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2024雅思写作IELTSWriting课件
雅思写作是雅思考试中的一部分，主要评估考生的英语写作能力。
Task 1通常要求考生根据所给图表或数据写一篇报告，主要考察考生的数据分析和描述能力；Task 2则要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，主要考察考生的议论和表达能力。
雅思写作考试要求考生在限定时间内完成两篇作文，分别是Task 1和Task 2。
雅思写作考试简介0102雅思写作评分标准主要包…任务完成情况、语法和拼写、词汇使用、句子结构和连贯性。
任务完成情况评估考生是否按照题目要求完成了写作任务，是否清晰地回答了题目中的问题。
语法和拼写评估考生的语法和拼写是否正确、准确，是否影响了读者的理解。
词汇使用评估考生使用的词汇是否丰富、准确，是否能够恰当地表达自己的意思。
句子结构和连贯性评估考生的句子结构是否多样、复杂，是否使用了恰当的连接词和过渡语，使文章更加连贯和流畅。
030405雅思写作评分标准03要求考生根据所给的图表或数据写一篇报告，分析数据并得出结论。
常见的图表类型包括柱状图、折线图、饼图等。
图表作文要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，并给出理由和证据支持自己的观点。
常见的话题包括教育、环境、科技、社会等。
议论文要求考生在一篇文章中同时完成图表分析和议论两种任务，既需要描述数据又需要发表自己的观点。
这种题型对考生的综合能力要求较高。
混合类型作文雅思写作题型介绍审题与立意仔细阅读题目，理解题意在写作前，务必认真阅读题目，确保完全理解题目的要求和限制。
确定文章主题和观点根据题目要求，明确文章的主题和要表达的观点，确保立意明确、不跑题。
列出要点和论据在审题和立意的基础上，列出文章的主要要点和支持观点的论据，为写作做好准备。
03注意段落内部的逻辑关系在每个段落内部，要注意句子之间的逻辑关系，确保段落内部的连贯性和一致性。
01合理安排段落根据文章的主题和要点，合理安排段落，确保文章结构清晰、层次分明。
02使用合适的转折词和连接词在段落之间和句子之间使用合适的转折词和连接词，使文章更加连贯、流畅。
《雅思写作》课件-2024鲜版
《雅思写作》课件CATALOGUE 目录•雅思写作概述•雅思写作任务类型与技巧•文章结构与段落展开方法•词汇、语法和句式运用指导•观点陈述、论证和批判性思维培养•模拟试题与范文欣赏01雅思写作概述CHAPTER雅思写作考试形式与要求考试形式雅思写作考试分为两部分，第一部分为图表作文（Task 1），第二部分为议论文（Task 2）。
字数要求Task 1要求考生写至少150字，Task2要求考生写至少250字。
时间限制Task 1的建议用时为20分钟，Task 2的建议用时为40分钟。
评分标准及考生常见问题评分标准考生常见问题如何备考雅思写作熟悉考试形式和评分标准积累词汇和句型练习写作请教老师或专业人士02雅思写作任务类型与技巧CHAPTER1 2 3理解图表信息选择重要信息使用适当的语言和结构图表作文写作技巧明确观点提供充分的论据逻辑清晰030201议论文写作技巧混合题型应对策略分别应对识别题型针对不同类型的题目，采用不同的应对策略。
例如，对于包含图表和议论的题目，可以先描述图表，然后提出观点并进行论述。
整合信息03文章结构与段落展开方法CHAPTER引言段写作方法开门见山背景介绍提出疑问论证方法运用举例、对比、因果等论证方法，充分阐述主题句。
主题句每段开头明确主题句，概括该段主要内容。
过渡与衔接使用过渡词和衔接手段，确保段落间逻辑清晰、连贯。
正文段落展开策略结尾段总结技巧重申观点01展望未来02简洁明了0304词汇、语法和句式运用指导CHAPTER高级词汇选用及替换建议使用具体、生动的词汇01避免重复使用同一词汇02注意词汇的准确性和正式程度03复杂句式构造和变换技巧使用从句和复合句变换句子结构注意句子的流畅性和简洁性避免常见语法错误确保主语和谓语在人称和数上保持一致。
注意动词的时态和语态的正确使用，避免混淆。
正确使用标点符号，避免句子结构的混淆和歧义。
例如，避免使用双重否定、注意冠词的正确使用等。
雅思写作课件(精品)
使用倒装句
（3）使用倒装句 We can effectively protect environment and have a brig ht future only in this way. Only in this way can we effectively protect environment and can we have a bright future. only修饰状语从句、副词、介词短语，放在句首，部分倒装。 This city has never before been in greater need of mod ern public transport than it is today. Never before has this city been in greater need of mod ern public transport than it is today.
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（2）使用否定句表达肯定意思
Students want to take part-time jobs to help cover higher college cost. There is hardly a student who doesn’t want to take parttime jobs to help cover higher college cost.
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以无生命的名词作为句子开头 2）不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词（特别是 I, people, we, you等等）开头，而以无生命的名词（通常为 原句中的宾语、时间状语等等）开头。
We easily drew the conclusion through the investigation. The investigation easily led us to the conclusion. Many Chinese people have gone to the U.S. in the past 15 years. The past 15 years have witnessed the migrating of Chinese people t o the US.
(完整word版)雅思写作7.0课程讲义.
2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍 General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟 Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别:task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文 G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence（论证,论点和论据)Communicative Quality（交流质量）Vocabulary and Sentence Structure（词汇与句子结构）1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made。
The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument。
People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence：far—reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的)， adverse(不利的）, catastrophic(灾难的), damaging(破坏性的）， devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal(致命的）， tragic（悲惨的）， severe（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do。
雅思写作课程task新通用课件
在雅思写作中，句子的逻辑性和条理性是非常重要的。学生需要注重句子之间的逻辑关系，合理地使用过渡词和连接词来连接句子和段落。同时，学生还需要注意句子的条理性，确保文章的结构清晰、层次分明。
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掌握基础语法知识
学生需要掌握英语的基础语法知识，包括名词、动词、形容词、副词等词性以及时态、语态、语气等语法范畴。同时，学生还需要了解不同语境下语法的差异和使用规则。
详细描述
在说明文写作中，应注意使用专业术语和准确数据，避免使用模糊语言和夸张表达，确保信息的准确性和客观性。
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论述文是对某个观点或理论进行深入探讨和分析，旨在说服读者接受自己的看法。
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在论述文写作中，应注意逻辑性和条理性，使读者能够清晰地理解作者的思路。
详细描述
在论述过程中，应注意使用合适的推理方法，如演绎推理、归纳推理等，使论证更加严密和有力。同时也要注意段落之间的衔接和过渡，使文章整体连贯、流畅。
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准确、详细地描述图表中的信息。
总结词
在雅思写作Task 1中，图表描述是非常重要的一个环节。考生需要准确、详细地描述图表中的信息，包括数据、趋势、对比等。在描述时，考生需要使用具体的数字和百分比，避免使用模糊的语言。此外，考生还需要注意图表的单位和图例，确保描述的准确性。
详细描述
论述文通常包括引言、正文和结论。正文部分应对观点或理论进行深入分析，使用证据支持自己的看法。结论部分应对全文进行总结，强调观点或理论的意义和价值。
【写作】雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义
【关键字】写作Unit 1 雅思IELTS 考试写作简介雅思考试写作部分在听力和阅读后进行，由两部分组成，TASK1和TASK2。
要求考生在60分钟内完成两篇文章的写作。
普通培训类和学术类考生在写作的考试内容上有一些区别。
两类写作TASK2题目类型基本相同，考试的结构和要求也大体相同，要求在40分钟完成250字左右的议论文。
类似英美国家学校里任课教师布置的课堂讨论作文。
一般要求考生根据自己的知识和经验就一个现象阐明自己的态度和见解，或就一个观点发表自己赞同或反对的观点。
学术类写作TASK 1（ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE）要求考生对题目中给出的各类图表加以观察和分析，并根据已知的图表和资料写一篇很多于150字的小短文。
考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格、饼图等。
也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。
另外，流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。
时间20分钟。
普通培训类写作TASK1（GENERAL TRAINING MODULE）则要求考生就某个假设的场景写一封信. 到目前为止，出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。
20分钟内完成150个字的文章。
总之，就题目的难度而言，GENERAL TRAINING MODULE 普通类写作比ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE学术类写作稍微简单一些。
评分标准The examiner reads your answer and awards band score of between 1(did not answer the question) and 9 (native speaker-like ) according to these criteria:• 1.Task Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed andsupported; the extent to which the candidate's position is clear and effective) • 2.Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organized and presented i.e. paragraphing; how well the information is linked)• 3.Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task)• 4.Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)The band scores are then added together divided by 3 and rounded to determine your band score for this task.Writing Overall Band = 1 / 3* Task1 + 2 / 3*Task2For example: Task1 =6Task2 =7Overall Band = 1 / 3* 6 + 2 / 3*7= 6.5Unit 2 曲线图1.描述上升的单词increase rise grow go up词汇升级：creep up ≤10 edge up 10 ease up 20boom 30 surge 45 soar 60 swell 70 escalate 80 rocket 902．描述下降的单词decrease drop decline fall go down词汇升级：creep down ≤10 edge down 10 ease down 20ebb 30 subside 45 slump 60 collapse 70 plunge 80 plummet 903．描述波动的单词fluctuate --- fluctuation go up and down rise and fall例：Sales of Computers 1995There was a slight growth in the sales of computers from Jan to Feb. However, they increased dramatically to a peak in the next month. After that, there was a downward trend in sales between Mar and Aug, which leveled off by the end of Dec.Task 1每部分的结构:例题分析example 1WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the number of passengers in a London underground station at different times of the day.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.Number of passengers at a London underground stationThe line graph illustrates the fluctuation in the number of people at a London underground station over the course of a day.开头段三种万能方法：①改单词②换句型③加信息The busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a sharp increase between 06:00 and 08:00, with 400 people using the station at 8 o'clock. After this the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 2 pm the number rises, with a plateau of just under 300 people using the station.In the afternoon, numbers decline, with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. There is then a rapid rise to a peak of 380 at 6 pm.After 7 pm, numbers fall significantly, with only a slight increase again at 8pm, tailing off after 9 pm.Overall, the graph shows that the station is most crowded in the early morning (around 08:00) and early evening (around 18:00) periods.例题分析2:Sample 2WRITING TASK 1---“例2”You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the annual amount of fish caught in North America from 1972 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.line graph with two linesThe graph reveals changes in fish catches for the US and Canada over the last 30 years. Between 1975 and 1981, US fish catches averaged between 2.5 and 2.75 million tons per year, while Canadian landings fluctuatedbetwee n 600,000 and 900,000 tons. …In 1981, however, there was a significant increase in fish caught in the US, and this rise continued and peaked at 5.6 million tons in 1991. During the same period, Canada's catch went up from 1 million tons to 1.6 million tons, a growth of over 50%.From 1991 onwards, a sudden decline in fish catching was reported in both countries. US figures plummeted to 4 million tons in 2001, a drop of 28%, and Canadian catches plunged to 0.5 million tons, a decrease of 66%. In the following four years, US catches remained stable at 4 million tons, while Canadian catches rose and fell around the 0.5 million tons mark.In general, fish catches have declined drastically in both the US and Canada since the early 1990s. Although Canadian production was much lower, it echoed US figures, declining or increasing at the same rate.习题③You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.The line chart illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams)However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week. Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.此文档是由网络收集并进行重新排版整理.word可编辑版本！。
雅思写作高分课件(1)
识别关键词
关注题目中的关键词，这 些词通常会给出写作的重 点和方向。
明确写作任务
根据题目要求，确定写作 任务，如需要提出观点、 分析问题、举例论证等。
拓展思路与素材收集
头脑风暴
围绕题目主题，进行头脑 风暴，尽可能多地列出与 主题相关的想法和观点。
素材收集
从平时积累的知识、经验 、阅读材料等方面，收集 与主题相关的素材，包括 事实、数据、案例等。
多变句式和语法结构
运用复杂句式
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于变化，增强表达的层次感和逻辑性。
掌握多种语法结构
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避免单调的句式
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避免大量使用简单句和相同的句式结构，通过句式的变换和组
分类整理
将收集到的素材进行分类 整理，以便在写作时能够 快速找到所需内容。
确定主题和立场
确定主题
构建论点
根据题目要求和头脑风暴的结果，确 定一个明确、具体、有深度的主题。
根据立场，构建清晰、有逻辑的论点 ，为后续的论证和阐述打下基础。
明确立场
针对主题，明确自己的观点和立场， 确保在写作过程中始终保持一致。
转折句
在需要的地方加入转折，使文章更具层次感和逻 辑性。
结尾部分总结陈词
重申立场
再次强调自己的观点或立场，加深读者印象。
总结全文
简要概括全文内容，帮助读者回顾文章脉络。
提出建议或展望
针对话题提出具体建议或展望未来发展，提升文章深度。
04 语言表达与句式运用
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丰富词汇和短语积累
雅思写作7.0课程讲义
2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument. People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词文档Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。
雅思写作—第3课(共10课)
The second largest system, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground.
fifth of that amount.
终点（最高点）
By 2000, global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000 km3, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km3.
雅思写作 — TASK 1
静态图主体段的写作
The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
主体段
1. 分段依据
2. 对比关系
Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with 126 kilometers, compared with only 11 kilometers and 28 kilometers for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, while the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.
雅思写作70课程讲义
2013年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上1.申请顶级名校的同学2.申请对语文能力要求比较高的专业的同学：新闻、法律、MBA3.需要提高学术写作能力的同学第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken. They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous （灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think? 有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。
雅思写作课程task1新ppt课件
认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才 能开始 对症下 药，然 后药到 病除。 近年来 国家对 扶贫工 作高度 重视， 已经展 开了“ 精准扶 贫”项 目
定从省略/分词状语后置
• By 2000, nuclear power had developed into the main source.
• Nuclear power produced almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units.
范文例句
• By 2000, nuclear power had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units.
认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才 能开始 对症下 药，然 后药到 病除。 近年来 国家对 扶贫工 作高度 重视， 已经展 开了“ 精准扶 贫”项 目
• 真题例句：These causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s, with Europe having as much as 9.8% of degradation due to deforestation
认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才 能开始 对症下 药，然 后药到 病除。 近年来 国家对 扶贫工 作高度 重视， 已经展 开了“ 精准扶 贫”项 目
Between 1940 and around 1960, The percentage of elderly people in the USA increased/rose/grew slightly/slowly to 10% while/whereas that of (the figure for) Japan decreased/declined/fell rapidly/sharply/significantly by 2%.
雅思写作公开课-写作
我们的对策是：
不需要非得想出什么伟大的理论，想出什么创新的观 点，只要我们的观点严谨，语言表述恰当，即便再平 常的观点也不妨碍我们拿高分。
记住：核心词是语言表达！！
雅思写作的7分标准 (a). task response: Addresses all parts of the task Presents a clear position throughout the response Presents, extend and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.
有个完整的、按部就班的、循序渐进的复习计划是雅思考 试成败的关键。
Part 1. 大作文 Part 2. 小作文
题型--->结构--->观点--->句型--->词汇
task2题型一般有三大类： report， argumentation report + argumentation 的结合体。
Mia
NO SWEAT, NO SWEET; NO PAIN, NO GAIN.
雅思其实一场持久战， 更是一场心理战。
目标分数为5~5.5 分的你，
是最幸福的
目标分数为6~6.5分的你， 应该窃喜
目标分数为7分，特别是要考到4个7的你， 应该感到荣幸
目标分数为8分，特别是要考到4个8的你， 你不要泄气，终究会成为强者。
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discuss both views and give your own opinion
开头段（回应题目+表达自己的观点） + 支持观点1（n个论点） + 支持观点2（n个论点） + 结尾段（表明自己的观点）。
雅思写作小作文上课课件
The number of full-time teachers was on the increase form 2008 to 2010.
雅思写作小作文上课课件
开始动笔写图表作文：变化趋势常用结构
2) 表示下降
动词+副词结构 e.g. 当地学校的失学人数在去年略有下降。 The number of drop-outs in the local
开始动笔写图表作文：基本内容
文章内容
与任务2写作一样，图表写作也要紧紧围绕任 务去完成。也要依据题目提供的已知信息 进行写作。与任务2不同的是图表作文的信 息载体不是文字而是图表，考生将图表承 载的信息用文字表达出来。在转化的过程 中很容易遗漏信息。所以写完后的审查就 显得更加重要。
雅思写作小作文上课课件
that ...
The figures /statistics show that
more other verbs: describe, illustrate, display, exhibit,
indicate, reflect, represent, reveal, unfold, summarize etc.
IELTS WRITING
雅思写作小作文上课课件
开始动笔写图表作文：基本情况
任务1：图表写作 要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的短文。
以考核图表为主。主要有: 曲线图 line chart, graph 柱状图 bar chart 饼状图 pie chart 表格等 table 偶尔也会有流程图flow chart、地图geography和示 意图diagram/figure
雅思写作7.0课程讲义
2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument. People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。
雅思写作高分课件(1)
详细描述
拼写错误：单词拼写不正确，例如 “speling”应该改为“spelling”。
句式单一
详细描述
简单句过多：整篇文章由多个简 单句构成，缺乏复合句和从句的 使用。
重复句式：同一个句式反复出现 ，缺乏变化。
总结词：句式单一也是雅思写作 中常见的错误之一，它会使文章 读起来枯燥乏味，缺乏变化。
雅思写作高分课件 (1)
汇报人：可编辑 2023-12-24
目录
• 雅思写作考试简介 • 高分写作技巧 • 常见错误分析 • 高分范文解析 • 实战演练
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雅思写作考试简介
考试目的和要求
考试目的
评估考生在学术英语环境下的写 作能力，包括语法、词汇、段落 组织和整体结构等方面。
写作要求
考生需要在规定时间内完成两篇 作文，分别是Task 1（图表说明 ）和Task 2（议论文或信函）。
时态错误：在描述事件 或情况时，时态的使用 不正确，例如“I had eat the pizza.”中的 “had eat”应该改为 “had eaten”。
语态错误：主动语态和 被动语态混淆，例如 “The book was written by him.”中的 “was written”应该改 为“was written by him”。
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常见错误分析
语法错误
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总结词：语法错误是雅 思写作中常见的错误之 一，它会影响句子的通 顺性和表达的准确性。
详细描述
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主谓不一致：主语和谓 语动词的搭配不正确， 例如“The book is written by him.”中的 “is”应该与“the book”保持一致，使用 “was”。
雅思写作课程讲义
2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument. People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked byadvertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。