应用文写作-1建议信学案-浙江省台州市书生中学高中英语写作

应用文写作1--建议信

一、写作思路

第一部分：说明写信的目的；介绍详情、说明原因

第二部分：提出建议并阐述理由(advice +supportive information= 1+1策略)

第三部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复

二、写作套话

<第一部分：说明写信的目的；介绍详情、说明原因>

【简易版本】

1.It is my greatest pl easure to offer you some advice on (probl em)

2.Thank you for your l etter asking me about (probl em). My suggestions are as foll ows.

3.I am writing in reply to your probl em that (probl em).

4.I am writing to express my views concerning (probl em).

5.I am writing with my suggestion/proposal about (probl em).

【进阶版本】

1.I am more than delighted to receive your l etter saying that (pro bl em) / asking for advice on (probl em). Here, I will share with you my suggestions.

2. Hearing that you have some difficulty in (probl em), I am writing to give you some conductive advice on it.

3. You have asked me for my advi ce with regard to (probl em). Perhaps the foll owing suggestions may come to your aid/give you a helping hand (=help you).

<第二部分：提出建议并阐述理由(1+1策略)>

【简易版本】

1.May I suggest that (advice)?+Supportive infor.

2.Why not (advice)? / What about (advice)? + Supportive infor.

3.You may consider doing (advice). +Supportive infor.

4.It woul d be a good id ea if (advice). +Supportive infor.

5.It's even better if you coul d (advice). +Supportive infor.

6.I suggest that you shoul d (advice). +Supportive infor.

7.From my point of view/From my perspective, it woul d be wise of you to do (advice). +Supportive infor.

8.It is time for you to do (advice). +Supportive infor.

【进阶版本】

1.I woul d l ike to advice /suggest /recommend /propose that you shoul d (advice). +Supportive infor.

2.I prefer to make a suggestion/ recommendation/ a piece of advice that you shoul d (advice). +Supportive infor.

3.It i s highly adviced/ suggested/ recommended/ proposed that you shoul d (advice). +Supportive infor.

4.It is advisabl e to (advice). +Supportive infor.

5.I feel that it woul d benefit you/be more beneficial to you if you (advice). +Supportive infor.

6.You’d better do (advice). +Supportive infor. = You may/ might as well do (advice). +Supportive infor.

7.If I were you(Were I you), I woul d do (advice). +Supportive infor.<虚拟语气（倒装）>

8.It is high time that you did/ shoul d do (advice). +Supportive infor.<固定句型>

【连接词】

[首先]：firstly; at first; in the first place; to begin/start wit h; above all;

[其次]: second...third; besides; additionally = in ad dition; moreover = what’s more; furthermore; not only...but also... [最后]: lastly; at last; finally; eventually; ultimaltely; last but not l east.

<第三部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复>

1.Pl ease take good consideration of my advice.

2.I trust you will take my suggestion into account.

3.I woul d be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.

4.I woul d be more than happy if my suggestions coul d be consid ered.

5.I will be quite delighted if my suggestions are of great use to you.

6.I do hope you will find these suggestions /proposals/ recommendations practical / u seful / helpful.

三．范文赏析（1）

Dear Chris,

I am sorry to hear that you are having troubl e fitting in a t your new school. Such probl ems are quite normal. Perhaps the foll owing suggestions may come to your aid.

First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possibl e. In this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be a good id ea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve[v.涉及] teamwork and interactions[n.交流] with other students and are therefore helpful for developing friendly relationships[定语从句]. Last but not l east, faced with some touch probl ems[非谓语], you might consider asking our teachers, who are able to offer you some sensible suggestions[定语从句].