2015年8月29日雅思写作真题解析

• The percentage of natural gas, on the other hand, witnessed the most noticeable increase during the period, rising from 13% in 1985 to 23% in 2003. Coal and other renewable resources, though whose increase was less marked, rising by 5% and 3% respectively.
(promote business cooperation among countries. For example, large multinational companies spread latest technologies around the world, while international trade has helped so many underdeveloped countries grow.)
• Overall, oil, natural gas and nuclear still constitute a larger proportion of all the sources, while other three sources, namely coal, hydrogen and other renewable, are less used when producing the energy.
2015年8月29日雅思写作真题 雅思作文讲解
Peter Mou Bestway Education September 5, 2015
TASK1: 类别 Pie chart 题目 The pie charts show the proportions of energy
produced from different sources in a country in 1985 and 2003.
一些人认为越来越多的商业和文化交流是一个积极 的发展。而其他人认为这会导致国家个性的消失。讨论 两个观点并且给出你自己的观点。
• 分析：题目的类型属于双边讨论类。话题类型属于全球化 的影响中的文化影响。这是一道老题目，审题要清楚，两 边的观点都要讨论到再给出自己的观点。
• 范文主体思路解析：
• 主体部分一:肯定了越来越紧密的全球交流对商业和文化 都有好处。对商业主要基于利益需要，对文化则能增强对 异国文化的理解并消除误解。
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
（图表仅供参考）
写作指导:
• 1）注意时态，要用过去时；
• 2）在body段中应先对整体图形做出概括。因为成分较多， 可以先将成分进行分组。例如可以将oil, nuclear, natural gas分成一组，其他成分分成一组。而对于oil, nuclear and natural gas三者占主要成分的summary也可以作为对于该 图的主要分析。继而，可以对这三种成分的变化做出简要 介绍；
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参考范文
开头段：The closer communication between different countries has been a conspicuous tendency in recent years, both in economic and cultural aspects. Some people doubt the continual connections will cause vanishing of a country’s identities. In my view, the result of international depends on the situation in different nations.
2. 丰富人们的生活
(enrich people’s lives because people in one nation are given opportunities through international tourism, exhibitions and fairs, TV programs and films, etc. to enjoy the achievements of other cultures across the globe.)
第四段：In my opinion, whether closer global communication will cause demise of national identities rely on different countries. America, as well as Canada and Australia, is marked by their high population mobility, or immigrants, to be more exactly. The culture in these nations is based on other cultures indeed. Therefore, they welcome different countries and it cannot be a problem to them. Also, some countries, like China, India and Britain have their own unique ethic identity and cultural confidence which come from their long history. Global contact will also be acceptable to them. Only to the weak countries, the local government should take steps to protect their vulnerable cultures.
参考范文
• The pie charts present the change of the percentage of the energy produced from various sources in a particular country from 1985 to 2003.
• It is clear that oil was the most dominant sources from which the energy was produced throughout the whole period, although it dropped from 52% in 1985 to 39%. Likewise, nuclear also declined, but much less significantly to 17%, becoming the third primary source from which the energy was produced.
第三段：Admittedly, the cross-national interaction will also impose a negative influence on national identities, especially to those weak countries such as Pacific island countries and some mini countries in Europe and Africa. It seems that in these weak countries, the locals have become more familiar with exotic cultures, which reflects the foreign cultural invasion to some degree. For instance, the mainstream value of teenager in these countries has been mainly shaped by Hollywood blockbusters instead of their traditional literature or other artistic works.
• 2. 对于承载本土文化的语言也是重重一击
(in the process of globalization, the world is getting linguistically diverse, as a growing number of people have abandoned their native language.)
• Negative:
• 1. 对本土文化带来巨大的冲击
(traditional cultures might fall victim to the global media and entertainment force. This is most evident in some parts of the world where “Americanization” is threatening the preservation of their indigenous culture. In China, for instance, few youngsters like or understand “Peking Opera”, the quintessence of Chinese culture; they are crazy about Hollywood movies and rock music instead.)
• Interestingly, the proportion of the energy produced from the hydrogen remained stable in 1985 and 2003, making it the least used sources from which the energy was produced.
TASK2: Some people regard the increasing business
and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
• 3）body第二段中可以对其他成分的大小进行比较。
• 重点表达式 account for, constitute, represent, take up, make up be considerably higher than…, surpass, exceed show/ present/ keep an upward trend. There was a slight decline in the number of sth. The 18 years witnessed/eyed/saw a slight growth in the consumption of sth.
第二段：In face, the international contact is a definitely mutual benefit for countries. Due to the economical motivation, both states and entrepreneurs are interested not only in the domestic market but also in the oversea market. The closer connection opens up huge potential opportunities for business cooperation. Besides, the more cultural contacts, the better understanding of other peoples. Cultural communications can alter people’s attitudes towards another culture and embrace different values, which will promote multi-cultural understanding and even remove cultural barriers.
• 主体部分二: 明确了文化交流国家的民族特征是存在的， 但是仅仅对一些弱国而言。
• 作者观点: 根据不同国家进行解释为什么文化交流对于他 们是更有利还是更有弊端。
• 写作指导 • 1）注意时态，不要出现过去时（除非举过去的例子） • 2）推荐4段式写法：
• Positive: • 1. 促进了国家之间的商业合作