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[2011·四川卷] 最近，某中学生英文报开设了“Afterclass Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。

1．你校开展课外活动的情况；

2．你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；

3．为同学选择课外活动提出建议；

4．为学校开展课外活动提出建议。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；

3．稿件的开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

Afterclass Activities

Nowadays, afterclass activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____

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Afterclass Activities

Nowadays, afterclass activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example，arts and sports.We enjoy them very much.Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good.Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge，they also free me from the heavy work of study.

Here I have some suggestions.To students，you'd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you；to schools，they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.

Dear friends，please actively take part in afterclass activities，which will not only make your school life colorful，but also improve your learning.

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①行文逻辑：所开展的课外活动及益处→给出建议→发出倡议。较好地使用了连接词，如：besides，not only…but also等。

②词汇短语：运用了较高难度的词汇。如：various kinds of，enrich，free…from，take part in等。

③句式句法：运用了多样化的句式和句法结构。如：形容词比较级结构：…are becoming more and more popular…；动名词短语作主语，which引导的定语从句：Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good.使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为祈使句：

…please actively take part in after class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning；there be句型：…there are various kinds of activities 等。

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说明文是以说明为主要表达方式，要求用简洁明快的语言来解说事物、阐明事理，从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。近几年高考说明文多数以图表、表格或文字的形式给出提示，并往往融合在应用文体中进行考查，一般分为：场所路线介绍；事物介绍；方式方法或计划安排介绍三大类。写说明文宜采用三段式：

第一段：主要介绍要说明的对象及说明的目的；

第二段：说明事物的主要特征或做事情的方法步骤；

第三段：进行总结概括。时态通常用一般现在时。写作时应遵循以下几个步骤：

1．仔细审题，明确说明对象，抓住要说明的事物或事理的主要特征。

2．选择合理的说明顺序(时间顺序、空间顺序或逻辑顺序)分层次进行说明，注意条理清晰。3．选择恰当的说明方法，比如定义法、举例法、比较法和细节描述法等，注意不要遗漏主要内容。

4．根据说明顺序及内容确定过渡词和恰当的句型结构。文字应客观、简洁、明了，不要追求华丽和加入太多个人观点。

1．说明方位、路线常用语：

(1) …is located at the foot of/ by the side of…，to the east of…and to the north of…

(2) In front of it is…，with…on its left and…on its right.

(3) Turning to the left, you will see…，behind which is…

(4) Walking past…，the building that appears in front of you is…

. (5) Along the road are lines of trees, from which students can find shade from the hot sun.

(6) A walk around…is a feast for the mind as well as the eye.

(7) On your left lies a…，with all kinds of…in it.

(8) Next to the door against the wall there is a…，in which we sit to watch TV every evening

2．说明事物的特点或优势常用语：

(1) …is a new kind of…produced by…，which is…

(2) Made of…，it is light, small, and easy to carry.

(3) …containing much top and new technique…is famous for its excellent quality and reasonable price.

(4) China is a large country with a long history and much population.

(5) It is rich in natural resources such as coal and gold and has mild weather.

(6) Built in the 16th century, the castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history.

3．说明做某事的具体方法常用语：

(1) Nowadays it is common to use…，but not knowing how to use…

(2) As is known to all, it is important to…

(3) With the development of…，there is an increasing need for people to know how to…

(4) There are several steps to follow./Here are some tips.

(5) The first thing to do is to…

(6) Although…is important, but without…，all the efforts you have made will be in vain.

(7) To ensure success, there is one more thing that you must bear in mind, that is…

(8) With the help of the above methods, you will achieve your goal soon.