新托福写作真经3
托福写作3
Is the most important characteristic of a good political or business leader is the ability to take responsibility for mistakes?1.没有对责任的觉悟就没有其他品质的诞生。
信任。
2.只有承担了责任，才能时刻保持警惕，并从失败中吸取教训，从而促进团队的更好的发展。
例子。
如果奥巴马没有承担责任，那么美国就不可能继续发展。
When it refers to the most important characteristic of a good leader, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come in to vogue during the last decade.People’s opinions are divergent from person to person, and culture to culture. The statement declares that taking responsibility for mistakes is the most significant characteristic for a good leader. From my personal perspective, I believe it goes without saying that a good leader are always responsible for mistakes.It is plausible that some people may hold the view that some other characteristics such as optimism and honesty are more important. It means that a good leader should always keep genuine to team members and stay positive all the time in order to create an energetic working circumstance. No one can deny that these characteristics enable a group to make progress more quickly and obtain great development. But can this prosperity last for long? I deeply doubt it. When taking more factors into consideration, as far as I’m concerned, taking the responsibility of mistakes is absolutely the most paramount and overweighs any characteristics.Recently, the ability of taking responsibility of mistakes has caused public concerns. People find out hardly can those new companies approach great breakthrough and obtain success.According to a survey, it is young leaders’ lack of responsibility that leads to such situation.Therefore, we are tempted to ask ourselves: Is it necessary for leaders to take burdens for what they have done wrong? Obviously, one group can not obtain great achievement without responsibility. Consequently, it is time for us to realize that a good leader should be responsible to every wrong steps he took.Moving on to wider themes, it is conceivable that the responsibility is supposed to be the root of any other characteristic. Only when the leader feels the burden and perceives the potential dangers, can one group become cautious and meticulous to every decision they make.Therefore, those arduous atmosphere and workers’ serious attitude towards jobs are definitely the results of the leaders’ responsibility. History is replete with evidence to demonstrate this.Let’s bring our discussion here to a more present and practical context, it can be given a concrete example that Obama’s characteristic of taking responsibility profoundly influence thewhole United States. Therefore, every American becomes responsible to every little mistake because they see how their president takes these burdens. Naturally, the United States can always stand on the top of the world and enjoy their supreme status. This is due to their leader’s responsibility that maintains the prosperity of the United States.In summary, according to above mentioned reasons, I strongly commit to the notion that the most important characteristic for a good leader is the responsibility of taking mistakes.3.只有承担了责任，才能时刻保持警惕，并从失败中吸取教训，从而促进团队的更好的发展。
【最新文档】新托福TPO 3综合写作详细解析：伦勃朗-范文word版 (1页)
【最新文档】新托福TPO 3综合写作详细解析：伦勃朗-范文word版本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！== 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ ==新托福TPO 3综合写作详细解析：伦勃朗阅读材料：Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth - century Dutch painters . However , there are doubts whether some paintingsattributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him . One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style , and indeed the representation of the womans face is very much likethat of portraits known to be by Rembrandt . But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt .伦勃朗是十七世纪荷兰最富盛名的画家。
然后，对于有些画作是否确实出自他手却是颇有争议的。
有一副有争议的画归于伦勃朗名下是因为其风格属于伦勃朗，同时画上女子的面庞也同伦勃朗其他画作中的人物非常类似的。
然而，这幅画中存在的一些问题却表明这幅画不是伦勃朗的作品。
First , there is something inconsistent about the way the womanin the portrait is dressed . She is wearing a white linen cap of a kind that only servants would wear - yet the coat she is wearing hasa luxurious fur collar that no servant could afford . Rembrandt , who was known for his attention to the details of his subjects clothing , would not have been guilty of such an inconsistency .首先，这幅画上的一个问题就是画中女子的衣着有些不协调。
新托福考试机经-写作部分
12.3
阅读：风力发电有三个坏处：①让鸟丧命；②破坏鸟的地盘；③要有大风。
听力：随着技术进步，这三个缺点都克服了。
12.16
阅读：超市开设了self-checkout：①节省时间；②提供信息；③节省老板的费用。
听力：①要顾客把货物拿到柜台上扫描一点都不节省时间；
②提供的信息可能是错误的；
③可能有人会不刷信用卡就把物品拿出去。
②老师的评估改在学期结束之前；
③企业应该综合了解成绩所代表的情况，比如平均分，这样才不会被误导。
3.25
阅读：人们被电视、网络等媒体吸引，对reading的关注也越来越少，这样会导致：
①culture降低一个等级；②书籍市场越来越小；③作者们将会不再喜欢写作。听力：①阅读不用该仅仅局限在文学方面，科学、历史等领域也是阅读的重要组成部分。
③银行的系统每天用，不停地提高、纠正；可选举系统几年才用一回，就不可靠了。
2006年
1月
1.6
阅读：美国人提前退休：
①工作技术跟不上时代需要；
②很难与年轻人建立关系；
③适应不了快节奏。
听力：①经常开办新技术培训班，老人不会感到枯燥，公司也可以因员工技术多样化获益；
②建立工作小组，把年轻人和老员工放在一起工作。建立良好关系；
②多种传播媒体的出现不会使culture倒退，因为那些媒体都是社会进步的产物。
③人们不爱看书了，是因为书写得越来越差了，不应该责备读者。
4月
4.8
阅读：Buzzing不好：
①因为people不知道buzzer是paidtodoit，他们会提供lesscritics；
②产品不一定好，影响顾客的利益；
③影响人与人之间的relationship，less trustful。
新托福TPO3阅读原文(三)The Long-Term Stability of Ecosystems及译文
新托福TPO3阅读原文(三):The Long-Term Stability of Ecosystems TPO-3-3：The Long-Term Stability of EcosystemsPlant communities assemble themselves flexibly, and their particular structure depends on the specific history of the area. Ecologists use the term “succession”to refer to the changes that happen in plant communities and ecosystems over time. The first community in a succession is called a pioneer community, while the long-lived community at the end of succession is called a climax community. Pioneer and successional plant communities are said to change over periods from 1 to 500 years. These changes—in plant numbers and the mix of species—are cumulative. Climax communities themselves change but over periods of time greater than about 500 years.An ecologist who studies a pond today may well find it relatively unchanged in a year’s time. Individual fish may be replaced, but the number of fish will tend to be the same from one year to the next. We can say that the properties of an ecosystem are more stable than the individual organisms that compose the ecosystem.At one time, ecologists believed that species diversity made ecosystems stable. They believed that the greater the diversity the more stable the ecosystem. Support for this idea came from the observation that long-lasting climax communities usually have more complex food webs and more species diversity than pioneer communities. Ecologists concluded that the apparent stability of climax ecosystems depended on their complexity. To take an extreme example, farmlands dominated by a single crop are so unstable that one year of bad weather or the invasion of a single pest can destroy the entire crop. In contrast, a complex climax community, such as a temperate forest, will tolerate considerable damage from weather to pests.The question of ecosystem stability is complicated, however. The first problem is that ecologists do not all agree what “stability”means. Stability can be defined as simply lack of change. In that case, the climax community would be considered the most stable, since, by definition, it changes the least over time. Alternatively, stability can be defined as the speed with which an ecosystem returns to a particular form following a major disturbance, such as a fire. This kind of stability is also called resilience. In that case, climax communities would be the most fragile and the least stable, since they can require hundreds of years to return to the climax state.Even the kind of stability defined as simple lack of change is not always associated with maximum diversity. At least in temperate zones, maximum diversity is often found in mid-successional stages, not in the climax community. Once a redwood forest matures, for example, the kinds of species and the number of individuals growing on the forest floor are reduced. In general, diversity,by itself, does not ensure stability. Mathematical models of ecosystems likewise suggest that diversity does not guarantee ecosystem stability—just the opposite, in fact. A more complicated system is, in general, more likely than a simple system to break down. A fifteen-speed racing bicycle is more likely to break down than a child’s tricycle.Ecologists are especially interested to know what factors contribute to the resilience of communities because climax communities all over the world are being severely damaged or destroyed by human activities. The destruction caused by the volcanic explosion of Mount St. Helens, in the northwestern United States, for example, pales in comparison to the destruction caused by humans. We need to know what aspects of a community are most important to the community’s resistance to destruction, as well as its recovery.Many ecologists now think that the relative long-term stability of climax communities comes n ot from diversity but from the “patchiness”of the environment, an environment that varies from place to place supports more kinds of organisms than an environment that is uniform. A local population that goes extinct is quickly replaced by immigrants from an adjacent community. Even if the new population is of a different species, it can approximately fill the niche vacated by the extinct population and keep the food web intact.译文：TPO-3-3 生态系统的长期稳定植物群体可以自由地聚集，它们特殊的结构取决于聚集区域的具体历史。
托福TPO3writing
The professor argues that the painting whichdepicta woman wearing a white linen cap is a true work painted by Rembrandt in contract to passage which believing it is a fake one. Here are some reasons based on a reliable analysis.Firstly, the passage points that the fur collar is not consistnet with her white linen cap.i. The fact is that the fur collar was not painted in the original painting. Someone had added itto make the woman seem more like a lady almost 100 years after the Rembrandt finished his work. So actually, it is a servant.这段没有结合文章内容Secondly, contrary to the belief in the reading passage that the light and shadow in the painting is inconsistent.Rembrandt didn't make an error of painting light and shadow. In the primitive painting, the woman is wearing a light-color clothing if you move away the fur collar. The light color will reflect light on the face and face will be illuminated. So what the passage says is based on the existence of the dark fur collar and it is wrong.这段最后一句结合了文章但是不如直接指出文章说了些什么。
新托福 IBT口语真经独立写作
12.16
口语 1. The season which you like ,reasons
2. most people enjoy the way that is relax and unhurried, your opinion
独立写作
you want to choose an intelligent friend or a friend with a good sense of humor?
独立写作
在traffic 高峰期出车的人要交钱，这样有利降低traffic jam，Agree or Disagree?
12.15
口语 1.on 2. musical instrument necessary or not
独立写作
internet bring people valuable information 还是 create problem
10.28(北美考试时间为10.27)
口语 1、 小说、杂志、诗歌你喜欢哪种？ 2、 与室友同住好还是一人住好?
独立写作 是否同意： young people enjoy life better than the older people. 说“会享受生活的青年人是不是比年长者多”
10.29(北美考试时间为10.28)
独立写作
The teacher should assign homework that student finish it everyday. Agree or Disagree?
12.14（海外考试题目，大陆此日无考试）
口语 1. features of cafe or restaurant you like 2. keep or not old building i the city
TOFEL iBT Writing 3
6
第十三招：the + 形容词
泛指一类人
For example: the rich, the wealthy, the poor, the needy, the elderly, the unemployed, the weak, the neglected
1. The government should dedicate itself to protecting the rights of 病人与无家可归者 . the sick and the homeless 2. One of the most effective ways to teach children about responsibilities is to encourage them to care for 穷人与需要帮助者 . the poor and the needy
突破新托福写作
Allen WU, March 21st, 2014
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第十招：变性表决心
改变词性 1. People are concerned because the traditional values are gradually disappearing from the tribes.
第十招：变性表决心
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第十一招：负负得正
1. It is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. 2. These days, it is not uncommon that young people have a break from studying after graduating from high school. 3. It was notusual unusual for half of the crew to die of diseases. 4. In our media-intensive culture, it is not easy difficult to find differing opinions. 5. To be a valuable member of any community is different learning a simple skill. not like from
新托福写作经典样本(doc 15页)
^| You have to believe, there is a way. The ancients said:" the kingdom of heaven is trying to enter". Only when the reluctant step by step to go to it 's time, must be managed to get one step down, only have struggled to achieve it.-- Guo Ge Tech新托福写作经典范文1. Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Who would disagree with the statement “ progress is good”? Without progress , there would be no change. Without progress, there would be no change in our economy, our standard of living, or our health.Progress is required to keep the economy moving forward. New products need to be developed; new services need to be created. Without progress, our economy would stand still. There would be no change. Without progress, there would be no supermarkets with fress produce brought in from all over the world.Progress is required to improve our standard of living. Our homes today are more efficient and use less natural resources thanks to improvement in home construction techniques. Our clothes are warmer and safer thanks to developments in textile manufacturing. Our educational system is better thanks to the use of the computers and the Internet.Progress is required to improve the heath of the world population. Without progress, there would be no vaccines against deadly diseases like smallpox. Without progress, there would be increased infant mortality. Thanks to progress, our lives are longer and healthier.Progress is a natural state. Without it, we would not evolve. Without it, our economy, our standard of living, and our health would deteriorate. Who could deny the necessity of progress.2. Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Who would you choose? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.If my city has decided to build a statue to honor a famous person in my country, I would choose a late singer, Teresa Teng. She was born in 1950s, and died of a severe asthma attack at age 41 in May 1995 while holidaying in Chiang Mai, Thailand, triggering an outpouring of grief among her legions of fans in Asia and elsewhere. During her brilliant stage career, favored by fans all over Asia, she moved millions of people. Her famous songs include "sweet", "story of smalltown", and "the moon represents my heart", etc.It was said that it was her who introduced several generations in China to a certain field of popular music. Her songs have accompanied the growth and development of many people in China. In the home of these generations' soul, her sweet voice has become immortal beauty and memory. Although she's gone, her sound of singing has never vanished. She is constantly commemorated; from Beijing to Taipei, Hong Kong to Singapore, her ubiquitous fans observe her commemoration from time to time, cherishing her incredible beauty, and her voice that sounds to come from heaven. Her sweet songs made her a legend, and are still regularly heard on radio, and continue to have a following in Chinese communities all over the world.She should be remembered not only because of her beauty and voice, but also because of her great charity. She founded "Teresa Teng Foundation" during her lifetime. The purpose of the foundation is to cultivate and support gifted artists, and at the same time the foundation includes a trust to distribute scholarship to make sure that art students have opportunities to accomplish what they actually can. Every year, The Teresa Teng Foundation also send a great amount of money as a charity to help homeless children. And these activities are supported by her fans all over the world.3. Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples.My favorite custom from Chinese culture that I wish that other countries would adopt is "Respect the Old, Love the Young." These two ideas have been part of traditional Chinese culture for thousands of years, but they are more important than ever in contemporary Chinese culture. If adopted by Western countries, these two traditional attitudes could help them solve some of their social problems.One major problem in many Western countries is what to do with old people when they can no longer take careof themselves. A Chinese family will often have three generations of one family living under the same roof. They love and respect the older generation, and consider them wise. Western people believe that living with one's own parents is inconvenient and embarrassing. Instead of respecting old people, some think that they are stupid and ugly. When Western families' parents get old, they would rather send them into nursing homes and retirement homes than live together with them. Only old and sick people live in these places and they are considered depressing, in the worst cases they might seem like a prison to their inhabitants. Old people in the West would be much happier if they adopted these traditional Chinese attitudes.Juvenile delinquency is another serious social problem in Western cultures. Its causes can also be traced back to a lack of respect for old people and love for young people. Children are not taught to respect the wishes of their parents and instead value their relationships with their friends more. Because in many Western families both parents have jobs outside of the home, children often lack adequate supervision. Chinese families, by contrast, often have at least one parent, or a grandparent at home to take care of and love the children. Children without proper guidance and love from a young age might start to smoke, drink, use drugs, and commit crimes. This occurs much less frequently in China because people pay more attention to their children and have the children's grandparents nearby to help raise them.The West puts the "Individual" before the "Family". Traditional Chinese culture puts the interests of the Family first, and the Individual second. Chinese mothers and fathers place higher value on their child's development, than on their child's independence. Children place ahigher value on then-parents' happiness than on their own convenience. While there are many excellent lessons that Chinese people can learn from the West, Western people would do well to learn from these essential Chinese traditions.4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot abouta country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Advertising does not mean to educate or illustrate. Primarily it is a vehicle for business and it aims to sell products. As a result, the information we can gather from looking at advertisings is quite limited. However, the cultural ideas used to sell commodities reveal a society's value system, and from the nature of the advertising and the product it aims to sell we can draw conclusions as to which social demography might be the most affluent.In order to be most effective an advertising campaign will make use of the cultural values of a country. Obviously, companies will be able to sell more products if a great many people relate to the goods and the images used to sell them. For example, in a country like the United States where a great percentage of the population is religious, advertisers use expressions such as heavenly, divine, or revelation, because these have connotations that prospective customers will likely identify with. Similarly, advertisers will try to employ fashion models who embody a culture's ideals of personal beauty, because attractive men and women will sell more products than unattractive ones.Companies identify social demographics or parts of society that are most likely to buy their products and design their advertisings accordingly. For example, teenage girls are more likely to buy mobile phones than retired factory workers. Thus companies will make use of fashion trends in their ads and probably pay a famous pop singer a big chunk of money to endorse their product. If the majority of all advertisings in a country are geared towards a specific target market or audience, then this part of the population probably has the most financial resources at their disposal.Although we can learn some things about a country by looking at its advertising we have to remember that this knowledge is limited. After all, advertising is only directed at people who have the means to buy consumer goods. Thus advertising does not tell us anything about the overall prosperity or likes and dislikes of a country. Also, advertising not only reflects but also tries to shape and change cultural values. Therefore, it does not accurately reflect the exact state of a country's culture.5. A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.China is an enormous country with an intensely varied landscape. If a foreign visitor were coming for just one day to see our country, it would be difficult to choose just one place to spend the day. However, I posit that the best place in China to visit would be Beijing. As the capital city, Beijing offers a diverse look at China. I would suggest that the main sites to see would be the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, and Tiananmen Square.The Forbidden City offers the visitor a look at what it was like to live in historical China. The Forbidden City is located in the heart of Beijing, and is the biggest palace complex in the world. This particular site would be of interest to a tourist because it was once the home of many emperors. One can see the actual rooms from whence the ancient China was ruled by the emperors.When the visitor walks through the palace confines, he/she will see many examples of classic Chinese architecture. A walk through the gardens is particularly peaceful with jasmine trees abound.The Great Wall is also a must-see in China. The people of China hold the Great Wall as having particular significance to their culture because of its long history. The wall, built of dirt, stone and brick, was used as a defense barrier against invading nomads and wandering tribes.This is the largest engineering and building project ever carried out by humans. Its historic and strategic importance is matched only by its architectural significance.Finally, Tiananmen Square should be on the list of things to see while visiting Beijing. This square is one of the largest in China, and possibly in Asia. At this square, one can visit the Chairman Mao Memorial Hall, one of the greatest leaders ever in China. The Chinese Revolutionary Museum and the Chinese History Museum stand to the east of the square, the Great Hall of the People to the west and the magnificent Tiananmen Tower to the north. As the visitor will see, there are numerous interesting exhibits at Tiananmen Square that offer up a variety of Chinese heritage.Of course, it is very difficult to name one city in China over all others as "the place" to visit. China is the host to such a wide variety of beautiful places, and a visitor really should spend much more time exploring them all. However, with only one day, I believe that Beijing is the best place to visit.6. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role ina culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.There are a number of qualities that have always been present in cultures, recent or ancient. These qualities can be anything from art forms to culturally gained knowledge. These qualities make the culture unique, and allow the culture to offer something interesting to the world. Throughout history, dancing has always played such a role in cultures. This is because dance allows us to express emotion, preserve heritage, and entertain.Dancing has always held a high position in culture, as it is an excellent way of expressing emotion. Much like the painter using color to convey emotion, dancers can use their body as a tool to show the onlooker their happiness, sadness, pain, etc.Dancing is also an excellent method of retaining and preserving culture. Many cultures have dance as part of their ceremonies, whether the ceremony is religious or patriotic in form. For example, it is a widely practiced norm to have people dance out a glorious moment in battle. In religion, it is common for people to dance to appease the God or Gods. Because of this, dancing is an excellent way to maintain culture, and ensure that important moments of the past are not forgotten.In modern days, it is much more common for dancing to be seen as a form of entertainment. Dancing has become somewhat of a sport in some countries, for example , ballroom dancing is very popular in the United States. There are hundreds of bars and disco clubs all over China which focus on dancing. They provide disc jockeys, more commonly referred to as "D.J.s", and play loud, repetitive music which encourages the young people to dance. There are many different styles of dance, but all bring the dancer to have fun, and get a good workout at the same time.7. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.It seems that people do sometimes behave differently when they wear different clothes. For example, a well-dressed man seldom spits at random, a woman in glorious dresses is more likely to talk in a gentle tone, and a clean dressed child seems quiet than others. It might be explained that different dresses give people different self-images, and most people subconsciously behave according to their own self-images. Equally sensible is another factor, that is, all too often people regard a person differently according to his/her dresses. Therefore, people might behave differently when they wear different clothes because they are treated differently.Also, appropriate dresses do help a lot in certain circumstances. It is not difficult to imagine that a doctor with a casual suit instead of his/her formal one will certainly make his/her patients nervous, for doctors in working hours are always supposed to be in white suits. An applicant in his/her first interview will be naturally accompanied with great mental tension. If he/she was well-dressed, by "well" we do not mean expensively or gloriously, we mean "neatly", he/she would appear more self-confident and or even be self-confident in deed.However, merely a suit in itself can contribute little. In fact, people's behaviors inevitably reflect their very nature. A poor gentleman dressed in rags is still a gentleman. He knows the essential principles that a civilized individual must observe, he knows fundamental moral disciplines which an educated individual must follow. A parvenu on the other hand, will finally find out the fact that his exorbitantly dear dresses is of no use to make himself a gentleman, and he even eventually fail to make him look like a gentleman. Maybe those are right who said it takes at least three generations to cultivate a gentleman.In a word, I do not believe that clothes can essentially make people different, even though they might sometimes seemingly do.8. What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.Whereas others might feel ridiculous, I reckon the bathroom as the most important room in my house, even though other rooms such as the reading room or the sitting room are probably equally important.First of all, the bathroom is the most important because it is highly visible to guests. We may be able to close off the bedroom to indicate that the room is "off-limits," but we cannot deny our visitors access to the bathroom. The most overlooked in general though it might be, the bathroom is a room which demands attention as much as possible. For example, it is absolutely an ugly design if the toilet is placed directly opposite the door, all too often the embarrassment happens when the door is accidentally unlocked. And it is the host to blame if the bathroom is dirty, smelly, or even scattered about in a mess.The bathroom is very important because every family member will inevitably use that room, in which the most important part of family sanitations is located. Personal health of family member is no doubt superior to any other concerns. It should be spacious, bright, tidy, and above all, hygienic, and deserve frequent cleaning—in fact, the room we cannot clean too much,specifically, the toilet seat. Moreover, more than one bathroom are virtually needed, if possible. It is not only embarrassing or inconvenient but would also be absurd and irritating if someone knocks at the door when we are using the lavatory.Another reason I put special emphasis upon bathroom came from my experiences. According to my conception, bathroom is not only for toileting, washing, and showering, but for reading as well. Don't be surprised, I have a very spacious and bright bathroom in my house, in which, an arm away from the stool is a small bookshelf, a little bit highly located on the wall to prevent books and newspapers from getting wet. I have already discovered that I have to spend more than 30 minutes a day in the bathroom, and that moment is so ideally quiet and easy to concentrate. Believe it or not, I learnt a computer programming language – Delphi - while I was sitting on the stool!9. A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.Child's development is often supplemented by the gifts they receive from important adults in their life. It is important to choose these gifts carefully, and foster growth in the right areas. If I were to give a gift to a child, it would be the game of chess. Chess offers a number of advantages to a child. Chess builds social skills, it encourages the child to develop the higher functions of the brain, and it is a good hobby.As with most games, chess encourages a child to be social with others. As chess is a two-person game, any time children play the game they will be interacting with others. As chess is a competitive game with a winner and a loser, children will have to learn how to lose gracefully if they hope to keep their chess partners. Building social skills when one is young is very important for future successes throughout one's life.Playing chess is also an excellent way to increase one's thinking abilities. Chess is a game of strategy. When playing chess, a child will build important skills such as pattern recognition, strategic thinking, and analytical thinking. All of these skills are very important, especially when going through school. Many subjects a young person must take in school utilize all of these skills, and working on them early in life can be nothing but beneficial.Finally, chess is an excellent hobby for a young person. Playing chess, or any other time-intensive game, keeps children out of trouble. If they are spending their time working on building their chess strategies, they are not out on the streets causing trouble. Many children develop behavioral problems because of simple boredom. Chess is an excellent remedy for this, as it is fun to spend one's free time.Thus, I think chess is an excellent present to give to a young child. Chess encourages both personality and mental development, which are very important in a child's early years. While many gifts will encourage the maturity of one of these types of development, there are few gifts that foster the development of both.10. People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.One custom that is prevalent in all societies around the globe is that of gift-giving. This is a time-honored tradition in all countries, and evokes different feelings or emotions in all of us.Gift-giving has many different functions in Chinese culture. One can receive a gift as a token of affection, or one can receive or give a gift to stimulate business opportunities. In both of these cases, the gifts are always well received, and serve the function of a memento.Perhaps the most common situation in which a gift is given is on a special day, for example, one's birthday or an anniversary. These gifts come to a person from loved ones, and usually symbolize affection or admiration. These gifts can be large or small. For example, my father bought me a digital camera for my last birthday. This was a great present, and was quite expensive.I did not appreciate the gift because of its monetary value, however. I valued it because it was a very thoughtful gift, as my father knew I was interested in photography. Other gifts have less monetary value, but are still just as meaningful. An example of this is when a boyfriend buys flowers for his girlfriend. The flowers do not cost a lot of money, but they evoke feelings of happiness and love.Gifts can also be given to stimulate business. For example, many businessmen in China will take their most important clients on a special vacation to see the sights of another city. This trip does not relate directly to business, as in many cases, the business at hand is not discussed. Instead, the businessman will offer such a trip as a token of trust and respect. The client appreciates this gesture, as it shows him/her that the businessman is serious about work, and values him/her as a customer.In both of these cases, the gifts signify to the receiver that he/she is cared about and is important. It is always a treat to receive a gift, and most people view this as a sign of friendship-Gifts serve as mementos of the people who give them, which is why we hold them in special places in our hearts.11. People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.People have many different ways expressing, celebrating and legislating our passage from childhood into adulthood. I believe that there is no single moment that defines when a child becomes an adult. Becoming an adult is based on a variety of events, namely, when one's body changes, when one's mind expands, and when one accumulates experiences.Small children are usually referred to as cherub like. They are all beautiful with rosy cheeks, bright eyes, and tender skin. As a child grows into an adolescent, they grow taller, but their frames remain quite small. Once a youth grows from an adolescent to an adult, frames develop substantially. Their shoulders broaden and they are able to form defined muscles. This physical change is the most obvious sign of a child becoming an adult.The second modification that occurs is the expansion of one's mind. When one is an adult, they are able to comprehend much more advanced thought processes. They start to be able to think for themselves, and make decisions that are best for them. Children are not capable of making complex decisions regarding their lives or their future. They do not have a mind capable of carefully weighing all of the options and deducing the right choice.This expansion of the mind is a result of the numerous experience a person has on his/her way to becoming an adult. As one moves through the world, they gather important information about how the world works. This information becomes one's personal database of knowledge: such a database is absolutely necessary if one is to grow past childhood. The experiences ofwhich I speak are the happenings in our day-to-day lives. We are constantly placed in situations where we must choose one path or another. Of course, one will make mistakes along the way. These mistakes are an important learning tool, which help us become wise adults.In conclusion, children become adults when they have sufficiently matured. Their bodies, their minds, and the number of experiences they have had must grow. Once this process is complete, they can rightfully claim to be adults.12. People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.Music exists all around the world in thousands of forms and manifestations. It spans time and geography as an ever-present theme in the lives of all people. There is no culture without some form of music; from primitive man to the modern urban inhabitants, and from Tibet to New York City. Musicians come from all walks of life and express their emotions and their experiences, so that they may be shared with their community or even the world.Different emotions call for different music. This idea is well illustrated by theatrical scoring and movie soundtracks. There is music that we listen to when we are sad, when we are happy, when we are angry, etc. Music works with our emotions, and helps us to deal with the highs and lows of life. I believe that if there was no music, that man would live a much more stressful, embittered existence.At different ages we develop tastes for different types of music. Some people feel that as one matures they appreciate more complicated themes, styles and emotions in their music. For example, many young people today enjoy pop music, while their parents prefer to listen to classical music. Perhaps this is because young people are full of energy and therefore enjoy faster music. Their parents, on the other hand, have enough excitement during the day, and would therefore prefer to listen to music that is more soothing.As our world changes, different styles of music become more appropriate and more relevant. For example, as we become more and more technologically inclined, the music we listen to has followed the same trend. Young people today are currently experimenting with electronic music because of this. Musical instruments also advance technologically as time passes. In the last few decades, man has invented both the electric guitar and the synthesizer, which has revolutionized music around the world.A person's choice in music is highly individualistic. Even family members can sometimes not agree on what the best type of music is. Through thousands of years of evolution, music has become one of man's greatest companions. It can help people to celebrate their joy, and it consoles people when they are depressed.13. Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.During the planning of an extended trip away from home, we have to decide what items to carry with us. While considering this problem I pondered many possibilities, such as a family photo album, my journal, my music collection and many others. Finally I realized that the best thing for me to bring on an extended journey would be my laptop.A laptop computer can act as a journal. In fact it can outperform a journal in its abilitiesto catalogue experiences. With this added functionality, I could add pictures, captured with the web cam and sounds, captured with the built-in microphone, to the text. As there is a diverse range of software available for computers, there is an added possibility of loading my experiences on to a web page and publishing them on the Internet.While traveling or living abroad, it is often necessary to communicate with loved ones or business colleagues. In spite of the ever-decreasing cost of international calls, long distance telephone bills can quickly add up. Once again a laptop computer has the ability of solving this problem. With a relatively inexpensive Internet connection, a person can harness one of the most powerful attributes of a computer communication. This form of communication adds the extra abilities of being able to see the person you are contacting and allow people to share files, information and even programs.A new city can be a lonely place and it can take a significant amount of time to adjust to a new environment and make friend. During such a transitional period, it can be very helpful for one to have access to entertainment: reading a book as an e-book, playing a video game, or watching a DVD, all of which can be done on a laptop. Entertaining oneself can also be a marvelous way to pass the time on a long bus ride or flight.Hence, I posit that a laptop is the ultimate travel companion, whether for a short journey or an extended voyage. Personal computer seems to solve many of the problems that arise from travel.14. Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.There are basically two types of classes in university, classes, i.e., where teachers lecture and where the students do some of the talking. Both teaching and learning approaches are valuable and have their own relative merits.Classes that are dominated by teachers' lectures may benefits students in several ways. First of all, lectures can communicate the intrinsic interest of the subject matter. The speaker can convey personal enthusiasm in a way that no book or other media can. Enthusiasm stimulates interest, and it is an undeniable fact that interested, stimulated people tend to learn more. Moreover, lectures in university settings can provide students with role models of scholars in action. The professor's way of approaching knowledge can be demonstrated for students to emulate. Furthermore, lectures can organize material in a special way. They may provide a faster, simpler method of presenting information to an audience with its own special needs. Lectures are particularly useful for students who read poorly or who are unable to organize print material.On the other hand, lecture approaches also have some relevant weaknesses. For example, the lecture often puts students in a passive rather than an active role. As is often the case, passivity can hinder learning. At the same time, most lectures assume that all students are learning at the same pace and at the same level of understanding, which is hardly ever true. Especially, Lectures place the burden of organizing and synthesizing content solely on the lecturer. They are not well suited to higher levels of learning such as application, analysis, and synthesis. Lectures require an effective speaker who can vary tone, pitch, and pace of delivery. Lecturers must be verbally fluent, a skill that is not stressed nor learned in many Ph.D. programs and is usually distributed unevenly among people. Lectures are therefore sometimes not well suited to complex,。
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新托福写作真经4test13-综合写作解析托福综合写作是托福写作部分比较容易的部分，托福综合写作是基于托福阅读和听力的内容，总结两部分的内容进行写作。
阅读部分的内容一般是提出一个观点，然后用2-3个分论点进行论述。
听力部分最红要的就是要学会使用听力笔记。
但是，最重要的一点就是综合写作的范文中我们可以提取出来很多的万能模板。
接下来，前程百利小编为大家整理了新托福写作真经4test13部分的综合写作部分的解析，一起学习吧！第一部分：阅读文本：The bonobo is an endangered species of primates native to the area south of the Congo River in Africa. In recent years, many primatologists have begun studying the bonobo in more detail. What these researchers have learned about bonobos is that they are quite meek in temperament. This is a stark contrast to other primates, such as chimpanzees, which can be rather aggressive and violent, in nature.There is plenty of support for bonobos' gentle demeanors. Experts have studied numerous bonobos in captivity and have witnessed little evidence suggesting that they possess violent tendencies. Bonobos in captivity are typically gentle, kind, and sensitive, and zookeepers report that they experience few problems while handling them. In that regard, bonobos are different from other primates, which sometimes attack their handlers or cause other problems.Bonobos also tend to prevent their young from engaging in violent behavior. For instance, the young of many animal species frequently fight one another or engage in excessive roughhousing. This teaches them how to hunt as well as other survival techniques. However, older bonobos actively quell this behavior in younger bonobos by intervening in fights between their young. As a result, young bonobos neither learn how to fight nor develop aggressive tendencies during their formative years.Bonobos are often contrasted with their more violent cousins, the chimpanzees. Chimpanzees have been observed hunting small animals and even use rocks and sticks as weapons to attack other troops of primates. No such behavior has ever been witnessed among bonobos. Some researchers believe that the fact that bonobos are herbivores reduces any violent impulses they may possess. Since bonobos only eat vegetation, they have no need to hunt or kill anything except in self-defense. Thus they have evolved into more peaceful animals, especially when compared with chimpanzees.阅读要点：观点：These researchers have learned about bonobos is that they are quite meek in temperament. This is a stark contrast to other primates, such as chimpanzees, which can be rather aggressive and violent, in nature.研究人员发现，和其他灵长类动物(黑猩猩)相比，倭黑猩猩性情十分的温和。
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adj. = controversial;
erroneous 错误的，不正确的
adj. = incorrect; wrong
rely upon 取决于；依赖于
= depend on
commute 通勤；上下班往返
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run on 需要，依赖于
task2 read the second paragraph within 1 minute,try to fing out:
disrupt economy
Supporting sub-idea1: To begin with, an increase in the gas tax would disrupt the economy.
新托福中级写作Unit 3
主讲：曹敏
Avarage gas tax level in American states:
should we raise American gasoline tax?
Good thinking is good writting
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contentious 有争议的；观点不统一的 causing disagreement
go to
work or go out
keys to the blanks:
(1) People's finances
(2) the overall economy (3) more expensive (4) public transportation
listening
touchy 敏感的，棘手的
Other side's opinion： Many people support it because they believe it will help the econonmy. <it: to raise the gosoline tax> Author's opinion: However, their beliefs are erroneous since raising the gas tax would definitely have negative efforts on the economy.
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21. “It is more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and music performance centers than to build recreational facilities such as swimming pool, playground.”In modern social community, people have access to a variety of public facilities such as art museums, music performance centers and some recreational facilities, which enable people to have a flexible arrangement of time after work. Therefore, there comes into being an argument that whether it is more important for the government to build art museums and performance centers than to build recreational facilities. In my point of view, to build recreational facilities is supposed to be put on the first place.Admittedly, art museums and music performance centers do bring benefits into people's life. However, they do not need a vast of investment. Although professional artists are likely to visit art museums frequently, the requirement for the number of art museums is limited due to the fact that there are, in reality, a few artists. Occasionally, artistic amateurs may appreciate artistic works in museums, but this activity is not an indispensable part of their life. As a result, one museum or two in a city is enough. On the other hand, music performance centers provide space for holding live music concerts. Nevertheless, it is not possible for a city to hold live music concerts on a daily basis. In addition, the appearance of the Internet enables people to listen to music right after clicking the mouse. Thus, too many music performance centers may cause waste.In modern working circumstance, increasing working hour a day results in the decreasing time of people for exercise. Plus, people are tired of driving for an hour or even more to a stadium far away from home. As a result, the health level of people tends to get down, which is potential to develop as some serious diseases. From this perspective, some assorts of recreational facilities which are able to be easily and immediately reached can relieve the embarrassing situation. Consequently, governments are required to spend money to build more convenient recreational facilities such as swimming pools, playgrounds, sport courts, just near the area of people’s living community. Under the benefit of these establishments, people will no longer spend a lot of time on the road to the sports center, thus promote their motivation of doing exercises. Take an example of my father. Before the tennis courts were established in my community, he used to watch TV after dinner rather than to go outside for some exercises because the nearest tennis court to our home was about 40 minutes’drive. The new tennis courts built in my community offer some tennis teaching courses, which is special hot in our community. My father participated in these courses a month ago, and now he looks more healthy and stronger than before.In conclusion, both the artistic facilities and the recreational facilities serve as their ways in our social community. The recreational facilities are more popular since they acquire more requirements of people, playing an indispensable role in our daily basis. On the contrast, art facilities though are necessary in our society, they have a relative low rate of visit. Thus, to spend more money on building recreational facilities seems to be the more immediate work for the governments to achieve.。
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本书优势及卖点：
全书收录了15套2011年北美新托福考试写作真题；
每套综合写作真题都提供了阅读和听力的笔记，让考生学会如何在考试当中准确捕捉文中的重要信息，同时还提供了实用的高分答题模板，让考生对文章逻辑结构驾驭自如；
独立写作不仅提供了文章的思路框架，而且用范文分析的方式为考生展示如何巧妙利用句子之间的逻辑关系，从容展开一篇文章；
另附写作中经常用到的高分动词、词组以及形容词，为考生的作文增加亮点，如虎添翼。
内容简介：
360教育集团金牌留学顾问老师介绍，本书主要分为四大部分：
第一章“新托福写作揭秘”：详细介绍新托福考试的评分标准，综合写作与独立写作与“老托”相比有哪些变化以及备考注意事项。
第二章“新托福写作高分是这样炼成的”：托福机考屏幕图显结合对应文字说明，生动灵活地呈现托福写作真实考试情景，题型与策略一手掌控之后，一套真题详解更将其演绎的淋漓尽致。
第三章：“14套2011年北美最新托福写作真题”：经典真题再现，每套题从综合写作到独立写作，都提供了如何用笔记的方式来准确记录信息，如何行云流水地写出一篇满分托福作文。
从读题到笔记；从组句到成文，以练为主，掌握托福高分写作要领，其中的独立写作参考范文解析更会让考生赢到心中有数。
第四章：“新托福写作高分表达”：总结了在写作中经常用到的动词、词组以及形容词，旨在让考生掌握写作应对策略的同时把文章写得更加漂亮，为文章锦上添花。
作者简介：
常远，北京新航道学校SAT写作主讲，托福口语主讲。
加拿大里贾纳大学经济学学士。
以托福近于满分的成绩考入加拿大里贾纳大学，获经济学文科全额奖学金。
7年北美及西欧学习、生活、工作经历，美式发音纯正，英语表达地道。
亲历中西方文化差异，深切感受中国学生英语学习的困惑与无奈。
通过自学总结出关于托福、SAT独到而高效的应试技巧，已编著并出版《新托福口语真经2》、《新托福口语真经3》、《新托福写作真经2》等书，以其较强的实用性而深受广大考生的好评，被誉为托福口语的经典学习资料。
图书目录：
第一章新托福写作揭秘
关于新托福写作 (2)
关于综合写作 (6)
关于独立写作 (7)
第二章新托福写作高分是这样炼成的
综合写作高分秘籍 (10)
独立写作高分秘籍 (20)
第三章14套2011年北美新托福考试写作真题
2011年12月02日北美新托福考试写作真题 (26)
2011年11月19日北美新托福考试写作真题 (37)
2011年10月29日北美新托福考试写作真题 (48)
2011年10月14日北美新托福考试写作真题 (59)
2011年09月16日北美新托福考试写作真题 (70)
2011年08月05日北美新托福考试写作真题 (81)
2011年07月08日北美新托福考试写作真题 (92)
2011年06月10日北美新托福考试写作真题 (103)
2011年05月28日北美新托福考试写作真题 (114)
2011年04月15日北美新托福考试写作真题 (125)
2011年04月02日北美新托福考试写作真题 (136)
2011年03月11日北美新托福考试写作真题 (147)
2011年03月04日北美新托福考试写作真题 (158)
2011年02月11日北美新托福考试写作真题 (169)
第四章新托福写作高分表达
TOEFL Writing： Powerful Sentences and Expressions (182)。