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8.28雅思大作文高分范文及解析毕业后GAP的利弊

8.28雅思大作文高分范文及解析:毕业后GAP的利弊8.28雅思大作文Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their studies?一些学生高中毕业后选择出去旅游或工作一段时间而不是直接上大学。

这样做对他们的学业有什么好处和坏处？思路解析这是一道利弊类的大作文，讨论的是高中毕业后gap一段时间对学生学业的利弊影响。

这个话题2020年8月曾考过一道同类型的题目，因此同学们一定要认真准备。

审题的时候要注意限定对象：高中毕业即将升入大学的学生，讨论的点可以分别围绕旅游和工作来展开，利弊一定要针对学业来说。

同学们在回应写作任务的时候利弊都要展开写，然后阐述自己的立场。

我们一起来归纳下GAP的好处和坏处。

我们先来看坏处：出去旅游或工作延缓了大学的学习时间，这样会在学业上给学生带来一定的挑战，比如被同龄人超过，重新熟悉知识点有困难等。

刚毕业的高中生出去工作或旅游很容易分散精力，对他们之后的大学学习是有不利影响的。

最后我们再来看下好处：出去工作对一个高中毕业生来说是一个好机会，可以学习到课本以外的知识，有助于开阔学生的眼界，进而更好地理解这个世界。

高中毕业出去旅游可以趁机放松心情，在放松的同时思考未来的学业方向，为之后更好地学习做足准备。

高分范文It is true these days that many high school leavers choose to start their work or take a trip before going to university. While a gap year can bring some immediate drawbacks, I am convinced that it is more likely to have long-term benefits for their lives.On the one hand, young students are very likely to encounter several difficulties when delaying their university study. One of these problems is the delay in academic progress caused by spending one year off school. It is understandably almost impossible for young people to enjoy their experiences in doing a job or travelling to a new place but still arrange a certain amount of time for revision. As a result, gap-year takers may have to face the challenge of becoming familiar with the knowledge at school again, receiving more pressure of catching up with their peers. Besides, the life outside the university campus may prove to be mentally and physically overwhelming for inexperienced school leavers. They, for instance, may be at risk of being exploited in an exhausting job or face potential dangers on their trips to a new country. If not well prepared for such possible obstacles, young high school graduates can suffer from unintended consequences.On the other hand, I would argue that these disadvantages are outweighed by the positive effects. A gap year is an ideal opportunity for students to learn about what is not taught at university. Working with other people who are experts in a particular field can give these newcomers not only an understanding of the job but also valuable practical lessons to help thembecome more mature. When it comes to applying for a position in a company, employers tend to favourably consider applicants who possess extensive experience in life and the occupation. Furthermore, in terms of recreation, having a year to relax can be advantageous as students can have a chance to relieve stress in study. With a comfortable and willing attitude, undergraduates can acquire knowledge more effectively in comparison with those who go to university right away.In conclusion, despite some negative aspects, it seems to me that the benefits of a gap year are more significant for the reasons mentioned.相关词汇high school leavers 高中毕业生start their work 开始工作take a trip 旅游long-term benefits 长期益处encounter several difficulties 遇到一些困难academic progress 学术进步become familiar with 对……熟悉catch up with 赶上；追上overwhelming adj. 势不可挡的, 压倒一切的; 巨大的inexperienced adj. 经验不足的,不熟练的potential dangers 潜在的危险outweighed vt. 比…重（在重量上）；比…重要；比…有价值applying for a position 申请职位extensive experience 丰富的经验advantageous adj. 有利的。

8月6日雅思大作文真题参考范文

8月6日雅思大作文真题参考范文| 间隔年的优劣势～每场雅思考试之后，第一时间分享本场考试雅思A类大作文的范文权威解析。

欢迎每周锁定。

2020年8月6日雅思大作文题目间隔年的优劣势Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages? 解析&审题题材：教育题型：讨论优劣类关键词：students + one year off + travel or work需要讨论的观点：上大学前先旅游或工作一年的优劣势建议思路：双边讨论+自己的观点复现情况：《剑桥雅思5》，test 2 ；2015年2月28日《剑桥雅思系列》今年已经出到第15本了，但本次考题居然重复了《剑桥雅思5》上的一道题目，也是重复2015年2月28日雅思原题。

这道题目太经典了，相信很多学生都曾经练习过，或者背诵过相关范文。

因此，今天参加雅思考试的同学应该是感觉很幸运了。

我们知道，雅思作文题目中，要么是给出现象，要么是给出观点，然后让考生讨论“现象是好是坏”或者“是否同意这个观点”。

无论是讨论“好坏”，或者讨论是否“同意观点”，其实都需要考生寻找论据来证明自己的看法。

本作文提出的是一个现象，即一些国家鼓励高中毕业生先去工作一年或者旅游一年，再回来上大学，然后要求考生论证“这样做的好处和坏处”。

由于题目明确要求讨论“好处和坏处”，因此本题不宜采用“一边倒”结构方式，也就是不适合只论证好处，或者只论证坏处，而是要同时讨论好处和坏处，也就是“双边讨论”。

稍微想一想，我们不难发现“工作一年或旅游一年”的好处：开拓视野，学习人际关系技巧（物质层面），更了解自我的需求（心理层面）。

但也可能有坏处：工作或旅游一年后，可能不再想回到大学，从而失去接受大学教育的机会。

英语考试作文-雅思写作真题范文之：大城市生活影响人们健康

英语考试作文雅思写作真题范文之：大城市生活影响人们健康考鸭们都知道，2018年的雅思作文真题都来自于历史题库。

本文就为大家梳理历年雅思写作真题范文——教育类话题：Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2014年3月1日)题目讲解题型类别：议论文审题要点：大城市的生活是否会对人们的健康造成破坏思路分析：文章架构可以选择单边倒，倾向一边或中立，城市发展和健康类的很多素材稍作改动都可以很好地支持论点。

同意：1.整个自然环境遭到严重破坏，如空气污染，导致人们的健康遭到威胁;2.生活节奏快，在大城市生活的人们往往精神压力大，心理不健康不同意(让步段)：城市健身设施完备，很多人也积极参加锻炼，但尽管如此，只要人们生活的自然环境没有得到改善，生活节奏过快，人们还是很难维持健康。

雅思写作大作文范文In many countries today, big cities seem to be stubbornly appealing to the mass population, along with which there arises the question as for whether living in a city will damage people’s health. For me, the answer is definitely yes.在今天的许多国家，大城市似乎一直在顽固地吸引着大量人口，同时也出现了一个问题，那就是居住在城市是否会损害人们的健康。

对我来说，答案是肯定的。

On one hand, the environment of most major cities, especially those in developing and underdeveloped countries, has been severely destroyed due to the overly quick industrialization. Take air pollution as an example, the speed of vehicles’s injecting tail gas and erect chimneys’ vomiting forth clouds of smoke is so fast and the volume so considerable that the atmosphere long before has failed to degrade the pollutants. Consequently, haze become a new natural hazard in many metropolises in the long run, with the PM 2.5 density insome reaching several times the national limit.一方面，大多数主要城市的环境，特别是发展中国家和欠发达国家的环境，由于过度的工业化而遭到严重破坏。

雅思大作文审题

1.2014.11∙22Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?2.2015∙ll∙14The best way to teach children to cooperate with others is through team sports at school.To what extent do you agree or disagree?3.2015.11.07For schoolchildren, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?4.2009.05.16It has been believed that people who read for pleasure have developed imagination and languageskills better than people who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?5.2015.10.10Some people think that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and diseases. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6.2015.05.16Some people say that many schools encourage students to evaluate and criticize their teachers in order to improve the quality of education while others say that this will lead to the loss of respect for teachers and disrupt class.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.7.2009.01.10Some people think that the range of technology available to individuals makes the increasing gap between the rich and the poor.To what extent do you agree or disagree?8∙ 2009∙01.15Students in schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television).To what extent do you agree or disagree?9.2009.04.25Some people think that computer and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think that students can learn effectively with teachers in schools.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.10.2009.02.07Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think that the developing countries require financial aid from international organization, but others argue that they should need practical aid and advice.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.12.2009.02.21Today most of people understand the importance of protecting the environment, while some people think individuals are too weak to take actions and make a difference.Discuss why someone holds such an opinion.What should be done to deal with this problem?13.2009.07.11Some people think that companies and individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up pollution that they have caused.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?The environmental problem in the world cannot be solved by ordinary people, but governments and large companies should be responsible for this problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree?15∙ 2009∙02∙28Concerning the public health problems, some people think the government should increase the sport facilities; others think it should take other measures to help resolve this problem.Discuss and give your own opinion.16.2009∙04∙04Nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods aιe ιelatively cheaper to buy.Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?17.2009.10.10An increase in production of consumer goods results in the damage of the natural environment.What are the causes and possible solutions?18.2009.12.05Nowadays, people always throw old things away when they buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again.What factors may cause this phenomenon?What effects could the phenomenon lead to?19.2009.04.18If a product is good or it meets people ,s needs, people will buy it. Thus, advertising is unnecessary and no more than entertainment.To what extent do you agree or disagree?20. 2009.05.21A hundred years ago, people think that human race was steadily improving in every area of life. Now it seems that this is not sure in that situation.In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays?In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?21.2009.07.23Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism?What changes would you like to see in the new century?22.2015.07.23Some people say that the government should give the healthcare the first priority, while others believe that there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers, money.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.23.2009∙08∙29Nowadays a growing number of international tripsmake the maj ority of different regions of the world much more similar than ever before.What are the reasons for this? ______________Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?24.2009.11.19Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people,s quality of life in developing countries. However, others believe that free education should be offered.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.25.2009.07.04Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?26.2009.11.14Some people say that professional workers suchas doctors, nurses and teachers make greater contributions should be paid more than those sportsmen and entertainers.To what extent do you agree?27.2009.09.05Some people think that a large proportion of people should go to university, while others think that they should work as car mechanics and builders, etc. to satisfy the national demand.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.28.2015.11.21Too much emphasis has been put on going to university for academic study. We should encourage people to have vocational education since there are not enough qualified tradespeople, electricians and plumbers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?29.2010.05.08Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful.To what extent do you agree or disagree?30.2010.01.14In today,s world, it is private companies rather than governments who pay for and carry out scientific research. ______________________________Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?31.2009.08.13The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice.To what extent do vou asree or disagree?32.2009.10.24Some people think the function of university education should be to prepare students for employment, but others believe university educationcan offer many other functions.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.33.2009.04.30Some people think that museums should be an enjoyable place, but others think that the purpose of museums should be to educate. ____________ Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.34.2009.05.09Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all the school subjects, while others think that teenagers should learn the subjects they are best at or they are interested in. ___________________ Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.35∙ 2009.09.26In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people.36∙ 2009.11∙07The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world.Discuss the possible reasons and give suggestions on how to solve the problem.37. 2009.06.13Research report suggests that the majority of35∙ 2009.09.26In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people.36∙ 2009.11∙07The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world.Discuss the possible reasons and give suggestions on how to solve the problem.37. 2009.06.13Research report suggests that the majority of。

雅思大作文审题(课堂PPT)

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• 观点陈述型： • There is a perception that …, while a counter-
argument is that… • One topic of discussion is concerned with whether
• There is a perception that parents are responsible for this severe problem due to their imappropriate way of fostering, while a counterargument is that the modern life styles are the foundamental reason of this disturbing situation.
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• 背景： • The issue of the impact of global environmental
problems has heated up in recent years. • 焦点： • There is a perception that higher prices at the
pump are a small sacrifice for a program that helps the environment , while a counterargument is that it provides no benefits . • 个人观点： • My personal view is that higher price is no benefits to solve the problem.

雅思作文审题(四)：“在何种程度上同意”类

雅思作文审题（四）：“在何种程度上同意”类作者：唐老雅来源：《英语世界》2019年第11期我们先来看看以下一组雅思考试真题：1. Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers， rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree？;（2011/8/3）2. Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2015/12/12）3. Nowadays， there is a large amount of advertising aimed at children. Some people think they have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2016/2/20）4. New parents should attend parenting courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2016/5/28）5. Some people think that technology makes life complex， so we should make our life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2017/2/18）6. Nowadays， many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree or disagree？; （2018/11/10）以上这些题目的共同点是：命题人先给出一个观点，然后问考生“在何种程度上同意或者不同意”这个观点。

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析再犯罪的原因和解决办法一、2023年6月20日雅思大作文题目Many criminals continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happen? How can we solve this problem?二、范文及解析IntroductionA mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime, exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本场考试重复1月14日大作文考题，虽然是很多考生害怕的犯罪类话题，但本题以说明文的形式考出，要求分析犯罪分子被释放出之后继续犯罪的原因及解决方法，是一个复古旧题，整体难度并不大；mushrooming adj.迅速增长的；越来越多的；ceaseless adj.不断的；不停的；baneful adj.不好的；有害的；ticklish adj.难对付的；棘手的；Body 1The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causesfor anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embark on a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, are inundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they, running after revenge, are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.解析：再次犯罪的原因有：(1)物质层面：犯过罪的人出来之后在稳定生活重新融入社会上存在明显困难；(2)精神层面：报复心理；culprit n.不好的事情的原因；罪魁祸首；reintegrate into v.重新融入；living odds n.生活窘境；verbal aggression n.语言攻击；embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路；larceny n.盗窃；be inundated with v.充斥着；resentment n. 愤恨；怨恨；revenge n.复仇；are apt to v.倾向于；易于；perpetrate v.犯罪；作恶；Body 2Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address this . Primarily, the government should play a leading role by enacting tougher laws and carrying out more severe penalties such as heavier fines or longer sentences for offenders toaccomplish the purpose of deterrence. The authorities should also polish the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieve rehabilitation. To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested, which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities, be they a plumber, a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe are formed man deserves a new leaf.解析：解决方法：(1)政府层面：颁布更严格的法律配备更严厉的处罚以达到更好的震慑作用；进一步改进监禁的教育方式从而达到帮助犯罪分子真正改过自新；(2)家庭和社会：更多地尊重，接纳，包容改过自新的罪犯；prickly adj.麻烦的；address v.解决；enact v.制定；颁布法令；rehabilitation n.改过自新；staunchly adv.强烈地；be furnished with v.具有；配备有；solicitude n.安慰；关怀reformed adj.改过自新的；ConclusionIn conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.解析：总结前文：notwithstanding prep. 虽然；尽管；gravity n.严重性;三、范文2There are a variety of punishments for criminals, including imprisonment, fines, and community service. However, even after serving their sentences, a significant proportion of ex-prisoners continue to commit crimes. This essay will explore the reasons behind this and propose solutions.对罪犯有各种各样的惩罚，包括监禁、罚款和社区服务。

雅思大作文真题之年轻人做社区义工利弊范文

雅思大作文真题之年轻人做社区义工利弊范文一、2023年9月9日雅思大作文题目Some people suggest that young adults should be encouraged to do some unpaid work for a period of time for the community to help people. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?(2023/09/09)二、2023年9月9日雅思大作文范文及解析IntroductionYoung adults, as responsible citizens of a progressive society, are highly suggested to be engaged in unpaid community service. In spite of some valid concerns to such involvements, I find myself in staunch agreement with the statement with some of the reasons elucidated in this essay.解析：1本次考题跟剑桥雅思9 Test 2的大作文很像，但是限定词有所不同，审题注意针对young adults 和community;剑桥雅思9 Test2：Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?staunch adj.坚定的;elucidate v.阐明，解释;Body 1Indisputably, charitable activities in community organisations will proffer young adults a profound life experience. With daily lives being awash with electronic gadgets, we are living in an age when the young, after work and study, mostly go home and are glued to browsing the Internet or playing computer games. A healthy life balance, by this token, is increasingly hard to follow. Sparing time in charity work, therefore, will prevent them from sitting and2squandering their time. Meanwhile, skills gained through these compulsory work, be it working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children, will be an asset on their CV and bring tangible boons in increasing their employability.解析：(1) 社区组织活动将为年轻人提供深刻的人生体验，帮助年轻人获得实践性技能，有助于他们将来的就业;be awash with v.被…所淹没;are glued to v.盯着;紧贴着;粘到…上;by this token 按照这个逻辑;由此推断;squander v.浪费，挥霍(金钱、时间等);asset n.有利条件，有价值的人或物;tangible adj.明确的，真实的;boon n.裨益，优势;毫无疑问，社区组织的慈善活动将为年轻人提供深刻的人生体验。

雅思高分作文：孩子看电视的利弊讨论

雅思高分作文：孩子看电视的利弊讨论雅思大作文题目：Some people think watching TV everyday is bad for children. Others think it is good for developing children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有些人认为每天看电视对孩子不好，其他人则认为这对孩子的成长有好处。

讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

【思路解析】这是一道双边类的大作文，聊的是看电视对于孩子的利弊问题。

审题时注意限定对象“children”，论证时要考虑孩子的特点。

看电视对孩子有利有弊，重点看家长引导孩子看什么样的电视节目。

如果是看一些科教类的节目，孩子可以通过电视拓宽自己的视野和知识面。

但如果孩子喜欢看一些偏暴力类的节目，孩子容易经不住诱惑，走上歧途。

今天的这篇范文作者给出了自己的观点，并通过举例方式给了充分的论证，同学们可以学习作者的观点和思路。

【高分范文】Some people believe that watching television is not good for children while there are many others who believe that television is informative and educational for children. I firmly agree with the latter statement but in my opinion parents should decide which shows their children should watch.On the one hand, several lines of evidence suggest that television is informative and educational for children. To begin with, shows like world discovery broadcasted ontelevision help children to learn about new inventions. Furthermore, watching programs is an informative way of entertainment for children. For example, my son absolutely loves watching programmes on National Geographic/Discovery/BBC Earth. Many of these programmes have even helped him with his school assignments. He is not really into reading, but these shows give him the knowledge and information he needs.However, television can be informative and educational only when parents decide which shows their children should watch. There are many shows broadcasted on television which can be unsuitable for children. Firstly, there are some shows which are related to violence, drugs and sex. These shows spoil the mindset of children. Secondly, young children blindly follow some characters and learn violent attitude from them. For instance, in the recent past there were many reports about crimes committed by teenagers. Investigations revealed that many of them had the habit of watching violent shows on television. Inspired by these programmes they plotted crimes. This is a good example of the harmful impact of television programmes on children. Thus it goes without saying that parents can make television either destructive or constructive for children.To conclude, although television programmes can be informative for children, parents should help them choose the right programmes. If children are allowed to watch whatever they want, they may unwittingly choose shows that have a detrimental impact on them.【亮点词汇及短语】informative adj. 提供有用信息的；教育性的educational adj. 有教育意义的world discovery 世界探索new inventions 新发明National Geographic 国家地理school assignments 学校的作业unsuitable for 对……不合适violence 暴力spoil the mindset 摧毁精神状态blindly follow some characters 盲目模仿一些角色had the habit of 有……的习惯plotted crimes 密谋犯罪unwittingly adv. 不知不觉地；不知情地；不经意地detrimental impact 有害的影响。

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略雅思写作第一部分满分攻略TASK 1写作三大步骤(1)审题:找出主要信息点，具体为两个任务:A: 辨别所要写图表的类型，是线状(line )，柱状(bar )，还是饼状(pie)等B: 找图表的主要内容，是人口变化，交通工具，受教育水平，或者是一项工艺的制作流程。

(2)构思:审题是对文章主要内容的一个大概认识，而构思就是对自己认识的进一步深化。

构思的主要任务为:分析图表的主要特征，弄清写作重点并选用适当的分析方法。

图表的主要特征是指其所描述现象或者问题的规律，并找出描述重点，不是图表上所出现的所有信息都要写出来，之后就是分析方法的选择，主要的分析方法有:数据分类，数据比较，平铺直叙法等，具体选哪种，需要根据图表的内容来确定。

(3)写作:写作是对前两个步骤的确认。

考生把自己的想法准确而详细的落实下来。

一般来说，这个部分的写作可以采用三或四段式:1)引言段(用简短的语言来描述图表的主要内容)。

一把来说,写作命题会给出的主要信息，如，The line chart below shows thegrowth of households with personal computers in the U.S.通过这句话，我们可以了解图表的主要信息，“美国每个家庭所拥有计算机量的增长变化。

”在这种情况下，考生可以重现组织一下这个具体，在中间加入一些具体的数字和变化年限等，使得阅卷老师一下就明白图表的主要内容。

引言段通用句式如下:This is a table / chart / (line线状 bar柱状pie饼状)graph whichdemonstrate / illustrate / reveal /depict/privide informationabout.............2)图表具体信息描述段:这个段落主要描写体现图表主要特征或总体变化规律的数据或信息，并用恰当的连接词语，如，on contrast , on theotherhand, however, like wise 等，把文章内容紧密的衔接起来。

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2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作老人缺乏锻炼的原因与解决方法一、2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?二、范文及解析IntroductionTaking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged, plays midwife to helping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本次task 2是新考题，但是整体难度并不大，审题注意限定词older people；play midwife to v.促成;帮助；ticklish adj.不安定的；难对付的；viable adj.可望成功的，切实可行的；avert v.防止，避免；bleak adj.不乐观的；Body 1Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not look feasible since most youngsters, bread winners in families, are swamped with work under this cut-throat competition, under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores and minister to their grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital era is saturated with intriguing activities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightly grip the old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old will be indisposed to step out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack of tailored creational amenities in the vicinity of residence will dampen the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.解析Causes：(1)年轻人忙碌，老人需要帮助照顾家庭，带孩子；(2)老人在现代生活中的生活方式也有明显变化；(3)缺乏适合老年人运动锻炼的基础设施；feasible adj.可行的，办得到的；be swamped with v.忙着做;忙的一塌糊涂；cut-throat adj.（竞争）残酷的，激烈的；minister to v.照顾；援助；be saturated with v.使充满，使饱和；intriguing adj.非常有趣的，引人入胜的；grip v.使感兴趣，吸引住（某人）的注意；be indisposed to v.不愿意；tailor v.定做；迎合，使适应；amenity n.便利设施；vicinity n.周围地区，邻近地区，附近；dampen v.减弱，抑制；Body 2In order to address the prickly problem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role by earmarking funds to proffering more age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path, which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government, disseminating information through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also of tangible boons in boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of being boomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.解析Solutions：(1)政府起主导作用，投资完善运动设施，定制一些适合老年人锻炼的器材；(2)宣传以提升老人锻炼的思想意识；(3)年轻人要学会承担更大的家庭责任；prickly adj.多刺的；棘手的；earmark vt.指定……的用途；划拨（款项）；proffer v.递上；提供，提出；disseminate v.散布，传播（信息、知识等）；tangible adj.明确的，真实的；boon n.裨益，优势，有用的东西；boomerang children 回归子女；啃老族；ConclusionIn conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.解析总结前文信息；重申观点。

雅思大作文观点与思路

写作部分题目观点与思路A 类1.政府是否应该资助理科生，因为科学家为社会贡献大。

For:1.The social development is based on science, as any high technological product derives from scientific theories.2.The payment for those who are engaged in science is still at a low level, which should be changed. Therefore, the support from the government is indispensable.3.Emphasis from the government will ignite the passion of citizens so that science will be promoted to a higher level.Against:Science and arts should be placed equally1.Itcannot b e deniedthatthe m odernmaterial aspect o f civilizationis createdby the modern technology. It is scientists’ hard work that prospers the material life.2.Our life is greatly enriched by the works of arts, such as literature, painting and mu1233.Without the contribution from the workers of the arts, such as social workers, litterateurs and legist, the society cannot remain healthy, peaceful and stable, and people cannot engage in the scientific work in a good environment. Therefore, it is necessary to put equal emphasis on the science and arts.2、衡量政府成功是否以经济繁荣为标志？For:1.The economy is the criterion of a country or government’s success.2.The economy is the fundamental of everything.3.Without economic prosperity, happiness is just the castle in the air.4.The economic situation is the most objective criterion.5.A powerful economy is the cornerstone of social development. With a strong economy, we can have a comprehensive welfare system accessible to all citizens.6.With a sound economy, our people will have sufficient access to free medical care and education.7.Alongwith e co n o m ic prosperity, our national defensesystemwill be g reatly enhanced.Against:1.The criter ion of a country or government’s success should be citizens’ satisfaction to the country or the g overnment.2.The criterion of a country or government’s success should be the country’s comprehensive strength.3.With money while devoid of sense of security, life will become dull and monotonous.4.M o n e y is o m n ip o t e n t,so t h at e co n o m ic le ve l isn’t e ve ryt h in go f a co u nt ry.5.Without a sense of security, a democratic atmosphere, economic prosperity doesn't mean everything.6.It is not uncommon that in some countries that boast so-called economic prosperity, corruption and discrimination are prevalent.3、强迫退休制度For:1.Every one is human with limited energy and vigor; therefore, after an exhaustingworkinglife, one tends to beincreasingly slow bothinmindand action. Remaining in one’s post would undoubtedly impair one’s physical and emotional health.2.When one reaches an old age, he/she tends to be more conservative and reluctant to accept new ideas and innovations. They are likely to adhere to past practices and old ways. One’s originality and creativity will dry out. They always hesitate to strive forward.3.Too many old people remaining in high positions will hinder the developmentof society.4.Offer more employment opportunities and promotion to the young so that they will be able to give full play to their talent.5.If one never stops working, what’s the point of life?Against:1.Different occupations have their diverse traits and distinguishing features. Some jobs call for special psychological requirements. For example, professors, doctors and research fellows are always required to work into their seventies for their richexperience and a cademic achievements, while professional athletes, suchas gymnasts, retire even at the age of twenty.2.Some people think working gives them the mentalsatis fa ct io n/co nte n t me n t anda role in society. If they areobligedtowithdraw from work to complete domesticity, they will feel that they are abandoned by the society and useless. Work brings social and personal esteem.3.It is regarded as a breadwinning process. Retirement will bring about some financial troubles.4.It is unfair to some people who have studied for years to obtain a higher degree. If they are required to retire at the same age as those who receive shorter schooling, the y ca n n o t e njoy thesame l engthof working. It i s also a great waste of talents.5.Thanks to the improvement in medical science, people enjoy a much life sp an/e xp e cta n cy.W e sh ou ld r e d e fin e t h e t e rm“o ld a g e”.6.Chronological age is not always a true indicator of one’s capabilities.7.It would be more economical to some employers to retain the old hands than to spend more time and money training greenhands.8.Older workers usually are more stable, skilled and experienced than younger ones. It is deemed as an economic asset.Conclusion/suggestion:1.One’s retirement age should be decided according to one’s own conditions and willingness. We shall adopt aflexible andrational retirement age sothat different age can have a chance to give play to their talents and wisdom.2.We should implement the policy of mandatory retirement, because it really brings us a good many benefits. The policy is not only good to the old, but also beneficial to the young.4、体罚是否为好的教育方式FOR:1.We should teach children to respect discipline.2.Discipline is the basis of all achievement.3.Children are hardy creatures.4.It moulds strong a n d r eal character.5.It helps to reinforce the authority of teachers and parents.6.Sometimes children will test the patience of their parents and teacher; teachers and parents should not be too permissive; otherwise they will spoil the children.7.Permissiveness results in undisciplined children.8.Parental laxity leads to the spread of juvenile delinquency.Against:1.Children shouldn’t be exposed to parental abuse (emotionally and physically).2.It seriously violates the legal rights and interests of children.3.It is tremendously cold-blooded and unhealthy, resulting in life-long adverse/negative repercussions/rebellious reaction.4.It endangers children’ physical and mental development.5.N o t“yo usp aret h e ro d”b u t“sp are”t h e“re act io nan d a t t e n t io n”an dyou spoil the child. We should employ moderate and appropriate discipline.6.It i s a kind o f brutality and c ruelty whichmay lead t o i njury or evendeathofthe student.7.Achieve the reverse r esult.8.Researchreveals that s t u d e n t s who s uffer fromcorporal p u n i s h m e n t t endtoresort to violence in their future life.5、小孩是学会竞争还是合作For Competition:petition is inevitable; it’s human nature.petition builds character; it strengthens our self-esteem.petition is regarded a s anopenand f air race where success goes to t he swiftest people regardless of their social status.petition is required to help us reach our fullest potential.5.Natural selection and survival of the fittest.For Cooperation:1.Cooperation offers us a break from the pressure and stress of competition.2.A win-win approach tends to fosters exploration of the root causes of the conflict and leads to constructive, sustainable solutions with positive expectation for future encounters.3.Cooperative g r o u p s display more coordinatedefforts, more divisionof labor, more acceptance of other ideas, and fewer communication difficulties than competitive groups.4.Two heads are better than one.5.Cooperation is marvelously successful at helping children to communicate effectively, to trust in others and to accept those who are different from themselves.6、广泛使用机器人是好事还是坏事For:1.The employment of robots on assembly lines saves a lots of labor forces.2.This trend not only improves the work efficiency, but also enhances accuracy.3.Robots can take the place of human beings and work in the dangerous environment or the places not accessible for us.4.Robots can work around the clock, never knowing tiredness.Against:1.As robots are designed by human beings, what they do is just to follow the instruction and preset programming by human being.2.Once there is something wrong with the electric or programms, robot willbecome a good-to-nothing machine.3.Robots cannot work creatively when confronted with complicated situations.4.With the excessive dependence on robots, human beings will degenerate into a kind of animals that only to take food.7、明星高薪是否合理？For:1.The stars are talented p eople.2.Their brilliant performances enrich people’s cultural/spiritual life, which partly contributes to the spiritual c ivilization.3.They bring great pleasure and happiness to ordinary people. They make money by means of their skills and they deserve it. No one forces you to pay for his/her performance. Both are willing.4.Some of the stars also have undergone painstaking training and practice. No pains, nogains. The road t o s uccess m a y not be easy for m ost p op s tars, whichmay set examples for the youngsters.5.Different occupations or professions can command a different amount ofmoney.6.They sacrifice a lot for what they gain including privacy.7.They bring benefits to the tertiary industry and prosper some professions like entertainment and related ventures.8.It is an inevitable outcome of the market economy. We should not make a fuss of it. It is decided by the market.Against:1.We should value the talents who promote the welfare of the society as a whole rather than these pop s tars.2.We c anlive without p opstars, but c ann ot w ithout a doctor or a teacher. Our society can proceed well without these stars.3.The value of knowledge is depreciating.4.Discourage /strike the initiative and zeal of people in other fields.5.Impose an adverse influence on the development of the next generation, which may easily become m oney-oriented.6.This phenomenon, to some extent, even contaminates the order of theday/general mood.7.What they pay cannot equal their gain.8.They make little contribution to the development of the society compared with the scientists.9.Withthe quick- earned money the pop star’s vanity may quickly expand and their souls may be distorted.Conclusion:It is essential that effective measures should be taken to redress such inequality and disparity. The government should levy heavier income tax on these stars in order to narrow the gap between the income of so-called pop stars and that of the ordinary professions such as doctors and teachers.G 类1. 妇女犯罪1.Th e rap idd e ve lo p m e n t o f so cie t y an dt h ech an g e s o f p e o p le’s va lu e o f t h eworld account mainly for the i ssue.2.With the eye-catching development of economy, many young women go out to find a job, which renders them more opportunities to contact the outsideworld.3.Women’s quality attributes partly to the rise of criminal rate.4.The prosperity and luxury in some metropolises are very attractive to some young women.5.Some of women leave the countryside in the hope that they can make a good fortune in the cities, where they often find themselves disappointed for lack of good education or skills.6.The over-description of violence on the media leads young women astray.Suggestion:1.The government should pay more attention to the problem and issue relevant laws to crack down young women crimes.2.We should strengthen education and raise the quality of people, helping them set up a correct outlook of the world.2. 家庭和睦问题Causes:1.Mobility. Nowadays many jobs require workers who are ready and able tomove off the land and to move again whenever necessary.2.Changes in customs and habits have a significant impact on people’s concept of and attitude towards familial life.3.Fierce competition. One has to work and study hard tomeet the d e m a n d of society and face the challenge. Both husband and wife have to go out workfull-t im e t o s u p p o rtt h e fam ily.To o o ccu p ie d t osp are t im e fo r o n e’s fam ily.4.In t his busy modernworld i nwhichmaterial thi ng s are muchvalued, peopleare attaching less importance to emotion and therefore are growing more and more isolated and i ndifferent.5.While fast urban development enables people to enjoy better living conditions, people have to spend more on commuting every day.Suggestion:1.Keep this line of communication open. Frank exchanges are of great importance.2.Eat a s a family. Dinner is a valuable o pportuni ty for the f amily to s pend t imet o g e t h e r.3.Never bring your office work home, and always keep in mind that home is home.4.Share the same p astimes.5.A loving atmosphere. Do what you can to create a tranquil harmonious home.6.When you are out, make sure that you call home regularly.3. 新生总是会由不适应的问题，为什么，如何解决Causes:1.Part of the difficulties they face over this period is due to a changed academic environment.2.When proceeding to a university or a new school overseas, a student may face a different set of academic norms and expectations.3.Challenges also come from their peers. To ensure that their study performance is equal to or better than their fellow students, they need to work very hard, under great psychological pressure.4.For many students, this may be their first foray beyond the borders of the family home, perhaps living in another city or country.5.These new students are likely to find it hard to get used to and blend into the local culture, especially in the case of overseas students.Suggestion:1.School authorities may play an important role in helping students to settlein.2.The orientation program could last long enough to enable students to feelat home.3.Such programs should be on a more individual basis so that new studentscan get a clearer picture of school rules and facilities.4.It would be a good idea for schools to organize some excursions andoutings during the first days.4.私立学校Public School1、 Public education is the fundamental way to prepare children from diverse ethnic，religious ，and class backgrounds to live as responsible citizens in ademocracy 。

415雅思大作文高分范文及解析纳税与其它责任

415雅思大作文高分范文及解析纳税与其它责任01大作文题目Some people think that by paying taxes they have made enough contribution to society, others think there are more responsibilities than paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.有些人认为他们通过纳税为社会做出了足够的贡献，而另一些人则认为他们的责任比纳税更多。

讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

02思路解析这是一道双边类的大作文，聊的是人们除了纳税之外是否还需承担更多责任。

审题时需要注意关键词“paying taxes”和“more responsibilities”，也就是除了纳税，公民还应该履行哪些责任，可以促进社会的良性发展。

首先，来看公民纳税的意义。

政府的财政资金很大一部分来自于税收，而有了充足资金，政府才能投资科技、医疗、教育等领域的开发，进行基础设施建设，改善居民的生活质量。

然后再来看除了纳税其他的责任。

公民还应当遵纪守法、积极参与社区建设、尊老爱幼、保护环境等，每个人都应该为社会的有序健康发展出一份力。

03高分范文Tax is the main source of revenue for the government. Therefore, some people feel that paying taxes is the biggestresponsibility that citizens have towards their country. However, others disagree with this view. In their opinion, citizens have several other responsibilities too. I totally agree with them.It is important to pay taxes because governments need moneyto fund various social and infrastructural projects. Therefore, by paying taxes each citizen is making a significantcontribution to the development of their country. However, in my opinion, this is not enough. Just because someone pays taxes it does not necessarily mean that they are good citizens. It isalso wrong to assume that all those poor people who do not pay taxes are not contributing anything to their country. There are lots of criminals who pay taxes. Their financial contribution to the economy is negligible when we consider the amount of damage they cause.Tax is just one of the many contributions that a citizen can make. It is equally important for citizens to abide by the law, respect the social norms and help fellow citizens in need. When people obey the rules, respect others and do volunteer worksthey help create a harmonious society where everyone feels happy and safe.To conclude, paying taxes is just one way of contributing to the society. Being a law abiding citizen who volunteers to help whenever they can is even more important.04相关表达responsibility 责任pay taxes 纳税infrastructural projects 基础设施建设项目making a significant contribution to 对……做出重要的贡献criminals 罪犯negligible 可忽略的, 无足轻重的equally important 同等重要abide by the law 守法do volunteer works 做志愿工作harmonious 和谐的surroundings 周边的环境responsibly 负责地;有责任感地。

《剑桥雅思13》写作大作文分析

剑桥雅思写作大作文题型分析在题目类型方面，剑13的四篇大作文中2篇同意与否大作文，1篇双边观点讨论大作文以及1篇报告类大作文（原因和解决办法）。

从题型数量上来看，同意与否类型无疑是剑13的贴心小棉袄，然鹅剑13却未曾出现利弊分析（Advantages and Disadvantages）和利弊分析姊妹版（Positive or Negative）的题目，这需要引起“烤鸭们”的注意。

纵观2018年上半年的雅思写作考试，同意与否（Agree or Disagree）类型的大作文占比较高，而其他题型的占比相对处于弱势状态。

并且剑13再次强调了同意与否类型大作文的重视，“烤鸭们”需要在备考阶段注意强化同意与否类型大作文的审清题目、寻找立场、提出分论点、展开思路和深入论证等。

剑桥雅思写作大作文话题分析从话题大类上来看，Test 1、2、4均为社会问题，Test 3为学校教育问题，并未出现极其冷门或偏门的话题类型，这也是2018年雅思官方已经举办的考试同样突显出来的趋势和特点，社会类问题和教育类话题依旧是大作文考察的主要方向。

从题目审题难度上来看，雅思官方逐渐加大对题目本身审题题眼的设置与限定，进一步考察“烤鸭们”的逻辑论证和思辨能力，除了Test 3学校教育问题题目中的广大“烤鸭们”较为熟悉的绝对化表达（比如：one of the most important），还增设了have to， as well as， too many， in spite of等单词的修饰，这从一个侧面反应了雅思写作考试的审题难度日渐加大，如何准确找准立场并深入展开论证是今后备考的重中之重。

剑桥雅思写作大作文逐题分析Test1从内容归类上来看，Test 1主要围绕语言及其可能导致的社会问题和实际问题，其实，在剑桥雅思真题中对语言话题的考察频率还不算低，比如剑9中两次提到了对语言的考察，一篇大作文询问的是语言逐渐消亡与生活难易程度的关系，一篇大作文落脚点是在小学比在中学学外语更好。

雅思大作文真题分析1

写作Task 2Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural areas find it is difficult to access the university education. University should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university.To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题：大学应不应该给贫困地区的学生录取优惠政策？确定观点：进行双方论点头脑风暴Brainstorming......应该不应该1.（社会方面）：有利于贫困，农村地区的经济发展1.(学生个人方面)：学业，同学竞争的压力2.（社会方面）：不利于社会和科学持续发展“不应该”一方我们能想出两个分论，“应该”一方只有一个，因此我们的观点选择是“不应该”。

（有其它双方不同论点的同学可以写留言回复进行讨论）文章结构提纲I.开头段（背景引入+转述话题+自己的观点）II.立论1段：peer pressure, academic challengeIII.立论2段：depress social and scientific developmentIV.驳论段：boost the economy in rural and underdeveloped areasV.结尾：重申观点，概括驳论立论段例文：立论1段To begin with, students from rural areas will suffer form huge peer pressure and academic challenge after they are admitted by universities who give them easier access to higher education. Universities, especially those of international reputation, are full of talented students in every field, and academic achievement is a crucial evaluation criteria of a student. So, a mediocre student from rural regions will find it hard to compete with their outstanding classmates with better education background in urban areas, and some of them may even have difficulty to graduate. For example, in China, some high school students form underdeveloped provinces can get “bonus scores” in the College Entrance Examinations. Unfortunately, most of these “unqualified students” have to drop out university because their poor academic performance.驳论段例文Admittedly, affording students in poor areas easier access to university may help develop the local economy, as some of these students who are benefited from this policy may be willing to devote themselves to the development of their underdeveloped hometowns. Thus, the gap between rural and urban areas may be narrowed to some extent. However, the advantage of this policy is quite limited, since most of the university graduates will choose to stay in big cities for a more promising career development.。

雅思真题大作文范例高分范文

雅思真题大作文范例高分范文_年4月_日雅思大作文高分范文原题:People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet.They do not need to do these face-to-face. Is it a positive or negativedevelopment?雅思写作思路解析:A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去交流和做其他事情B 增加效率C 给生活带来便利A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去交流和做其他事情B 减少公司运营成本C 利润增加A 使用网络(而不是面对面) 去交流和做其他事情B 人的社会技能下降C 人觉得疏远,家庭和社区不再有团结的感觉这个题目确定A.只是A有点复杂〝使用网络,而不是面对面去交流.购物和工作〞.如果你只写使用网络的好坏处(而没有不断出现面对面交流的字眼),就是跑题.雅思写作高分范文:Nowadays, many daily tasks can be accomplished without us meeting other faceto face. Generally, I tend to believe it leads to many desirable resuits. It is evident that fulfilling some tasks over modern technologies such as theInternet and other computer networks is highly efficient. In the past, ifpeoplehad the need to do shopping, they had to go to the shopping mall; but today, allcan be done with the click of a mouse and the goods will be delivered home, evenat a lower price. Also, we used to need to go to the bank and wait for adesperately long line if we wanted to make a transaction from one bank accountto another: instead, now we may comfortably make use of the self-service bankingat home. Actually, almost all banks and financial organizations arewell-connected to the Internet, which promotes the development of internationaltrade and world economy dramatically.Thus, obviously, the efficiency of life has been improved significantly dueto the technological advances.However, that is not to say that lack of face-to-face communication bringsabout no problems. One of the biggest concerns is safety. With the increasingvirus threats and well-trained hackers, online deals are well e_posed to allkinds of risks and losses, for e_ample, the wide-spread problem of identitytheft. Therefore, when making the most of the desirable changes brought about bytechnology, we should be aware of its potential downsides and find a way tominimize the negative impacts.Overall, there are both favorable and unfavorable effects on individuals andsociety if everyday tasks are performed without the need of seeing each other.But I am quite optimistic about its future, and I think people and countriesalike will benefit from it on a new level soon.雅思真题作文7分范文:网络取代面对面交流原题People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet.They don t need to do these face to face. Is it a positive or negativedevelopment?雅思写作大作文解析与审题连续几周新题后,本周雅思作文回到了旧题模式,重现了_年7月_日的作文题目.本周考题涉及网络的应用.关于网络对我们生活.工作和学习方方面面的影响,是雅思写作考试中的重点,〝有了互联网,我们就可以不(上班,上学,去博物馆,去商店,去旅游......)〞互联网运用的话题是比较常见的写作题,本次题目要求讨论的话题是〝现在人们都用网络来购物.工作.沟通,不再需要面对面交流了〞,因此我们需要围绕〝网络与面对面交流〞来进行讨论.那么,使用网络来取代面对面交流,这到底是好还是坏呢?无疑,这不是一个非此即彼的问题,我们可以做双边讨论,即先讨论网络交流相对于面对面交流的好处(节约时间.节约成本.提高效率),然后讨论网络交流的坏处(误会增多.感情变淡),最后提出结论,在某些情况下网络交流能给我们带来好处,但在很多情况下,面对面交流是不可取代的.雅思写作7分范文We live in an age of electronic communication, and the Internet does help usin a lot of ways. Yet the fact that we have computers and smartphones readily available does not mean that we do not need face-to-face communication anymore.我们生活在电子通信时代,互联网的确在很多方面帮助我们.然而,我们可以随时使用电脑和智能手机这一事实并不意味着我们不再需要面对面的交流.Electronic technology has dramatically changed the ways we shop, workandcommunicate and has brought about a myriad of benefits. From emails to instantmessaging to Skype to social media, the Internet has made our communicationfaster and easier than ever before. Besides, the cost of the Internetcommunication is significantly lower than the traditional means of communicationlike face-to-face meetings. The technology connects us to our online suppliers,colleagues in the workplace, families and friends from all over the globe forjust a small fraction of the cost required of an offline meeting.电子技术极大地改变了我们购物.工作和交流的方式,并带来了无数的好处.从电子邮件到即时通信到Skype到社交媒体,网络让我们的交流比以往任何时候都快速和容易.此外,与传统的面对面交流方式相比,网络通信的成本要低得多.技术将我们与世界各地的在线供应商.工作同事.家人和朋友联系在一起,其费用只是线下见面所需费用的极少一部分.That being said, scientific evidence is mounting that the advent of digitaltechnology is having a detrimental effect on interpersonal relationships.Everything from body language and facial e_pressions to attentiveness andengagement can indicate different thoughts and feelings—each of which can onlybe truly observed through face-to-face communication. So, despite the clearupsides of digital communication, there are circumstances under which there isno substitute for face-to-face communication. Meanwhile, the complete dependenceon the Internet for communication may result in the sense of alienation anddepression which will keep us apart from the rest of the real world.尽管如此,越来越多的科学证据表明,数字技术的出现正在对人际关系产生有害影响.从肢体语言和面部表情到关注度和投入度可以表示不同的想法和感觉,而这些只有通过面对面的交流才能真正地被观察到.所以,尽管数字交流有明显的优势,但在某些情况下,面对面的交流是无法替代的.同时,完全依赖互联网来交流交流可能导致疏远和沮丧的感觉,这将使我们远离现实世界.In conclusion, it is necessary to balance those Internet interactions withface-to-face communication. It is hard to say how far the Internet would go, butface-to-face communication has not yet been and never will be replaced bytechnology.(274 words)总之,必须平衡网络互动和面对面的交流.很难说互联网能走多远,但面对面的交流还没有.也永远不会被科技所取代._年4月_日雅思写作大作文范文In modern world, it’s possible to shop, work and communicate with people viathe Internet and without any face-to-face contact with others.To whate_tent isthis a positive or negative development?雅思写作真题解析本题属于科技类话题.该题也是科技类话题的经典例题之一,讨论科技与人们日常生活和工作的关系.考生在思考论点时可以围绕题目中给出的〝shop〞,〝work〞和〝communication〞这几个层面入手;此外,论点偏向好处更好写一些.paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点.paragraph 2: 论述远程办公和交流的好处.(1.节约员工的时间;2.扩大朋友圈和缓解相思之苦)paragraph 3: 论述网络购物的好处.(1. 快速便捷 2. 更多购物选择)paragraph 4: 论述缺乏面对面接触的坏处.(1.缺乏现实交际技能)Paragraph 5: 总结上文论点,强调自己的观点.雅思写作大作文范文In such a digital age, which features the wide available of internettoindividuals, users are able to deal with a bunch of daily tasks online, rangingfrom doing shopping, arranging and completing working projects as well asinteracting with strangers and friends. In my view, this tendency is largelybeneficial for people’s work and life.To commence with, it is conceivable that telecommuting saves time foremployees. Without spending time on the way to and from work, office workershave more disposable time and the fle_ible schedule, in which case, they couldwork the hours they wished and have a better rest. In addition, onlinecommunication enlarges the circle of friends. More specifically, socialnetworking websites is deemed as an effective way to make connections withpeople with similar interests and goals. What’s more, long distancecommunication relieves couples or families from lovesickness and homesickness.Even though living thousands of miles away from hometown, they can stare at thefaces of their beloved and listen to their voice.In terms of online shopping, it has been thought as the indispensable part ofmodern life due to its convenience. Instead of going to malls, the only thingconsumers have to do is viewing the high-definition pictures and click thebutton of payment, the commodities they choose would be delivered at home inseveral days or appointed time. This is especially useful for people working ona tight schedule or in times of inclement weather. Undeniably, customers canpurchase goods all over the world; in consequence, there is no need for them totravel to foreign countries for some fancy dresses or handbags.On the flip side, a lack of face-to-face contact does generate harmfuleffects, among which the most obvious is that the loss of interpersonalskillsin reality. In fact, body language such as eye contact and gestures, and socialpsychology laid emphasis on in real way are invalid and ignored in virtualworld, making people incompetent and unskilled in face-to-face situations. In conclusion, although the dimension of communication would be diminished, Istrongly contend that the increasing popularity of communication via internetbenefits people from all walks of life.雅思真题大作文高分范文。

雅思作文审题(一)：因果关系类

雅思作文审题（一）：因果关系类作者：唐老雅来源：《英语世界》2019年第07期我们先来看看以下一组雅思考试真题：1. Some people think that technology makes life complex， so we should make our life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2017/2/8）2. Most of the world’s problems are caused by over-population. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2019/5/11）3. The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to find jobs and harder for older people to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2019/5/4）4. Art classes like painting and drawing are important to students’ development and should be made compulsory in high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2017/1/7）5. Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV at home and school. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2017/3/18）6. Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian， because they do not need to eat meat to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree？（2015/9/19）7. The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as antisocial as smoking. Do you think mobile should be banned like smoking？（2015/2/14）仔細阅读这些真题，我们会发现它们有一个共同特点，那就是这些题目中都蕴含了一个因果关系，详细分析请看下表。

2023年4月1日雅思大作文题目示范写作

2023年4月1日雅思大作文题目示范写作Despite better access to education, many adults today are still cannot read or write. In what ways are they disadvantaged? What can governments do to help them?范文及解析IntroductionIlliteracy, in spite of increasingly easier access to education, is still a thorny issue in many parts of the world. People without the ability to read and write, indisputably, would be up against prickly problems and to put an end to the appalling level of illiteracy, protracted and unremitting efforts from the government are in desperate need.解析今日的话题属于教育类，是亚太曾考过的原题，在大陆可被视作新题，整体以report的形式呈现出来，难度不大；审题时需要注意解决方法是在政府层面，governments算是限定词；illiteracy n. .文盲；无知thorny adj.棘手的，麻烦的prickly adj.棘手的，麻烦的appalling adj.令人震惊的；非常的，极其严重的protracted adj.持久的；长时间的unremitting adj.不停的，不懈的，持续不断的Body 1First and foremost, illiterate adults, unable to perform daily tasks on their own, are on the hip in terms of the everyday life. For instance, without the reading ability, they can neither read newspapers to be informed nor be aware of road signs while travelling outside. Being incompetent in writing, by no means would it be possible for them to sign their names on the essential files. In addition, the uneducated ones are also on a sticky wicket in the job market, which is incisively and vividly presented in their job-seeking. In modern age, proficient reading and writing capacity is indispensable for landing a decent job, be it a lawyer, a doctor or a professor. In stark contrast, without literacy skills, it is not difficult to find that most of the illiterate can only simply engage in manual labor with slender income.解析没有读写能力的成年人主要面临两大问题：(1)生活上的各种不便利；(2)工作市场上缺乏竞争力；on the hip 处于不利地位on a sticky wicket 处于不利地位incisively adv.敏锐地proficient adj.熟练的，精通的land v.着陆，降落slender adj.微薄的，不足的Body 2Ticklish as the issue is, viable solutions can be put forward by the government to avert such a bleak future. Primarily, sounding the social welfare system of uneducated persons has strategic and practical significance. To elaborate, voice guide in public places ranging from the hospital to the train station would, in large part, facilitate a patient to see a doctor and ensure them a pleasant journey. To wipe out illiteracy, earmarking financial revenue from the government to distribute educational resources also makes a difference, with which people can be furnished with basic reading and writing skills. Apart from the fiscal policy, the government could encourage more large companies and communities to shoulder joint responsibilities by proffering job-related training courses so as to raise their employment competence.解析解决方法：(1)完善社会福利有助于解决这些成年人的生活不便利的问题；(2)专项拨款配置政府财政资金提供教育资源帮助这部分人群提升其基本读写技能；(3)政府也要同时鼓励企业和社区共同参与帮助解决；ticklish adj.不安定的，不稳定的；难对付的viable adj.可望成功的，切实可行的sound v.（使）发声，（使）作响earmark vt.指定……的用途；划拨（款项）be furnished with 提供，备有fiscal adj.（政府）财政的ConclusionIn a nutshell, being unable to read and write dramatically affects their career prospect and livelihoods. To bring these problems under control, joint efforts from the government, companies and communities are required.。