深圳英语中考作文模板
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1. 热烈的讨论/ 争论a heated discussion
2.就我而言/ 就个人而言Personally, in my opinion, as for me,
3.利远远大于弊the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。
4. 导致,引起lead to
5.责任感/ 成就感sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
6.做出共同努力make great efforts
7.因特网the Internet (一定要有冠词,字母I 大写)
8.方便快捷convenient, convenient transportation/ people buy cars for
convenience.
9.环保(的) environment al protection /Be environmentally friendly(形容词)
10.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
11.采取有效措施来…take steps, take effective measures to do sth
12.有利有弊Every coin has its two sides。
13.身心两方面both physically and mentally
14. 缓解压力/ 减轻负担reduce stress/pressure
15.相反on the contrary。
16.毫无疑问There is no doubt that…
17.充分利用make full use of / take advantage of.
18.随着时间的流逝As time goes by,______
开头
1. In recent days
2. Different people have different ideas.
Some people firmly believe/ think/say/ hold the opinion that _______,
because________. while others strongly believe________.
3. There is an old saying,” Failure is the mother of success”
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.
First, ____ Second,____. To make things better, / To make things worse,/ much worse, / even worse,_________
3. Nowadays,it is common for people to write microblogs. People like it because ______. Besides,______.
4. With the development of science and technology/society, the greenhouse effect/ our environment has become more and more serious/ more and more popular/. We can see more and more pollution.
5. Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception.
It has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. Man is /Human beings are now facing a big problem, which is becoming more and more serious. That is pollution. (which代替前面一句,逗号不可少。)
同学们经常用的是it。也可以。但标点符号不一样。
We are now facing a big problem. I t is becoming……
7. ______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. There is no doubt that it has brought us a lot of benefits/ advantages, but meanwhile/ at the same time it has created some serious problems as well.
中间段落句
尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句
1. / Most important of all, / first of all, / in the first place/ firstly/ To begin with,
besides,/ moreover/ in addition,/ furthermore/ also,
in that case, as a result, though, However, in other words,
2. On the contrary,some people believe that ___. They say____.
But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve the problem. For one thing, _______. For another, ________.
3. we should take a series of effective measures to______.
on one hand, ________. On the other hand, ________.
4. I fully/ totally agree with the statement/ idea because______.
5. In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First
_____.Second ______. Last but not least,______.
6. I often help my parents do housework,such as,washing clothes,cleaning
the room and watering flowers
结尾
·at last/ last but not least/ all in all/ in a word/ To sum up
1. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of
________. Only in this way can we______in the future.
2. From above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.
We can easily draw a conclusion that _____________
3. Personally, I believe that_____.
Hopefully, students at school can study and play safely in the future.
4. If all of us make great efforts/ try our best to __________, I am sure __________
5. if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution
审题,书写,无语法错误,语句通顺最关键!!!
(满分作文标准:包含所有要点。能围绕内容适当发挥。应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇。用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚)
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(1)内容有无遗漏或误词,最好一一对应检查。
(3)句子是否有语法结构错误,特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。
(5)书写字迹和标点符号,大小写是否规范清晰,词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文,即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍,力求完美。