新托福写作真经4 test3-独立写作解析

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新托福写作真经4test3-独立写作解析托福真经1-4是目前市面上比较权威的托福写作的真题和测试题目集锦。

新托福写作真经4是在前三本书的基础上,更加系统地归纳托福写作的常考题型。

今天,前程百利小编和大分享的是托福写作真经4test3-独立写作的解析,希望大家能有所收获。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better to work alone at home than to work with others at a e specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
你赞成还是反对下面的命题?自己单独在家工作好于和他人一起在公司工作。

请说明具体的理由,并请举例支持自己的观点。

第一部分:题目分析
第一:分类:工作类
第二:适用于本题目的万能理由
1、效率
具体方面:提高或降低工作效率;
例如:It is more enjoyable to have a job and work long hours for three days in a week than to work shorter hours for five days in a week.
Disagree:work long hours for three days in a week效率不高;
其他角度:work long hours for three days in a week
对健康不利;4天的周末不好,如容易懒惰、假期综合征严重等;
2、压力
具体方面:压力大或小;
例如:Working together is better than working alone.
Agree:一起工作有助于减轻压力;
其他角度:互相帮助,提高效率;增进交流能力;有助于个人的提升;
3、成就感
具体方面:
•对未来工作的影响,或与以后工作的关联;
例如:People will feel happier when they finish a challenging or difficult work than they finish an easy work.
Agree:做挑战性的工作获得成功后成就感更强;
其他角度:完成挑战性工作让自己学到的东西多;
完成挑战性工作让自己对未来更自信;
4、健康
具体方面:有利于、或不利于身体健康;
例如:A job with more vacation time is better than that with high salary but less vacation time.
Agree:有利于身体健康;
其他角度:假期多会与朋友家人相处时间多;有利于高工作效率;
工作压力,长期加班,很容易导致健康问题
5、提升
具体方面:有利于、或不利于个人的提升与发展;
例如:It is better to work in a large company than in a small one.
Agree:竞争性的环境有助于提升自己的工作能力和其他能力;
其他角度:大公司的工作环境等要好;在大公司更有利于结交很多优秀的朋友;
6.诉求
老板对员工有工作要求,员工针对自己的工作也会有诉求。

相关内容:
1.万能关键字:诉求,欲望(desire)
2.万能关键词句:
crave for/long for/yearn for/pine for creatures of desire欲望之物、meet our needs to one’s heart’s content尽情享受、fulfill one’s dream satisfy one’s vanity满足虚荣心等。

3.万能段落(可以运用到托福写作中,一定会给你的文章增色不少哦):Desire refers to our hope or inclination.We are all creatures of desires.We try our best/endeavor to satisfy our desire and vanity:the desire to relax to our heart’s content;the desire to gain more knowledge;the desire to earn big money and the desire to be loved.To meet one’s desire is to enjoy a happy life.Hence,we are all willing to sacrifice our time and efforts to make our heart’s desire fulfilled.
7.沟通
同事相处,和客户打交道,沟通是一把利器。

相关内容:
1.万能关键词:沟通(communication)
2.万能关键词句:Interpersonal skills人际交往能力、disparate people各色人等、bare one’s heart敞开心扉、exchange of ideas、transmission of messages、harmony of the relationship、communication can be heart-warming channels of、communication are open
3.万能段落:Communication is about the exchange of ideas,opinions and information through written or spoken words,symbols or actions.The smooth exchange of information and ideas between disparate people can be thrilling and heart-warming.When we bare our hearts to communicate,we can eliminate the
conflict or contradiction.Thus,the distance among people will surely be shortened.Thus,we can achieve the purpose of transmission of messages.In the meanwhile,the interaction arises,which definitely improves teamwork.Hence,we can harvest(garner/reap)both the success of cooperation and the harmony of the relationship.
范文分析:SAMPLE ESSAY
Each person has his or her own lifestyle.Some people prefer starting and finishing their day early while others choose to sleep in.With the development of technology,a“customized”way of working has now become feasible.In other words,it is no longer uncommon to see employees working in their own homes.Although some people contend that working at home has many drawbacks,I strongly believe that it is better to work alone at home rather than to work with others at a company because this approach offers more freedom for employees;in addition,it saves time for them.
Firstly,workers can have more freedom when working at home.To be specific,employees are able to establish their own rules or systems.For instance,my friend who works at home always takes a nap in the afternoon.He says he feels rejuvenated after taking a rest,which results in better outcomes.According to him,when he worked at a company,he used to feel very drowsy and lethargic after lunch.Thus,working at home allows one to customize the working environment for oneself.
Secondly,employees can save time.It often takes a lot of time to get oneself ready for work and to commute to one’s workplace.To illustrate,my cousin says she has to spend more than an hour to get ready, including applying makeup and getting dressed.In addition,it takes her forty minutes to get from her house to her workplace.Consequently,by the time she gets to work,she is already exhausted.Therefore,one can save not only time but also energy by working at home.
Some argue that working with coworkers gives a person a chance to work in a competitive environment where he or she can be motivated.However,competition often creates a stressful atmosphere among workers,which could harm their health.For the reasons of flexibility and time-saving,I agree with the statement that working alone at home is better than working with others at a workplace.
本范文答题思路
◆思路分析
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better to work alone at home than to work with others at a e specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.你赞成还是反对下面的命题?自己单独在家工作好于和他人一起在公司工作。

请说明具体的理由,并请举例支持自己的观点。

同意题目观点
分论点1:Firstly,workers can have more freedom when working at home.To be specific,employees are able to establish their own rules or systems.
工作者在家会更加自由,确切地说就是,职员能够确定自己的规则。

分论点2:Secondly,employees can save time.It often takes a lot of time to get oneself ready for work and to commute to one’s workplace.
在家工作能够节省时间,因为去公司上班要化妆,还要乘坐交通工具。

分论点3:However,competition often creates a stressful atmosphere among workers,which could harm their health.
公司的竞争环境会造成工作氛围的压抑,这样就会有害健康。

闪光词汇整理:
rejuvenate[rɪ'dʒuvənet]vt.·使年轻;使更新;使恢复精神;使复原
drowsy['draʊzi]adj.·昏昏欲睡的;沉寂的;催眠的
commute[kə'mjʊt]vi.·通勤;代偿
flexibility[,flɛksə'bɪləti]n.·灵活性;弹性;适应性
素材积累:工作:
1.Each person has his or her own lifestyle.Some people prefer starting and finishing their day early while others choose to sleep in.With the development of technology,a“customized”way of working has now become feasible.In other words,it is no longer uncommon to see employees working in their own homes.
每个人都有自己的生活方式,有些人喜欢早起就开始工作,而有些人则喜欢睡懒觉。

随着科技的发展,一种“自定义”模式的工作方式变得流行。

换句话说,在家工作已经变得常见了!
2.For instance,my friend who works at home always takes a nap in the afternoon.He says he feels rejuvenated after taking a rest,which results in better outcomes.According to him,when he worked at a company,he used to feel very drowsy and lethargic after lunch.
例如,我有个朋友,他在家工作的时候,下午都会小憩一会。

他说,睡醒觉之后,整个人都会很有精神,工作也会更有效率。

而他在公司工作的时候,午饭之后,整个人都会很没精神,昏昏欲睡。

3.To illustrate,my cousin says she has to spend more than an hour to get ready,including applying makeup and getting dressed.In addition,it takes her forty minutes to get from her house to her workplace.
我的堂妹说她上班之前要花费一个多小时准备,包括化妆,打扮等。

此外,她还要花费40分钟才能到达公司。

以上就是前程百利小编从万能理由、托福范文的词汇以及素材解析等方面和大家分享的托福写作真经4test3独立写作部分的题目。

因为小编将要解析托福写作真经4这本书籍。

所以希望大家能够和前程百利小编一起攻克托福写作。

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