高考英语书面表达讲义及训练(28)参考范文 英语写作引导句型(10)

28 Perhaps

Maybe we should

it is time to rethink

reexamine

have a fresh look at the idea

value

attitude

wisdom

desirability that ...

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8, III 写作（共两节，满分40分）

基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

近年来，我国校车安全事故频发，引发社会强烈关注与反思。请根据以下提示，写一篇有关

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯

参考词汇：国务院 the State Council；

校车安全管理条例 School Bus Safety Regulations

第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词的英语短文。

The elephant and the fly

A disciple(信徒), who was disturbed by the fact that his mind was in constant unrest, asked hi s teacher, “Why are most people’s minds restless? What can one do to still the mind?” The teacher looked at the disciple, smiled and told him a story:

An elephant was standing and picking leaves from a tree. A small fly came，flying and buzzing(嗡嗡叫) near his ear. The elephant waved it away with his long ears. Then the fly came again, and the elephant waved it away once more.

This was repeated several times. Then the elephant asked the fly, “Why are you so restless and noisy? Why can’t you stay for a while in one place? ”

The fly answered, “I am attracted to whatever I see, hear or smell. My five senses pull me constantly in all directions and I cannot resist them．What is your secret? How can you stay so calm and still?”

The elephant stopped eating and said, “My five senses do not rule my attention. Whatever I do, I get immersed in it. Now that I am eating, I am completely absorbed in eating. In this way I can enjoy my food and chew it better. I rule and control my attention, and not the other way around.”

Upon hearing these words, a smile appeared on the disciple’s face, “I understand!

If my five senses are in control of my mind and attention, then my mind is in constant unrest. If I am in charge of my five senses and attention, then my mind becomes calm.” 【写作内容】

以约30个词概括短文的内容；

然后以约120个词就“专注”这一主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点：

大象和苍蝇的故事给你的启示；

讲述你（或你朋友）因为太多干扰而受到影响的经历；

你认为怎样才能保持专注、专心。

【写作要求】

在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或者虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

III 写作

第一节基础写作

A possible version:

The morning of November 16th, 2011 witnessed a disastrous car accident in Qingyang, Gansu Province. A kindergarten school bus, which was seriously overloaded, crashed into a big truck, causing 21 deaths, including 19 kids，a school teacher and the driver himself. Shocked and sad at the news, people feared that accidents like this would happen again and thus called for the government to take immediate action. To people's relief, the State Council officially issued the School Bus Safety Regulations on April 5th, 2012 and ordered the act should be put into effect in all places. The act not only reveals the government's great concern about people's lives, but also helps create a more stable society.

第二节读写任务

Possible version：

An elephant told a restless fly that being absorbed in doing things helped him stay still. After hearing the story from his teacher, the disciple realized that only by controlling his senses can he obtain calmness. (36 words)

After reading the story, I was inspired by what the elephant said. The ability to focus your attention is the key to your success in doing anything. Just like the fly, a person who is easily distracted by the surroundings will feel restless and tired, unable to achieve his success.

This reminds me of what happened when I entered high school as a Senior One student.

I was so excited to find that there were various student organizations and after-class activities intended for us students. It seemed that many groups were suitable to me. During the first term, I was attracted whenever there was a notice from a student group and I was eager to find out more about it. As a result, I didn’t spend enough time on my studies, nor could I settle down on my homework every day. Consequently, I failed in an important exam.

I have learned a lesson from this experience that one should focus on one thing at

a time before he can get it well done. To do so, we should put what we are doing in