一个对我有影响的人影响我的一个人

一个对我有影响的人-影响我的一个

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一直影响我的那个人

一直影响我的那个人

从我呱呱坠地的那一刻开始，爸爸就是我的启蒙老师，他教会了我在自己的人生中怎样立足，他就是对我影响最大的那个人。

在我五年级的时候，我的功课很差，成绩总在倒数，我受到了很多老师和同学的鄙视。在一次期中考试中，我荣幸的考了第一名，却是倒数的第一名，班主任叫全班同学拿试卷回家给家长签名。

放学后，我拿着这张沉重的试卷回家，不知不觉走到了门口，我独自一个

在家门口徘徊，不敢入门。下班回来的爸爸看见了我，便拉起我进了家门。

太阳慢慢地从西边悄悄地下去了。夜幕降临了，我们也吃完了晚饭，爸爸坐在沙发上看电视，我拿着试卷到了他面前，他一看试卷，出乎我的意料，爸爸居然不批评，却轻轻的把我搂在怀里，慈祥的对我说：“我知你一定有事。”“您怎么会知道呢？”我惊讶的问。“因为在家门口，我就看见了你心事重重的样子”。爸爸漫不经心的说。我终于忍不住泪水，伤心地哭了起来。爸爸语重心长的说：“别哭了，怎能因为一次考试，而对自己的人生放弃呢？只要你竭尽全力了，再失败爸爸也不怪你的，加油吧！爸爸永远支持你。”我点了点头。

在此后的日子里，我发奋拼搏，终于拿回了全班第五名的奖状。我知道，这张奖状有父亲的一份！

还有一次，我去同学家玩，看见她家里有一盆玫瑰，我看着漂亮，心痒痒的便摘了一朵回家。回家后，我一五一

十地告诉爸爸，爸爸二话不说的拉上我到街上买了一盆玫瑰，捧着那盆玫瑰到我同学家负荆请罪。

那次以后，我没有再乱动过别人的东西！

在我脆弱时，爸爸给我鼓励；在我犯错时，爸爸使我改正。

爸爸，谢谢您！您永远都是给我影响最大的那个人！影响我的一个人

this is a rough draft, any feedback is welcome and totally appreciated(: thank you~ Write an essay in which you tell us about someone who has made an impact on your life and explain how and why this person is important to you.

I have known him since elementary school. He lives in the neighborhood across from mine. He is tall, thin, and obsessed with his hair. He cant read his own handwriting. He likes NCIS, cars, and eating the soft part inside a bread bun. He is my ex-boyfriend, one of my best friends,

and has had more of an impact on me than he will probably ever know.

We dated for about two years in middle school and went through a rather bad breakup over the summer. He had every right to be bitter, and I expected our relationship to become awkward and eventually fade away, but instead we became even closer, which still surprises me. Instead of not talking to me, he calls me to make sure I get home safely when it rains. Instead of pretending to not know me, he brings me back a present after going on vacation. He has seen me go through other breakups and hardships, and while I have watched relationships crumble around me, he has always been there to help me out of the rubble. His patience and understanding is astounding. Even when I have tried not to show my distress and no one else has said anything to me, the first thing he does when were

alone is ask me if Im okay. These little things he has done for me for as long as I can remember have really demonstrated how friendship can and should be so powerful and unconditional.

I honestly dont know how we were able to become such good friends, but I like to think that he was willing to give our friendship another chance. The fact that we reconnected almost right after our breakup gave me a new perspective on relationships and how they are built on second chances. He could have easily walked away, but instead he chose to stay and continue to invest in our friendship. This not only maintained the bond between us but also improved my relationships with others, because he really led me to understand that people do make mistakes. Just as he was willing to move past that summer, I have learned that I must move past faults and arguments; that