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高考英语作文写作技法PPT教学课件

高考英语作文写作技法PPT教学课件
2、句子的结构:一般来说,高考书面表达的篇幅大约 是10句,其中多数是简单句,少数复合句。建议使用十 句作文法训练。
3、意义的表达:主要指用词妥当、句型正确和具有一 定的变通技巧。当同时可以用多种句型来表达一个意思 是,考生应当选择自己熟悉的、有把握的句型。
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写好英语作文至少要注意以下五个方面:
f 5. have a tendency to do sth. f. be likely to / tend to do
k 6. drop out
g. give sth. away to a charity
b 7. a shortage of
h. to stretch over a large area
j 8. result in
i. classes where students of
i 9. mixed-grade classes
different grades at taught in one
h 10. spread out
classroom
c 11. compulsory
j. lead to
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(范例)
高三学生学习紧张,考试压力大,因此,做 一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题 适当展开,词数100~120。
Health and Sports
Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports.

高考英语高分写作指导(81张PPT)

高考英语高分写作指导(81张PPT)
英 语 书 面 表 达 指 导
Beautify your Composition
高考作文的华丽变身
遇遇 难易 心心 不更 慌细 ,。
1.所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活, 实际具有时代特点,紧扣与学生相关的 社会热点及学生的生活与学习。
2.词数要求100,既要求表 达事实信息,又要陈述个人观点,对考 生思维和表达能力的要求提高了。
1) Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first
prize in Men’s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. (用同位语改写)
,
, won the first prize in Men’s 110
Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. (高级)
When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般)
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)
I got up late this morning. I didn’t catch the early bus. (一般)
2、地道原则
[原文]Through traveling, I
learned a lot of knowledge. [修正]Through traveling, I gained/obtained a lot of
knowledge.
3、避免重复原则
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching television. [修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)

高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
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因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练,所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里,还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节:
语言表达:
连词成句:
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多,影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息,写的内容与要求无关
要点完整;语言准确且多样;结构清晰; 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准:
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文(申请信)
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达:中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事(具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势)

高考英语写作技巧(63张PPT)

高考英语写作技巧(63张PPT)

有效地使 用了语句 间的连接 成分
上下文的连贯; 语言的得体性
语言地道, 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面, 评分时,应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
4、词数少于100和多于 140的,从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差,以至影 响交际,将分数降低一 个档次。
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.
6、 定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place
where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
7、 各种名词性从句 That’s what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help

高考英语写作技巧(精编课件).ppt

高考英语写作技巧(精编课件).ppt

般) On his arriving/ arrival, please give….
(高级)
If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一
般) Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. (高级)
Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般)
The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English…. (高级精)品课件
9. 使用虚拟语气
The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一 B般ut)for the efforts of the captain, the ship would
词汇和语法的数量和准确性;
有用效了地语使句上语言下文的的得连体贯性;
间的连接 成分
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语言地道, 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面, 评分时,应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
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4、词数少于100和多于 140的,从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差,以至影 响交际,将分数降低一 个档次。
8. 使用定语从句
The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)
The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级)

高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)

高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)

二、忌次序混乱,连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后,不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容,却不能合 理地组织所给的材料,东一句、西一句,写得支离破碎, 文理不通,让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点, 在这个过程中,要考虑一下先写什么,后写什么,句与句 之间,不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子,如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等,使文章过渡自然、流畅,做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意:不能不 用,且不能少 用,但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西,很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方,因此,在答完卷时,至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查:(1)对照题目要求,看全部要点是 否都已包括进去,有无遗漏或误解;(2)文体格 式是否正确规范;(3)词语使用是否合适、正确, 有无语法与用词上的错误, 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯;(4)单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误, 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话,对书面表达应尽量做到:不跑题,不 漏点,语言精简合习惯,灵活表达要规范,书法 整齐词有限。

高考英语写作指导课课件(69张PPT)

高考英语写作指导课课件(69张PPT)

They even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No _____________ littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
have studied
written
English very well.
is
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
6.My English level is common and I can't speak very ∧ well.
average along it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken 9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!

高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】

高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】

高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT) 【优秀 课件】
• P1 Everyone needs some recreational activities to help them relax after a day's work or study. And there are many recreational activities available to us in today's society. For example, sports fans may choose to play basketball or football. Or one may take a break by watching TV or listening to music.
作文得分技巧
1、 卷面整洁,书写清楚 2、 构思简单,少犯错误 3、 中心突出,层次分明 4、 重在变化,宁简勿烂
议论文写作的基本模式
写作框架如下: 第一段:现象背景介绍+引出话题(公众观
点+大概理由); 第二段:关于话题的相关因素(影响,作
用,好处,危害或原因等); 第三段:陈述自己观点或预期未来。
辩论式议论文模版
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the
Model
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.
In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.

高考英语总复习课件:高考话题作文写作技巧 (共48张PPT)

高考英语总复习课件:高考话题作文写作技巧 (共48张PPT)
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Li Yue
校园话题作文常用词汇:
遵守纪律
keep/observe discipline
违反规章制度 break the rules
考试作弊
cheat in the exam
乱扔垃圾
throw rubbish everywhere
观点展开段 ① Some agree to the viewpoint that…They hold this opinion because/in that…What’s more,… However, others have a different opinion considering that… ② On the contrary, there are some people in favor of … ③Some people suggest that … While others argue that…
结尾段:
From my perspective, we high school students are not supposed to take the mobile phone to school. As for the reasons, first and foremost, it is a great waste of time and energy; consequently, our study will be badly affected. Additionally, it will undoubtedly do harm to our physical and mental health. Last but not least, it will gradually get you addicted to it, which never fails to cause endless trouble and various problems.(万能句型)

高中英语高考高考英语总复习课件:高考开放式作文写作技巧 (共46张PPT)

高中英语高考高考英语总复习课件:高考开放式作文写作技巧 (共46张PPT)

第3种:图片蕴含了一个哲理 发现与正常情况的区别找矛盾,逆境生长,适应环境,坚持梦想
漫画式作文写作核心:制造“矛盾”
一描二议三升华:
一、描述图片:不遗漏细节,有合理的想象 二、发表议论:有理有力 三、升华观点:联系实际,自身做起
第一段:描述图片(不遗漏细节,有合理的想象)
As is vividly shown in th picture, we can see ... What inspires us is that …万能句式
文字式开放作文写作技巧 一总二例三升华 一、开门见山,阐明观点 将给出的题目换种说法再说一遍
二、事例入手,先抑后扬 (注意用第一人称,注意时态-过去时) 写自己熟悉的故事比写不着边际的例子更能打动人
三、总结经验,升华主题
1.开门见山,阐明观点 You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it. 洗牌的是上帝,出牌的是自己。
高考开放式作文写作技巧
开放式作文的两种类型
第一类:漫画
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
用高级词汇/短语替换 I was enjoying the︿scenery when I saw a young couple, whose behavior was so unpleasant.
I was enjoying the fantastic/fascinating scenery around when a young couple caught my sight, whose behavior was so undesirable.

高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)

高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)

遇到不会写的单词怎么办?
(3)老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办?
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!

Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在(湖畔)小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.

高考英语写作技巧方法.ppt

高考英语写作技巧方法.ppt
基础写作训练
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
• A. 如何处理或整理信息?
• 1. 存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists, especially to the older people….
• 错误诊断: ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达 导致信息表达出现问题,不能用多个简单句表 达多个不同类型的信息内容。
• I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
中的老人。
• John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older.
The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists,especially to the older people.
• 5.建议应该多提供货真价实的购物场所。 • I suggest you can offer more and more

高考英语作文写作指导 PPT课件(共17张)

高考英语作文写作指导 PPT课件(共17张)

书面表达五步法
• Step1:审题 • Step2.抓要点 • step3.写草稿 • Step4.修改、整合 • Step5.抄写
• 第二节 写作(满分25分) • 假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国 朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假 里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。 请根据以下要点给他回封邮件: • 1.未及时回信的原因; • 2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志 愿者等)。 • 注意:1. 词数120-150;2. 可适当增加 细节,以使行文连贯。
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • •、聪明的人有长的耳朵和短的舌头。 ——弗莱格 2、重复是学习之母。 ——狄慈根 3、当你还不能对自己说今天学到了什么东西时,你就不要去睡觉。 ——利希顿堡 4、人天天都学到一点东西,而往往所学到的是发现昨日学到的是错的。 ——B.V 5、学到很多东西的诀窍,就是一下子不要学很多。 ——洛 克 6、学问是异常珍贵的东西,从任何源泉吸收都不可耻。 ——阿卜· 日· 法拉兹 7、学习是劳动,是充满思想的劳动。 ——乌申斯基 8、聪明出于勤奋,天才在于积累 --华罗庚 9、好学而不勤问非真好学者。 10、书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。 11、人的大脑和肢体一样,多用则灵,不用则废 -茅以升 12、你想成为幸福的人吗?但愿你首先学会吃得起苦 --屠格涅夫 13、成功=艰苦劳动+正确方法+少说空话 --爱因斯坦 14、不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹 -《真心英雄》 15、只有登上山顶,才能看到那边的风光。 16只会幻想而不行动的人,永远也体会不到收获果实时的喜悦。 17、勤奋是你生命的密码,能译出你一部壮丽的史诗。 18.暗自伤心,不如立即行动. 19.挫折时,要像大树一样,被砍了,还能再长;也要像杂草一样,虽让人践踏,但还能勇敢地活下去. 20.随随便便浪费的时间,再也不能赢回来. 21.成功是优点的发挥,失败,是缺点的积累.

高考英语作文高分写作技法(24页PPT)

高考英语作文高分写作技法(24页PPT)
home. • D、关于
E、处理, Settle, solve, deal with, cope with, handle,
do…with, manage..with, encounter F、忍受 Stand, bear, tolerate, put up with, suffer, endure G、喜欢 Care for I don’t care for baseball. Be fond of She is fond of playing the piano. Be crazy about Many football fans are crazy about
• (3)修饰语错位

I believe I can do it well and I will better know the
world outside the campus.
3、时态误用
• 对各种时态的概念不清
• 时间立足点把握不准
• 母语干扰 汉语无时态变化,学生大脑中缺乏时态概念
• 考场时间不够,来不及顾及时态、语态
6、词性误用 (1)将不及物当成及物Come the city, return the place
(2)形容词用成及物动词Please present on time. (3)可数用成不可数A good news, many informations
(4)形容词副词混用In the recently years, study hardly (5)将介词用成动词The road through the city.
闪光句式,就是用一些比较出彩的句式,比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个句式中,运用到了非谓

高考英语作文技巧(21张PPT)-经典通用课件资料

高考英语作文技巧(21张PPT)-经典通用课件资料

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常用句子
• It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome. • These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our
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• I think • I firmly believe that … • In my opinion, • Personally speaking,… • As far as I am concerned, … • From my point of view, ….
表达个人观点的用语
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How to summarize an argumentation
Skill: 议论三步法 论点—观点 主题句 论据— (事例)
结论
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典型模板
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点. 2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 3. 归纳得出作者的结论. 4. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) 5. b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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As far as I am concerned, _____. To sum up, _____.
writing task: Recreational activities
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled "Recreational activities". You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.娱乐活动多种多样。 2.娱乐活动可以使 人们受益,也可能带来危害。 3.作为大学 生,我认为……
辩论式议论文模版
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the
作文得分技巧
1、 卷面整洁,书写清楚 2、 构思简单,少犯错误 3、 中心突出,层次分明 4、 重在变化,宁简勿烂
议论文写作的基本模式
写作框架如下: 第一段:现象背景介绍+引出话题(公众观
点+大概理由); 第二段:关于话题的相关因素(影响,作
用,好处,危害或原因等); 第三段:陈述自己观点或预期未来。
former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
Model
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.
In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.
Recreational activities
高考英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
高考英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
• P3 As college students, we should strike a balance between work and rest. Recreation is of great importance to our life, but study is our primary task. If we want to play, we need to know clearly which activities are good and which are bad. At the same time, we should exercise self-control so that we won't get addicted to some bad activities.

Recreational activities
高考英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
高考英语作文写作技ppt课件

• P2 Among the large number of recreational activities, some are carefully designed and can be beneficial to us. For example, playing basketball can help us get stronger and healthier. It can also enrich friendships while we play together with our teammates. However, some activities may cause harm, especially to young people who are curious about everything but are unable to control themselves. Playing computer games is one such activity. Many college students play them every day. Some students even develop addictions and skip school or stay up late into the night to play them. This can affect their study and health.
高考英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
• P1 Everyone needs some recreational activities to help them relax after a day's work or study. And there are many recreational activities available to us in today's society. For example, sports fans may choose to play basketball or football. Or one may take a break by watching TV or listening to music.
• Model As is known to all, there has been a wave of ____. There are many advantages (disadvantages) of this modern way. First of all, _____. In the second place, _____. Lastly, _____.In a word, ____.
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