重复2015年2月28日雅思原题。

这道题目太经典了,相信很多学生都曾经练习过,或者背诵过相关范文。

因此,今天参加雅思考试的同学应该是感觉很幸运了。

我们知道,雅思作文题目中,要么是给出现象,要么是给出观点,然后让考生讨论“现象是好是坏”或者“是否同意这个观点”。

无论是讨论“好坏”,或者讨论是否“同意观点”,其实都需要考生寻找论据来证明自己的看法。

本作文提出的是一个现象,即一些国家鼓励高中毕业生先去工作一年或者旅游一年,再回来上大学,然后要求考生论证“这样做的好处和坏处”。

由于题目明确要求讨论“好处和坏处”,因此本题不宜采用“一边倒”结构方式,也就是不适合只论证好处,或者只论证坏处,而是要同时讨论好处和坏处,也就是“双边讨论”。

稍微想一想,我们不难发现“工作一年或旅游一年”的好处:开拓视野,学习人际关系技巧(物质层面),更了解自我的需求(心理层面)。

但也可能有坏处:工作或旅游一年后,可能不再想回到大学,从而失去接受大学教育的机会。

雅思大作文审题

雅思大作文审题

1.2014.11∙22Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?2.2015∙ll∙14The best way to teach children to cooperate with others is through team sports at school.To what extent do you agree or disagree?3.2015.11.07For schoolchildren, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?4.2009.05.16It has been believed that people who read for pleasure have developed imagination and languageskills better than people who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?5.2015.10.10Some people think that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and diseases. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6.2015.05.16Some people say that many schools encourage students to evaluate and criticize their teachers in order to improve the quality of education while others say that this will lead to the loss of respect for teachers and disrupt class.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.7.2009.01.10Some people think that the range of technology available to individuals makes the increasing gap between the rich and the poor.To what extent do you agree or disagree?8∙ 2009∙01.15Students in schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television).To what extent do you agree or disagree?9.2009.04.25Some people think that computer and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think that students can learn effectively with teachers in schools.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.10.2009.02.07Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think that the developing countries require financial aid from international organization, but others argue that they should need practical aid and advice.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.12.2009.02.21Today most of people understand the importance of protecting the environment, while some people think individuals are too weak to take actions and make a difference.Discuss why someone holds such an opinion.What should be done to deal with this problem?13.2009.07.11Some people think that companies and individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up pollution that they have caused.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?The environmental problem in the world cannot be solved by ordinary people, but governments and large companies should be responsible for this problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree?15∙ 2009∙02∙28Concerning the public health problems, some people think the government should increase the sport facilities; others think it should take other measures to help resolve this problem.Discuss and give your own opinion.16.2009∙04∙04Nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods aιe ιelatively cheaper to buy.Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?17.2009.10.10An increase in production of consumer goods results in the damage of the natural environment.What are the causes and possible solutions?18.2009.12.05Nowadays, people always throw old things away when they buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again.What factors may cause this phenomenon?What effects could the phenomenon lead to?19.2009.04.18If a product is good or it meets people ,s needs, people will buy it. Thus, advertising is unnecessary and no more than entertainment.To what extent do you agree or disagree?20. 2009.05.21A hundred years ago, people think that human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Now it seems that this is not sure in that situation.In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays?In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?21.2009.07.23Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism?What changes would you like to see in the new century?22.2015.07.23Some people say that the government should give the healthcare the first priority, while others believe that there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers, money.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.23.2009∙08∙29Nowadays a growing number of international tripsmake the maj ority of different regions of the world much more similar than ever before.What are the reasons for this? ______________Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?24.2009.11.19Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people,s quality of life in developing countries. However, others believe that free education should be offered.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.25.2009.07.04Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?26.2009.11.14Some people say that professional workers suchas doctors, nurses and teachers make greater contributions should be paid more than those sportsmen and entertainers.To what extent do you agree?27.2009.09.05Some people think that a large proportion of people should go to university, while others think that they should work as car mechanics and builders, etc. to satisfy the national demand.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.28.2015.11.21Too much emphasis has been put on going to university for academic study. We should encourage people to have vocational education since there are not enough qualified tradespeople, electricians and plumbers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?29.2010.05.08Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful.To what extent do you agree or disagree?30.2010.01.14In today,s world, it is private companies rather than governments who pay for and carry out scientific research. ______________________________Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?31.2009.08.13The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice.To what extent do vou asree or disagree?32.2009.10.24Some people think the function of university education should be to prepare students for employment, but others believe university educationcan offer many other functions.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.33.2009.04.30Some people think that museums should be an enjoyable place, but others think that the purpose of museums should be to educate. ____________ Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.34.2009.05.09Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all the school subjects, while others think that teenagers should learn the subjects they are best at or they are interested in. ___________________ Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.35∙ 2009.09.26In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people.36∙ 2009.11∙07The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world.Discuss the possible reasons and give suggestions on how to solve the problem.37. 2009.06.13Research report suggests that the majority of35∙ 2009.09.26In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people.36∙ 2009.11∙07The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world.Discuss the possible reasons and give suggestions on how to solve the problem.37. 2009.06.13Research report suggests that the majority of。

雅思大作文审题(课堂PPT)

雅思大作文审题(课堂PPT)
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焦点句
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Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed
• 观点陈述型: • There is a perception that …, while a counter-
argument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
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• 背景: • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点: • There is a perception that higher prices at the
pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点: • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.

雅思作文审题(四):“在何种程度上同意”类

雅思作文审题(四):“在何种程度上同意”类

雅思作文审题(四):“在何种程度上同意”类作者:唐老雅来源:《英语世界》2019年第11期我们先来看看以下一组雅思考试真题:1. Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?;(2011/8/3)2. Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2015/12/12)3. Nowadays, there is a large amount of advertising aimed at children. Some people think they have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2016/2/20)4. New parents should attend parenting courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2016/5/28)5. Some people think that technology makes life complex, so we should make our life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2017/2/18)6. Nowadays, many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?; (2018/11/10)以上这些题目的共同点是:命题人先给出一个观点,然后问考生“在何种程度上同意或者不同意”这个观点。

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析再犯罪的原因和解决办法一、2023年6月20日雅思大作文题目Many criminals continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happen? How can we solve this problem?二、范文及解析IntroductionA mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime, exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本场考试重复1月14日大作文考题,虽然是很多考生害怕的犯罪类话题,但本题以说明文的形式考出,要求分析犯罪分子被释放出之后继续犯罪的原因及解决方法,是一个复古旧题,整体难度并不大;mushrooming adj.迅速增长的;越来越多的;ceaseless adj.不断的;不停的;baneful adj.不好的;有害的;ticklish adj.难对付的;棘手的;Body 1The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causesfor anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embark on a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, are inundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they, running after revenge, are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.解析:再次犯罪的原因有:(1)物质层面:犯过罪的人出来之后在稳定生活重新融入社会上存在明显困难;(2)精神层面:报复心理;culprit n.不好的事情的原因;罪魁祸首;reintegrate into v.重新融入;living odds n.生活窘境;verbal aggression n.语言攻击;embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路;larceny n.盗窃;be inundated with v.充斥着;resentment n. 愤恨;怨恨;revenge n.复仇;are apt to v.倾向于;易于;perpetrate v.犯罪;作恶;Body 2Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address this . Primarily, the government should play a leading role by enacting tougher laws and carrying out more severe penalties such as heavier fines or longer sentences for offenders toaccomplish the purpose of deterrence. The authorities should also polish the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieve rehabilitation. To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested, which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities, be they a plumber, a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe are formed man deserves a new leaf.解析:解决方法:(1)政府层面:颁布更严格的法律配备更严厉的处罚以达到更好的震慑作用;进一步改进监禁的教育方式从而达到帮助犯罪分子真正改过自新;(2)家庭和社会:更多地尊重,接纳,包容改过自新的罪犯;prickly adj.麻烦的;address v.解决;enact v.制定;颁布法令;rehabilitation n.改过自新;staunchly adv.强烈地;be furnished with v.具有;配备有;solicitude n.安慰;关怀reformed adj.改过自新的;ConclusionIn conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.解析:总结前文:notwithstanding prep. 虽然;尽管;gravity n.严重性;三、范文2There are a variety of punishments for criminals, including imprisonment, fines, and community service. However, even after serving their sentences, a significant proportion of ex-prisoners continue to commit crimes. This essay will explore the reasons behind this and propose solutions.对罪犯有各种各样的惩罚,包括监禁、罚款和社区服务。

雅思大作文真题之年轻人做社区义工利弊范文

雅思大作文真题之年轻人做社区义工利弊范文

雅思大作文真题之年轻人做社区义工利弊范文一、2023年9月9日雅思大作文题目Some people suggest that young adults should be encouraged to do some unpaid work for a period of time for the community to help people. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?(2023/09/09)二、2023年9月9日雅思大作文范文及解析IntroductionYoung adults, as responsible citizens of a progressive society, are highly suggested to be engaged in unpaid community service. In spite of some valid concerns to such involvements, I find myself in staunch agreement with the statement with some of the reasons elucidated in this essay.解析:1本次考题跟剑桥雅思9 Test 2的大作文很像,但是限定词有所不同,审题注意针对young adults 和community;剑桥雅思9 Test2:Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?staunch adj.坚定的;elucidate v.阐明,解释;Body 1Indisputably, charitable activities in community organisations will proffer young adults a profound life experience. With daily lives being awash with electronic gadgets, we are living in an age when the young, after work and study, mostly go home and are glued to browsing the Internet or playing computer games. A healthy life balance, by this token, is increasingly hard to follow. Sparing time in charity work, therefore, will prevent them from sitting and2squandering their time. Meanwhile, skills gained through these compulsory work, be it working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children, will be an asset on their CV and bring tangible boons in increasing their employability.解析:(1) 社区组织活动将为年轻人提供深刻的人生体验,帮助年轻人获得实践性技能,有助于他们将来的就业;be awash with v.被…所淹没;are glued to v.盯着;紧贴着;粘到…上;by this token 按照这个逻辑;由此推断;squander v.浪费,挥霍(金钱、时间等);asset n.有利条件,有价值的人或物;tangible adj.明确的,真实的;boon n.裨益,优势;毫无疑问,社区组织的慈善活动将为年轻人提供深刻的人生体验。

雅思高分作文:孩子看电视的利弊讨论

雅思高分作文:孩子看电视的利弊讨论

雅思高分作文:孩子看电视的利弊讨论雅思大作文题目:Some people think watching TV everyday is bad for children. Others think it is good for developing children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有些人认为每天看电视对孩子不好,其他人则认为这对孩子的成长有好处。

讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

【思路解析】这是一道双边类的大作文,聊的是看电视对于孩子的利弊问题。

审题时注意限定对象“children”,论证时要考虑孩子的特点。

看电视对孩子有利有弊,重点看家长引导孩子看什么样的电视节目。

如果是看一些科教类的节目,孩子可以通过电视拓宽自己的视野和知识面。

但如果孩子喜欢看一些偏暴力类的节目,孩子容易经不住诱惑,走上歧途。

今天的这篇范文作者给出了自己的观点,并通过举例方式给了充分的论证,同学们可以学习作者的观点和思路。

【高分范文】Some people believe that watching television is not good for children while there are many others who believe that television is informative and educational for children. I firmly agree with the latter statement but in my opinion parents should decide which shows their children should watch.On the one hand, several lines of evidence suggest that television is informative and educational for children. To begin with, shows like world discovery broadcasted ontelevision help children to learn about new inventions. Furthermore, watching programs is an informative way of entertainment for children. For example, my son absolutely loves watching programmes on National Geographic/Discovery/BBC Earth. Many of these programmes have even helped him with his school assignments. He is not really into reading, but these shows give him the knowledge and information he needs.However, television can be informative and educational only when parents decide which shows their children should watch. There are many shows broadcasted on television which can be unsuitable for children. Firstly, there are some shows which are related to violence, drugs and sex. These shows spoil the mindset of children. Secondly, young children blindly follow some characters and learn violent attitude from them. For instance, in the recent past there were many reports about crimes committed by teenagers. Investigations revealed that many of them had the habit of watching violent shows on television. Inspired by these programmes they plotted crimes. This is a good example of the harmful impact of television programmes on children. Thus it goes without saying that parents can make television either destructive or constructive for children.To conclude, although television programmes can be informative for children, parents should help them choose the right programmes. If children are allowed to watch whatever they want, they may unwittingly choose shows that have a detrimental impact on them.【亮点词汇及短语】informative adj. 提供有用信息的;教育性的educational adj. 有教育意义的world discovery 世界探索new inventions 新发明National Geographic 国家地理school assignments 学校的作业unsuitable for 对……不合适violence 暴力spoil the mindset 摧毁精神状态blindly follow some characters 盲目模仿一些角色had the habit of 有……的习惯plotted crimes 密谋犯罪unwittingly adv. 不知不觉地;不知情地;不经意地detrimental impact 有害的影响。

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略雅思写作第一部分满分攻略TASK 1写作三大步骤(1)审题:找出主要信息点,具体为两个任务:A: 辨别所要写图表的类型,是线状(line ),柱状(bar ),还是饼状(pie)等B: 找图表的主要内容,是人口变化,交通工具,受教育水平,或者是一项工艺的制作流程。

(2)构思:审题是对文章主要内容的一个大概认识,而构思就是对自己认识的进一步深化。

构思的主要任务为:分析图表的主要特征,弄清写作重点并选用适当的分析方法。

图表的主要特征是指其所描述现象或者问题的规律,并找出描述重点,不是图表上所出现的所有信息都要写出来,之后就是分析方法的选择,主要的分析方法有:数据分类,数据比较,平铺直叙法等,具体选哪种,需要根据图表的内容来确定。

(3)写作:写作是对前两个步骤的确认。

考生把自己的想法准确而详细的落实下来。

一般来说,这个部分的写作可以采用三或四段式:1)引言段(用简短的语言来描述图表的主要内容)。

一把来说,写作命题会给出的主要信息,如,The line chart below shows thegrowth of households with personal computers in the U.S.通过这句话,我们可以了解图表的主要信息,“美国每个家庭所拥有计算机量的增长变化。

”在这种情况下,考生可以重现组织一下这个具体,在中间加入一些具体的数字和变化年限等,使得阅卷老师一下就明白图表的主要内容。

引言段通用句式如下:This is a table / chart / (line线状 bar柱状pie饼状)graph whichdemonstrate / illustrate / reveal /depict/privide informationabout.............2)图表具体信息描述段:这个段落主要描写体现图表主要特征或总体变化规律的数据或信息,并用恰当的连接词语,如,on contrast , on theotherhand, however, like wise 等,把文章内容紧密的衔接起来。

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作老人缺乏锻炼的原因与解决方法一、2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?二、范文及解析IntroductionTaking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged, plays midwife to helping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本次task 2是新考题,但是整体难度并不大,审题注意限定词older people;play midwife to v.促成;帮助;ticklish adj.不安定的;难对付的;viable adj.可望成功的,切实可行的;avert v.防止,避免;bleak adj.不乐观的;Body 1Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not look feasible since most youngsters, bread winners in families, are swamped with work under this cut-throat competition, under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores and minister to their grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital era is saturated with intriguing activities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightly grip the old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old will be indisposed to step out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack of tailored creational amenities in the vicinity of residence will dampen the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.解析Causes:(1)年轻人忙碌,老人需要帮助照顾家庭,带孩子;(2)老人在现代生活中的生活方式也有明显变化;(3)缺乏适合老年人运动锻炼的基础设施;feasible adj.可行的,办得到的;be swamped with v.忙着做;忙的一塌糊涂;cut-throat adj.(竞争)残酷的,激烈的;minister to v.照顾;援助;be saturated with v.使充满,使饱和;intriguing adj.非常有趣的,引人入胜的;grip v.使感兴趣,吸引住(某人)的注意;be indisposed to v.不愿意;tailor v.定做;迎合,使适应;amenity n.便利设施;vicinity n.周围地区,邻近地区,附近;dampen v.减弱,抑制;Body 2In order to address the prickly problem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role by earmarking funds to proffering more age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path, which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government, disseminating information through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also of tangible boons in boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of being boomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.解析Solutions:(1)政府起主导作用,投资完善运动设施,定制一些适合老年人锻炼的器材;(2)宣传以提升老人锻炼的思想意识;(3)年轻人要学会承担更大的家庭责任;prickly adj.多刺的;棘手的;earmark vt.指定……的用途;划拨(款项);proffer v.递上;提供,提出;disseminate v.散布,传播(信息、知识等);tangible adj.明确的,真实的;boon n.裨益,优势,有用的东西;boomerang children 回归子女;啃老族;ConclusionIn conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.解析总结前文信息;重申观点。

雅思作文考题审题误区分析

雅思作文考题审题误区分析

雅思作文考题审题误区分析雅思作文考题审题误区分析下面雅思为大家整理了雅思大作文审题误区分析,供考生们参考,以下是详细内容。

雅思大作文审题误区题目的题干主次不分一个完整的雅思考题,一般是由题干部分和提问部分组成。

题干部分通常是一到二个句子,这二个句子之间的逻辑关系一般为因果,转折或者并列。

若是并列关系的话,前后这二个句子意思的重要性是一致的,但是若题干部分是因果或者转折关系时,意思的重点就放在了表示结果的和表示转折的这个句子上了,于是另外一个句子就变成了次要意思。

而很多考生在考试或者平时训练时,往往会很想当然地把题干中一些比较熟悉的单词当作题目的重心,然后马上就提笔展开写作。

其实这是很不对的。

下面我们来看一个考题:Scientificand technological advances bring benefits to our daily life. However,mostscientists are no longer able to find solutions to the problems they havecreated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?可能读了这个题目后很多考生会觉得接下来的'作文里至少有一段是要去论证一下科技进步给生活带来的哪些好处或者便利。

其实如果你写了这个内容的话那么就大错特错了。

题干的逻辑关系是转折,这就意味着转折词以后的部分是题干的主要意思,前面那个句子只是用来进行背景铺垫或者对比的作用。

因此,我们在对这篇作文进行段落布局的时候一个方面是要去论述一下为什么科学家很难找到解决科技进步所造成问题的解决方案,而另外一个方面则需说明一下科学家们已经或者可以或者有能力找到所有或一些解决办法。

这样的双边论证从思路上才是正确的。

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2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文

2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文

2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文6.10雅思大作文真题解析+高分范文话题:社会话题—人们是否应该交税题目:Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?写作思路:公民纳税是合理合法的事情。

政府需要用税收的钱来维持社会的正常运转,比如建设和维护基础设施,提供各种公共服务。

此外,税收制度也是一种财富再分配的机制,高收入群体缴纳的税收比例更高。

政府将用税收资助弱势群体,建立社会保障体系,促进了社会的稳定和发展。

所以,除了部分低收入、困难的免税群体,大部分人都需要缴税。

雅思写作真题范文Taxes play a vital role in funding public services andensuring societal well-being. While some people arguefor keeping all the money earned and question thenecessity of paying taxes to the state, I disagree with thisopinion.Admittedly,individuals with low ines can retain allthe money they earn, which is a mon policy adoptedby many countries worldwide. This is to ensure everymember of society has the money to meet their basicsurvival needs.However, when a person s inesurpasses a certain threshold, they should fulfill theirobligation of paying taxes to the state.One primary reason for paying taxes is that governmentsneed money to maintain criticalinfrastructure andprovide public services. Education, healthcare.transportation, and public safety are all supported by taxrevenue. Without adequate funds, these essentialservices would suffer, affecting people' s lives andhindering societal progress. By contributing a portion oftheir earnings through taxes, individuals activelyparticipate in building a well-functioning society.真题范文Moreover, taxation serves as a mechanism forredistribution of wealth and the promotion of socialstability.In most tax systems, individuals with higherines contribute a larger proportion of their earningsThis policy can help address socioeconomic disparitiesand provide a safety net for the vulnerable members ofsociety. lf people were allowed to keep all the moneythey earn, it would widen the gap between the rich andthe poor, leading to various social problems, such asresentment towards the wealthy or even an increase inviolent crimes.In conclusion,I disagree with the idea of keeping all themoney people earn without paying taxes, as it fails toacknowledge the crucial role that taxation plays insustaining and advancing society重点词汇与语料fund提供资金necessity必要性retain保留surpass超过threshold门槛obligation义务infrastructure基础设施revenue收入adequate足够的hinder阻碍well-functioning 运转良好的mechanism机制重点词汇与语料redistribution重新分配disparity差距safety net安全保障vulnerable弱势的resentment憎恨sustain维持以上就是关于《2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文》介绍。

415雅思大作文高分范文及解析纳税与其它责任

415雅思大作文高分范文及解析纳税与其它责任

415雅思大作文高分范文及解析纳税与其它责任01大作文题目Some people think that by paying taxes they have made enough contribution to society, others think there are more responsibilities than paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.有些人认为他们通过纳税为社会做出了足够的贡献,而另一些人则认为他们的责任比纳税更多。

讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

02思路解析这是一道双边类的大作文,聊的是人们除了纳税之外是否还需承担更多责任。

审题时需要注意关键词“paying taxes”和“more responsibilities”,也就是除了纳税,公民还应该履行哪些责任,可以促进社会的良性发展。

首先,来看公民纳税的意义。

政府的财政资金很大一部分来自于税收,而有了充足资金,政府才能投资科技、医疗、教育等领域的开发,进行基础设施建设,改善居民的生活质量。

然后再来看除了纳税其他的责任。

公民还应当遵纪守法、积极参与社区建设、尊老爱幼、保护环境等,每个人都应该为社会的有序健康发展出一份力。

03高分范文Tax is the main source of revenue for the government. Therefore, some people feel that paying taxes is the biggestresponsibility that citizens have towards their country. However, others disagree with this view. In their opinion, citizens have several other responsibilities too. I totally agree with them.It is important to pay taxes because governments need moneyto fund various social and infrastructural projects. Therefore, by paying taxes each citizen is making a significantcontribution to the development of their country. However, in my opinion, this is not enough. Just because someone pays taxes it does not necessarily mean that they are good citizens. It isalso wrong to assume that all those poor people who do not pay taxes are not contributing anything to their country. There are lots of criminals who pay taxes. Their financial contribution to the economy is negligible when we consider the amount of damage they cause.Tax is just one of the many contributions that a citizen can make. It is equally important for citizens to abide by the law, respect the social norms and help fellow citizens in need. When people obey the rules, respect others and do volunteer worksthey help create a harmonious society where everyone feels happy and safe.To conclude, paying taxes is just one way of contributing to the society. Being a law abiding citizen who volunteers to help whenever they can is even more important.04相关表达responsibility 责任pay taxes 纳税infrastructural projects 基础设施建设项目making a significant contribution to 对……做出重要的贡献criminals 罪犯negligible 可忽略的, 无足轻重的equally important 同等重要abide by the law 守法do volunteer works 做志愿工作harmonious 和谐的surroundings 周边的环境responsibly 负责地;有责任感地。

雅思高分作文:产品应该更便宜还是更耐用

雅思高分作文:产品应该更便宜还是更耐用

雅思高分作文:产品应该更便宜还是更耐用雅思大作文题目:Some people think products should be made to last as long as possible, while others think making products cheap is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.有些人认为产品应该尽可能的耐用,而有些人认为使产品便宜更重要。

讨论一下双方观点并给出自己的看法。

【思路解析】这是一道双边类大作文,聊的是产品应该更便宜还是更耐用。

双边类的题目,需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对,最终的结论就是我的立场,可以是中立(双方都同意或都反对),也可以是单边支持某一方立场。

审题时注意两点,一是“last”在这里意为持久/耐用,如果理解错了基本上整个文章也就跑偏了。

二是“more important”有一个比较关系存在,论证中要体现为什么比另一方更加重要。

今天给大家分享一篇8分的范文,同学们可以重点学习下作者的行文思路和表达。

【参考范文】According to some people, companies should focus on producing goods that are durable. Others insist that the emphasis should be on manufacturing cheap/affordable products. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and give my own opinion on the topic.解析:首段使用同义转换的方式改写作文题目,比如last=durable, ...is more important=the emphasis should be on..., cheap=affordable等。

雅思大作文真题分析1

雅思大作文真题分析1

写作Task 2Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural areas find it is difficult to access the university education. University should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university.To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题:大学应不应该给贫困地区的学生录取优惠政策?确定观点:进行双方论点头脑风暴Brainstorming......应该不应该1.(社会方面):有利于贫困,农村地区的经济发展1.(学生个人方面):学业,同学竞争的压力2.(社会方面):不利于社会和科学持续发展“不应该”一方我们能想出两个分论,“应该”一方只有一个,因此我们的观点选择是“不应该”。

(有其它双方不同论点的同学可以写留言回复进行讨论)文章结构提纲I.开头段(背景引入+转述话题+自己的观点)II.立论1段:peer pressure, academic challengeIII.立论2段:depress social and scientific developmentIV.驳论段:boost the economy in rural and underdeveloped areasV.结尾:重申观点,概括驳论立论段例文:立论1段To begin with, students from rural areas will suffer form huge peer pressure and academic challenge after they are admitted by universities who give them easier access to higher education. Universities, especially those of international reputation, are full of talented students in every field, and academic achievement is a crucial evaluation criteria of a student. So, a mediocre student from rural regions will find it hard to compete with their outstanding classmates with better education background in urban areas, and some of them may even have difficulty to graduate. For example, in China, some high school students form underdeveloped provinces can get “bonus scores” in the College Entrance Examinations. Unfortunately, most of these “unqualified students” have to drop out university because their poor academic performance.驳论段例文Admittedly, affording students in poor areas easier access to university may help develop the local economy, as some of these students who are benefited from this policy may be willing to devote themselves to the development of their underdeveloped hometowns. Thus, the gap between rural and urban areas may be narrowed to some extent. However, the advantage of this policy is quite limited, since most of the university graduates will choose to stay in big cities for a more promising career development.。

雅思真题大作文范例高分范文

雅思真题大作文范例高分范文

雅思真题大作文范例高分范文_年4月_日雅思大作文高分范文原题:People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet.They do not need to do these face-to-face. Is it a positive or negativedevelopment?雅思写作思路解析:A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去交流和做其他事情B 增加效率C 给生活带来便利A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去交流和做其他事情B 减少公司运营成本C 利润增加A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去交流和做其他事情B 人的社会技能下降C 人觉得疏远,家庭和社区不再有团结的感觉这个题目确定A.只是A有点复杂〝使用网络,而不是面对面去交流.购物和工作〞.如果你只写使用网络的好坏处(而没有不断出现面对面交流的字眼),就是跑题.雅思写作高分范文:Nowadays, many daily tasks can be accomplished without us meeting other faceto face. Generally, I tend to believe it leads to many desirable resuits. It is evident that fulfilling some tasks over modern technologies such as theInternet and other computer networks is highly efficient. In the past, ifpeoplehad the need to do shopping, they had to go to the shopping mall; but today, allcan be done with the click of a mouse and the goods will be delivered home, evenat a lower price. Also, we used to need to go to the bank and wait for adesperately long line if we wanted to make a transaction from one bank accountto another: instead, now we may comfortably make use of the self-service bankingat home. Actually, almost all banks and financial organizations arewell-connected to the Internet, which promotes the development of internationaltrade and world economy dramatically.Thus, obviously, the efficiency of life has been improved significantly dueto the technological advances.However, that is not to say that lack of face-to-face communication bringsabout no problems. One of the biggest concerns is safety. With the increasingvirus threats and well-trained hackers, online deals are well e_posed to allkinds of risks and losses, for e_ample, the wide-spread problem of identitytheft. Therefore, when making the most of the desirable changes brought about bytechnology, we should be aware of its potential downsides and find a way tominimize the negative impacts.Overall, there are both favorable and unfavorable effects on individuals andsociety if everyday tasks are performed without the need of seeing each other.But I am quite optimistic about its future, and I think people and countriesalike will benefit from it on a new level soon.雅思真题作文7分范文:网络取代面对面交流原题People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet.They don t need to do these face to face. Is it a positive or negativedevelopment?雅思写作大作文解析与审题连续几周新题后,本周雅思作文回到了旧题模式,重现了_年7月_日的作文题目.本周考题涉及网络的应用.关于网络对我们生活.工作和学习方方面面的影响,是雅思写作考试中的重点,〝有了互联网,我们就可以不(上班,上学,去博物馆,去商店,去旅游......)〞互联网运用的话题是比较常见的写作题,本次题目要求讨论的话题是〝现在人们都用网络来购物.工作.沟通,不再需要面对面交流了〞,因此我们需要围绕〝网络与面对面交流〞来进行讨论.那么,使用网络来取代面对面交流,这到底是好还是坏呢?无疑,这不是一个非此即彼的问题,我们可以做双边讨论,即先讨论网络交流相对于面对面交流的好处(节约时间.节约成本.提高效率),然后讨论网络交流的坏处(误会增多.感情变淡),最后提出结论,在某些情况下网络交流能给我们带来好处,但在很多情况下,面对面交流是不可取代的.雅思写作7分范文We live in an age of electronic communication, and the Internet does help usin a lot of ways. Yet the fact that we have computers and smartphones readily available does not mean that we do not need face-to-face communication anymore.我们生活在电子通信时代,互联网的确在很多方面帮助我们.然而,我们可以随时使用电脑和智能手机这一事实并不意味着我们不再需要面对面的交流.Electronic technology has dramatically changed the ways we shop, workandcommunicate and has brought about a myriad of benefits. From emails to instantmessaging to Skype to social media, the Internet has made our communicationfaster and easier than ever before. Besides, the cost of the Internetcommunication is significantly lower than the traditional means of communicationlike face-to-face meetings. The technology connects us to our online suppliers,colleagues in the workplace, families and friends from all over the globe forjust a small fraction of the cost required of an offline meeting.电子技术极大地改变了我们购物.工作和交流的方式,并带来了无数的好处.从电子邮件到即时通信到Skype到社交媒体,网络让我们的交流比以往任何时候都快速和容易.此外,与传统的面对面交流方式相比,网络通信的成本要低得多.技术将我们与世界各地的在线供应商.工作同事.家人和朋友联系在一起,其费用只是线下见面所需费用的极少一部分.That being said, scientific evidence is mounting that the advent of digitaltechnology is having a detrimental effect on interpersonal relationships.Everything from body language and facial e_pressions to attentiveness andengagement can indicate different thoughts and feelings—each of which can onlybe truly observed through face-to-face communication. So, despite the clearupsides of digital communication, there are circumstances under which there isno substitute for face-to-face communication. Meanwhile, the complete dependenceon the Internet for communication may result in the sense of alienation anddepression which will keep us apart from the rest of the real world.尽管如此,越来越多的科学证据表明,数字技术的出现正在对人际关系产生有害影响.从肢体语言和面部表情到关注度和投入度可以表示不同的想法和感觉,而这些只有通过面对面的交流才能真正地被观察到.所以,尽管数字交流有明显的优势,但在某些情况下,面对面的交流是无法替代的.同时,完全依赖互联网来交流交流可能导致疏远和沮丧的感觉,这将使我们远离现实世界.In conclusion, it is necessary to balance those Internet interactions withface-to-face communication. It is hard to say how far the Internet would go, butface-to-face communication has not yet been and never will be replaced bytechnology.(274 words)总之,必须平衡网络互动和面对面的交流.很难说互联网能走多远,但面对面的交流还没有.也永远不会被科技所取代._年4月_日雅思写作大作文范文In modern world, it’s possible to shop, work and communicate with people viathe Internet and without any face-to-face contact with others.To whate_tent isthis a positive or negative development?雅思写作真题解析本题属于科技类话题.该题也是科技类话题的经典例题之一,讨论科技与人们日常生活和工作的关系.考生在思考论点时可以围绕题目中给出的〝shop〞,〝work〞和〝communication〞这几个层面入手;此外,论点偏向好处更好写一些.paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点.paragraph 2: 论述远程办公和交流的好处.(1.节约员工的时间;2.扩大朋友圈和缓解相思之苦)paragraph 3: 论述网络购物的好处.(1. 快速便捷 2. 更多购物选择)paragraph 4: 论述缺乏面对面接触的坏处.(1.缺乏现实交际技能)Paragraph 5: 总结上文论点,强调自己的观点.雅思写作大作文范文In such a digital age, which features the wide available of internettoindividuals, users are able to deal with a bunch of daily tasks online, rangingfrom doing shopping, arranging and completing working projects as well asinteracting with strangers and friends. In my view, this tendency is largelybeneficial for people’s work and life.To commence with, it is conceivable that telecommuting saves time foremployees. Without spending time on the way to and from work, office workershave more disposable time and the fle_ible schedule, in which case, they couldwork the hours they wished and have a better rest. In addition, onlinecommunication enlarges the circle of friends. More specifically, socialnetworking websites is deemed as an effective way to make connections withpeople with similar interests and goals. What’s more, long distancecommunication relieves couples or families from lovesickness and homesickness.Even though living thousands of miles away from hometown, they can stare at thefaces of their beloved and listen to their voice.In terms of online shopping, it has been thought as the indispensable part ofmodern life due to its convenience. Instead of going to malls, the only thingconsumers have to do is viewing the high-definition pictures and click thebutton of payment, the commodities they choose would be delivered at home inseveral days or appointed time. This is especially useful for people working ona tight schedule or in times of inclement weather. Undeniably, customers canpurchase goods all over the world; in consequence, there is no need for them totravel to foreign countries for some fancy dresses or handbags.On the flip side, a lack of face-to-face contact does generate harmfuleffects, among which the most obvious is that the loss of interpersonalskillsin reality. In fact, body language such as eye contact and gestures, and socialpsychology laid emphasis on in real way are invalid and ignored in virtualworld, making people incompetent and unskilled in face-to-face situations. In conclusion, although the dimension of communication would be diminished, Istrongly contend that the increasing popularity of communication via internetbenefits people from all walks of life.雅思真题大作文高分范文。

雅思作文审题(一):因果关系类

雅思作文审题(一):因果关系类

雅思作文审题(一):因果关系类作者:唐老雅来源:《英语世界》2019年第07期我们先来看看以下一组雅思考试真题:1. Some people think that technology makes life complex, so we should make our life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2017/2/8)2. Most of the world’s problems are caused by over-population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2019/5/11)3. The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to find jobs and harder for older people to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2019/5/4)4. Art classes like painting and drawing are important to students’ development and should be made compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2017/1/7)5. Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV at home and school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2017/3/18)6. Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because they do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2015/9/19)7. The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as antisocial as smoking. Do you think mobile should be banned like smoking?(2015/2/14)仔細阅读这些真题,我们会发现它们有一个共同特点,那就是这些题目中都蕴含了一个因果关系,详细分析请看下表。

雅思写作审题中的十字交叉法

雅思写作审题中的十字交叉法

雅思写作审题中的十字交叉法最近看视频发现一个很有趣的方法,并且个人觉得非常实用有效的写作方法,所以今天想跟大家一起来分享一下写作中的这种方法。

在数学、化学中都有十字交叉法,举个例子:这个方法在理科教学中用的非常多,那么在写作中该如何运用这种方法呢?首先我们来看一下十字交叉法的公式:下面我们来用这个公式来分析一下2017年1月14日雅思大作文。

TASK2:Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, others think people cannot always enjoy their jobs. So having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.按照十字交叉法,我们在审题的时候应该首先找到公式当中所包含的四个要素:第一个观点、第二个观点、背景及关键字。

第一个观点:job satisfaction is more important than job security第二个观点:job securityis more important than job satisfaction背景词:无关键字:job satisfaction/ job security在写作中这四点应该是写作始终围绕的点,这样可以避免跑题。

比如,在第一段:背景+两个观点+个人观点。

第二段:第一个观点。

第三段:第二个观点。

第四段:个人观点在写作中要紧扣job satisfaction/ job security这两个关键字,这样写出来的文章就会切题合理。

如果同学们能够提升一下自己的语言和语法,这篇文章就完美了。

这就是十字交叉法在大作文审题中的应用,希望能够对大家有帮助。

2024年4月13日雅思大小作文题目

2024年4月13日雅思大小作文题目

2024年4月13日雅思大小作文题目In the IELTS writing exam on April 13th, 2024, candidates were presented with the following essay topics:1. Some people believe that technological advancements have made our lives easier, while others argue that it has made our lives more complicated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.2. In many countries, the gap between the rich and the poor is widening. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to address this issue?I am programmed to provide a comprehensive response to these essay prompts. However, I will strive to emulate a human response by incorporating emotional elements and addressing multiple perspectives.In today's rapidly evolving world, technological advancements have undoubtedly revolutionized the way we live. On one hand, many people argue that these advancements have made our lives easier. With the click of a button, we can access a wealth of information, connect with loved ones across the globe, and even complete tasks that would have taken hours in a matter of minutes. The convenience and efficiency brought about by technology cannot be denied, and it has undoubtedly improved many aspects of our daily lives.On the other hand, there are those who believe that technological advancements have made our lives more complicated. The constant influx of information, the pressure to keep up with the latest gadgets and software, and the blurring boundaries between work and personal life have led to increased stress and anxiety for many individuals. Moreover, the reliance on technology has also raised concerns about privacy and security, with data breaches and cyber-attacks becoming more prevalent in today's digital age.When considering the widening gap between the rich and the poor, it is evident that this issue poses significant problems for society. Economic inequality canlead to social unrest, political instability, and a lack of opportunities for those on the lower end of the socioeconomic spectrum. Furthermore, it can perpetuate a cycle of poverty, as those born into disadvantaged circumstances often struggle to access the resources and support needed to improve their lives.In order to address this issue, a multi-faceted approach is necessary. Governments can implement policies aimed at redistributing wealth, such as progressive taxation and social welfare programs. Additionally, investing in education and skills training for marginalized communities can help bridge the gap by providing individuals with the tools they need to succeed in the workforce. Finally, promoting economic growth in underserved areas and creating opportunities for entrepreneurship can also contribute to reducing the disparity between therich and the poor.In conclusion, the impact of technological advancements and economicinequality are complex issues that have far-reaching implications for society. While technology has undoubtedly brought about numerous benefits, it has also introduced new challenges that must be addressed. Similarly, the widening gap between the rich and the poor presents significant obstacles that require thoughtful solutions. By considering multiple perspectives and incorporating emotional elements, we can gain a deeper understanding of these issues and work towards creating a more equitable and sustainable future for all.。

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开头段练习
• 事实开头法:
• 一个普遍的事实是…(普遍性) • It is quite common that women and men normally have greater freedom of choice in terms of employment. • 令人困惑的是…(纠结性) • It is always confusing to find that women still earn less and enjoy fewer promotions than men in spite of the fact that gender equality has even been highly demanded by the public. • 越来越多的人关注… (表关注) • In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to gender equality since women’s social status has been increasingly promoted.
焦点句
S2 Let readers know what topic is under debate/discussed • 观点陈述型: • There is a perception that …, while a counterargument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether it is necessary to…… • 转折让步型: • However, some people believe this is …and … should be …as much as possible.
开头段练习
• There have always been differences in the types of men and women have done. • However, the trend in modern times has been for both men and women to have greater freedom of choice in terms of employment. • Some people might say that there is no need to go further. • However, in my view, wherever possible, gender equality should be encouraged.
introduction
题 目 A The obesity rate of children is growing nowadays. Some people believe it is mainly due to parents’ inappropriate way of raising them. Do you agree or disagree?
题 目 B In modern society, an increasing number of children suffer from obesity. Some people think parents are main reasons for this, while others think there are other causes leading to this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Task 2 Introduction (argumentation)
Task 2 introduction
introduction
• The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
introduction练习
Protecting the environment
现阶段没有人会否定保护环境的重要性,但关 于如何完成人们却没有达成一致。 These daysrotecting the environment. But there is no consensus on how to achieve this end.
开头段练习
• 个人观点:我个人认为家庭 社会都无法免责。 • My personal view is that both the households and the society cannot avoid the obligation.
背景句
S1 To introduce the topic in general
introduction
• 背景: • The issue of the impact of global environmental problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点: • There is a perception that higher prices at the pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点: • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.
开头段常用语言
• 以惊人的速度向前发展 : • is advancing at an amazing(staggering/astonishing/accelerated) speed • 越来越流行: • is increasingly prevalent/ popular in the contemporary world • 问题越来越严重: • The problem of… is becoming increasingly severe( grave/ serious/ worrying/ disturbing/ worrisome)
introduction练习
Funding education 背景:前十年以来高等教育的资金一直是整个国 家最焦点的讨论及争论话题。 In the last decade, the funding of higher education has become one of the most vital focuses of discussion and disputes across the whole country. 观点:关于谁应为快速增长的高学费负责,人们 观点各有不同。 Opinions are deeply divided as to who are responsible for paying the increasingly high fees.
introduction练习
Restriction on air travel;
• 事实陈述开头法: • (普遍性)It is quite common for sb. to do sth. • (纠结性)It is always interesting to find that individuals take different views towards… • (表关注)In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to …/… have become a controversial issue … • 定义法(需要加个原因): • The importance of …to ..is a matter for debate. • The influence of …is a subject matter.
开头段练习
• 背景:近年来儿童体重剧增这个问题日益热化。 • The issue of the rocketing average weight of children has heated up in recent years.
开头段练习
• 焦点:有观点认为家长应为他们错误的养育方式 负责,而持相反观点 人认为是现代生活方式是 导致恼人局面的根本原因。 • There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
开头段练习
Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
开头段常用语言
• 在当代: • In the present age/ in this day and age/ in the present-day society/ in contemporary society/ at present/ in current society/ in the contemporary world • 众所周知: • It is generally(widely/commonly/extensively/universally) believed that • 越来越重要: • play a/an –role in perform an– function in • Adj. Important significant critical crucial essential fundamental pivotal vital • N: be of importance/ significance
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