(英语)初三英语书面表达解析版汇编含解析

（英语）初三英语书面表达解析版汇编含解析

一、英语书面表达

1．如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。

要点提示：

注意：

1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；

3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharing

Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势）However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）

In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。【点睛】

本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。

2．假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。

注意：

（1）邮件应包含所有要点

（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；

（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分

注：社会实践 social practice activities

Dear David

I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【答案】Dear David

I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.

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