中考英语作文辅导

作文常用词语
因果：because, because of, therefore, 因果： so,as a result, thus 例举：such as, like, for example, and so on, 例举： 肯定：of course, certainly, 肯定： 对照：1. instead 2. instead of 3. On the 对照： contrary... 总结：1.Generally speaking...2.To tell you 总结： the truth...3 Believe it or not... 4. All in all...5 In a word...6. On the whole...7.For these reasons... 8. That is why...9. As we all know...=As is known to us… 转换话题：1.In my opinion...2.In fact...3. By 转换话题： the way... 4.I am afraid...
学生例文
The life as a Grade Nine student MY life in Grade Nine is busy but colourful. During the last five months I have been through so many things such basketball games and different contests that I hardly have the chance to take a day off, but it is still great to have this kind of experience.
I have worked hard for eight years and I’ll keep working hard in order to have a bright future. The plan I have for the whole year is to work harder than before and study more efficiently. Time goes by quickly and the following six months is very important to me in my whole life. No pains, no gains. I will not waste a single minute and do the best I can to make great progress.
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My class teacher is Miss Wang. She teaches us Chinese. She is good-looking . I think she is very responsible. Because she doesn’t only teach us Chinese but also teach us how to learn Chinese well. She is always polite and helpful to others. She humorous and makes us burst into laughter. When I saw her for the first time, I though she was gentle and kind. She is always in fashion, but if we do something wrong, she will lose her temper. Many students is afraid of her because she loses her temper easily. She always teach us how to be a true man. We learn a lot from that. She is ___ attractive that most of us respect her. (122 words)
本题满分为18分 依据内容、语言和结构按五个档次给分。 本题满分为 分，依据内容、语言和结构按五个档次给分。 A（15-18分）能写出全部或绝大部分内容要点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。 （ 分 B（12-14.5分）能写出大部分内容要点；语言基本无误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 （ 分 C（8-11.5分）能写出部分内容要点；语言有较多错误，尚能达意。 （ 分 D（4-7.5分）只能写出少部分内容要点；语言错误很多。 （ 分 E（0-3.5分）只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词或几个句子。 （ 分 评分时 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量， 确定或调整档次，最后给分。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 细节失分莫忽略 短文字数要控制在60-80字，文章太短太长都将扣分。 在书写时要字迹清晰、整洁、格式正确，大小写分明、标点符号应正确使用。
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This is a photo of my class teacher. She is Mrs Wang. She likes beautiful and lovely. She is helpful. But she usually lose his temper easly. She has two big eyes and a long hair. She is very response. I like she very much.She teach us Chinese .She usually say: “please copy it 100 please time!” She is very angry. When she is happy. She is very funny. She like play traits on us, This is my class teacher, A funny, beautiful,lovely, and helpful teacher. We all like she very much. (105words)
修饰
注意时态和人称
写人 叙事
一般现在时 一般过去时
议论
一般现在时
修饰
从句：名词性从句 定语从句 从句： 状语从句 被动语态 强调句 感叹句
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句子流畅 时态 单词拼写 冠词 大小写 标点符号
一．审题 写好作文必先审题，明确所给的提示或 图表的内容要求，确定写什么，怎么写， 怎样在适当的地方提出所写文章的健康 积极的中心论点；思路讨巧和视角新颖 也可使文章增色不少。
二．结构 要考虑好文章的体裁和布局，一般来说, 文章包括三个组成部分：主题句点出主旨， 发展部分用事实、例子、理由、数据等来 发挥阐明主题，说明或支持主旨，结尾 句起总结、归纳或概括全段中心的作用。
三．表达方式 1 文章中不要总用同一个常用的词， 相同意思可用不同单词表达如many 可换用millions of，a number of等词。 2 采用多种句式，避免在整篇文章中 只使用一两个句式 。引入从句、各种 语态、语气，或谚语
这里推荐大家采用一种行之有效的练习方法，就是模仿写作。 这里推荐大家采用一种行之有效的练习方法，就是模仿写作。 模仿写作 同一语言水平写， 随时的积累， 如果我们每次写作都在同一语言水平写 而不注意随时的积累 提高速度就会比较缓慢。 如果我们每次写作都在同一语言水平写，而不注意随时的积累，提高速度就会比较缓慢。 写作中重要的构成因素，除了语言以外，谋篇布局的逻辑其实是很重要的。如果从投入 写作中重要的构成因素，除了语言以外，谋篇布局的逻辑其实是很重要的。如果从投入 语言以外 逻辑其实是很重要的 产出上比较背诵范文和模仿写作，后者帮助提高的效果应该是更快些。 产出上比较背诵范文和模仿写作，后者帮助提高的效果应该是更快些。因为后者比前者更 比较背诵范文和模仿写作 帮助提高的效果应该是更快些 针对性。你能通过写完之后的比较，更好的发现自己写作中或思维上的问题。 发现自己写作中或思维上的问题 有针对性。你能通过写完之后的比较，更好的发现自己写作中或思维上的问题。但对于 基础弱的、没法成句的学生是必须要记一些的，这样保证在考试紧张时， 基础弱的、没法成句的学生是必须要记一些的，这样保证在考试紧张时，起码能完成 是必须要记一些的 写作任务。如果积累到一定水平之后，自然就会练就更多的谋篇布局的方式方法。 写作任务。如果积累到一定水平之后，自然就会练就更多的谋篇布局的方式方法。再次 强调，对于大部分的学生因把主要精力放在谋篇布局和句型结构的选择上。 强调，对于大部分的学生因把主要精力放在谋篇布局和句型结构的选择上。 因把主要精力放在谋篇布局和句型结构的选择上 建议大量阅读范文和模仿写作同步进行。在一篇范文中看到的好句子， 建议大量阅读范文和模仿写作同步进行。在一篇范文中看到的好句子，争取自己在 大量阅读范文和模仿写作同步进行 下一篇的写作中就把它用出去。 下一篇的写作中就把它用出去。
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My class teacher is Mrs Zhong. And she is a strict teacher. All of us must be agree with she. Because she seldom smiled and ask all of us to be better. And she is a wonderful teacher as well. First, the last batch student whom she taught were good and outstanding. Second, her speech always make us think about future in order to study to get a good future. And then, she is beautiful at heart. Although we are such bad, she teach us___.And across all of these, she is a good class teacher. (110 words)