图片描述

Para1
Key points:
Details: wander wandered
picture2
______________ what did I do?
activities ____________ along the path and enjoyed enjoy the view
saw see / noticed notice uncivilized behaviors Key points: _____________________? what did the two girls do?
Para1
My parents and I made a free tour to xi’an during the holiday. Before setting out , We booked the train tickets and hotel rooms on the internet . During our tour in xi’an, we went to many places of interest/scenic spots，took a lot of pictures and at the same time ,we learned about the history and culture of xi’an. No tourists will miss the local food in xi’an, nor will we. We tasted/ ate / enjoyed typical local foods/ snacks, which tasted nice. After I returned, I couldn’t wait to share the photos and experiences with my classmates.
Para1
My parents and I made a free tour to xi’an during the holiday. Before setting out , We booked the train tickets and hotel rooms on the internet . During our tour in xi’an, we went to many places of interest/scenic spots，took a lot of pictures and tasted typical local foods/ snacks. After I returned, I shared the photos and experiences with my classmates.
Para1 picture2 Para1 picture2
Key point : What did we do? ___________________
went go to many places of interest/scenic spots take took a lot of pictures
Details:
Байду номын сангаас
__________ activities
Para1 Para1picture3 picture3
did we do? Key point：what __________________
tasted ate / enjoy taste/ eat enjoyed typical local foods/ snacks
Para1 Para1picture4 picture4
picture4 shared the photos and experiences with my classmates
3. Complete the writing step by step
Step1:Write out para1 by adding subjects!
For example:
Describe the activities in para1!
Para1
Key points: Details:
picture1
what did we do? ______________ activities ____________
enter entered
the park
took take photos
Step4: Rewrite para1 again by adding detailed information if necessary to make para1 better.
For example:
During our tour in xi’an, we went to many places of interest/scenic spots, took a lot of pictures and at the same time, we learned a lot about the history and culture of xi’an.
picture 1: booked the train tickets and hotel rooms on the internet
We booked the train tickets and hotel rooms on the internet.
Para1
We booked the train tickets and hotel rooms on the internet. We went to many places of interest/ scenic spots and took a lot of pictures. We tasted/ ate/ enjoyed typical local foods/ snacks. I shared the photos and experiences with my classmates.
The structure(结构) of the writing
• The first paragraph
The activities in the four pictures. • The second paragraph Feeling&Gain about your outing
Listing the key points and building up a word bank of the writing
Step3: Rewrite para1 by adding time adverbials /time adverbial clauses or linking words/sentences.
For example:
My parents and I made a free tour to xi’an during the holiday. Before setting out, We booked the train tickets and hotel rooms
The structure(结构) of the writing
• The first paragraph
activities The _______ in the four pictures.
• The second paragraph
Feeling and Gains
___________ about the tour
picture1 booked the train tickets and hotel rooms on the internet picture2 went to many places of interest/scenic spots
took a lot of pictures
picture3 tasted/ ate / enjoyed typical local foods/ snacks
what did I do? key point：__________________
share the photos and experiences with my classmates shared
2.Build up a word bank of the writing.
A word bank
Writing Practice
Describing pictures
Objectives
In this class, we will be able to：
1. List suitable verb phrases to describe the four pictures. 2. Build up a word bank of the writing. 3. Complete the whole writing step by step.
1. List the key points & verb phrases of four pictures.
Para1 Para1picture1 picture1
Key point : what did we do? ___________________
booked book the train tickets and hotel rooms on the internet
Step 6: The whole Writing –Combine Para1 with para2
Writing Revision
Describing pictures(2)
Your Writing Task Your textbook P231 Writing 9
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。请根据以下 四幅画的先后顺序，用英语写一篇日记，描述周日你在西 山公园踏青过程中发生的故事。词数不少于60。 Please pick up key information in Chinese version! Past simple tense
Step5: Write out Para2 Gains&Feeling (one or two sentences)
The short tour to xi’an really made me broaden my horizon. It will be forever cherished in my memory.
Step 2: 在第一段开头添加一句总起句.
我和我的父母假日去西安进行了一次自助游。
My parents and I made a free tour to xi’an during the holiday.
My parents and I made a self-guided tour to xi’an during the holiday.
Your Writing Task Your textbook P230 Writing 7
假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅画 描述了你和父母假日去西安自助游的经过。请根据图片 的先后顺序，给校刊“英语园地”投稿。词数不少于 60。 Please pick out key information ! Identify the tense used in the writing! Past simple tense
Para1
My parents and I made a free tour to xi’an during the holiday. We booked the train tickets and hotel rooms on the internet. We went to many places of interest/scenic spots and took a lot of pictures. We tasted/ ate / enjoyed typical local foods/ snacks. I shared the photos and experiences with my classmates.