浙江省2019年高考英语二轮复习读后续写专练(一)至(四)训练

读后续写专练

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读后续写专练(一)

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(2018·金丽衢十二校高三第二次联考)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was an unusually quiet day in the emergency room on December 25.Quiet, that is, except for those who were standing around the nurses’ station complaining about having to work Christmas Day. I was triage nurse that day and had just been out to the waiting room to clean up. Just then five bodies showed up at my triage desk, a pale woman and four small children.

“Are you all sick？” I asked suspiciously.

“Yes，” she said weakly and lowered her head.

But when it came to descriptions of their present problems, things got a little vague. Two of the children had headaches, but the headaches weren’t accompanied by the normal body language of holding the head or trying to keep it still. Two children had earaches, but only one could tell me which ear was affected. The mother complained of a cough but seemed to work to produce it.

Something was wrong, but I didn’t say anything. I explained to the mother that it might be a little while before a doctor saw her. She responded, “Take your time; it’s warm in here.” She tu rned and, with a smile, guided her children into the waiting room.

On a hunch (call it nursing judgment), I checked the chart after the admitting clerk had finished registering the family. No address — they were homeless. The waiting room was warm. I looked out at the family huddled by the Christmas tree. The smallest one was pointing at the television and exclaiming something to her mother. The oldest one was looking at her reflection in a decoration on the Christmas tree.

I went back to the nurses’ station and mentioned we had a homeless family in the waiting room.The nurses, complaining about working Christmas, turned to compassion for a family just trying to get warm on Christmas. Then our team went into action, much as we do when there’s a medical emergency.But this one was a Christmas emergency. A special Christmas party was to be held.

注意：

1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1：

We were all offered a free meal in the hospital cafeteria on Christmas Day,

Paragraph 2：

When the party ended, as the family walked to the door to leave,

一、试题详解

1．核心内容

短文主要内容为：圣诞节当日，作者在医院护士站加班时遇到无家可归的一家人，一位母亲带着四个孩子以看病为由留在医院候诊室取暖。得知这件事，护士站所有的护士停止了对加班的抱怨，用心地为这家人举办了一个紧急而特殊的圣诞聚会，不仅给这一家人带来了温暖，也为自己留下了难忘的记忆。

2．写作思路

(1)明确故事人物。

故事中主要人物为作者(护士)、护士站的护士们、无家可归的一家人(一位母亲和四个孩子)。

(2)理清故事主要事件。

作者(值班护士)遇到前来看病的一家人；作者发现这一家人无家可归，想以看病为由留