高考英语复习写作训练专题二读后续写

读后续写专题二

Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。real a of the mall was the perfect Santa with a gentle manner and At the center

jumped from foot to foot as we Leah，white beard.My six－year－old granddaughter， waited in line for her turn to sit on his lap．kids in neck around the “I don't know what to say，” Leah said，raising her

front of her.

，said.“It's Santa.He's already your “Sure you do，”her mother，Leanne friend．You'll do just fine.” tell him.”want for Christmas，” I said.“And you just ask “He'll you what you

want mother didn't gone over and over the toys she'd ask for.Her We'd

she'd toys But a minute later，she inserted new the surprises! Leah repeated list．just spotted at the mall.

inched line digging into her purse as the an “I've got idea，” said Leanne，couldn't you won't forget them.” I requests forward.“Let's write down your so

－help but laugh.Going to see Santa was such an important appointment for a six，year －old.No child should have any worries bigger than that.But the night beforen a village in the Middle East that had come under fire.Many ，I'd seeon the newsof the wounded were children just like our Leah.Looking around the mall full of

could safe as anyone I and happy shoppers felt safe，as decorations magical Christmas.

at kind that of security，especially world be.Everyone in the should have

here.If want written down got ”“Okay，Leanne said.“Now you've everything you you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.”Moon Sand and Leah nodded and took the list. She read out loud，“A Chia Pet，．”Aquadoodle，” I heard myself say.“Ask for Leah“Why don't you add a fourth request， peaceonearth．” My daughter looked a little surprised by my suggestion.111

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“What's peace on earth，Grandma？” Leah asked.

“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would get along.That's the

true meaning of Christmas.” Leah nodded seriously.“Yes，” she agreed.

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1：

Finally we reached the head of the line._____________________________

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Paragraph 2：

The coming days were filled with __________________________________

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【写作指导】

本篇写作是读后续写，要求考生根据所读短文内容，尤其是带有下划线的词或者短语的提示完成作文。在写作此类作文时，第一步，考生要认真阅读所给短文，根据短文线索，找出文章的主人公在接下来所要完成的任务，也就是要做的事情以及做这些事情有哪些条件，要达到什么样的目标；第二步，考生应该将所有的关键词语列出来，然后用这些关键词语来组织语言。写作时要注意：1.并不是所有的关键词语都需要用上；2.所有的语句都必须围绕中心展开。

【参考范文】

Finally we reached the head of the line.One of Santa's helpers waved Leah up

to Santa and lifted her lightly onto his knee.Within seconds he had her chatting

like they were old friends．Leah shyly handed him her note．Santa adjusted his glasses

and read it over very carefully before placing it on the shelf beside him.Leah jumped off his lap and ran into my arms.

The coming days were filled with the last－minute preparations for the

holiday.It was all worth it as I watched Leah tear joyfully into her presents on

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Christmas morning.“I got Aquadoodle！”she screamed.“It's just what I wanted！”It

was the perfect Christmas as far as I could see.And then I noticed Leah，looking somewhat unhappy.“What's wrong，honey？”I asked.Leanne came over，“Didn't Santa bring you everything you wanted？”Leah sighed.“Almost，”she said，“But where's the peaceonearth？”

Writing 2

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

I worked from the time I was four and raised seven children，all of them college graduates.It seemed I'd done everything I'd ever wanted to do in my life，but I

had one regret．I was born in 1898，the oldest of five kids.Papa couldn't spare

me to go to school，so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old. Everywhere I went，I learned some hard lessons about what happens to a man who

even can't readthealphabet．People cheat you out of wages.They sell you a ticket

to one city，take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else.

By 1928，I'd been wandering for nine years.I met a woman named Elzenia.We fell

in love，married and moved to Dallas，where I got work fixing roads for the city.When Amelia，the oldest of our seven children，first wenttoschool，I took my wife

aside.“Elzenia，” I said.“I don't want the kids to know I can't read or write.”

In 1938，one day my boss called me in. “George，” he said. “No one knows those machines like you do.I'd like to promote you.” But my thrill and surprise were