全国高考英语总复习：高考新题型专练_短文改错(含解析)

全国高考英语总复习：高考新题型专练_短文改错

(一)(2012·高考大纲卷)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对际有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正；

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词．并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：1.原行没有错的不要改；

2．答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。

Dear Editor，

I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving.1.____________

Water is important.We，as well as animal，cannot live2.____________

without water and neither agriculture or industry can go3.____________

without it.Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.4.____________

Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water.5.____________ To deal with a problem，I think，we should first go all6.____________

out to plant trees though trees will help save water.Next，no7.____________

drinking water should be left running.Third，we should find8.____________

ways to reuse the water using in washing，especially bath9.____________

water for which is quite a lot，and that will save much water.10.____________ Sincerely，

Li Hua

(二)(2012·高考新课标卷)

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I te ar apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That’s it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.My attitude changed from then on.

参考答案

题型一短文改错

第二节短文改错

1．tell sb. sth.“把我的观点告诉你”tell you my opinion。故you后面加上my。

2．泛指，用animals表类别，故把animal改为animals。

3．neither...nor...既不……，也不……，either...or...或者……，或者……故把or改成nor，意为：工业和农业都离不开水。

4．文章使用现在时态，故seemed错，宜改为seems。

5．指代many countries，故we错，宜改为they。

6．该题应为特指，指代上文提到的许多国家缺水问题，故a应改为the/this/that。

7．前后两句的关系应为因果关系，故though应改为because/since/as。

8．正确。

9．非谓语动词作定语，water与use是动宾关系，故using应改为used。

10．定语从句修饰water，非常多的洗澡水，for多余，which作主语故把for 去掉。

第四部分写作

第一节短文改错

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littleless aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toytoys. I was

happy when the toys worked, but when things /∧go wrong,_I_got_angry_and_broke_itthem. For a while ∧my parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see whichwhat was happening. When I teartore apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said，“That’s it. No more toys to for you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must_mightmake my toys to\ last.My attitude changed from then on.