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饼图(Pie Chart)
范文一:我国某市居民春节假期花销的比例
第一段
The given pie chart shows us proportions of residents’expenditure in a certain Chi nese city during ①the Spring Festival celebrations /②the Lunar New Yea r.As is revea led by the statistics, ①the percentage of money spent on New Year gifts is approximatel y 40%, the largest among the four categories. / ②money spent on gifts accounts for up to 40% or so of the total expenses, the largest share among all the four categories. ①I n comparison, the proportion of feasts, transportation and others is about 20% respectivel
y./ ②In comparison, the expenses for dining, transportation and the rest take up roughl y one fifth respectively.
第二段
It goes without saying that the given chart is meant to draw our attention to=emp hasize= highlight=dramatize Chinese citizens’accent upon interpersonal relationships. Behi nd the scene, there must be numerous shaping factors, with the following respects not th e least among them. +
写法一:To begin with, ①it is closely related to / it is bound up with + a vast increase of ordinary people’s income. / ②it is closely related to a vast income increase of domest ic ordinary people for the past years. / ③It is closely related to a marked enhancement
of people’s living standards in China for the past decades. +In addition, our national tr aditional convention is another important influencing power that we may not neglect. 写法二:To begin with,it is closely related to the vast enhancement of people’s living sta ndards for the past years. With the remarkable development of economy and society, the income of most ordinary people in China has been dramatically increased, which enables them to afford the investment in socializing with others.
写法三:When China and the Chinese were not prosperous, what ordinary people expected from festivals was nothing but better food or new clothes. Now with the enhancement of living standards, domestic people pay much more attention to the fortification of their kinship and friendship. From my perspective, this scene can solidly prove that we Chinese people are now living a happy and harmonious life.
+Our Chinese national tradition is another important factor that we may not neglect. To exchange gifts with relatives or friends during festivals is a long-established convention on this aged land.
第三段
写法一:Obviously, what we need to pay attention to is the fact that what is being revealed by the given statistics is not a specific scene in a certain city but a very common phenomenon all over China. Besides, Since to spend much of the expenses on New Year gifts is a quite established situation, it is my belief that the trend as revealed by the given data will definitely continue for years ahead.
写法二:From my perspective, this scene can solidly prove that we Chinese people are