开头段落的写法
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三、开头段落的写法
议论文的结构 开头段 (Background information + thesis statement) 主体段落2～3段 （Topic sentence + supporting sentences） … 结尾段落 Conclusion
sample
• 剑7test 3 • As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
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• ＊Personally ,I am in favor of… (=I personally in favor of …) • 结构：开场词+观点的表达 • 开场词：to be frank\honest, frankly\honestly(speaking)坦诚地说，老实 说,assuredly, indeed, admittedly • 表示支持的动词：support, favor, espouse ，prop up ， stand by，sustain ，brace ，subscribe to • 表示反对的动词：object，oppose， protest ， combat， go against， have an objection to •
表“认为、持有看法”： • Insist ,maintain,argue,consider,deem ,figure ,reckon ,a llege ,declare ,profess ,assert ,advocate ,pronounce ,ha rbor\hold\ possess the view\ standpoint\viewpoint \perception\argument that
• Unemployment is one of the greatest social problems of our time. The relationship between education and unemployment, in particular, a troubling issue preoccupying many governments across the world.
第三句：
＊阐明个人立场（观点类题目） ＊说明写作目的（讨论类题目）
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• 写法一：阐述自己的观点和立场(支持反 对或者中立) • ＊In my opinion…在我看来： • in my submission, as I see it ,from my point of view, from my perspective ,It is my considered view that…
背景句可以使用的套句
（1）The development of …(设置一些 背景的铺垫如:science and technology ,modern society) is inevitable and undeniable.
• 换词: • 1、progression ,evolution，growth • 2、unavoidable，irreversible, irrefutable
•
＊It has raised public concern over the past decades that… 换词： 引起：cause, invoke ,spark，crop up，arise, lead to, result in, contribute to ＊There is a perception that …,while a counter\converse argument is that … ＊There crops up a social dilemma/ambivalence over the issue that… ＊People, nevertheless, hold various opinions in terms of the issue whether it is a blessing or a curse. ＊Different people hold various viewpoints as to the issue whether … is beneficial to…
改写题目可用的句式
• What is under controversy\discussion is whether…(讨论的话题) • It is a frequent topic of discussion that… • When it comes to\mentioned about …, some people think…,while others think….
•
练习题：讲义第25题 *The overwhelming impact of fashion on clothes preference has become a topic of public interest and concern.
*With the improvement of living standard, people’s demands on clothes have been expanding to a fashion level.
•
• （2）The thorny\pressing problem of… has become\is of a hot topic\issue\potato in recent years. • （3） …has become\is of a topic of public interest and concern in recent years. – （4）…is one of the most remarkable phenomena of this century\during the past decades.
–（5）With increasing number of…,…has become a social issue.
• 例子：随着越来越多的妇女参与全职工作， 由谁来照顾孩子已经成为了社会上的一个问 题。 With increasing number of women taking part in full-time jobs, who should take care of children has become a social issue.
• 例2.Many people use distance-learning programs (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (08.10.23 = 04.11.13)
范文开头段：Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for wellbeing of that person.
• 例3.It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. •
• 第二句： • 写法一：改写文章的题目 • （观点类和讨论类题目） • 写法二：直接交代问题产生的原因 （问题类题目）
•
• 写法一：改写文章的题目
• 改写时注意的两个问题： • 1）改写题目，而不是照抄题目 • 2）简洁地改写题目，避免累赘
•
改写题目的方法： 改词 –改变关键词的词性 –同义词替换 –改变关键词的位置 –增加或删减原题内容 改句式 •
开头段一般可以分为三个源自文库分
第一部分：背景句 第二部分：主题句（对于问 题类题目，第二部分不是改 写文章的题目，而是直接关 注问题产生的原因） 第三部分：观点句或者写作 目的陈述（也就是简单介绍 下文内容）
背景句的写法
• 如何写背景句：首先确 定题目讨论的是哪个方 面的问题，然后以这个 问题为中心，写一句介 绍性的话 • 注意的问题：不要把背 景给的过于宽泛或者狭 窄，要起到引出主题的 作用。
• 例1.In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (08.01.26)
• To keep abreast of the 21st century, large numbers of people are seeking to tertiary education. Distance learning, a modern educational model, has received wide currency among qualification seekers.
•
练习题：讲义第2题 With increasing investment and emphasis on education, the importance of each subject has become a social issue.
• 例子：随着人们对教育越来越多的投资和关 注，每一个学科的重要性经成为了社会上的 一个问题。
• • The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.
议论文的结构 开头段 (Background information + thesis statement) 主体段落2～3段 （Topic sentence + supporting sentences） … 结尾段落 Conclusion
sample
• 剑7test 3 • As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
•
•
• ＊Personally ,I am in favor of… (=I personally in favor of …) • 结构：开场词+观点的表达 • 开场词：to be frank\honest, frankly\honestly(speaking)坦诚地说，老实 说,assuredly, indeed, admittedly • 表示支持的动词：support, favor, espouse ，prop up ， stand by，sustain ，brace ，subscribe to • 表示反对的动词：object，oppose， protest ， combat， go against， have an objection to •
表“认为、持有看法”： • Insist ,maintain,argue,consider,deem ,figure ,reckon ,a llege ,declare ,profess ,assert ,advocate ,pronounce ,ha rbor\hold\ possess the view\ standpoint\viewpoint \perception\argument that
• Unemployment is one of the greatest social problems of our time. The relationship between education and unemployment, in particular, a troubling issue preoccupying many governments across the world.
第三句：
＊阐明个人立场（观点类题目） ＊说明写作目的（讨论类题目）
•
• 写法一：阐述自己的观点和立场(支持反 对或者中立) • ＊In my opinion…在我看来： • in my submission, as I see it ,from my point of view, from my perspective ,It is my considered view that…
背景句可以使用的套句
（1）The development of …(设置一些 背景的铺垫如:science and technology ,modern society) is inevitable and undeniable.
• 换词: • 1、progression ,evolution，growth • 2、unavoidable，irreversible, irrefutable
•
＊It has raised public concern over the past decades that… 换词： 引起：cause, invoke ,spark，crop up，arise, lead to, result in, contribute to ＊There is a perception that …,while a counter\converse argument is that … ＊There crops up a social dilemma/ambivalence over the issue that… ＊People, nevertheless, hold various opinions in terms of the issue whether it is a blessing or a curse. ＊Different people hold various viewpoints as to the issue whether … is beneficial to…
改写题目可用的句式
• What is under controversy\discussion is whether…(讨论的话题) • It is a frequent topic of discussion that… • When it comes to\mentioned about …, some people think…,while others think….
•
练习题：讲义第25题 *The overwhelming impact of fashion on clothes preference has become a topic of public interest and concern.
*With the improvement of living standard, people’s demands on clothes have been expanding to a fashion level.
•
• （2）The thorny\pressing problem of… has become\is of a hot topic\issue\potato in recent years. • （3） …has become\is of a topic of public interest and concern in recent years. – （4）…is one of the most remarkable phenomena of this century\during the past decades.
–（5）With increasing number of…,…has become a social issue.
• 例子：随着越来越多的妇女参与全职工作， 由谁来照顾孩子已经成为了社会上的一个问 题。 With increasing number of women taking part in full-time jobs, who should take care of children has become a social issue.
• 例2.Many people use distance-learning programs (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (08.10.23 = 04.11.13)
范文开头段：Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for wellbeing of that person.
• 例3.It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. •
• 第二句： • 写法一：改写文章的题目 • （观点类和讨论类题目） • 写法二：直接交代问题产生的原因 （问题类题目）
•
• 写法一：改写文章的题目
• 改写时注意的两个问题： • 1）改写题目，而不是照抄题目 • 2）简洁地改写题目，避免累赘
•
改写题目的方法： 改词 –改变关键词的词性 –同义词替换 –改变关键词的位置 –增加或删减原题内容 改句式 •
开头段一般可以分为三个源自文库分
第一部分：背景句 第二部分：主题句（对于问 题类题目，第二部分不是改 写文章的题目，而是直接关 注问题产生的原因） 第三部分：观点句或者写作 目的陈述（也就是简单介绍 下文内容）
背景句的写法
• 如何写背景句：首先确 定题目讨论的是哪个方 面的问题，然后以这个 问题为中心，写一句介 绍性的话 • 注意的问题：不要把背 景给的过于宽泛或者狭 窄，要起到引出主题的 作用。
• 例1.In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (08.01.26)
• To keep abreast of the 21st century, large numbers of people are seeking to tertiary education. Distance learning, a modern educational model, has received wide currency among qualification seekers.
•
练习题：讲义第2题 With increasing investment and emphasis on education, the importance of each subject has become a social issue.
• 例子：随着人们对教育越来越多的投资和关 注，每一个学科的重要性经成为了社会上的 一个问题。
• • The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.