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第五讲 熟能生巧篇
I. What electives to choose
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1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课 2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课 3、以你自己为例……
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1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课 、 大学开设了各种各样的选修课 了各种各样的 universities offer/set up/build up/open
elective/optional
Many universities offer a variety of elective courses for students to choose. 2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课 、学生因为各种原因选择了 各种原因选择 reasons choose different electives There are numerous reasons for students to choose electives. 3、以你自己为例 、以你自己为例…… 自己为例 As far as I am concerned. /Take me as an example./As for me. …
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1. Many universities offer a variety of elective courses for students to choose.
背景＋现实＋ 背景＋现实＋扩展
① With the remarkable educational reform and the increasing students’ demand,（In order to enlarge the students’ knowledge （ and increase their abilities,）②many universities offer a variety of elective courses for students to choose. ③Some higher institutes provide the optional course of cross-cultural communication, and some colleges have computer science on the curriculum of elective courses.
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2. There are numerous reasons for students to choose electives.
General point
Reasons
Details
①There are numerous reasons for students to choose electives. ② In the first place, students tend to take personal interest into consideration when they opt for an elective course. Possibly, that’s why cross-cultural communication course is so prevailing on campus. ③ Additionally, some students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation. ④Last but not least, to make up for their required credits is another universal reason as students select a course at random.
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3. As far as I am concerned. /Take me as an example./As for me. …
Example + Details
① As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to choose electives
based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own. ② I am taking geographic research and discovery course in that I’ve been greatly keen on science since I was a kid.
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With the remarkable educational reform and the increasing students’ demand, universities strive to offer a variety of elective curses for students to choose. Some higher institutes provide the optional course of crosscultural communication, and some colleges have computer science on the curriculum of elective courses. There are numerous reasons for students’ selection of the courses. In the first place, students tend to take personal interest into consideration when they opt for an elective course. Possibly, that’s why cross-cultural communication course is so prevailing on campus. Additionally, some students may choose to learn a certain course inn order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation. Last but not least, to make up for their required credits is another universal reason as students select a course at random. As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own. I am taking geographic research and discovery course in that I’ve been greatly keen on science since I was a kid.
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常见错误： 常见错误：
1.词汇： 1.词汇：choose-chose-chosen; interest-be interested in-interesting 词汇 knowledge-knowledges; reason-reasons; society-social; variety-various strengthen/broaden/widen/enrich； 专有名词 2.过渡语、关联词： 2.过渡语、关联词：for example/such as/including/included/enclude 过渡语 Take… as an example 3.句式/语法： 3.句式/语法：Every universities have/has … 句式 从句使用不当 中式英语思维 4.结构层次不合理 4.结构层次不合理
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II. Writing a letter.
Suppose you are Zhang Yu. write a letter to your mother or father, telling him or her about the semester you are having and your plan about the coming summer vacation. 1、表示问候 、 2、描述一下本学期的学习生活情况 、 3、谈谈对即将到来的暑假的打算 、
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Dear Dad, How are you doing these days, and how is Mom? I took seven courses for this semester, and I’m doing all of them well. But of course, I’ve been extremely b

usy, and that’s why I didn’t write you every often. Apart from my study, my life is interesting. My classmates and I are getting on well with each other. We are always ready to help whenever anybody is in trouble. We take part in sports together, and enjoy very much being with each other. I will go back home immediately after the last exam. I have got many plans for the summer, such as learning to swim, reading novels, and of course, watching lots of TV. Oh, yes, I think I should pay grandma a visit and stay with her for some time. You told me that she missed me very much and she is lonely. Wish all my regards! Yours love, Zhang Yu
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Dear mom, How are you these days? I miss you very much! I’m so busy that I don’t have much time to play this term. Our university is welcoming the evaluation of the National Education Department. Everyone is working hard around me. Everyday, we take many major courses to prepare ourselves for bigger tasks ahead on our major. Besides, I’m the assistant of our teachers. I think it can improve my ability to adjust to the environment of working. In addition, I’m preparing to get the mid-term test. Summer vacation is coming. Firstly, I plan to study German in Sichuan Foreign Language College. Secondly, I will practise playing bamboo flute and drawing pictures. Thirdly, I think we should go to my aunt’s home to visit my mew-born sister. How about your ideas? Please write back to me soon! Yours, Zhang Yu
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应用文: 应用文:
1．综观历年四、六级写作考试总的趋势是应用性增强，考生有必要熟悉这 一应用文文体的写作，尤其是书信作文的写作。 2．常见的书信类投诉信、询问信、道歉信、感谢信、邀请信、求职信、求 学信和推荐信。 3.注意书信格式 英文书信通常包括六个部分：Heading（信头），Inside Address（信内地 址），Salutation（称呼），Body of Letter（信的正文) Complementary Close（结束语），Signature（签名）。
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信封格式： 信封格式：
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1）信头: 指发信人的单位名称、地址、发信日期。从信纸的上端中央往右写，第一行可单位名 信头: 称，第二行写门牌号和路名，第三行写市名、省名、邮政号码，第四行写国名，第五行写 发信日期。学生写信时第一行写班级名称，第二行写系科名称，第三行写学校名称，第四 行写市名、省名、邮政号码，第五行写国名，第六行写发信日期。国内信件可以省略国 名。 2）信内地址: 指收信人的姓名、单位和地址，信头下隔一二行，从左边开始写。第一行写姓

名、 信内地址: 头衔，其他部分格式与信头格式相仿，只是不要再写日期。 商业信件及公函必须写信头和信内地址。亲朋好友之间的信可不写信内地址，信头处只 写发信日期就行了。
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3）称呼: 信内地址下隔一二行写称呼，其左侧与信内地址第一行对齐。 称呼: 对不相识的男子，单数常用Sir, Dear Sir,或 My Dear Sir；复数常用 Dear Sirs 或 Gentlemen。 对不相识的女士，单数常用Madam, Dear Madam, 或 My Dear Madam；复数常用 Mesdames或My Dear Mesdames。 对比较熟悉的男子，一般称Dear Mr……即可； 对比较熟悉的女士，一般称Dear Mrs (或 Miss)……即可。 熟人和亲人之间通信，可用下列称呼（按亲密程度排列）：Dear David; My dear David, Dearest David, My dearest David, My dearest, Darling David, My darling, My very own darling等。 有头衔的可把头衔缩写放在名字前，如 Prof. Wang, Dr. Liu, Gen. Chang等。
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4）信的正文: 称呼下方隔一二行处开始写正文。写信与写文章一样，要分段 信的正文: 写，每段有一个中心思想，内容表达清楚，语言简单明了，态度诚恳礼貌。 给亲友的信还应该亲切热情。 5）结束语: 结束语是写信人对收信人的谦称，写在正文下面二三行处，从中 结束语: 间写起，第一个词的开头字母要大写，末尾用逗号。 给机关团体或不相识的人可用： Yours truly 或 Truly yours Yours faithfully 或 Faithfully yours Yours sincerely 或 Sincerely yours 给上级或长者的信可用： Yours respectfully 或 Respectfully yours Yours obediently 或 Obediently yours Yours gratefully 或 Gratefully yours
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给一般熟人或朋友的信可用： Yours, Yours ever, Ever yours, Yours as ever, 或 Yours sincerely 给亲属或挚友的信可用： Yours affectionately, Lovingly yours, Your loving son (child, sister……),或 Yours devoted friend 6）签名: 即写信人署名，写在结束语下面偏右处。 ）签名
信件问候语： 信件问候语：
good day !或者good day to you. How are you? How have you been? I hope everything is fine with you. Hope you enjoy your day. (或者）Here I am again. It's me again. How is everything going? I learnt in your last letter that……
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起首句： 起首句：
I am very much pleased to inform you that…… With great delight I learn that…… I was glad to receive your letter of.. In reply to your letter of 31October, I…… I am writing to ask about the meeting to be held next week. Your kind letter of Sunday arrived this morning. Thank you very much for your prompt reply. Many thanks for your l

ast kind letter. I wish to extend my appreciation for your kind offer. I am very excited and delighted over your good news. Your letter which arrived this morning gave me great delight, as you know…… First of all I must thank you for your kindness to me and for your compliments
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结束语: 结束语
I hope to hear from you soon. Your kind early reply will be highly appreciated. I look forward to our next meeting here in Beijing. Thanks for your sincere cooperation with us. I wish you every success in the coming year. Thank you again for your kind consideration of my… If you want more information, please feel free to write to me again. If there is anything we can do for you, please don't hesitate to contact me. With best regards to your family. With love and wishes. Wish you the best of health and success.
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信件祝福语： 信件祝福语：
如果是在工作当中,商务上的邮件往来,通常是用: Thanks and best regards Best regards 朋友之前的邮件往来,就随意得多,可以用: Best wishes for you Wish you are well God bless you Please give my best greeting to your family Wish you every success in the future。 Wish everything goes on well with you。 Best regards to you and your family。 Wish you are well and great health.
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分类讲解： 分类讲解： （2002年1月全国大学英语四、六级考试作文题） Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内 容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬， 可以是批评建议，也可以兼有而有之。
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January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr. President, I’m very lucky to attend this world-famous university, but I’m afraid I’m not content with the canteen service on campus. Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved. Undoubtedly, there are a lot of delicious dishes, but all the year round, they are the same. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day. So I think the most urgent problem is variety. Secondly, the price is a bit too high. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not only delicious but also cheaper food. Finally, the environment is so noisy that we can’t enjoy our meals in good mood. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax. These suggestions are not just of my own, but also of many other students. We hope our respectable president will pay attention t

o our suggestions. By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling. So I think if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service. Best wishes, Li Ming
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A Letter of Application for School Loan
To whom it may concern， I am writing to you to apply for a school loan. As a freshman from the Chinese Department, I have much financial difficulty in continuing my study. My family is short of money. First, we lack financial resources. My father, a worker earning 300 Yuan per month, is the only breadwinner of the whole family while my mother was laid off two years ago and has been suffering a chronic illness for several years. Second, even though we have been doing everything that we can do to reduce our daily expenses, the total payout is still so high that we could not afford. Because, we need money to buy medicine for my mother’s illness; We need money to pay the tuition for both my younger sister, who is now studying in a high middle school, and I, But I am so eager to continue my study, so I have to apply for a school loan. If my request is granted, I will make best use of the money and absorb myself in study. I will definitely pay backthe loan according to the requirements. I hope that you will consider my application. I will appreciate you very much if you could give me a quick response. Yours sincerely, Wang Xiaojun
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