2013年9月7日雅思写作分析与范文参考

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2009-2013年雅思G类写作Task 2 大作文真题回顾汇总

2009年-2013年G类真题TASK2写作67. Many people think having enough money brings happiness but others think too much money can bring problems. Do you agree or disagree? ((090115 )许多人认为足够的金钱可以带来幸福vs带来问题，是否同意？68. In some countries, children start school at the age of seven, so they could have more time to build relationship with their parents. In other countries, children start school when they are 4 years old. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? (090207)一些国家，孩子们在7岁开始上学，因此他们有足够的时间和父母建立关系。

而另一些国家，孩子们4岁就开始上学。

讨论利弊。

69. Some people think competitive sport is important for a child’s education. Others think it has negative effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (090221)有人认为竞赛式的运动对孩子的教育很重要，而另一些人则认为会对孩子有不良影响。

讨论两方面并给出想法。

70. Some people argue that a growing number of young people spend too much time in watching TV. Why does this phenomenon happen? And what kinds of activities should be encouraged to them? (090321)有人认为花很多时间在看电视的年轻人越来越多，这是什么原因？有什么样的活动可以推荐给他们？71. Nowadays, an increasing number of countries are confronted with the disappearance of cooking skills. What is the situation like in your country? DO you agree that the young children should be taught home cooking in school? (090418)现今，越来越多的国家面临着厨艺技能的消失。

雅思考试A类大作文范文

2013.9.7雅思考试A类大作文范文题目：Nuclear energy is better than other resources in meeting ever-increasing needs of the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree?津桥国际学院雅思写作范文：第一段：社会背景描述+正向观点+自己观点Nowadays, on account of increasingly serious environmental pollution and gradual depletion of fossil fuels, nuclear energy which should be based on safety remains one of the major choices for most countries in tackling the global energy shortage and climate change. Therefore, some individuals are convinced that nuclear energy to be given foremost consideration can meet ever-increasing demand of humans toward energy. After serious consideration, I deem it is not only conducive to sound development of environment for mankind, but to maintaining social stability and harmony. .第二段：支持观点论点：核能利于人类生存环境+反向例证：矿物燃料危害+结论：核能势必优先发展To begin with, nuclear energy utilized in reasonable and effective way plays an active role in promoting the benignant and sustainable development of survival environment of human beings. For example, utilizing the nuclear energy is a valid way to greatly eliminate deteriorating environmental situation triggered by the excessive use of fossil fuel, because fossil fuel can conduce to global warming that triggers a series of issues including melting glaciers and sea-level rise. Besides the global sea-level rise can directly submerge the coastal lowland areas with dense population, and developed industries and agriculture. Therefore, nuclear power is bound the preferred way to replace the traditional energy resources.第三段：支持观点论点：核能有利于社会和谐稳定+反向例证：石油资源导致区域冲突与不稳定+结论:核能有效规避此问题In addition, reasonable development and utilization of nuclear energy can be the energetic motivation to maintain stability and harmony of the society. Namely that United States waging war toward Iraq was intended to seize the plentiful oil resources in the Middle East, which imposed great regional conflicts and made Iraqi people suffer from irretrievable pain. Furthermore, suppressing European oil resources and crippling the European economy by the means of United States getting the command of oil resources in the Middle East gave rise to conflicts and instability between European countries. However，Utilizing and popularizing nuclear power adequately can effectively evade the series of issues evoked by seizing the energy sources .第四段：让步段另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳另一种观点：核能带来致命危害+和平隐患对此反驳：双边多边合作解决此问题+核能与社会经济发展紧密相连Admittedly, radioactivity of nuclear power can bring about the fatal detriment, such as the Nuclear leak of Fukushima Nuclear Power Station. Besides, it also generates hidden dangers toward World Peace, such as nuclear issue in Iran and North Korean. However, multilateral and bilateral cooperation utilized by various countries can adequately share the precious experience, communicate information and enforce the law to tackle the relevant issues. Besides, to tackle the climate change, nuclear industry, especially in 21 century, is bound to maintain vibrant momentum of development and get more closely related to economic and social development of countries around the world.第五段：总结段：总结观点+建议/倡导To sum up, after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view that utilizing the nuclear energy in reasonable and valid way can play the irreversible role in improving the deteriorating survival environment and safeguarding long-term unity and stability of society. Meanwhile, governments around the world need to increase consultation, build consensus, deepen cooperation and tackle changes of nuclear safety together.。

2013年全年雅思真题分析-小作文

2013年全年雅思真题分析-小作文
为了方便烤鸭们做雅思写作练习，为整理了2013年全年雅思写作真题分析，2013年全年雅思考试大作文题目汇总，2013年全年雅思考试小作文题目汇总，希望烤鸭们能够做好雅思写作考试练习。

查看：2013年全年雅思考试小作文题目汇总
根据以上数据我们可以做出如下总结：2013年柱图是雅思小作文考察的重点。

在这一年，柱图所占比例(接近三分之一) 明显高于别的图表。

而表格图，线图，饼图分别出现十次，八次和六次，占整个题的比例均在10%—20%。

剩下的流程图，地图和混合图出现的频率均为10%左右。

但是实际上小作文的类型不是那么重要，因为不同图形对应的写法并不是大相径庭的。

事实上，只要按照“动态图”和“静态图”的分类来进行学习，考生就会发现很多明显规律。

1. 有时间变化的动态图才要求考生进行“增加”、“减少”、“翻倍”、“减半”等趋势性描述
2. 而静态图则是围绕相同时间不同的数据之间的大小比较。

另外流程图和地图题型平时也应该练习一到两次，因为它们出现频率虽然低，但相对稳定。

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剑桥雅思写作9分范文

剑桥雅思写作9分范文全文共四篇示例，供读者参考第一篇示例：剑桥雅思写作9分范文是许多考生梦寐以求的目标，因为在雅思考试中，写作部分是考生们最容易失分的一个环节，而如果能够获得9分的成绩，不仅可以为自己的留学梦想加分，还可以为自己的英语水平证明注入信心。

下面我将为大家分享一篇剑桥雅思写作9分范文，供大家参考。

雅思写作的主题通常是关于社会、文化、环境等方面的话题，以此来考察考生们对于当今社会问题的理解和分析能力。

以下是一篇经典的剑桥雅思写作9分范文：题目：现代社会中越来越多的年轻人选择过简单的生活方式，他们放弃了追求财富和名利的念头，转而追求简单而真实的生活。

请你谈谈对这种趋势的看法。

范文：In today's society, more and more young people are choosing to live a simple life. They are abandoning the pursuit of wealth and fame, instead opting for a simple and authentic lifestyle. This trend has sparked a heated debate among people.On the one hand, those who support this trend argue that the pursuit of simplicity can bring a sense of peace and contentment to individuals. In a fast-paced and materialistic society, many young people feel overwhelmed by the pressureto succeed and constantly compare themselves to others. By choosing to live a simple life, they can focus on what truly matters to them, such as personal relationships, health, and personal growth. Moreover, living a simple life can also have positive effects on the environment, as it involves consuming less and reducing waste.以上就是一篇经典的剑桥雅思写作9分范文，希望对大家有所帮助。

2013年全年雅思真题分析-大作文

2013年全年雅思真题分析-大作文为了方便烤鸭们做雅思写作练习，为整理了2013年全年雅思写作真题分析，2013年全年雅思考试大作文题目汇总，2013年全年雅思考试小作文题目汇总，希望烤鸭们能够做好雅思写作考试练习。

查看：2013年全年雅思考试大作文题目汇总一、题型分布备考的重点仍然应该放到argument这类题型上，因其所占比列超过70%。

今年report 题型出现了5次，而混合型更是只出现了2次。

就这两类题型而言，趋于回到2011年的趋势，稳定在一个较低的频率。

但是不管是遇到哪一种题型，只要事先了解并练习了不同题型对应的文章主体结构安排，就能保证文章主体结构清晰。

二、话题分布1. 贴近生活的社会类话题比重加大就作文话题分布而言，有个明显的特点是仅社会（生活方式）类和教育类这两个板块就占整个话题分布的57.5%，出题频率非常高。

再结合具体题目内容不难发现，今年雅思大作文倾向于走“平民路线”，更倾向于考察日常生活接触多的方面的看法和语言功底。

科技类，环境类和政府类话题均占7.5%，犯罪类和旅游类分别占5%，而剩余各话题所占比列均低至2.5%。

因此我们可以总结，社会生活类和教育类是雅思作文出题重点，更抽象的经济类，全球化等是被明显弱化的板块。

2. 体现出两个话题相结合的情况比如2013年6月的这个道真题Some people think that parents have a great influence on their children, others believe that the media is a bigger influence.（讨论家庭对孩子的影响大还是媒体的影响更大。

）就是教育和媒体类话题的结合。

3. 所有话题的内容有细致化的趋势试着分析1月真题Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?（对小孩的照顾可能已经成为社会中最重要的一件事情。

剑桥雅思9真题及解析Test3写作

写作名师点‎题：这个题目属‎于argu‎menta‎tion辩‎论型题目。

题干中包含‎d iscu‎ss both sides‎,则必须使用‎对称式结构‎。

从思路上来‎说，比校难写，不容易找出‎理由。

可以围绕以‎下思路:人们现在的‎工作、学习压力大‎，没时问运动‎:人们在空闲‎时一般都看‎电视、上网.不做运动等‎。

雅思写作高‎分范文：A probl‎e m of modem‎socie‎t ies is the decli‎n ing level‎of healt‎h in the gener‎a l popul ‎a t ion‎. One possi‎b le solut‎i on is to provi‎d e more sport‎s facil‎i ties‎to encou‎rage a more activ‎e lifes‎tyle. Howev‎er, there‎ are some peopl‎e who doubt‎ wheth‎er the solut‎ion would‎ have effec‎ts.Advoc‎ates of this solut‎ion belie‎ve that incre‎asing‎ the numbe‎r of sport‎s facil‎ities‎ is the best way to impro‎ve the weU-being‎ of peopl‎e. First‎ of all, nowad‎ays peopl‎e have to devot‎e more time and energ‎y to their‎ caree‎rs and there‎fore they are too busy to spare ‎time for physi‎cal exerc‎ises. If there‎ were easy-to-reach‎ local‎ sport‎s facil‎ities‎, they would‎ be more likel‎y to take part in physi‎cal activ‎ities‎regul‎arly. Anoth‎er reaso‎n is that today‎'s seden‎tary lifes‎tyle means‎ that physi‎cal activ ‎i ty is no longe‎r part of peopl‎e's leisu‎re time. If more sport‎s facil‎ities‎ were offer ‎e d, doing‎ a varie‎ty of sport‎s would‎ be much more attra‎ctive‎ than just sitti‎ng in front ‎of a scree‎n every‎ eveni‎ng.Howev‎er, there‎ are some reaso‎ns why the solut‎ion may have littl‎e effec‎t. In the first ‎place‎, inter‎est in sport‎s is not unive‎rsal, and addit‎ional‎ facil‎ities‎ might‎ simpl‎y attra‎ct those‎ who are alrea‎dy fit, not those‎ who need them badly‎. What we shoul‎d do is to help child‎ren devel‎op a posit‎ive attit‎ude to exerc‎ise at an early‎ age. In the secon ‎d place‎, there‎ may be bette‎r ways of tackl‎ing this probl‎em. For examp‎le, high tax penal‎t ies could‎ be impos‎ed on high-fat food produ‎cts, tobac‎co and alcoh‎ol, as exces‎sive consu ‎m ptio‎n of any of these‎ contr‎ibute‎s to poor healt‎h. Even impro‎ving the publi‎c trans‎port would‎ help becau‎se it takes‎ a longe‎r time to walk to the bus stop than to the car.In my opini‎on, incre‎asing‎ the numbe‎r of sport‎s facil‎ities‎ may not have the desir‎ed resul ‎t s. Peopl‎e shoul‎d be encou‎raged‎ to form the habit‎ of doing‎ regul‎ar physi‎cal exerc‎ises when they are young‎. In addit‎ion, some bette‎r appro‎aches‎ may assis‎t in impro‎ving peopl ‎e's healt‎h.作文结构分‎析：根据题目要‎求，此范文使用‎了对称式结‎构，文章分为四‎段:第一段介绍‎题目背景并‎简述双方观‎点:第二段对同‎意这种做法‎的观点进行‎了分析，并说明了两‎个理由:第三段时反‎对这个做法‎的观点进行‎了分析，也阐述了两‎个理由;第四段总结‎全文，提出自己的‎观点。

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2013年9月雅思写作考试题汇总

2013年9月雅思写作考试题汇总+解析9月7日BY 上海环球雅思邹燕萍提示：首先分析题目，类似于地图题。

有两张，介绍了美国和日本办公室的相关格局。

之所以只能说类似于地图题，是因为过往的经验告知大家，地图类一般考的最多的都是城镇变迁这个类别。

这次考试的图型不是流程图，近似于地图。

但不是体现时间变化的地图，而是类似于两个地方同一个时间点的格局比较。

没有明显时间标志词的时候，时态上可以选择一般现在时。

写作方法上，原则上一个图形写一段。

然后是读题，小作文忌讳主观评论，更需要的是客观描述图形。

比如本次考试，可以先看第一个日本办公室，总体是按照部门从上到下来落座；而美国的办公室更多按照功能来划分，从左到右来落座，分成功能房，员工区，管理区。

不建议学生过多的添加主观评论，比如日本人是一个压迫式的格局，美国是一个平等的格局等等。

措辞需要客观。

框架提示：开头段The two diagrams illustrate the structure in a typical Japanese office compared with that in an American office.中间第一段A careful analysis of the first diagram makes it clear that seats are generally arranged based on one’s title. Specifically, it is the general manager who holds the central as well as top position in the office. As to other employees, they are divided, horizontally, into different groups. Within each section, the white-collar workers are seated on either side of the table, with their section manager sitting in the front.中间第二段Different from what is organized in Japanese offices, the American tend to utilize the space by function. The office is separated, from left to right, into three parts. On the left side, there are four rooms for copying, storage as well as conference. Adjacent to these four rooms are a number of independent studios for employees who are seated in the middle of the office. On the right side are several rooms for section managers and the general manager. Most notably, the seat for the general manager is located in the lowest right corner, contrary to the top middle position for the manager in Japan.结尾段In summary, clear from these two pictures is the specific organization of a typical Japanese office versus that of an American. It is noticeable that the Japanese tend to arrange the space according to one’s position while the American prefer a function-based office.二雅思大作文部分题目：Nuclear energy is the best source of power in meeting ever-increasing energy needs，To what extent do you agree or disagree?提示：分析文章关键词是“nuclear energy”,题目类型是观点类别的，所以需要考生开头段提出自己明确的观点。

2013年雅思写作考情分析及10-12月展望

雅思培训班：/kcnet430/雅思一对一咨询qq：16135080812013年雅思小作文考情分析及10-12月展望：2013年1-6月份table考了5次，这次是下半年继7月13日之后第2次出现，所以table 在10-12月份出现的概率较大。

此外，特别需要注意的是Pie在1-6月份考了4次，但是7-9月份1次未考，因此10-12月份考到的可能性非常大。

2013年雅思大作文考情分析及10-12月展望：今年大作文总共考过两次环境类题目，分别是：2013-04-18 Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of human beings, while other people argue that it is wrong to use animals for human. Discuss both side and give your opinion.2013-09-07 Nuclear power is the best source of power in meeting ever-increasing energy needs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?环境总体来说是热点话题，和教育和科技比起来，今年考试次数偏少，但是并不意味着ESOL不重视。

小作文中多次出现以环境为主题的图形，以至于今年的两次流程图(20130223和20130803)都考了水的收集利用。

所以同学们在10-12需要好好准备环境话题。

从提问方式来看，7-9月只出了一次说明文类题目(20130921)，10-12月份很有可能出现一个月考多次的可能性，大家需要认真对待。

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2013年雅思考试大作文题库及部分解析(全)

2013年雅思考试大作文题库(全)2013.01.05A 类Some people spend more time reading books, while others prefer to watch TV.The former group are more likely to develop creative imaginations and have a much better grasp of language skills. Do you agree or disagree?G类Some people believe children should do what their parents tell them to do. Others think children must learn thinking themselves. Discuss both and give your opinion.2013.01.10A 类It is said that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?2013.01.12A 类In some countries, the parents expect children to spend long time in studying both in and after school and have less free time. Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children and the society?2013.01.19A 类In modern society, fatherhood should be emphasized as much as motherhood. Do you agree or disagree?2013.02.02A 类Some people say watching television is bad for Children in all ways, others say it is good for children to get knowledge.G 类Lifestyles and culture in many countries is becoming similar, what's your opinion, positive or negative?2013.02.14A类Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job，but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2013.02.16A类Some people think all lawbreakers should be taken in to prison, others believe that there are better alternatives, (for example, being work to do which is beneficial for local community). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2013.02.23A类Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What's the reasons for this problem? What's the effects to the society?2013.03.02A类Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadavantages?2013.03.09A 类Some think that people should go to college or university to prepare for a successful career. Others believe that they should get a job immediately after they leave school to get more work experience. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.2013.03.14A 类It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree ? 2013.03.23G 类Nowadays, many children are not as fit and healthy as children used to be in the past. What are the causes? How could it be solved?A 类Scientific progress influences our daily life greatly. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?2013.04.06A 类100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?2013.04.13A 类As countries develope, their populations tend to live individually or in a small family units. In your opinion, what is this cause and what are the effects on society.2013.04.18A 类Some people think that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while other people argue that it is wrong.2013.04.27A 类Some people think that older schoolchildren should learn wide range subjects and develop knowledge, other people think that they should only learn a small number of subjects in details.A 类Some people think that older schoolchildren should learn wide range subjects and develop knowledge, other peoplethink that they should only learn a small number of subjects in details.2013.05.11Today, the qualities of life of people in big cities are worse. What are the causes of this problem? Any measures should be taken to solve it?2013.05.16People nowadays are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. Advertising affects what people think is important and sometimes has a negative influence on peopl e’s lives. o what extent do you agree or disagree?2013.05.18Some people think all children learn history in school is important; some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.2013.05.25Some people think government should not spend money on supporting artists and money should be spent on more important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2013.06.08Nowadays people are encouraged to buy more and more consumer products. Some people think it is good for the economy.However,others think it does great harm to the whole society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2013.06.15Some people think that parents have a great influence on their children, others believe that the media is a bigger influence.2013年6月15日雅思写作A类考题回顾雅思考试写作A类考题回顾朗阁海外考试研究中心曾桂兰Task 1Task 22013年6月22日雅思写作A类考题回顾雅思考试写作A类考题回顾朗阁海外考试研究中心王华Task1Task22013年7月6日雅思写作A类考题回顾雅思考试写作A类考题回顾朗阁海外考试研究中心曹美玲Task 1类别Bar chart题目The graph below gives information about households waste ina country from 2000 to 2007.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features, and make comparisons where relevant.题目翻译该图显示了某一国家2000年至2007年家庭垃圾的状况。

雅思写作2013 年总结与解析

雅思写作2013 年总结与解析宗鹏[ 新东方教育科技集团教学培训师]雅思考试写作部分考生普遍感觉难度很大，最终得分很不理想，使其成为众多考生心中“永远的痛”。

如何更加有效地备考，取决于对考试题目特点和规律的把握、取决于对评分标准和要求的精确解读、取决于对考试真题的回顾与总结。

本文将对2013 年雅思写作考题做一个汇总分析，从而帮助考生把握考试动态，更加有针对性地备考。

总的来说，2013 年度的考试在题型上并无新意。

图表作文部分仍是四种数据型图表（曲线图、饼状图、柱状图和表格）以及示意图（地图和流程图）轮番登场。

柱状图以15 次的高出现率领跑全年考试。

表格题以全年12 次的高出现率打败曲线图，而饼状图在全年考查了9 次，与历年的平均水平相当。

另外需要关注的是非数据型图表在本年度的密集出现。

地图题全年出现5 次，流程图全年出现3 次，加在一起共考查8 次，高于年均6 次的历史水平。

在议论文写作部分，话题和提问方式方面没有惊喜也没有惊吓，可以说中规中矩。

教育、科技、政府、生活、社会仍是主考题材。

老题重现仍是命题主旋律，重现范围基本为07 年至09 年的考题。

但老题在以新的面目登场的时候会伴有题型的变化和限定范围的调整，所以话题看似容易，但稍不留意就会偏题跑题导致严重失分。

（一）数据型图表写作部分—柱状图领跑，图表信息量大幅提高在2013 年共48 场考试中，柱状图的地位依旧不容撼动，以15 次的高出现率领跑全年考试。

由于柱状图包含的信息量较大且在数据特点上可以兼有“数据动态变化”和“数据静态比较” 的双重特征，所以备受出题者青睐。

但值得注意的是，在历史考题中出现总数排名第二位的图表类型在这一年出现了变化，表格题以全年12 次的高出现率打败曲线图，在2013 年总数排名第二位。

而饼状图在全年考查了9 次，与历年的平均水平相当。

曲线图是以主要反映数据变化趋势为主要特征的图表，在历史上的出现总数为全年平均12 次，在2013 年的考场上，这种图表类型的考试频率有了显著下降，但难度有了不小的增长，主要体现在曲线条数的增加。

雅思写作9分范文

雅思写作9分范文
《环保意识与可持续发展》
环保意识是当今社会中越来越受到重视的一个话题，人们开始意识到保护环境的重要性，以及可持续发展的必要性。

在雅思写作考试中，这个话题也经常出现，并且对于考生来说，能够深入探讨环保意识与可持续发展的作文会更有深度和分量。

首先，环保意识的重要性不言而喻。

随着工业化进程的加速，地球资源的消耗速度变得越来越快，同时也带来了各种环境问题，比如全球变暖、气候变化、水资源短缺等。

因此，我们需要树立环保意识，意识到自己的行为对地球环境的影响，并且主动做出改变，保护环境。

其次，可持续发展是我们追求的目标。

可持续发展是指在满足当前世代需求的同时，不影响下一代满足其需求的发展模式。

我们需要重视可持续发展，提倡绿色生活方式，减少资源消耗，保护生态环境，以便我们的子孙后代也能够继续享受美好的环境。

在写作中，我们可以从个人、社会和全球层面进行思考。

在个人层面上，我们可以从自身做起，比如节约能源、减少垃圾产生等。

在社会层面上，我们可以探讨政府、企业、NGO等各
种组织对环保意识和可持续发展的推动作用。

在全球层面上，我们可以思考各国如何共同合作，共同应对全球环境问题。

总而言之，雅思写作中关于环保意识与可持续发展的话题是一
个很好的展示自己思考深度和综合能力的机会。

我们应该从多个角度思考这个话题，运用合理的逻辑和丰富的词汇，写出高质量的作文，以获得更高的分数。

2013.9.7雅思考试A类大作文范文

2013.9.7雅思考试A类大作文范文题目：Nuclear energy is better than other resources in meeting ever-increasing needs of the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree?津桥国际学院雅思写作范文：第一段：社会背景描述+正向观点+自己观点Nowadays, on account of increasingly serious environmental pollution and gradual depletion offossil fuels, nuclear energy which should be based on safety remains one of the major choices for most countries in tackling the global energy shortage and climate change. Therefore, some individuals areconvinced that nuclear energy to be given foremost consideration can meet ever-increasing demand ofhumans toward energy. After serious consideration, I deem i t is not only conducive to sound development of environment for mankind, but to maintaining social stability and harmony. .第二段：支持观点论点：核能利于人类生存环境+反向例证：矿物燃料危害+结论：核能势必优先发展To begin with, nuclear energy utilized in reasonable and effective way plays an active role inpromoting the benignant and sustainable development of survival environment of human b eings. For example, utilizing the nuclear energy is a valid way to greatly eliminate deteriorating environmental situation triggered by the excessive use of fossil fuel, because fossil fuel can conduce to global warming thattriggers a series of issues including melting glaciers and sea-level rise. Besides the global sea-level rise can directly submerge the coastal lowland areas with dense population, and developed industriesand agriculture. Therefore, nuclear power is bound the preferred way to replace the traditional energy resources.第三段：支持观点论点：核能有利于社会和谐稳定+反向例证：石油资源导致区域冲突与不稳定+结论:核能有效规避此问题In addition, reasonable development and utilization of nuclear energy can be the energeticmotivation to maintain stability and harmony of the society. Namely that United States waging war toward Iraq was intended to seize the plentiful oil resources in the Middle East, which imposed great regional conflicts and made Iraqi people suffer from irretrievable pain. Furthermore, suppressing European oil resources and crippling the European economy by the means of United States getting the command of oilresources in the Middle East gave rise to conflicts and instability between European countries. However，Utilizing and popularizing nuclear power adequately can effectively evade the series of issues evoked by seizing the energy sources .第四段：让步段另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳另一种观点：核能带来致命危害+和平隐患对此反驳：双边多边合作解决此问题+核能与社会经济发展紧密相连Admittedly, radioactivity of nuclear power can bring about the fatal detriment, such as the Nuclear leak of Fukushima Nuclear Power Station. Besides, it also generates hidden dangers toward World Peace, such as nuclear issue in Iran and North Korean. However, multilateral and bilateral cooperation utilizedby various countries can adequately share the precious experience, communicate information and enforce the law to tackle the relevant issues. Besides, to tackle the climate change, nuclear industry,especially in 21 century, is bound to maintain vibrant momentum of development and get more closelyrelated to economic and social development of countries around the world.第五段：总结段：总结观点+建议/倡导To sum up, after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view that utilizingthe nuclear energy in reasonable and valid way can play the irreversible role in improving thedeteriorating survival environment and safeguarding long-term unity and stability of society. Meanwhile, governments around the world need to increase consultation, build consensus, deepen cooperation andtackle changes of nuclear safety together.。

2013年9月7日雅思写作分析与范文参考

2013年9月7日雅思写作分析与范文参考小作文：A类小作文题根据所给的两张图对比a typical Japanese office & a typical American office答题策略：主体分两段，分别叙述日本和美国；在美国段落加入对比。

日本的主要特点是group,而美国特点是individual.大作文：nuclear energy is the best source of power in meeting ever-increasing energy needs，to what extent do you agree or disagree.相关题目：Fossil fuels are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy are encouraged. Is it a positive or negative development (2009.05.30)提纲：In the era of energy scarcity, diverse sources of energy are requir ed to meet the growing need of the modern technology society. In addition to traditional fossil fuels, alternative energy resources such as nuclear and solar energy have been explor ed and developed. In this essay, the discussion will narrow down to nuclear power, which is raising controversy in terms of its advantages and disadvantages. (被动句，定语从句)Nuclear power gains support for some reasons and the most obvious one is its high efficiency. It is said that a single nuclear plant can generate several times as much power as coal or natural gas. The second upside of this energy is the lower emission of carbon dioxide than fossil fuels during the production. This clean energy power means significantly nowadays when global warming is threatening the survival of human being. Additionally the technology of nuclear power generation is relatively mature compared with solar and this availability reduces its investment in technology development in nuclear plant construction and operation.（并列句，主语从句，对比句，时间状语从句）However, it is the dangers of utilizing nuclear power that arouses the public disapproval. Nuclear leak accidents and waste pollution were reported in some countries, evoking worldwide concern about its security issues like radiation and its negative influence on the environment. Unfortunately there is still no solution to nuclear waste disposal yet. Nuclear power is not a sustainable energy because uranium, the source of nuclear power, is not renewable and the reserve is very limited on the earth.（强调句，动名词，非谓语，there be，原因状语从句，并列句）Based on the above analysis of the pros and cons of nuclear power, it is hard to deny that nuclear is a high efficient and clean source of electricity, but there exists some obstacles to make a safe use of it. Therefore, to answer the question above, nuclear power is one but not the best source of power to meet the demand for energy and other energy resources should be explored as well. (形式主语，宾语从句，转折句，并列句)词汇拓展：1. era 时代2. energy scarcity 电能紧缺3. sources of energy 能源4. fossil fuel 化石燃料5. alternative 可替代的6. solar 太阳能7. narrow down 缩小8. controversy 争论9. nuclear plant 核电站10. generate 生产11. coal 煤12. natural gas 天然气13. carbon dioxide 二氧化碳14. emission 排放15. obstacle 障碍16. mature 成熟的17. utilize 利用18. arouse 引起19. disapproval 反对 n.20. leak 泄露21. evoke 激起22. security 安全23. radiation 辐射24. disposal 处理25. sustainable 可持续的26. uranium 镭27. reserve 储备28. survival 生存。

剑桥雅思13写作范文

剑桥雅思13写作范文摘要：1.问题背景和分析2.解决方案和建议3.总结和展望正文：随着全球化的发展和英语在国际交流中的重要性，越来越多的人选择参加雅思考试以提高自己的英语水平。

剑桥雅思13写作范文为广大雅思考生提供了优秀的写作参考，下面将从问题背景、解决方案和建议、总结和展望三个方面对这篇范文进行解析，以帮助大家更好地理解和应用这篇文章。

一、问题背景和分析剑桥雅思13写作范文的主题是关于城市化对生态环境的影响。

文章指出，随着城市化的推进，自然环境遭受了严重的破坏，如空气污染、水资源短缺等。

这些问题不仅影响了人们的生活质量，还对人类的生存和发展带来了极大的威胁。

因此，解决城市化带来的生态环境问题成为了当务之急。

二、解决方案和建议1.加强立法和政策支持：政府应制定更加严格的环保法规，确保企业和个人在城市化进程中遵循环保原则。

同时，加大对违法行为的处罚力度，以儆效尤。

2.提高民众环保意识：通过各种渠道宣传环保知识，提高民众的环保意识，使大家充分认识到城市化进程中生态环境的重要性。

此外，学校应将环保教育纳入教育教学体系，培养学生的环保观念。

3.科技创新：鼓励企业研发环保技术，减少生产过程中的污染排放。

同时，推广绿色建筑、绿色出行等环保生活方式，减轻城市化对环境的影响。

4.规划城市发展：合理规划城市空间布局，保持城市与自然的和谐共生。

强调生态文明建设，注重城市绿色空间和蓝色空间的保护，提高城市的生态环境质量。

5.跨部门合作：各部门加强协作，形成合力，共同推进生态环境保护工作。

例如，环保部门与交通部门合作，优化城市交通规划，减少汽车尾气排放；与农业部门合作，治理城市周边农田土壤污染等。

三、总结和展望总之，城市化带来的生态环境问题已成为全球性的关注焦点。

只有通过加强立法、提高民众环保意识、推动科技创新、合理规划城市发展和加强跨部门合作等措施，才能有效解决这些问题。

2013年A类雅思大作文汇总

2013年2013年12月21日Science tells us some activities are good for our health and there are some unhealthy activities. But millions of people still do those unhealthy activities. Why? What can we do to change this situation?2013年12月14日Why are young people leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?2013年12月7日与12月12日It is important to preserve both the culture and environment of the places visiting, but some think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. Do you agree or disagree?2013年11月30日As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn language and culture. Do you agree or disagree?More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?2013年11月16日和21日Some languages are increasing in use，while many others are declining. Do you think this is a positive or negative development？2013年11月9日Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree?2013年10月26日Some people think the improvement of living standard only benefits cities more than rural areas. What problems do these differences cause and what solution can reduce the problem?2013年10月19日Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages?2013年10月10日与10月12日Economic progress is one way to measure a country's success. Other people think other factors are also important. What are the other factors? Which factor is the most important one?2013年9月28日Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want，others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.2013年9月21日Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Which factor is the most important for building a perfect society? What should people do to achieve this goal?2013年9月7日和9月12日nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree?2013年8月29日Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.2013年8月17日与24日Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent of each other. Others think the modern world gets people more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.2013年8月3日In many countries today，people in big cities prefer to live alone or in small family units rather than a large ,extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?2013年7月18日和27日The government should spend money on the maintenance of old buildings rather than building new buildings and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2013年7月13日Nowadays human beings tend to copy other popular people's fashion, like clothing and other consumes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2013年7月6日Space travel has been possible for some time. Some people think space tourism can help to develop countries' economic, what do you think? What are the positive and negative effects about it?2013年6月22日Some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.2013年6月15日Some people think the family is the most powerful influence on child's development. Others，however, believe that other things(television, friends, music, etc.)have bigger effects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 2013年6月6日与6月8日Nowadays people are encouraged to buy more and more consumer products, while others believe it is bad for the society as a whole. Discuss both views. 2013年5月25日Some believe that the government should spend more money on other important things rather than arts. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?2013年5月16与18日People today are surrounded by all kinds of advertising, which influence what people think is important and has negative influences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think learning history in school is important. Some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.2013年5月11日Today, the quality of life in some big cities is getting worse. What are the causes for this problem? What measures do you think should be taken to deal with the problem?2013年4月27日Some people think that older schoolchildren should learn wide range subjects and develop knowledge, other people think that they should only learn a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2013年4月13日、18日With the development of many countries, people start to live individually and live in very small family units. What are the causes? What effects does it have on society?Some people think it is acceptable to use animals in any way for the benefit of human beings, others argue that it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes, discuss both views and give your opinion.2013年4月6日100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?2013年3月23日Human society has made great technological progress in the last hundred years. Some people think this also has negative effects on our life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2013年3月9日&3月14日Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their successful career. However, others prefer to get a job as soon as leave school to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.2013年3月2日Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadvantages?2013年2月23日It has been observed that in many countries there are not enough students are choosing to study science subjects at university. What do you think are the causes of the problem? Are there any effects on society?2013年2月14日与16日Some people think young people should be free to choose their jobs，but other people think young people should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Some people think lawbreakers should be sent to prison, while other people think there are some better alternatives (for example, being work to do which is beneficial for local community). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2013年2月2日Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.2013年1月19日Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?2013年1月12日In some countries, the parents expect children to spend long time in studying both in and after school and have less free time. Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children and the society?2013年1月5日与1月10日Some people think that people who read for pleasure acquire better imaginations and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?。