1、小学五、六年级英语作文范例.doc

小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher・ She' s very pretty・ She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth・ Her hair is long・ She likes cats very much・And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her Engl ish i s very good. We often play games in Engl i sh classes・ She i s very kind to us. We all love her・【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是-篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐…介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词［组］,以免写出一些错

句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

P m a student and I am in Grade 5. I get up at six o' clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o' clock・ I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don' t have to go to school on Sunday, and T 1 ike to go swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己-周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It' s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It' s round・ It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. T 1 ike then a lot・ T like ice-creams ・ T like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much ・

How about you? What， s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I am a gir 1. My name is Li Ling・ I' m in Class Three, Grade Five・I’ m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor・After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes・On Sunday, I can wash the clothes・What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意人小写和时态。

Tn The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It' s big and nice・ Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove・ There is a big table here ・ There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they? re strawberries・ And what are those? They are grapes・

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西來训练习作。

My Vi 1lage

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village.

Near the village, there is a forest・ A small river is in front of the village ・The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river・Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. T 1 ike my vi1lage ・ Wei come to my vi11 age!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想…下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。