北京市各区2020届高三一模英语作文解析汇编
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I hope you find what I‘ve mentioned above interesting and reasonable. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon? Write back and tell me about it!
北京市各区 2020 届高三一模英语作文解析汇编
海淀一模
第三部分：书面表达（共两节，35 分） 第一节（15 分） 51.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友 Jim 得知你对探月感兴趣，发来邮件和 你讨论该话题。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 月亮在中国文化中的寓意；
2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。 注意：1.词数不少于 50； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给美国朋友 Jim，和 Jim 探讨有关探月的话题。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时 人称：第一人称为主 结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
Yours,
【答案】Dear Jim,
Li Hua
I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger with time. As you can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion 伴侣 of the earth. In Chinese culture, as opposed to the masculinity 阳刚之气 of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reassured 安心 knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.
要求：1. 月亮Hale Waihona Puke Baidu中国文化中的寓意； 2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） moon exploration；be compared to；remind sb. of sb./sth.；as if；serve as；gaze at 第三步：连词成句 1. I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration. 2. the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. 3. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. 4. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger. 5. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon? (根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。） 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5 表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say, 6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
提示词：探月 moon exploration
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________
Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of great significance. The development of relevant technology facilitates 促进 the progress of science in general, which benefits our everyday life. What’s more, I think moon exploration shows an important human trait 特征, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far.
北京市各区 2020 届高三一模英语作文解析汇编
海淀一模
第三部分：书面表达（共两节，35 分） 第一节（15 分） 51.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友 Jim 得知你对探月感兴趣，发来邮件和 你讨论该话题。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 月亮在中国文化中的寓意；
2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。 注意：1.词数不少于 50； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给美国朋友 Jim，和 Jim 探讨有关探月的话题。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时 人称：第一人称为主 结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
Yours,
【答案】Dear Jim,
Li Hua
I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger with time. As you can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion 伴侣 of the earth. In Chinese culture, as opposed to the masculinity 阳刚之气 of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reassured 安心 knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.
要求：1. 月亮Hale Waihona Puke Baidu中国文化中的寓意； 2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） moon exploration；be compared to；remind sb. of sb./sth.；as if；serve as；gaze at 第三步：连词成句 1. I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration. 2. the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. 3. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. 4. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger. 5. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon? (根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。） 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5 表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say, 6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
提示词：探月 moon exploration
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________
Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of great significance. The development of relevant technology facilitates 促进 the progress of science in general, which benefits our everyday life. What’s more, I think moon exploration shows an important human trait 特征, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far.