大学英语作文讲评

点评：本文依照提纲展开，首段说明了双休日的种 种好处，第二段段首的however转折的同时，也起 了承前启后的作用，最后一段说明了自己将如何过 好双休日的计划。
2. “How to Deal with Cheating”.
1.当今的校园里出现了各种各样的作弊手段。 2.作弊的原因。 3.怎样杜绝作弊。
There are several reasons for cheating. Firstly, some students just want to achieve high scores without having to work hard. Secondly, some are under great pressure and they are fearful of failing exams. Finally some are afraid that they will fall behind others in the exams.
In order to benefit most from the two-day weekend, I have decided to make a good plan for that rest period. During the weekend, I will not only rest and take up some hobbies, but I will also set aside enough time to study.
How to Deal with Cheating
Many students tend to cheat during exams. Some will copy the answers from their books. Others will physically communicate with each other to get the right answers. There are even some that write down information on their hands or arms.
There is a new debate: Is it legal for Chinese oncampus students to get married before they graduate? Some people say “yes” while others say “no”. In fact, the government allows on-campus students to get married before they graduate.
2.需要对历史建筑进行保护． 3.保护历史建筑的具体措施。
Protection of Relics
Although economic development has brought so much convenience to us and made the earth a better place to live in, we cannot deny that modernization has destroyed some of our relics.
There are at least two ways to eliminate cheating. One way is to explain to students that cheating is harmful. Another way is to take strict measures to prevent cheating.
So, I believe that all on-campus students should deal with this issue in a sensitive明智的way.
点评：本文基本符合提纲要求．
4. “Protection of Relics”
1.经济的发展在一定程度上破坏了历史建筑 （relics）．
Some argue that if they get married, their schoolwork could be affected and they may not graduate. In my opinion, it is unnecessary to ban on-campus students from getting married before they finish college. However, it should not be advocated or encouraged. Students are required to study.
1. Writing Practice
Directions: You are to write in 100---120 words
about the title “The Two-day Weekend”. You
should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
In my opinion, the existence of disposable products is perfectly justified, but its use should be restricted 限 制 . More eco-friendly 保 护 生 态 的 methods such as thorough cleaning and reusing should be introduced to achieve both convenience and conservation of the environment.
In order to fully protect our relics, government should play a major role. And, as individuals we should arouse our consciousness towards preserving our forefather’s assets财产 and try our best to protect them.
The high publicity公众的注意 about damaged relics has brought our attention to protect them, for relics are not only significant, but also valuable. They represent the development of human being’s civilization and thus should be preserved. Otherwise, the younger generation will have little idea of what their forefathers祖先were like and how they lived.
点评：本文紧扣提纲展开，每个观点仅用一到两句话就 点明主题、论证观点，简洁明了，词汇运用得来自百度文库。
6. “Family Education”
1.现今父母非常重视家庭教育。 2.家庭教育的优、劣势。 3.你的看法。
Family Education
Parents in China are nowadays paying more attention to the training of their only child. At present, many children in cities have family tutors and more children have to take lessons before they go to school.
1. 双休日给大学生带来的好处。
2．双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。
3. 我应当怎样过好双休日。
The Two－day weekend
The two-day weekend not only allows us to relax, but also gives us the chance to take up some hobbies. However, the two-day weekend has caused a few problems. The most serious one is that the weekdays are filled with too many lessons. Because our classes are limited to 5 days, Monday through Friday, we have to take more lessons each day than in the past. This leaves us little time to catch our breath during the weekdays.
点评：本文结构清晰，层次分明，遣词造句较得当，论 述较为充分。
5. “My View on Disposable Products”
1. 随着人们生活节奏的加快，一次性用品 （Disposable Product）越来越多。
2. 使用一次性用品的利与弊。 3. 我的看法。
My View on Disposable Products Life is becoming increasingly convenient, and especially for busy people who are always on the move, disposable products are a convenience factor. By using disposable lunch cans, people can have their lunches without worrying about dishwashing. At the same time however, using too many disposable products will harm the environment. The high quantities of accumulated garbage resulting from the use of disposable products have become a pollution problem.
Family education has both advantages and disadvantages. The main advantage is that children can learn much more and can develop themselves as early as possible. The disadvantage is that too much family education may cause children to lose their sense of living and studying. Also, children will have less time to play or to do what they like.
In my opinion, too much or too little family education will both do harm to children and even lead to disastrous极坏的，很糟的 circumstances境况 .
点评：本文紧扣三点提纲展开讨论，每段的首句点明 了该段的主题大意，结构层次一目了然，词句运用得 当。
3. “On-campus Students’ Marrying”.
1.如何看待在校大学生结婚的问题 2.国家允许在校学生结婚 3.在校学生结婚对学生的影响 4.你的观点
On-campus Students’ Marrying